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    Writing Feedback Form- Level 2 - Assignments

    Student’s Name: Date: January 11, 2024


    Time: Morning Textbook: English File
    Spelling s/v agreement unidiomatic run on sentence punctuation capitalization unclear
    fragment articles coherence wrong choice wrong form verb form Num pronoun
    preposition sentence structure Verb Tense word order irrelevant Leave out missing word

    In my opinion i think it is depend on the issue for several reasons. If the problem was with a
    member of my family, i will get advice from either other member of family or my friends. however
    if the problem was with my friends, probably i will get advice from my family, espicially my
    mother. But sometimes there is problems you can not tell anyone about it. In these situations i
    think it is better to get advice from someone had the same problem as you before, either if the
    person is from family or not. In some cases maybe you will face some problems that it is better for
    you to keep it to yourself, otherwise it will increase. finally, having problems is something you can
    not control. and it is ok if you ask people to help you, but do not depend on them too much .

    Feedback Level 2 - Assignments


    Content & Organization Language
    Strong - Unity of ideas - (Coherent content). - good sentence structure.
    points:
    - Use a short title in the middle of the page. - Improve the use of punctuation.
    Points to - Improve the use of capitalization.
    - Consider the Subject/Verb agreement.
    consider:

    Grammar & Str. 1. /2  The pronoun "I" is always capital.


    5  The topic sentence is not clear and the reader should know
    Punctuation & Caps. /1 what you'll write about once they read it. What" depends
    0. on the issue ?? what do you mean by "it" here??
    5  The topic is " a person should go to family or friends to get
    Spelling 1 /1 advice" It means you had to talk in general; not make it
    Grade Vocabulary 2. /3 personal and talk about yourself what you do.
     "cannot" is more common than than"can not"
    5  The conclusion is not related to the topic.
    Convention Specific for genre* 2 /2
     To make your topic sentence more correct, you can say it
    Outline 0. /1 depends on the problem itself, not for several reasons as
    75 you didn't talk about any reasons.
    Plagiarism Detected 0
    Writing grade for this task 0
    *Conventions specific for genre:

    Fulya Mahallesi. Büyükdere Caddesi. Dıs kapı no: 42-46 Iç kapı no:16 Istanbul, Şişli

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    Writing Feedback Form- Level 2 - Assignments

    While the rules of spelling, punctuation, capitalisation, and grammar are necessary for all texts, some genres have their own sets of rules and principles to follow. These features help the reader to
    identify what kind of text they are looking at.

    Teacher’s general evaluation: This is a successful attempt.


    Good job :)

    Good luck 😊

    Fulya Mahallesi. Büyükdere Caddesi. Dıs kapı no: 42-46 Iç kapı no:16 Istanbul, Şişli

    [email protected]

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