GENERATE IDEAS IN A

WRITING PROCESS
NAME
ASSIGNMENT CONTANTS
 writing process?  Idea map
 Brainstorming § Definition
 Definition § benefits
 benefits § process
 process § Example
 example  Brain storming vs idea
mapping
 Free writing
 Drafting
 Definition
 revision
 benefits
 Editing
 process
§ Free writing: global warming
 example
 Cohesion
v Coherence
 WRITING PROCESS
 Writing process writing process ose kehthe hai k jisme kisi bhi writing
ko complete kia jatha hai

 Writing process k four parts hai

 Prewriting: is part me writter jo hai wo sochtha hai k kis tariqe se

writing karni hai isme brain storming or mind mapping waghera ko bhi
use kia jatha hai is part me planning karthe hai

 Drafting: is part me writter jo hai wo sare idieas ko rough form me ikata

kartha hai or thora bohoth organize kartha hai
 WRITING PROCESS

 Revising: is part me writter sare ideas ko information ko jo osne likhi

ose organize kartha hai arrange kartha hai isme koch add karna ho ya
delete karna ho to is part me karthe hai

 Editing: is part me writter jo hai wo apni writing ki grammer check

kartha hai or ose teek kartha hai koi sentence sense na bhana raha ho
ya grammer ki kooi mistake ho to wo isme teek hothi hai
 GENERATING IDEAS

 here are various ways to generate ideas for

our writing.
  Brainstorming
  Idea Map
 Freewriting
BRAIN STORMING
 DEFINITION

  Brain storming me koch log

aik saath bhet k kisi bhi
problem ka solution
nikalthe hai
 BENEFITS OF BRAINSTORMING
 Outside Input
isme jo hai bahir se koi bhi apna hisa dal saktha hai jis se problem jo hai
wo ache se or jaldi se solve hosaktha hai
 Idea Building
idea building me aik idea ko lek os se dosre ideas nikalthe hai isme kisi
bhi idea ko foran reject nai karthe ospe sochthe hai k is se kia hal
hosaktha hai
 For example: me aik ghar lethe ho rent k liye ye aik idea hai ab is rent se
me koi or kaam start kartha ho ye dosra idea hogaya
 BENEFITS OF BRAIN STORMING

v Breaks Routine
brain storming me jo hai insan apni routine change kartha hai jis
tarike se wo kaam kartha hai shayad osk os tarike me koi issue ho
matlab ye k ye insan ki productivity bharatha hai

v List Generation
brainstorming me aik insan aisa hona chahiye jo har idea ko note
karain or session k end pe bohoth se ideas ikate hojathe hai jis se
problem asani se solve hosakthi hai
BENEFITS OF
BRAIN STORMING
 Teamwork
brain storming karne se logo
me team work bhartha hai
log aik dosre ko samajne
lagthe hai or is se log saath
me kaam ache se kar pathe
hai
 RULES OF BRAIN STORMING
 Defer judgement. Is rule me har koi koi bhi idea de saktha hai kisi pe
pabandi nahi or dosro ko ijazath hai k wo kisi k idea k oper koi or idea
bhana le

 Encourage wild ideas. Is rule me har thara k ajeeb

ideas ko encourage karna chahiye kise patha k konsa idea acha ho

 Build on the ideas of others. Kisi aik k idea ko lek os idea ko improve
karna or ose behther bhana na

 Stay focused on the topic. Discussion ko focus rakhna chahiye jo

problem hai topic osi pe rehna chahiye
 RULES OF BRAIN STORMING

v One conversation at a time. Aik wakht me aik insan bhole or baki sab

log ache se focus hok oska idea sune

v Be visual. Brain storming k doran kisi paper ya sticky notes pe ideas

ko note karna.

v Go for quantity. Koshish ki jai k ziyada se ziyada ideas collect ki jain

or end pe dekha jai k konsa sahi hai
 BRAIN STORMING PROCESS
 Brain storming kisi process kisi makhsoos tariqe se honi chahiye nak shor
sharaba ho log aik dosre ki disrespect karthe ho zoar zoar se chikh rahe ho
discipline k saath sab hona chahiye

 Explain the process. Group ka head sab se pehle apne partners ko ache se

rules samjhai or guidelines de

 Explain the problem for which ideas are needed.  group ka head pore
group ko problem samjhain or kesa idea chahiye wo bhi bathain

 Gather ideas. Koi aisa idea le jo pehle kamiyab howa ho or osk oper log
dosre ideas build karain
 BRAIN STORMING PROCESS

 Capture all ideas publicly. Sare ideas ko publically note kia jain board pe
ya sticky notes pe or kisi bhi idea ko criticize na kia jai

 Sort the ideas.  jithne ideas jana hoe onko arrange kia jai

 Cull the ideas.isme jab ideas arrange hojai to har idea ko discuss karthe
hai or ose judge karthe hai respect k saath k ye kaam karega ya nahi
 BRAIN STORMING PROCESS

 For example, jo bhi ideas collect ho osme ache ideas alag kiye jain or
group bathain k konsa acha wala hai 

 Prioritize the remaining ideas. Baki k ideas ko group decide kare k kia

karna hai

 Decide what will happen next with the top few ideas. Jo idea miljai os
idea ko agae further discuss kia jain k ye kithna kaam ka hai
 EXAMPLE OF BRAIN STORMING
Saturn

Color: mix of Saturn has 30 Sixth planet

orange and rings from the sun
brown

Sixth planet
from the sun

Saturn is a gas Saturn orbits sun

giant once 24.9 earth
years

Surface
62 unknown
Largest moons:
moons
temperature
titan and rhea
-139 degrees c
Saturn is
Saturn is the 884,740,000
second largest miles from sun
planet
IDEA MAP
DEFINITION
 Mind mapping ya idea mapping
me diagrams ki madad se ideas
ko discuss kia jatha hai or ye
diagrams kisi aik core pe focus
hothi hai

 Insan ki visual memory achi

hothi hai or wo ache se ideas ka
link samaj saktha hai baghair
confuse hoe 
BENEFITS OF IDEA MAPPING
 It Enables Meaningful Learning: mind mapping se insan ideas k bich me
link dhond sakthaa hai or dekh saktha hai k konsi chiz ise patha hai or
konsi ise nai patha is se wo wo chizain seekh paiga jiska faida hoga

  It Helps with Memorization and Retention: mind mapping me colors

images  ki waja se insan ache se chizon ko yaad kar patha hai or wo mind
me dher thak rehthi hai
 BENEFITS OF IDEA MAPPING

v It’s a More Engaging Form of Learning: mind mapping me insan

engage hotha hai or ye fun hothi hai jis se insan bore bhi nai hotha

v It Makes Complex Issues Easier to Understand: mind mapping se jo

complex mushkil problems hothi hai wo asani se hal hojathi hai qk sab
diagrams hothi hai or onk beach me link ache se samaj ajatha hai
BENEFITS OF IDEA
MAPPING
 It Improves Productivity: idea mapping
se insan ache se sab yaad karletha hai or
diagrams ki waja se oski productivity or
creaTIVITY BHAR JATHI HAI

 It Ignites Creativity: mind mapping se

insan creative ho jatha hai or wo unique
ideas generate kar patha hai
 RULES OF IDEA MAPPING
 Rule no.1 mind mapping me ideas humesha centre se start hothi hai
 Rule no.2 centre pe koi image use ki jai jis se problem ache se nazar aye

 Rule no. 3 colors use kiye jai or different images use ki jai.

 Rule no. 4 centre se or branches nikal kar link ki jai or on sub branches ki
or sub branches nikali jai

 Rule no. 5 pore mind map me images use ki jai 

 Rule no. 6  ap apni marzi ka apne style ka mind map bhana sakthi hain
 PROCESS OF IDEA MAPPING
 Create a Central Idea: jo bhi topic ho ose centre me rakha jai is se ye
waze hojaiga k konsa topic explore karna hai

 Add branches: centre k saath branches nikali jain or onhe line k saath
connect kia jai

 Expand the branches with sub-branches: jo branche centre se nikli

hoi ho onki agae jak or sub branches nikali jai or onhe line k saath
connect kia jai

 Use colors, drawings and symbols copiously: mind mapping me

colors images lines use ki jai
 PROCESS OF IDEA MAPPING
 Keep the topics labels as short as possible, jo branches or sub
branches ko naam diye jaain onse short rakhna chahiye

 Vary text size, color and alignment. Text ka size or font size
different rakhna chahiye or colors use karne chahiye
EXAMPLE OF IDEA MAPPING
 BRAIN STORMING VS IDEA MAPPING
 Brain storming thab use hothi hai jab short time me ziyada ideas chahiye
ho or pir baad me onko rating dek arrange kia jatha hai or mind mapping
me aik hi centre k saath brances nikal k visualy  dekha jatha hai

 Brain storming me group ideas  Mind mapping me images or

collect karthe hai or problem ka colors use hothe hai or diagrams
solution nialthe hai use hothi hai 
 Mind mapping brain storming me
bhi use ki ja sakthi hai
 FREE WRITING
DEFINITION
 Free writing pre writing ka precess hai
jis me writter koch time k liye musalsal
likhta hai baghair kisi grammer or
writing mistake ki parwa kiye hoi
 Is se shayad useless rough material
miljai lekin ye writter ko help kartha hai
mind ko open karne me

 Free writing me writter likhtha rehtha

hai paraghraps me 
 Or brain storming me ideas collect kiye
jatha hai 
BENEFITS OF FREE WRITING
 Free writing aisa hai k ap car me bhet jai
or chalthe rahe apki koi mazil nai hothi
bs ap chalthe rehthe hai

 ye writter ki abalities ko improve

kartha hai

 Is se confidence miltha hai

 is se insan creative hojatha hai

 Is se insan k dill se khoaf dhoor

hojatha hai k log mere kaam k bare
me kia bolaingai
 BENEFITS OF FREE WRITING

v Isme process pe focus kia jatha hai na k outcome pe

v Is se muscle memory bharthi hai

v is se insan ko patha chaltha hai k as a writer wo kesa hai

 FREE WRITING PROCESS
 Clear our mind. Sab se pehle mind relax karo or sab
tension bhool jao grammer k lihaz se

 Pick a theme, location, or emotion as a prompt.shoro me

koi theme pic karain or os se start le

 Remove all distractions from our area. Cell computers or

har thara ki distraction khatham karai
 FREE WRITING PROCESS
v Use a timer. Apne liye koi time rakh k jese 10  mints ya
15 mints or os me musalsal likhti jain bina rokain
v Write without stopping during the allotted time. Jo
time rakha howa hai osme musalsal bina rokain likhti
jain or agr koch mind me na bhi aye to rokna nai hai
beshak ye lekho k muje samaj nai arahi muje samaj nai
arahi muje samaj nai arahi but rokna nai hai
 FREE WRITING PROCESS

 When the time limit is finished, STOP. Jab time khatham

hojain to jo apne likha ose dobara slowly read karain or
ideas noe karain agr writing unfocused ho to thora break
lelain or pir se try karain or koshish karain k topic pe focus
rahain ap
 EXAMPLE OF FREE WRITING
Halloween

muje halloween pasand thi. Lekin me dhar jathi thi.  hume

kapry phente the ajeeb ajeeb se lekin bohoth mushkil hotha tha
k konsi dress phene.  me aik jhal pari thi aik bar pir dosri
bar belle thi beauty or beast movie me jo hai. muje bohoth
jaldi hothi thi k me taiyar ho or logo k gharo me
jak toffees lo. me apne bhai k saath jathi thi, pir wo bhara
hogaya , me apne bachpan me kafi lambe arse thak ye sab karthi
rahi 

Humare pharosiyoun ka ghar gali k end pe tha, waha ziyada

bhache nai jaya karthe the, isliye hume achi chizain nai
milthi thi isliye hum koch dhoor gharo me jak mangthe the
 EXAMPLE OF FREE WRITNG
Ab jab me bhari hogai ho lekin muje halloween abhi
bhi pasand hai lekin ab bachpan wala maza nai. me ab pumkin
k seeds paka thi ho pupkin carve karthi ho , etc. Lekin muje
pachpan k wo din bohoth yaad athe hai

is saal ka halloween to mehsoos hi nai ho raha. shayad is

saal ziyada garmi ki waja se  yaha kafi garmi hai or asman
bhi saaf me me shooraj moki k phool ka dress phen kr sara
din ghom sakthi ho.
 
Me pir se wo bachpan wale maze feel karna chahthi ho muje wo
dhar acha lagtha tha 
 EXAMPLE OF FREE WRITING
Shayad me bahir jak pumkin khareed lo or osk seeds paka k khalo
Jo bhi ho hain to halloween hi na
 

muuje wo bachpan k din yaad athe hai jaha hum halloween k liye intizar karthe
the .abhi k din nahi jaha aisa laghta hai k aik or raath hai pagalo wali
harkathein karne ki
Possible ideas from free write:

1. Muje bachpan k din yaad athe hai

2. Muje bachpan k halloween k din ache laghthe the na k abhi ki umer k

 DRAFTING
DEFINITION

 Drafting rough writng hothi hai paper pe

aik insan kahi drafts bhana tha hai or har
draft pichli wali se behther hothi hai

 Drafting me writter aik rough product

bhana tha hai writing process me
 Or pir ise improve kartha hai
 BENEFITS OF DRAFTING
 Drafting students ko help karthi hai cohesive writing
karne me

 Wo jis topic pe kaam kar rahe hothe hai ose explore

karne me help dethi hai

 Drafting students ko help karthi hai k apne initial writing

ko improve karain os me changes karain

 Drafting mada dethi hai k apne content ko organize kia

jai jis se achi sense bhane
 PROCESS OF DRAFTING
 Find a quiet, focused environment for writing. Sari distractions
khatham karo

 Start in the middle. Jaha marzi se start lelo shayd koi achi line mind
me na arahi ho jis se paraghrap start kia jai jo mind me aye wahi se
start kia jai

 Do not worry about making mistakes. Mistakes karne k bare me na

sochain draft aik rough form hothi hai writing ki jise multiple drafts k
baad improve kia ja saktha hai

 Use the active voice. Humesha active voice use karna chahiye beshak
rough draft hi q na ho. Passive voice na use kia jain qk wo reader ko
bore kardegi active voice reader ko engaged rakhthi hai
 PROCESS OF DRAFTING

v Refer to your outline when you get stuck. Jo brain storming ki os se ya

mind mapping se ya free writing se jo content mila ose dekh k apni draft
ko guide kia jasaktha hai

v Read over your rough draft and revise it. Jab rough draft finish hojain
to thora break lele or wapis ane k baad fresh eyes k saath dekhain to
problems ache se nazar aingi or ose ache se fix kia ja sake ga
EXAMPLE OF DRAFTING
REVISING
DEFINITION
 Revision ka matlab hai
dobara dekhnna matlab k
fresh dekhna  ye aik
muslasal process hai apni
writing ko dekhna samajna 
 Apne arguments ko dekhna
onhe review karna organize
karna
 BENEFITS OF REVISING
 REVISION se kaam improve hoth hai

 Revision k doran hum koch add koch remove kar k koch agae ya piche
kar sakthe hai jis se humara idea clear ho sake

 Revision se reading improve hothi hai qk hum bar bar read karthe hai

 Revision humari judge karne ki skill ko improve kartha hau

 Revising  se hum apni writing ko judge kartha hai jis se humari writng
deep or mazbooth hojathi hai

 Is se humari writing me khamiyan nazar athi hai

 PROCESS OF REVISING
 TAKE SOME TIME: koi bhi writing finsih karne k baad thora sa break lele
or pir ak review karain

 FOCUS ON SPECIFIC PORTION: read kartthe wakht thore se hise pe focus

kare jese k aik chota sa paraghrap or pir next paragraph pe chali jai 
 READ IT LOUD: apni writng ko onchi awaz se read karain jis se ap apni
mistakes ka patha ache se laga sakengi

 Find your main point: isme apna main point dekhain k ap kehna kia
chahthi hai apka focus konsa topic hai or isko as a reader phare jese ye
kisi or ne likha howa ho
 PROCESS OF REVISING

v Tighten and clean up language: kia jo apne likha oski koi sense

bhanti hai? Sentneces ko ache se arrange karain lambe sentences ko
short karain or paragraph ki sense bhanai

v Switch from writer-centered to reader-centered.khud ko as a

reader ki jaga rakho or read karo jese ye apne nahi kisi or ne likha
howa hai
EDITING
DEFINITION
 editing writing process ka aik stage
hai
 Isme writter apne draft ko clear
kartha hai sentences or grammer ko
sahi kartha hai  or information ko
organize kartha hai
 Editing me writter har sentence ko
har word ko ghor se dekhtha hai k kahi
koi mistake to nahi
 BENEFITS OF EDITING
 Editing information organize karne me madad dethi hai
 editing me writter apni writing ka introduction or conclusion improve
kartha hai
 Paragraph structure improve kartha hai
 Editing me writter apne main idea ko define kartha hai

 Editing se kaam me safain ajathi hai. Isme sentences kese likhain hai
punctuation kaha dali hoi se sab dekha jatha hai
 PROCESS OF EDITING
 Read each sentence har sentence ko onchi awaz me parain or
bathai k iska kia function hai

 Analyze the sentences har sentence ko dekhain k kia ink beech

me connection sahi hai ache se sense bhan rahi hai ya nahi

 Manage Sentence Length: sentences ko ghor se dekhain k kahi

ziyada lambi ya choti to nahi
 PROCESS OF EDITING

v Strengthen the Grammatical Core of the sentence (Subject-Verb-

Object): isme grammer ko dekha jatha hai spellings ko dekha jatha
hai k koi issue na ho

v The ASAP Principle: koshish karain k writing jithni short possible ho

othni ki jai ziyada short nai or fazool sentences ko remove kia jai
EXAMPLE OF EDITING
 FREE WRITING
GLOBAL WARMING

moj da halath me global warming ho rahi hai isme koi shaq o shoba nahi hai hume global warming
ka patha chal raha hai jese har saal temperature bhar raha hai or samandar ki satha mosalsal bhar
rahi hai
Global?warming q hothi hai?muje yaad nai araha muje yaad nai araha ???????

Han yaad aya ye insano ki waja se hai jo zehrili gase hawa me chor dethe hai
ye green house gases hawa me jak waha jama hojathi hai or pir jab sooraj ki garmi parthi hai to ye
os garmi ko trap kar lethe hai jis se temperature bhartha hai 
Global warming sirf baraf nai pigla rahi is se humare nakhshe badal sakthe hai samander k sahil pe
rehne wala waha se bhaag kar kahi or chale jaingai jis se keheth phar sakth hai
global warming bharthi chali jaigi agr hum abhi iska muqabla na karai
Ummm muje yaad nai araha muje samaj nai arahi
Taraqi pazeer mumalik is se sab se ziyada mutasir hongai. Hum global warming kese rok sakthe hai 
Hume darakht nai katne chahiye pani zaya nai karna chahiye or indhan nai jhala na chahiye
hume isk nataij bhogathne k liye taiyar rehna chahiye
POSSIBLE IDEAS: (1)spread awarness about global warming and its concequenses 
(2)Be ready for the future challenges
 DRAFTING 
GLOBAL WARMING
Global warming is not a prediction it is happening right now there is no doubt about it. U can
sense global warming by increase in temperatures rising sea levels and increase in air pollutions/
globl warmig is very badglobal warming is a serious issue 
Why global warming happens one may ask? Ughhh why cant I remmeber?????//
It is because of human activities which produces green house gases.
These green house gases in atmoshphere traps the heat coming from the sun and traps it thus it
results in the increase in temperature. Global warming can do much worse then melting polar
ice and changing wheather
It can change our maps displace people from islands to cities and can cause hunger
The global warming will only increase if we don’t take measures against it right know. Ummm
ummm I cant remmeber I cant remmeber developing countries will be worst hit by global
warming what are the measures to stop global warming 
We should stop cutting trees, stop wasting water, stop buring fuels
People should be ready for the invitable we are responsible for the harm we did to our planet 
POSSIBLE IDEAS: (1)spread awarness about global warming and its concequenses 
(2)Be ready for the future challenges
 REVISION 
GLOBAL WARMING
Global warming is not a prediction it is happening right now there is no doubt about it. It is
current increase in temperatures in earths atmohphere. global warming causes increase in
temperatures rise in sea levels and increase in air pollutions 
Causes of global warming are:
Green house gases , deforastation, waste of water etc.
How earths temperature is increasing?
the green house gases in atmoshphere traps the heat coming from the sun. thus it results in the
increase of earths temperature.
Effects of global warming are:
 Global warming can do much worse then melting polar ice and changing wheather
It can change our maps displace people from islands to cities and can cause famine
The global warming will only increase if we don’t take measures against
it right know.  developing countries will be worst hit by global warming 
what are the measures to stop global warming?
We should stop cutting trees, stop wasting water, stop buring fuels
People should be ready for the invitable we are responsible for the harm we did to our planet 
 EDITING
GLOBAL WARMING
Global warming isn't a prediction it's happening immediately there's little question about it. it's the current increase in
temperatures in the earths atmosphere. heating causes an increase in temperatures, a rise in sea levels and an increase
in air pollutions 
 Causes of global warming are:

Greenhouse gases, deforestation, waste of water, etc.

 How earth temperature is increasing?

the greenhouse gases within the atmosphere trap heat coming from the sun. thus it ends up in a rise within
the earth's temperature. 
 Effects of global warming are:

Global warming can do much worse than melting polar ice and changing weather

It can change our maps displace people from islands to cities and might cause famine

Global warming will only increase if we don’t take measures against it right away. developing countries are worst
hit by heating  

 what are the measures to prevent global warming?

We should stop cutting trees, stop wasting water, stop burning fosilfuel. 

People should be ready for the inevitable we are liable for the harm we did to our planet
Cohesion
DEFINITION
 It is important for the parts of a written text to be connected
together. Another word for this is cohesion. 
 This word comes from the word cohere, which means 'to stick
together'. Cohesion is therefore related to ensuring that the words
and sentences you use stick together.

 Good cohesion is achieved through the following five main methods, 

 repeated words/ideas
 reference words
 transition signals
 substitution
 Ellipsis
 EXAMPLE OF COHESION
 Wow, how beautiful flower vessel! How much does it cost? (how)
[reference] 

 You are going to attend the party? If so, what about these agenda?
 (if so,) [substitution] 

 We can buy those apples if we need to (buy those apples). [ellipsis] 

  He passed the exam. However, he did not obtain A plus.

(however) [conjunction]
COHERENCE
DEFINTION
 Coherence in writing is the logical bridge between words,
sentences, and paragraphs. Coherent writing uses devices to
connect ideas within each sentence and paragraph
 Coherence is achieved when sentences and ideas are
connected and flow together smoothly. 
 Use Repetition to Link Ideas, Sentences, and Paragraphs 
 Use Transitional Expressions to Link Ideas, Sentences, and
Paragraphs
 Use Pronouns to Link Sentences 
 Use Synonyms to Link Ideas and Create Variety
 Use Parallel Structures to Link Ideas, Sentences, and
Paragraphs
EXAMPLE OF COHERENCE
 A text with coherence:      A: Did you bring the car? 
                                             B: Yes, I brought it yesterday. 
 A text with no coherence:  A: Where did you go last week? 
                                              B: That sounds good. My brother paints it.
Isme  (a) or (b) jo hai start me onhe read karo sentence sense bhana raha
haina? Or dosre me dekho (a) aik sawal pooch raha hai or (b) koi or jawab de
raha hai koi sense nai bhan rahi

 Sarah likes to jump, running, and skate.

Instead, the list should be parallel like this:
 Sarah likes jumping, running, and skating.

 Isme bhi same hai

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 The hotel is famous. It is one of the most well-known hotels. The latest
international dancing competition was held at the hotel. The hotel spent
a lot of money to advertise the event. the hotel wanted to gain
international reputation. But not many people attended the event. 

 Here in this paragraph its sentences are unorganized and the flow is not
smooth plus there are no linking devices used.

 Ab is paraghraph ko dekhain likha sab teek hai but link nai bhan raha
sentences ka smooth nai hai 
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 The hotel, which is one of the most well-known hotels in this region,
they wanted to promote its image around the world by hosting the
latest international dancing competition. Although the event was
widely advertised, unfortunately not many people participated in the
competition.

 In this paraghraphs we can see the linking devices under-lined which

makes the paragraph more apealing
 Ab cohesion jo hai wo smoothness ladetha hai or text acha lagne
lagtha hai 
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 The latest international dancing competition was held at the hotel,

which is one of the most well-known hotels in this region. The hotel
spent a lot of money on advertising the event since it wanted to
enhance its international reputation; it failed to attract many people.

 the sentences are logically sequenced and are Appropriately

Organised which makes the flow smooth and easy to understand

 Coherence jo hai wo sentences ko arrange kartha hai jis se text

smooth hojatha hai insan aik hi bari me smoothly phar letha hai
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 The hotel, which is one of the most well-known hotels in this region, they
wanted to enhance its international reputation by hosting the latest
international dancing competition; Although the event was widely advertised,
however it failed to attract many people in the competition, unfortunately the
event was floped.

 Now in this paragraph the linking devices are used and the flow of the
paragraph is better and the reader can easliy learn whats happening in the
paragraph


Es cohesiono or coherence dono hai  or paragraph ap parain to as a reader foran
patha chal jatha hai k kia ho raha hai