When the alarm buzzed, James realized that he was an idiot. He had forgotten a big day. Even after Annie got that diamond on her finger, there
are still certain actions a guy must take: Buy
gift, buy large obnoxious card, search for flowers, find… Oh, he is so
dead
Throwing on clothes and grabbing his wallet, James flew out to the nearest store, a CVS pharmacy. List in hand, James checked off each gift.
Anything wrapped sticky, chocolate covered? Check. Obnoxious glittery card? Check. Flowers? A little shy on that supply. What else? What else? James’ chest constricted.
This gift had to be something she wouldn’t expect.
Frustrated James looked around him and giggled. Grabbing a basket, he walked along each aisle, tossing whatever he found into the basket. Animated teddy bear? Oh yeah.
Hello kitty plush in a mug? Yup.
James lost control. Aisles rolled by a supply of miraculous items he threw into the basket. Water pistols? Heck, yeah. Six pack of Diet Coke? Hello Kitty bath toy? Better believe it.
James was exhausted. At home, he wrapped up the haul with Christmas paper, and finished just in time. Annie walked in, giggling with delight. When she got to the Hello Kitty, James sensed the moment passing. Desperately, James handed her a gift bag.
Annie pulled out a red and pink wood chip wreath (good price, $25). Life was good again. Until next time.
Here’s
what Elephant’s Child writes to explain the Wednesday Word meme: “Essentially
the aim is to encourage us to write. Each week we are given a choice of
prompts: which can be words, phrases, music, or an image. What we do
with those prompts is up to us: a short story, prose, a song, or a
poem… We can use some or all of the prompts, and mixing and matching is
encouraged.” Writers may post at the word site, and/or at their own blog
site. Be sure to tell the world that you wrote something really good."
I didn't underline that week's words, back in 2017, for some reason.
Elephant's child for this week.
rivioli, serenity, marble, bridge, soccer and/or foliage, nepotism, lectern, gorgonzola
I loved this, Susan. It perfectly describes how we can go overboard for the one we love when whimsy would do just fine. Blessings!
ReplyDeletewhimsy can go just so far.
DeleteWhen I worked midnights in retail we had some big laughs over men rushing in at 2:00 AM thinking they would find a gift in time for morning. Silly creatures...
ReplyDeleteI asked store clerks about that and they outright laughed.
DeleteHe gets a gold star for trying, but I suspect James will have to do better next year.
ReplyDeleteBeing goofy and dumb is going to catch up with him. She will tire of that before too long.
DeleteHe did indeed try - but River is right he needs to do better next year. And earlier.
ReplyDeleteI loved your story using this week's prompts.
Thanks. I corrected your site address from above. Writing in Wed.Words is always fun.
DeleteCheck your links. [email protected] is an email address. And if you hover over that link it points back to your blog but a bad address. The URL alarm is buzzing!
ReplyDeleteHmmm. I copied it straight from her site. Thanks for the heads-up. have corrected it, and hope people head to her blog.
DeleteWhoops. At least he was trying, though.
ReplyDeleteThis time he dodged the possible results.
DeleteI love James' joie de vivre!
ReplyDeleteI would love to race along the shelves shopping.
DeleteGood read my friend. It did make me smile remembering a time I NEARLY forgot. Sending love and Merry Christmas to you and yours. We are a little cool here in Florida, but we will warm up!
ReplyDeleteHere in S. Calif. it was 84 deg last week, and now 73. Make up its mind already.
DeleteI wish you and your family a very blessed Christmas filled with joy, hope, good health and whatever you may desire.
ReplyDeleteGod bless you all.
thank you for the Christmas wish! Christ has been born! Christ is risen!
DeleteYou always come up with the best stories! I hope you had a very Merry Christmas Susan! Happy New Year also!
ReplyDeletei always aim to please.
DeleteWhen I delivered flowers for Mother's Day and Valentine's Day for a local florist, they would get the frantic last minute calls.
ReplyDeleteWe have a family story of the time Papa didn't get anything for Nana and took the 12-year-old daughter, now my 85-year-old mother, to the five-and-dime to help him pick gifts.
Men. I can only imagine the desperation!
Delete