Revised Essay 2
Revised Essay 2
Revised Essay 2
Arizbel Falcon
English 1032-223
Mr. Powers
March 6, 2024
The Cycle of Bullying: Research Analysis Essay, Final Draft, Revised Essay
Bullying is something that most, if not all, people have gone through once in their lives.
Currently bullying can be so broad and found anywhere as there are so many different types of
bullying on its own. As big of a problem that it sounds like, there are not many resources that can
help stop or even prevent bullying, and if there is they are not very effective. There isn’t as
much of a call to stopping bullying as there should be, in or out of school, making it just a cycle
that will continue if nothing is done to stop the problem. The cycle of Bullying is an endless
cycle because of the different forms of bullying, limited resources available to victims, and the
According to researchers, kids who were the victim or the bully in the situation had more
suicidal thoughts than those who have never been in that situation before. This was because they
were more likely to attempt suicide than those who had not experienced such forms of peer
aggression. Researchers such as Sameer Hinduja and Justin W. Patchin argue that there should
be more of a call to adolescent aggression and must be taken seriously. (206) Verbal Bullying,
another form of this problem, is the most common form and is linked to the bully wanting to gain
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popularity in the end. Bullying and generalized aggression may be used to both seek and
maintain popularity, bullies both desire and obtain popularity. (36) Kids are mainly found using
Verbal Bullying as a coping mechanism for not getting the attention they should be getting at
home. Most kids who are found bullying are neglected by their parents and bash their energy to
others who can’t find help. In these cases, kids who are found to be bullies are more prone to
mental health problems. Researcher Swearer staters “... those who shifted from victimization to
bullying reported more anxiety, depression, and somatization.” (344) Once bullying is in effect it
can make the victim turn into the bully itself and create a cycle.
There are many Anti-Bullying programs made to give awareness to these kids in schools.
When it comes to trying to stop bullying, they usually fail at that. For researcher Palladino, they
state that though they did too many trials in Anti-Bullying programs, overall, it depends on the
budget of the show they give for students. (194) (put analysis between these two quotes) Though,
if it isn’t that obvious, schools that have a lower amount in budget their employees aren’t as
engaged with students or the school in general, which Rothbart claims in their research. (28) The
holistically such as physical, psychological, social and cultural. (Hikmat 304) Hikmat suggests in
their article that if most schools want a positive outcome to stopping bullying, everyone should
be involved with these programs. When certain schools don’t have the employees that want to be
there is going to be no doubt that they aren’t going to want to participate in these sorts of events.
(28) If there aren’t people who can be an advocate to these victims then there is going to be a
Bullying has been linked to how they are being shown to act in their homes, including
family members’ involvement in gangs, poor parental supervision, negative family environment,
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parental conflict, domestic violence, low parental communication, lack of parent emotional
support, authoritarian parenting, inappropriate discipline, and parental abuse, states researcher
Swearer. Swearer also states that kids that are known for being bullies are 61% more likely to be
treated like this at home, meaning they let their anger out to the kids who can’t fight back with
the same power. Bullying is all about status in school, it's either you wanted to be cool so you
were “the bigger person” and would pick on others or you were weak and would be the victim.
(185) Bystanders are in consideration to in these situations, they can distance themselves from
the bullies or defend the victims. Research has shown that bystanders can be trapped in a social
conflict; they may claim to be against bullying but might also want to defend themselves and
maintain their own status. (Palladino 195) Victims of bullying tend to stay away from school if
they are being bullied. (Dowling 799) With this information you can see that victims don’t want
to be attending a school where they can’t find help themselves getting out of this situation. With
victims not wanting to go to schools and Bullies having these types of situations at home all you
can do is feel bad for these kids and the disaster they must face daily. Results from a study
indicated that the more adolescents deviated from their classroom's norm at the start of the
school year, the more likely they were to be increasingly victimized throughout the school year.
(Kaufman 1470)
Bullying is not just an act kids do throughout the years of their school age. It is a form of
aggression and wanting attention, but also an act of trying to look their best in front of everyone.
These are just normal, and everyone goes through even in adult life. There should be something
done about this problem, not for the children but for the next generation of society. If there is a
call to better budgeting for schools and Anti-bullying programs, there will people who want to
help these kids fight the war on bullying. Creating safe and hostile environments for children to
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act on in and educating teachers, students, and adults the importance of intervention is key. This
is not a problem that should be taken ever so lightly but a problem that needs to be acted on now.
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Work Cited
Dowling, Mitchell J., and Timothy A. Carey. “VICTIMS OF BULLYING: WHOM THEY
Hinduja, Sameer, and Justin W. Patchin. “Bullying, Cyberbullying, and Suicide.” Archives of
https://doi.org/10.1080/13811118.2010.494133.
Kaufman, Tessa M. L., et al. “Are Victims of Bullying Primarily Social Outcasts? Person‐
as Predictors of Victimization.” Child Development, vol. 93, no. 5, 2022, pp. 1458–
74, https://doi.org/10.1111/cdev.13772.
Ojanen, Tiina, et al. “Is Bullying Always about Status? Status Goals, Forms of Bullying,
https://doi.org/10.1080/00221325.2023.2254347.
https://doi.org/10.1002/ab.21636.
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Rothbart, Michah W. “The Impact of School Choice on Public School Budgets: Evidence
From Open Enrollment in New York City.” Public Budgeting & Finance, vol. 40, no. 4,
Swearer, Susan M., and Shelley Hymel. “Understanding the Psychology of Bullying: Moving