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    Jaeyoon Olivia Be Kind What Went Well (But Honest )

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    Team <WE MEAN GREEN> provided feedback on Jaeyoon and Olivia's presentations: 1) Jaeyoon organized her ideas clearly and spoke smoothly without mistakes, helping convey her message successfully, but could have added more emotion. 2) Olivia explained her proposals well and spoke confidently, but her explanations lacked detailed examples and she made some stops and mistakes when speaking. 3) Both presenters could improve eye contact and speaking without reading from a script.

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    Team <WE MEAN GREEN> provided feedback on Jaeyoon and Olivia's presentations: 1) Jaeyoon organized her ideas clearly and spoke smoothly without mistakes, helping convey her message successfully, but could have added more emotion. 2) Olivia explained her proposals well and spoke confidently, but her explanations lacked detailed examples and she made some stops and mistakes when speaking. 3) Both presenters could improve eye contact and speaking without reading from a script.

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    Team <WE MEAN GREEN> provided feedback on Jaeyoon and Olivia's presentations: 1) Jaeyoon organized her ideas clearly and spoke smoothly without mistakes, helping convey her message successfully, but could have added more emotion. 2) Olivia explained her proposals well and spoke confidently, but her explanations lacked detailed examples and she made some stops and mistakes when speaking. 3) Both presenters could improve eye contact and speaking without reading from a script.

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    Jaeyoon Olivia Be Kind What Went Well (But Honest )

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    Team <WE MEAN GREEN> provided feedback on Jaeyoon and Olivia's presentations: 1) Jaeyoon organized her ideas clearly and spoke smoothly without mistakes, helping convey her message successfully, but could have added more emotion. 2) Olivia explained her proposals well and spoke confidently, but her explanations lacked detailed examples and she made some stops and mistakes when speaking. 3) Both presenters could improve eye contact and speaking without reading from a script.

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    Team <WE MEAN GREEN> Jaeyoon Olivia

    Be kind To me, it was great to feel her I appreciate her clear


    what went well (but honest…) confidence while I was listening pronunciation, and I could felt her
    her presentation about proposal. confidence about her idea and
    She said the words smoothly she also conveyed her messages
    without any stop such as “Umm”. to audiences successfully about
    their party and proposals.
    Be Specific She added extra explanations and Their statement was very clear
    those explanations helped me to and purposes of their party were
    understand their proposal in demonstrated in their
    detail. I could perceive their presentation.
    purpose clearly.
    Be helpful To be helpful, I would like Jaeyoon I think that Olivia can improve
    to add some accent in her speech, speaking words more naturally,
    because her lines are seem like since I felt like she was reading
    emotionless. her words from somewhere.

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    Jaeyoon, it was great how you organized your idea in your speech. I clearly could understand your purposes in
    your presentation, and also you said your lines smoothly without any stop or mistake. I think this was the
    reason how could you convey your message and purposes successfully. You added extra explanations and those
    thing helped me to understand your proposal in detail and your addition proved that you are confident with
    your proposal. But perhaps next time you could add some accent in your words, since it would be hard to
    express your sincerity if your words are emotionless. Overall, your presentation was great and I can see your
    progress in presentation skills compared to your first time!

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    Olivia, all of your proposals were supported by your excellent explanations! You didn’t just read over your
    proposal, but you provided your detailed explanations. Also, I was impressed with your confidence while you
    were speaking in presentation. To be more specific, your explanations were great, but I’m not sure if the
    proposals had some detailed example. This will help audience to understand proposal easily. To improve, I want
    you to reduce some stops and mistake in your lines, and also I’m not sure that your lines were all you own word
    or written script. But if they are script and you were reading over it in presentation, you should practice with
    your own words because in real life, you should not look at any script or keep eyes on screen in order to have
    eye contact with audiences.

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