Parallel Structure

Parallel structure (or parallelism) is the repetition of a particular grammatical construction within a
sentence or paragraph. It is used to indicate that multiple ideas have equal levels of importance. In addition,
the use of parallel constructions makes writing clearer and easier for readers to follow.

Parallel structure can be tested in two major ways:

1) In lists: 3 items

2) On either side of a conjunction: 2 items

Parallel Structure with lists

In any given list of three or more items, each item should appear in the same format: noun, noun, and noun;
gerund, gerund, and gerund; verb, verb, and verb. For example, consider the question below.

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balance of factors and are therefore vulnerable to - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -'
threats from a variety of sources. For example, Which choice completes the text so that it
changes in wind circulation, runoff from sewage, conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
and can all lead to the creation of ocean waters
low in oxygen and inhospitable to marine life. I® j to accumulate fertilizers

I ® I they accumulate fertilizers

I © j accumulating fertilizers

__________________________________________________ . j @ j accumulation of fertilizers

The first two items in the list begin with nouns (changes, runoff), so the third item must begin with a noun
as well. (D) is the only option that begins with a noun (accumulation), so it is the only possible answer.

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 If a full list is underlined, you can simplify the question by checking the beginning of each item. For
example, consider this version of the question from the previous page.

' Healthy marine environments result from a precise Mark for Review I

, balance of factors and are therefore vulnerable to -- - ... - - - - --- - -- - - - - --- - - - - - - --- - ,_ -- - - --- - - - - - -
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threats from a variety of sources. For example, _ _ Which choice completes the text so that it
' can all lead to the creation of ocean waters low in conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
' oxygen and inhospitable to marine life.
® changes in wind circulation, runoff from
sewage, and accumulating fertilizers

@ changing wind circulation, runoff from

sewage, and accumulating fertilizers

© changing wind circulation, having runoff

from sewage, and to accumulate fertilizers

changes in wind circulation patterns,

@
runoff from sewage, and accumulation of
fertilizers
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Once again, (D) is the only option in which each item begins with a noun, so it is correct.

Questions can also test punctuation within lists. Remember from Chapter 7 that the items in a list can be
separated by either commas or semicolons, but not both within the same list.

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balance of factors and are therefore vulnerable to -----l--~-J--·-~---------~-----~--~---~'.
threats from a variety of sources. For example, _ _ Which choice completes the text so that it
can all lead to the creation of ocean waters low in conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
oxygen and inhospitable to marine life.
® changes in wind circulation; runoff from
sewage, and accumulating fertilizers

@ changes in wind circulation, runoff from

sewage; and accumulating fertilizers

© changes in wind circulation, from sewage

there is runoff, and fertilizers accumulate

@ changes in wind circulation patterns;

runoff from sewage; and accumulation of
fertilizers
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Both (A) and (B) incorrectly mix colons and semicolons, and (C) is incorrect because the second item does
not follow the grammatical pattern. (D) correctly keeps the items consistent and uses only semicolons.

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 Parallel Structure with Conjunctions

Another type of parallel structure question involves only two items joined by a conjunction (and, or, but).

Although these questions are fairly straightforward, you must consider the entire sentence because the
answer is likely to depend on information outside the blank. For example, consider the question below.

-~~;i;e-s-;~~- ~- - - - - - - - - . : -~ - ;~r-J~~i~~- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -!
developed sense of vision. As a result, they are able ' - - - - - - - - - - -:: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -:. - -•
to use clear body language and _ _ their colors in Which choice completes the text so that it
order to communicate. conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

I® \ alter
I® \ altering
\© \ they alter

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The word and connects the underlined item to the non-underlined item, so the two items must match. Note
that the repetition of the word to is optional. The correct answer could read either to alter or alter, as is the
case here. (A) is thus correct.

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It is also possible that two-item parallel structure questions will ask you to work with phrases rather than
single words. For example:

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In recent years, the amount of time and money Mark forReview ·

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devoted to books by publishing companies has been · - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -'- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -' - - - - - -·

reduced by both financial constraints and__ Which choice completes the text so that it
conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

® the emphasis on marketing has increased.

\ ® \ an increased emphasis on marketing.

© they have increased the emphasis on

marketing.
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[___________________________________________________ . \ @ \ increasing the emphasis on marketing.

The construction before and consists of a noun (financial constraints), so the construction after it must begin
the same way. Neither (C) nor (D) begins with a noun, so both can be eliminated. (A) incorrectly contains
a clause with a verb (has), whereas (B) correctly contains only a noun phrase without one.

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 Exercise: Parallel Structure (answers p. 206)

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® prey; including trapping it in webs; with
1. In the insect world, spiders are fearsome animals-
sticky bolas they lasso it, and mimicking
the tiny equivalent of wolves, lions or sharks. Spiders
other insects
use a wide range of strategies to capture ___ in
order to avoid detection. @ prey, including trapping it in webs,
lassoing it with sticky bolas; and they
mimic other insects

© prey, including trapping it in webs;

lassoing it with sticky bolas; and
mimicking other insects

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to lasso it with sticky bolas, and
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2. Scientists have long been uncertain whether dogs - ·1 ® j those that indicate fear or anger.
can read human emotions, but evidence is growing that
canines can accurately "read" what people feel. In fact, @ those in which fear or anger are
indicated.
a recent study found that dogs are able to distinguish
between expressions that indicate happiness and
j © j fear in anger are indicated in others.

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3. Without structural engineers, everything could - ·1 ® I capture the power that the waves have.
twist and shake apart. Their know-how is vital to
mastering green construction's novel materials and j ® j capturing the power of the waves.
innovative practices, whether used to harness the force
of the wind or _ __ j © j have captured the power of the waves.

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, ® spring; snow would give the idea of
4. Haiku poems, which contain just 17 syllables, can winter and summertime would be
describe any person or object, but they are seldom
suggested by fireflies.
complicated or difficult to understand. Each Haiku
must contain a kigo, a season word that indicates what spring; snow would give the idea of
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time of the year the Haiku is set. For example, blossoms winter; and fireflies would suggest
would indicate summertime.

© spring snow would give the idea of

winter; and fireflies suggest summertime.

@ spring; the idea of winter would be given

by snow; and fireflies would suggest
summer.
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5. For centuries, there have been reports of strange -1 ® I flames that flicker.
bright lights in the sky just before, during, or after an
earthquake. Over the years, descriptions have varied I ® I flames that are flickering.
widely: the lights have been described as flaring white
streaks, floating orbs, and _ _ Sometimes the lights I © I flames to flicker.
appeared for just a few seconds, but other times they
hovered in the sky for minutes or even hours at a time. I @ I flickering flames.

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 Cumulative Review: Chapters 8-12 (answers p. 206)

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1. Although rap music originated in the United States,
it has international influences. The kora, the balafon,
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and the ngoni are _ _ that rappers have I® I a West African instrument, ]
incorporated into their music.
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to replace lost wages. As a result, many citizens called
for jury duty seek to avoid selection by demonstrating I® they
that _ _ have urgent commitments or would
experience financial hardship. I© one

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3. Many major historical inventions occurred ® I has arisen
simultaneously in multiple places. Writing, in contrast,
had only a few independent origins, and the alphabet ® I had arisen
_ _ only once in history.
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4. Retrieval practice is an approach to studying that - , ® \ helps
involves recalling previously learned information. The
method, which can take forms including flash cards, I® I help
practice tests and open-ended writing prompts, _ _
learners recognize what they do and don't know. I © I have helped
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a classic work of literature, it was published to achieved.
middling reviews in 1851. Its author, Herman Melville,
worked as a customs inspector for most of his _ __
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and achieving only modest literary
success.

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and only modest literary success had
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6. After a disaster like a forest fire or a volcanic
than a grain of pollen.
eruption, the first plants to come back are the fastest
colonizers-particularly ferns. Unlike other types of
® that by the wind are blown long distances
flora, ferns sprout from minuscule spores _ _ smaller than a grain of pollen.

© smaller than a grain of pollen, which by

the wind is blown long distances.

that are smaller than a grain of pollen

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the Monarch butterfly to come close to losing its
habitat. In recent years, h o w e v e r , _ _ , . __®___,_I_t_h_at_h_as_d_ec_l_in_e_d_._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

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were the highest-ranking group in Japan. After the Meiji
Restoration of 1868, however, the Japanese imperial
family reassumed rule. The samurai caste faded away,
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with many of its members becoming _ _ . I© \ scholars or a bureaucrat ]

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events generated in the hippocampus _ _ believed to
indicate major events in the brain's so-called episodic
memory. This type of memory involves important
episodes or pieces of information, such as childhood I © I have been
birthday parties or old telephone numbers.
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10. Bacteria push themselves forward by coiling long,
traditional light microscope could see:
threadlike appendages into corkscrew shapes that act as
makeshift propellers. Because the "propellers" are made ® researchers revealed what no traditional
of a single protein, the process by which bacteria move light microscope could see:
has traditionally baffled scientists. Using cryo-electron
microscopy, however, _ _ th~ strange structure of © the revelation of researchers that no
these propellers at the level of individual atoms. traditional light microscope could see:

what no traditional light microscope

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11. By the beginning of the fifteenth century, Venice --i ® has drawn
strivers from across the Mediterranean basin.
There, they ran the guard fleets that kept the city-state's
adversaries in check.
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' 12. In 1963, Lina Wertmilller directed her first film,

The Basilisks. Although it received mixed reviews, it
featured a distinctive combination of ethnographic I® I will characterize
satire and impressionistic drama that _ _
Wertmiiller's future works. I© I would characterize

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13. Norman Rockwell's intricately conceived I® I images stories.
narrative paintings were widely reproduced in
popular magazines. Across the United States, a vast I® image's stories.
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audience of readers recognized themselves in the

I© I images story's.

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14. For all his fame and celebration, William ® exists.
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Shakespeare remains a mysterious figure. Scholars are

often forced to turn to speculation when discussing his ® I exist.
activities because so few reliable sources about his
personal life _ _ © I has existed.

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® water is used by frescoes as a vehicle for
15. Since ancient times, the fresco has served as an
allowing them to merge with the plaster.
important method of mural making. Consisting of
watercolor applied to freshy laid plaster, _ _ When @ water and pigment merge with the
the plaster sets, the painting becomes an integral part plaster to create frescoes.
of the wall.
© frescoes use water as a vehicle that
allows pigment to merge with the plaster.

@ pigment merges with the plaster using

water as a vehicle for frescoes.
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