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    This document discusses different views on whether parents or schools should teach children to be good members of society. It provides arguments for both views and then gives the author's own opinion. The document suggests that both parents and schools play an important role, as children learn values from their family but also need to understand how to engage with wider society.

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    { 最简化雅思写作

    {
    新浪微博： @ 刘洪波 - 贵学
    I. 我看评分标准
    II. 为什么总是 5 分
    III. 从 5 到 6
    IV. 7 分以上
    15 句思路框架介绍
    V. 2 篇范文解析
    II. How to read faster
    1. 物理疗法 NO SOUND

    What a nice car!


    I. 我看评分标准
    I. 我看评分标准

    雅思作文四大评分标准

    Task Response （任务回应）


    Coherence and Cohesion （一致与连接）
    Lexical Resource （词汇资源）
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy （语法范围与正确性）
    I. 我看评分标准

    7
    I. 我看评分标准
    I. 我看评分标准
    I. 我看评分标准
    I. 我看评分标准
    I. 评分标准的背后
    I. 我看评分标准—结论

    ------------------------- #

    ---------------$---------------

    ------------------------#

    -------------------------- $

    #
    II. 为什么总是 5—— 还原雅思考官评分过程
    《剑 7 》 p169

    Some people think that universities should provide


    graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the
    workplace. Others think that the true function of a
    university should be to give access to knowledge for its
    own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an
    employer.

    What, in your opinion, should be the man function of a


    university?
    II. 还原雅思考官评分过程

    What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many
    years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for
    their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universities
    should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.
    II. 还原雅思考官评分过程

    The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the
    students’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to
    get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a
    university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job
    and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its
    students.
    II. 还原雅思考官评分过程

    Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace maks a university
    progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so
    focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do
    research and make it more mordenization.
    II. 还原雅思考官评分过程

    Lastly, providing these knowledge and sills could benefit our country which usually
    gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students
    are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries’ economy strong.

    In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the
    workplace needs is every universities’ basic function. (232 words)
    II. 还原雅思考官评分过程

    The examiner’s comment:

    SCORE: 5

    This answer is less than 250 words and it does not address all parts of the
    question, so it loses marks.
    II. 还原雅思考官评分过程

    The examiner’s comment:

    SCORE: 5

    This answer is less than 250 words and it does not address all parts of the
    question, so it loses marks.
    参考：

    p144
    The examiner’s comment:
    Nevertheless, some relevant ideas and a position on the issue are presented.
    Ideas are organized and the structure of the answer is clearly signalled. There
    is some good use of linkers but there is also a lot of repetition due to
    inadequate use of referencing and substitution.
    The examiner’s comment:
    The high level of repetition [‘knowledge and skills’ is
    repeated nine times] also indicates limitations in range of
    vocabulary although, apart from language given in the
    rubric, there is just sufficient additional vocabulary for the
    task.
    The answer includes attempts at complex sentence forms,
    but these are generally awkwardly phrased and tend to
    require some re-reading to understand. Nevertheless, there
    are examples of accurate complex structures.
    （ 5+5.5+5+5.5 ） / 4 = 5.25 ≈ 5.5
    5.5 – 0.5 = 5
    III. 从 5 到 6
    What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many
    years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for
    their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universities
    should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.
    III. 从 5 到 6

    The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the
    students’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to
    get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a
    university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job
    and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its
    students.
    III. 从 5 到 6

    Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace maks a university
    progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so
    focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do
    research and make it more mordenization.
    III. 从 5 到 6

    Lastly, providing these knowledge and sills could benefit our country which usually
    gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students
    are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries’ economy strong.

    In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the
    workplace needs is every universities’ basic function. (232 words)
    IV. 7 分以上
    Harvey
    之
    雅思写作游泳理论
    雅思写作境界理论
    Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good
    members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to
    learn this.

    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


    A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic
    skills only.
    It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members
    of society.
    Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
    In order to be a good member of any society the
    individual must respect and obey the rules of their
    community and share their values. Educating children to
    understand the need to obey rules and respect others
    always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the
    responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to
    help children learn what is important in life, how they are
    expected to behave and what role they will play in their
    world.
    However, learning to understand and share the value
    system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the
    home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a
    wider community where teachers and peers will have just
    as much influence as their parents do at home. At school,
    children will experience working and living with people
    from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider
    society. This experience should teach them how to co-
    operate with each other and how to contribute to the life
    of their community.
    But to be a valuable member of any community is not like
    learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual
    goes on learning throughout life and is the responsibility
    of every member of a society to take responsibility for
    helping the younger generation to become active and able
    members of that society.
    WRITING TASK 2
    You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
    Write about the following topic:

    Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;


    only governments and large companies can make a
    difference. 
    To what extent do you agree or disagree?
    写作提纲

    观点：每个人都能起作用

    原因 1 ：长期人类活动
    原因 2 ：个人能影响政府和公司的决定。
    举例：如果人人不用一次性纸杯，就没有公司生产。
    Environmental protection is one of the most important challenges almost
    every country is facing. However, whether only governments and big firms
    have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial
    issue. My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge
    difference.
    First, it is human activities that have the greatest impact on environment
    throughout the history. Both environmental pollution and conservation are
    the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet
    this challenge alone. So, whoever created the problem should solve it;
    environmental protection needs every one of us to continuously participate
    in.
    Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviours have a critical influence on
    government’s polices and company’s strategies. For example, if everyone
    says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that used
    to manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly
    substitutes in order to survive in the market.
    That is not to say that governments and large companies can not positively
    contribute. Indeed governments can enact laws and introduce programs to
    raise the public’s low carbon awareness; companies can promote green
    products to change the public’s consuming habits. But they also need every
    citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.
    In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting environment!
    Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their
    responsibility to develop low carbon economy at the macro level. Only by
    doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next
    generation, and the next generation after!
    (260 words)
    Where to find me?
    不要像我当年一样选错功法啊！
    加油吧，学弟学妹们，
    学长只能帮你到这里了！
    关掉话筒，
    起身离去，
    深藏功与名……

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