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Friday, December 20, 2024

He forgot.

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When the alarm buzzed, James realized that he was an idiot. He had forgotten a big day.  Even after Annie got that diamond on her finger, there are still certain actions a guy must take:  Buy gift, buy large obnoxious card, search for flowers, find… Oh, he is so dead

Throwing on clothes and grabbing his wallet, James flew out to the nearest store, a CVS pharmacy.  List in hand, James checked off each gift. 

Anything wrapped sticky, chocolate covered? Check. Obnoxious glittery card? Check. Flowers? A little shy on that supply. What else? What else?  James’ chest constricted.

This gift had to be something she wouldn’t expect. 

Frustrated James looked around him and giggled. Grabbing a basket, he walked along each aisle, tossing whatever he found into the basket.  Animated teddy bear? Oh yeah.

 Hello kitty plush in a mug?  Yup.

James lost control.  Aisles rolled by a supply of miraculous items he threw into the basket. Water pistols? Heck, yeah. Six pack of Diet Coke? Hello Kitty bath toy? Better believe it.

James was exhausted. At home, he wrapped up the haul with Christmas paper, and finished just in time.  Annie walked in, giggling with delight.  When she got to the Hello Kitty, James sensed the moment passing.  Desperately, James handed her a gift bag.

Annie pulled out a red and pink wood chip wreath (good price, $25). Life was good again. Until next time. 

 

Here’s what Elephant’s Child writes to explain the Wednesday Word meme: “Essentially the aim is to encourage us to write.  Each week we are given a choice of prompts: which can be words, phrases, music, or an image.  What we do with those prompts is up to us:  a short story, prose, a song, or a poem… We can use some or all of the prompts, and mixing and matching is encouraged.” Writers may post at the word site, and/or at their own blog site. Be sure to tell the world that you wrote something really good."

I didn't underline that week's words, back in 2017, for some reason.

Elephant's child for this week.

rivioli, serenity, marble, bridge, soccer  and/or  foliage, nepotism, lectern, gorgonzola

22 comments:

  1. I loved this, Susan. It perfectly describes how we can go overboard for the one we love when whimsy would do just fine. Blessings!

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  2. When I worked midnights in retail we had some big laughs over men rushing in at 2:00 AM thinking they would find a gift in time for morning. Silly creatures...

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    1. I asked store clerks about that and they outright laughed.

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  3. He gets a gold star for trying, but I suspect James will have to do better next year.

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    1. Being goofy and dumb is going to catch up with him. She will tire of that before too long.

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  4. He did indeed try - but River is right he needs to do better next year. And earlier.
    I loved your story using this week's prompts.

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    1. Thanks. I corrected your site address from above. Writing in Wed.Words is always fun.

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  5. Check your links. [email protected] is an email address. And if you hover over that link it points back to your blog but a bad address. The URL alarm is buzzing!

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    1. Hmmm. I copied it straight from her site. Thanks for the heads-up. have corrected it, and hope people head to her blog.

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  6. Whoops. At least he was trying, though.

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    1. I would love to race along the shelves shopping.

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  8. Good read my friend. It did make me smile remembering a time I NEARLY forgot. Sending love and Merry Christmas to you and yours. We are a little cool here in Florida, but we will warm up!

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    1. Here in S. Calif. it was 84 deg last week, and now 73. Make up its mind already.

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  9. I wish you and your family a very blessed Christmas filled with joy, hope, good health and whatever you may desire.
    God bless you all.

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    1. thank you for the Christmas wish! Christ has been born! Christ is risen!

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  10. You always come up with the best stories! I hope you had a very Merry Christmas Susan! Happy New Year also!

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  11. When I delivered flowers for Mother's Day and Valentine's Day for a local florist, they would get the frantic last minute calls.

    We have a family story of the time Papa didn't get anything for Nana and took the 12-year-old daughter, now my 85-year-old mother, to the five-and-dime to help him pick gifts.

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