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    NAMA : DESRI MUSDIANTO

    NIM : 048041648
    PRODI : ILMU HUKUM

    TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

    1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

    Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

    555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128

    July 1, 2023

    Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

    123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

    1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

    It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role with
    Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech Solutions. I have
    12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen many young people come
    and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always distinguished
    herself as a team member.

    During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we first
    met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked together, her
    understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company grew far more than that
    of her peers.
    2
    It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with because of
    her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams. Her focus and
    attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but also by her peers, who
    often relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely confident that Ashley would be a great
    fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the skills and experiences you're looking for in a
    candidate, and she can quickly become an asset and help your company grow.

    If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact me. As a
    recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and achievements, I'd
    be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

    Sincerely,

    3 Rachel Gomez

    Sr. Project Manager


    Pertanyaan / Questions
    Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the letter
    numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)

    Answers :
    1. Salam
    2. Badan Surat
    3. Tanda tangan dan pangkat perkerjaan

    TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

    2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

    March 15th, 2024

    Customer Service Department


    Greenery
    Oatside Road 35
    New York, 356

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a recent order I placed with your company. On
    January 24th, I ordered 5 boxes of vegetables (Order Number: SPX35672980). Unfortunately, the
    delivery was significantly delay, arriving on February 13rd, well past the expected date.

    Moreover, upon inspection of the vegetables, I found that several items were in poor condition.
    Many of the vegetables were wilted, discolored, and showed signs of spoilage. This is acceptable,
    as I had expected fresh and high-quality produce based on your company's reputation.

    I request a full refund for the damaged items or a replacement of the affecting vegetables.
    additionally, I would appreciate an explanation for the delay and steps that will be taken to prevent
    such issues in the future.

    Please contact me at your earliest convenience to resolve this matter. I look forward to your prompt
    response and a satisfactory resolution.

    Sincerely,
    Pamela Taylor

    Pertanyaan / Questions
    Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the letter
    above. (@5 pts)
    Answers :

    Berikut adalah 5 kesalahan yang terdapat dalam surat di atas, beserta koreksi:

    1. Kesalahan Tata Bahasa pada "delay":


    o Salah: "the delivery was significantly delay"
    o Benar: "the delivery was significantly delayed"
    Koreksi: Kata kerja "delay" harus dalam bentuk past participle karena digunakan
    setelah "was."
    2. Kesalahan Format Tanggal:
    o Salah: "February 13rd"
    o Benar: "February 13th"
    Koreksi: Angka "13" harus diikuti dengan "th," bukan "rd."
    3. Pemilihan Kata yang Salah:
    o Salah: "This is acceptable"
    o Benar: "This is unacceptable"
    Koreksi: Frasa ini harus menunjukkan ketidakpuasan, sehingga "unacceptable"
    lebih tepat.
    4. Kesalahan Kapitalisasi pada "additionally":
    o Salah: "additionally, I would appreciate..."
    o Benar: "Additionally, I would appreciate..."
    Koreksi: Kata di awal kalimat harus dimulai dengan huruf kapital.
    5. Kesalahan Pemilihan Kata pada "affecting vegetables":
    o Salah: "replacement of the affecting vegetables"
    o Benar: "replacement of the affected vegetables"
    Koreksi: Kata "affected" lebih tepat digunakan untuk menunjukkan bahwa sayuran
    tersebut terpengaruh (rusak).

    TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

    3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di bidangnya.
    Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith. Tulislah email ucapan
    terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi narasumber di seminar internasional
    Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
    (60 pts)

    You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the field.
    One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a thank-you email
    for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your international seminar. Your
    email should be 100-150 words long.
    Answers :

    Subject: Grateful for Your Impactful Keynote Address at Our International Seminar

    Dear Professor Allen Smith,

    On behalf of the organizing committee of the International Seminar, we want to express our
    sincere gratitude for your exceptional keynote address. Your expertise and captivating delivery
    had a profound impact on the audience. The knowledge and insights you shared on Advancing
    Business and Economy in The Digital Era were enlightening and inspiring.

    We are truly honored to have had you as a distinguished speaker at our event. Your contribution
    played a pivotal role in the seminar's success, and we received overwhelmingly positive feedback
    from participants. Many attendees expressed their admiration for your profound expertise and
    engaging presentation style.

    We deeply appreciate the time and effort you dedicated to preparing and delivering such an
    insightful address. Your presence elevated the seminar and enriched the experience for all
    attendees. We hope to have the privilege of welcoming you as a speaker again in the future.

    Once again, thank you for your remarkable contribution. We wish you continued success in all
    your endeavors.

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