Review
Reviewed Work(s): Homer and the Nibelungenlied: Comparative Studies in Epic Style by B.
Fenik
Review by: Erwin Cook
Source: The Journal of Hellenic Studies, Vol. 109 (1989), pp. 209-210
Published by: The Society for the Promotion of Hellenic Studies
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209
inthe
the
figure
of theOlympian
supreme
Olympian
in the
two
epics.
in
figure
of the supreme
in the
two epics.
motives
return
just vengeance.
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motives
ofof
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and and
just vengeance.
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chief
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controller
of events he
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suggestion
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suggestion
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same,
although
although
he appears
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appears
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the
story
of Achilles
as a counterpoint,
or
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thethe
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of Achilles
as a counterpoint,
or
his
hisspecial
special
plan in
plan
the Iliad
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the
more
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of aand
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power in
of a moral
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in
cross-current,
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against
against
the straight
the straight
progression
progression
of the
of the
the
the
later
later
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because he
because
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thereby
thereby
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tension tension
Odysseus'
Odysseus'
return
return
and punishment
and punishment
of the suitors (254).
of the in
suitors
(254).
in
the
thenarrative
narrative
(296).
(296).
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clear
clear
that
that
E. believes
E. believes
the Iliad
thetoIliad
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have
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and
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to him to
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he foreshadows
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of then
be
be right,
right,
because
because
then
one poet
one could
poet be
could
recognised
be recognised
as
as
Zeus
Zeus
(2I3).
(2I3).
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In Homer,
however, according
however,
to E., according
Zeus
to
E., father
Zeus
the
thefounding
founding
father
of classical
of classical
Greek Greek
religion.religion.
and
and
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otherother
members
members
of the Olympian
of the
family
Olympian
are
family are
B. C. DIETRICH
invariably
invariably
perceived
perceived
as literary as
figures
literary
and theirfigures
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tions
tions
as poetic
as poetic
inventions
inventions
in order to serve
in order
the designs
toofserve the designs of
the poet.
FENIK (B.) Homer and the Nibelungenlied: comThe Judgment of Paris was fundamental to the epic,
parative studies in epic style. (Martin classical
E. believes, constituting the major driving force of the
lectures, 30.) Cambridge, Mass. and London:
Iliad and its divine activity. Homer first connected the
myth with the story of the rape of Helen (296), thereby
Harvard University Press (for Oberlin College),
motivating Hera's and Athena's unrelenting hatred of
1986. Pp. xvii+2II. 18.95.
Troy and support of the Achaean cause. The curious fact
that the poet only mentions the judgment in passing in
HNL is a diagnosis of certain underlying structures
the last book can apparently be explained on subtle
literary grounds.4 Aphrodite is ranged on the Trojan
which organise epic narrative. The book's essential
points are that 'form makes content' and that this is
side as Paris' protector and not because of her oriental
background, as is generally reasoned. The other gods are
evenly and sensibly ('sinnvoll') divided without regard
something Homer shares with the author of the NL and
indeed, to a greater or lesser extent, with any author of
integrated narrative. The devices analysed by Fenik can
be placed under two principal headings: parallelism and
to origins or cultic history. This purely literary
argument is not at all persuasive in the case of Apollo,
whose Trojan allegiance is surprisingly traced to his role
as archer god in a 'famous' pre-Homeric ballad
celebrating the death of Achilles. The evidence for such
a composition is thin, to say the least, and would
ring-composition. His comparative analysis will prove
of special importance to students of oral poetry, since
some of his texts are manifestly non-oral and exhibit
patterns which are also to be found in Homer. This
should serve as a caution against reflexively assigning
contradict E.'s own belief that Homer defined the gods'
functions. E. also unconvincingly returns to the unten-
any and all patterns one is able to isolate to oral practice,
able view of Apollo as Dorian god on the grounds of a
been greatly exaggerated.
The title ofF's work is somewhat misleading, since in
addition to H. and the NL it contains shorter discussions
long discredited etymology (I89). The history of
Apollo's festivals in Greece and his cultic nature do not
support E.'s view.
It is not possible in a review to dojustice to the closely
argued account of all the gods who in essence obeyed
the same rules set by the poetic composition. The
concept of fate, which is considered in the third chapter,
also fits into E.'s coherent perception of Homeric
religion with no concession to 'Volksreligion', except
perhaps for the numinous power of the usually hostile
daimon. Curiously E. also derives from popular belief
the concept of the Klothes, the Spinners of Fate, who,
judging from funeral inscriptions and their position in
later literature, do actually look like epic invention. Aisa
and supports F.'s thesis that Homer's 'otherness' has
of e.g. the Kudrun, Parzival, the Roland poems, the
Gospel of Mark and Gotthelf's Uli. It is divided into
three sections, one on the Iliad, another on the NL
(which also contains discussions of other German
medieval epics) and one entitled 'other texts'. The
section on Homer consists of three chapters devoted to
books I I, I2 and 13 of the Iliad, followed by an excursus
on the Adrestos incident. F.'s treatment of the NL, on
the other hand, is arranged by the compositional
techniques of symmetry, correlation, ring-composition,
prolepsis and accumulation. The third section contains a
comparison of the Chanson de Roland and Rolandslied
and concludes with a chapter entitled 'beyond the epic'
devoted to prose authors.
and the virtually synonymous moira, however, most
directly expressed the power of fate in Homer (284).
Fate was neither subject nor superior to the gods but
represented the guardian of the balanced order of the
orality, there is one point on which he cannot afford not
Homeric theological system. Fate, then, is not identical
to take a stand, i.e. H.'s apparent approval of Agamemnon's exhortation to Menelaos to kill Adrestos. He
world and therefore the court of first instance in the
with the exigencies of plot but fulfils a loftier function in
the poet's scheme of things as the 'Grundsatz der
homerischen Religion' (287). There is a fine distinction
between the plot as mundane requirement of the story
or myth and as a quasi-religious force by which both
gods and heroes were ultimately bound. The latter is
true for both epics whose gods therefore are intrinsically
moral beings. The moral element is more pronounced
in the Odyssey, according to E., because of its central
4JHS ci (I981) 56-62.
Although F. endeavors to skirt the question of
argues that 'there is nothing in Agamemnon's deport-
ment in the Adrestos scene, or in his behaviour before or
afterward, to win respect or command our assent. If the
phrase aisima pareipon signals the poet's approval, he has
blocked the door to our own. His depiction of
Agamemnon runs counter to his own assessment, if that
is what it is' (25). Noting that these same words occur in
book 7, F. concludes that 'they are a formular reflex,
stimulated by associations of situation and character.'
However, if F.'s interpretation of the scene is correct,
then this is no small 'formular mistake' along the lines of
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structure In
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D.'s
is more or less responsible for each of the
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by Paris
by Paris
to conform
to conform
to his theory:
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n.b. theory:
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n.b. I raised.
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the NL and other texts. For example, correlation
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is after all what comparative studies are all
ro6oTa
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(385),
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voices NL-which
a deep-seated
prejudice
prejudice
which
which
the audience
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either shared
either
or undershared
or underabout-is
virtually non-existent. F. contents himself
stood
stood
as as
a justifiable
a justifiable
heroic heroic
sentiment.
sentiment.
with an (admirable) exposition of the phenomenon in
and leaves it to the reader to discover the
F.
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by
reading
his reading
to undermine
to undermine
the both texts, the
and dissimilarities between them and to
characterisation
characterisation
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perhaps only Mr. Fenik could write. For all that,
it is still
a most interesting and valuable contribution to
warning
warning
(I29)
(I29)
and tried
and repeatedly
tried repeatedly
to thwart Apollo's
to thwart
Apollo's
of the
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rescue
of of
Aeneas
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(432). (432).
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of the
of human
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by transgressing
them. I I 'for example,
them. Othryoneus (14.363) and Alkathoos
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the Iliad. D.'s
in the Iliad. D.'s
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H. did not University
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of California, Berkeley
expect
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at
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finger-wagging
at
D.'s impetuosity, but to gasp in amazement and
admiration: this is as far as man can go, the god himselfGRIFFIN (J.) Homer: the Odyssey. (Landmarks of
had marked the limit. The juxtaposition of Iliad 5 and 6
world literature.) Cambridge etc.: University
is not intended to contrast the humanitas of Hector with
Press, I987. pp. vi+ 107. 1I2.50 (bound), 3-.95
the foolhardiness of D., but the tragedy of war with a
celebration of heroic virtue, and there is more of
(paper).
paradox than irony in the juxtaposition. The impor- This volume on the Odyssey is published in a series
tance of all the above for assessing the uses and usefulness intended to provide 'a substantial library of textbooks
of structural studies such as F.'s is this: structure itself on some of the most important and widely read literary
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