Mac Nixon: A Short by
Mac Nixon: A Short by
Mac Nixon: A Short by
mac nixon
The tranquil ambience of RAIN SPLATTER arises from the
nothingness. It builds. Getting louder and angrier. The
guttural growl of THUNDER stirring. Becoming hostile as we;
MAN (V.O.)
Okay... Nightingale.
MAN (V.O.)
Parrot.
MAN (V.O.)
Redstart.
2.
MAN (V.O)
Twite!!!
MAN (V.O)
(Joyful shouting)
Verdin!!
GIRL (V.O)
(Even louder)
Woodpecker!!
MAN (V.O.)
(screaming)
Xantus Becard!!!
GIRL (V.O.)
Yellowbird!
The two burst into infectious LAUGHTER. The BLACK LEAVES grow
in number. Poisoning the land around. Slowly starting to rise
up to reveal the tree they have fallen from, when suddenly;
SMASH TO BLACK.
GIRL (V.O.)
So... Did I win?
CUT TO:
The axe left in the trunk. Looking at his hands which are
covered in blisters. Dropping into pensive thought before
snapping out of this trance and continuing to CHOP away.
The man climbs the steps of the house and knocks on the front
door. He waits respectfully before looking across to find an
ELDERLY LADY sat in a wooden rocking chair at the far end.
She’s been waiting for him. Her face never fully revealed.
Despite her ailing condition she adjusts her cardigan and her
necklace. Using what little energy she has to pose. He TAKES
THE PHOTO and pauses. The camera prints as he stares at her.
He then methodically waves the picture to help it dry.
Running his hand across the jagged texture of the TREE STUMP.
The man rolls up the sleeve of the lady’s arm. Reaching into
his bag, taking out a small leather fold to reveal a SYRINGE
KIT inside. He fits it together and then takes out a small
glass vial of THICK BLACK LIQUID. All done with compassion.
Blinking more than usual, she becomes faint and her mouth
begins jawing. Her eyes rising to the sky. Her breathing
becomes erratic. The creak of the rocking chair intensifies.
5.
The man sits against the porch ledge directly opposite the
ELDERLY LADY, who now sits motionless. Staring at her as an
eerie silence fills the air. She’s nothing but a CORPSE now.
FLASHCUT TO:
He unpins the note and reads it. Though something about him
tells us he already knows what it’s going to say. A look of
melancholy fills his face as he then looks to the windchimes.
BEHIND the man as his blistered and grimy FIST knocks the
front door of a house situated on a bleak and lifeless farm.
It’s very dimly lit so we don’t fully see the subjects face.
Yet the two men appear to have a silent inner dialogue with
one another. The Gentleman’s reaction says it all. The man
nods in agreement and once again accepts his difficult task.
FLASHCUT TO:
The man enters a cave in the woods, which has been turned
into a SUPPLY STATION of sorts. A LANTERN guides him through.
Approaching a workbench surrounded by logging equipment. To
one side - an ADULT LOGGERS HELMET and smaller CHILDS HELMET.
He pulls out an old LOCK BOX from under the table. Unlocking
and opening it - we do not see the contents. He reaches into
his coat pocket and pulls out a POLAROID. REVEALING it to be
a picture of the GENTLEMAN from earlier.
7.
CUT TO:
Following the man through the forest dragging his AXE. Dead
leaves and crumpled branches are all around as well as BLACK
LEAVES. He seems broken as he walks. Defeated almost.
The man running his hand across the jagged trunk of a pine
tree as he slowly paces through the endless forest.
The latter end of the portfolio; Less and less birds feature
as the drawings grow stranger. Becoming oddly random and
bizarre. Sinister shapes and lines deeply scrawled in black.
Abstract illustrations of someone’s SUFFERING and PAIN.
Seemingly her INDEX FINGER AND THUMB is all she can control.
Yet her sketching has become so aggressive she’s tearing into
the page - it’s unsettling. He grabs her hand to stop it.
The man takes the paper the girl has been scrawling on.
Turning to view it. Taking the drawing in as he turns ghost
white. The striking content of the image shocking him to the
very core as we reveal she’s drawn the DEATH TREE itself.
Rageful, he runs his hand down the bizarre WHITE bark of the
tree until he comes to a crack, from which a dried and
hardened tree sap has leaked. Yet this is no ordinary sap but
an ominous, pitch BLACK LIQUID sap.
GIRL (O.S)
Daddy... I’m going to do it!
MAN (O.S)
You’re not. We’ve done this dozens
of times and you always get stuck
on “J”. I ain’t going easy on ya
just cause it’s your birthday!
A MAN (30s) and a GIRL (6). Upon closer inspection we see the
man is the VAGABOND - Albeit younger, clean shaven. And his
daughter a beautiful young child. We don’t see her face
clearly - simply her shinning curly hair from behind.
GIRL (V.O.)
What do I win?
MAN (V.O.)
(Laughing)
“If” you win. I'll grant you ONE
wish. And whatever it is, in the
WHOLE WIDE WORLD! You’ll have it.
Sound of the girl giggling. The man searches through his bag
slowly. Coming across the SYRINGE KIT. Holding on it...
MAN (V.O.)
So... are you ready?
GIRL (V.O)
Ready.
After some time, the man slowly takes out something from the
bag. NOT the SYRINGE KIT - but an OBJECT wrapped in a
handkerchief. Her birthday present. He places it on her lap
and unwraps it. Placing her hand on it gently to feel it.
From behind - the powerful and dramatic view of the man knelt
down looking up at the tree. He bows his head. It owns him.
MAN (O.S.)
Okay... Albatross.
GIRL (O.S.)
Barn Owl.
The man EXITS the house out into the pouring rain. Clearly
unstable and emotional as he bursts out in a wreck.
12.
MAN (V.O.)
Crow. Easy.
GIRL (V.O.)
A Dove!
MAN (V.O.)
E. Eagle!
GIRL (V.O.)
Falcon!!
MAN (V.O.)
G-gggg... Goldfinch!
GIRL (V.O.)
Hoopoe!
MAN (V.O.)
Inca Wren! Okay here we go...
GIRL (V.O.)
J...
Upset and angry - she’s now straining to force the object off
her lap with her one finger. Using what strength she has.
GIRL (V.O.)
Ju... Ji... Ja-
She thinks. The name on the tip of her tongue... The object
about to fall... When in that very fragile moment we;
SMASH TO BLACK.