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Elements of DETAILS Excerpt from the Short Story

Fiction

Title In the Midst of the


Crowd
Author INKSTEADY

Character(s) and
Dawn Karsen Navarro a
Description(s)
college student who has
taking Bachelor of Science
in Mathematics , a die-hard
fan of a prominent singer
and songwriter, Dior Kobe
Gallardo a singer and
actor. Dawn always get
General Admission ticket,
although she did not saw
him and she only see him
like the size of an ant,
atleast she heard his voice
she’s already contented.

Setting Production
Company,Grand Hyatt
(restaurant),Event
Hall,School Canteen,
Sway’s Cafe, Concert.
Plot She went from afar row to being
*Exposition beside him, from admiring him,
and now she’s his for lifetime.

*Rising Action Once she saw the headline that


her long time crush is searching for
leading lady for his music video
she didn’t hesitate to apply right
away. Until the day she got
accepted. It’s the best day of her
life.
*Climax After that they’ve been texting to
each other. They also dating for
two months and it’s part of the
deal in the contract. After that
they have a dinner with there
team and suddenly when she’s on
her to the restaurant she passed
through overpass and the man
who is sitting there suddenly called
her and robbed her. After that
incident Kobe always drive her
home, not until the day they have
outing and that day he knew that
Kobe was attracted to her. After
that Kobe asked her if he can court
her. They become girlfriend and
boyfriend. Not until fans of Kobe
knows their relationship and some
of his fans bashed her, and Karsen
decided to move to Kobe’s house
with his parent’s, because his fans
might attack her.
*Falling Action Not until the day she moved in to
Kobe’s parents house little did she
know that Kobe’s mother wants
her to be like a maid like she’s
cleaning the house,doing
chores,washing dishes, she’s like
slave by Kobe’s mother.
Continously, when Karsen know
that she’s pregnant Kobe was very
happy and his mother don’t accept
it, that’s why even though she’s
pregnant Kobe’s Mother want’s
her to do chores and she’s hurting
Karsen physically, though Kobe
didn’t know that Karsen was hurt
physically and mentally.When she
go to her doctor and said her child
might have down syndrome when
she have to give birth and Kobe’s
mother knows that her child might
have down syndrome, she attack
her and when she had time to
escape from his mother she keeps
running,not until she hit by a car.
After she lost conciousness she
said that if the baby is safe tell
them that the baby is dead. After
that she broke up with Kobe.
*Resolution She gave birth to her child
although her child had a down
syndrome, but she’s aware that
her child might have it. After years
she saw Kobe and they met.
Afterward Kobe donate a building
for their school and they met in
canteen, until Kobe knows that she
had a child and Kobe had a feeling
that child is his. Futhermore Kobe
knows that child is his, and knows
the truth about Karsen being slave
by her mother.When they got back
together they don’t care about his
fans anymore. They live happily
ever after.
*Point of View It is a inspiring story. They are
perfect match because of their
personality. Also it written well
that’s why you can feel the story,
*Theme Fiction

*Literary Metaphor and Simile


Techniques/Devices

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