Final Copy Shs Eapp q1 m7
Final Copy Shs Eapp q1 m7
Final Copy Shs Eapp q1 m7
You can say that you have understood the lesson in this module if you
can already:
What I Know
Read the following statements below. Write a smiley if the statement
is correct, otherwise write X.
_______ 1. The use of a sincere and polite tone on a critique is less effective
than using more ambitious words to give prestige to the author.
_______ 3. A critique does not include a movie, film, music, and arts, it only
critiques a literary piece like articles, journals, books, and novels.
_______ 4. The title, author’s or creator's name, and thesis statement are
found in the introduction.
Before we begin our lesson, let’s have a quick review of the previous
topic by doing the activity below:
As you move on, you will get to learn more about writing an objective
or balanced critique. Just keep going until you finish all the tasks. Enjoy
while learning something worthwhile!
What’s New
A. Pre-Writing Activity
B. While-Writing Activity
Comment on the drawing or artwork below. Compare and
contrast by describing both drawings; the genre, the style, technique,
and overall quality. Write your comment in full sentences in the box
below.
C. Post-Writing Activity
1. Did you find it hard to comment on these works of arts? Why?
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________________________________________________________________________________ .
2. What knowledge or skills do you think you must have to be able to
answer or do the above activity easier and better? Why?
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In the previous module, you have learned the critical approaches used
in critique writing. In this lesson, you will be focusing on the technical know-
how or the skills needed to be able to write a critique paper. Are you ready to
apply what you have learned from the previous lesson? What do you think
are the considerations in writing a full-blown critique? _____________________
__________________________________________________________________________ .
Writing a Critique
A critique is academic writing, it critically evaluates a piece of work such
as literary pieces, exhibits, film, performances, artworks, news reports, music,
events, programs, and the likes.
The succeeding lessons and activities will lead you to better understand
critique writing, and why it matters?
On the other hand, you must avoid the following in writing your
critique paper:
Now that you have finished the key concepts of this lesson, are you ready
to explain what makes an objective and balanced critique? At this point, you
are about to learn the skills needed to be able to write your own critique. It
is suggested that you are already eyeing for any work of art, a masterpiece,
and the like to work on and practice critiquing. Write while you read for the
succeeding lessons. If you do, you will find your learning goals easier and
manageable enough. You are about to plan for your critique and visualize
writing your first draft!
1. The writing style for a literary piece – the writing techniques and
skills of the author, as presented in the texts mirrors the author’s
expertise and integrity.
1. The Introduction
To begin, mention the work being reviewed, the name or title, the
author’s or creator’s name, as well as the date.
Write a brief description of the work, including the key points, the
reason or purpose of the work, and the context in which the work was
created, whether for academic, professional, personal, political, etc.
State the main point or signposts of your evaluation, indicating a strong
statement of your judgment, whether positive, negative, or neutral.
Make your introduction short.
An Example Critique
Learn more by close reading a 650-word critique below. It is labelled
to help you get familiar with the structure and format of a critique.
The trio were roommates and became friends though had different
backgrounds. Emman, the “probinsyano”, Anthony, a discreet "gay", and
Hector who came from a wealthy family. The trio soon develops a special
friendship with Joy, a “carinderia” vendor; Emman who she considered to
be her Kuya, Anthony her best friend, and Hector became her boyfriend.
The climax, like a rollercoaster, is a twist and shout. The best friends:
the trio and joy, had a “joy ride” that caused a tragic incident that changed
their friendship and lives forever. Joy was raped in front of her friends, and
since they were young, they avoided Joy. The trio thought that the only
way to forget the pain is to escape and leave for good. The dilemma of Joy,
being rejected by her boyfriend and friends, was left alone, given up on her
dreams, and failed to finish her studies. Meanwhile, the trio finished college
and led a more settled life, however, their past had a great impact on their
lives. The trio reunited after two long decades, when they heard about what
happened to their friend Joy—who committed suicide.
(Concluding Statement)
The end of the musical was a standing ovation. The performance itself
had left the audience in awe! They made the characters in the plot came to
life. It indeed managed to capture the audience’s emotions. The
collaboration of the director and writer, both esoteric on their own field, had
made the musical a phenomenal success. It resonates emotions into a
mixture of drama, nostalgia, and euphoria, all at the same time! By and
large, the musical play leaves the reviewer, herself, in deep awe, and
genuine lessons about life, love, and friendship.
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2. What makes an objective and balanced critique? Answer using your own
words? ___________________________________________________________________
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3. How do you format a critique paper? Explain thoroughly using the major
parts of a critique. ________________________________________________________
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Grading Criteria
Correctness and relevance of content 3 pts
Organization / Coherence 1 pt.
Grammar and punctuation 1 pt.
Total 5 pts. HPS per item
Let’s begin writing the most essential part; the critique, and gradually
you should be able to write a full-blown critique on your own. You will also
experience choosing from the most common to critiquing like a literary piece,
music, art, film, program, event, etc. by doing the activity below.
Describe Analyze
Title/Artist/Date: _______________________________________________________
Total = 30 points
What I Can Do
Apply what you have learned in this module by doing this activity.
Old jeepneys can operate beyond 2020 but with conditions – DOTr
By CNN Philippines Staff
Published Nov 20, 2019 5:56:59 PM
Old unit operators should also file a petition for consolidation on or before the
said date and “express their petition to modernize.”
However, if operators fail to do so, their routes will be made available to other
interested applicants.
Senator Grace Poe, the Senate public services panel's chairperson, earlier
welcomed the move not to automatically phase out old jeepneys.
"This is for their sake. This is a lot more pragmatic for us, expedient. That if
it is still pliable, if it’s safe, and doesn’t have any adverse emissions, that it be
allowed and it will also save a lot," Poe said Wednesday during the Senate
deliberation on DOTr’s 2020 budget.
She added that the DOTr admitted during budget hearings that it has
modernized only 1.5 percent or 2,550 of the country's jeepneys, three years
into the controversial PUV modernization program.
The program, which plans to phase out old jeepneys and UV Express service
vehicles by 2020, has been tagged “anti-poor" because of its heavy cost to
jeepney drivers and operators. It has sparked a number of nationwide
transport strikes but the government has stood by the program.
Mechanics: 10 points
The following mechanics were applied correctly and appropriately.
punctuations and capitalization (5 pts)
grammar and structure (5 pts)
Total = 50 points
Assessment
Encircle the letter of the best answer.
Additional Activities
To enrich your learnings from this module, check on the following websites
and choose one from the given activities below:
Online Sources:
"199 Best Analyzing and Critiquing Text Images | School Reading, Teaching
Reading, Reading Classroom." Pinterest. Last modified 25, 2014.
https://www.pinterest.ph/suzanjaxson/analyzing-and-critiquing-
text/.
"Critiquing a Text – The Word on College Reading and Writing." Open Oregon
– Educational Resources. Accessed July 6, 2020.
https://openoregon.pressbooks.pub/wrd/chapter/critiquing-a-text/.
"Old Jeepneys Can Operate Beyond 2020 but with Conditions – DOTr." Cnn.
Last modified November 20, 2019.
https://cnnphilippines.com/news/2019/11/20/puv-jeepney-
modernization-.html.
Elisa O. Cerveza
Chief, Curriculum Implementation Division
OIC, Office of the Assistant Schools Division Superintendent
Janet S. Cajuguiran
Education Program Supervisor-English