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EXT. WOODS - NIGHT
Surrounded by black.
SMASH TO:
DANIEL, 34, black eye, split lip, needs a shave and a bath.
GEMMA
(Southern accent)
Where are we?
These two have been through some bad shit. And things are
only gonna get worse from here.
DANIEL
(re: cabin)
Used to be my dad's.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Don't worry, no one else knows about
it. We're safe here.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Sorry about that.
DANIEL
Come on.
Daniel guides her toward the one and only bedroom, passing
by an open doorway to the bathroom - where there's a trough
bathtub and of course no toilet.
Gemma frowns.
BEDROOM
Daniel yanks the blanket off the bed and shakes out the
dust.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Sorry.
Gemma hesitates, then sits. The bed groans under her weight.
DANIEL
You okay?
GEMMA
What're we gonna eat?
DANIEL
Check the cabinets, my dad always had
something lying around.
KITCHEN AREA
A few iron pots and pans hanging from hooks on the wall. And
lastly, an antique pantry.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Find anything?
DANIEL
What'd you find?
LATER
LATER
Daniel and Gemma are eating MREs. It's not a great meal but
they're starving.
DANIEL
We'll low lay a while then I'll get
us some real food. Used to be a store
up the road from here.
GEMMA
When?
DANIEL
After a while.
GEMMA
What's that mean? How long's 'a
while'?
GEMMA (cont'd)
And when he finds us, what then?
DANIEL
He won't. Finish your food.
GEMMA
He's probably on his way right now.
GEMMA (cont'd)
He won't stop till he finds us, and
he will, he'll come and he'll --
DANIEL
He won't.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Sorry.
An uncomfortable silence.
GEMMA
Is there any water?
DANIEL
You hold and I pump?
DANIEL (cont'd)
Wait.
7.
He nods: Okay.
Gemma holds the pot under the spout while Daniel pumps. The
sound of running water makes Gemma have to pee.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Wanna use the bathroom while we're
out here?
Daniel gulps down water from the pot, spilling some of it.
He wipes his mouth and sets the pot on the ground when
something near the cabin draws his eye.
MOMENTS LATER
GEMMA (O.S.)
We should clean up.
He seems nervous.
GEMMA
What?
DANIEL
I'll grab the pot.
8.
Meanwhile.
IN THE BATHROOM
A moment later.
9.
A jangling sound.
GEMMA
Daniel?
When Daniel steps into the light she sees that he's holding
HANDCUFFS.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Don't, please. I won't do anything, I
swear, I promise.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Please, please...
As Daniel snaps one cuff to her wrist and the other to the
bedpost --
CUT TO:
DARKNESS. SILENCE.
CUT TO:
10.
Daniel stirs the beans while Gemma sets the table. They're
both sweating from the heat.
LATER
Gemma fans herself with the neckline of her shirt. Her eyes
drift to the musket mounted on the wall. Daniel follows her
gaze.
DANIEL
It's just for show. Apparently it's a
family heirloom. My dad probably got
it at an auction.
(re: deer head)
Got that at a yard sale.
A beat.
GEMMA
If you don't think he'll come then
why'd you nail all the windows shut?
GEMMA (cont'd)
You think I'm gonna run away or
somethin'? Like I'd fit through one
of them windows anyway. Where would I
even go?
11.
GEMMA (cont'd)
It's too hot, I'm dyin'.
Gemma finishes throwing up, wipes her mouth and leans back.
She gives up and lies flat on her back. Eyes cast up at the
ceiling.
A moment later.
DANIEL
I'll get us some real food.
DANIEL (cont'd)
I'll need to.
IN THE BEDROOM
GEMMA
(muttering)
Leave me here, asshole...
A faint noise.
What is that?
GEMMA (cont'd)
No...
GEMMA (cont'd)
The light of God surrounds me. The
love of God enfolds me. The power of
God protects me...
We stay on Gemma.
GEMMA (cont'd)
(stunned)
Beth-Anne? What're you doin' here?
What happened? The others - where are
they?
No response.
GEMMA (cont'd)
How'd you find us?
GEMMA (cont'd)
NO!
DANIEL
(calling out)
Hello? Anybody?
DANIEL (cont'd)
Dad?! Where are you? Dad?!
DANIEL (cont'd)
Dad?! Please!
GEMMA (O.C.)
(faint)
HELP! SOMEBODY! DANIEL!
And just like that, he snaps out of it. He runs toward her
voice.
GEMMA
She was here.
DANIEL
I checked the whole cabin, and
outside, it's just us.
GEMMA
(a serious look)
It was her.
DANIEL
They don't know where we are.
GEMMA
You think I'm lyin'?
DANIEL
I think you're...
GEMMA
What.
DANIEL
Confused.
Gemma scoffs.
GEMMA
What took you so long? Where were
you?
DANIEL
Getting you dinner, it'd be nice if
you tried it.
GEMMA
Thought I heard your voice.
DANIEL
I worked hard for that fish, Gem, eat
it.
GEMMA
Didn't I hear you?
DANIEL
The baby, Gemma, eat.
16.
Gemma's nostrils flare. She stuffs the fish in her mouth all
at once like a petulant child then cocks her head and
glares: How's that?
GEMMA
Water.
At the water pump, the empty cooking pot sits under the
spout.
Breaking a sweat.
Daniel frowns.
All clear.
BEDROOM
Just as she hides the knife under her pillow, Daniel can be
heard returning.
GEMMA
I'm tired, I'm goin' to bed!
DANIEL (O.S.)
Fine.
Daniel emerges from the cabin and heads toward the minivan.
Gemma can be heard from the bedroom:
GEMMA (O.S.)
Don't leave me here, please, let me
come with you! Take me with you!
GEMMA
Daniel, wait!
Silence.
GEMMA
Beth-Anne?!
Silence.
She's alone.
A dark thought.
GENE
Howdy. How ya doin'? Let me know if
ya need anythin'.
One by one.
With her thumb and index finger, she spreads the wound open.
Clenching her jaw, pushing through the pain, her eyes wild
and deranged.
But what?
One of relief.
NEWSCASTER (O.S.)
(tv)
...gruesome scene at a farmhouse
where ten bodies were discovered...
GENE
Sorry 'bout that.
GENE (cont'd)
Whoa boy. You preparin' for the end
of the world or what? I got a store
left?
GENE (cont'd)
Rough night?
DANIEL
Took a fall. What was that on the tv?
GENE
Oh, some crazy cult nonsense. As you
could prolly guess, ain't good news.
DANIEL
Mind if I listen, just while you're
ringing up?
GENE
Pretty grim stuff.
DANIEL
Just the same.
Gene shrugs. He opens his office door just wide enough for
Daniel to see the tv.
NEWSCASTER (V.O.)
Authorities say five of the bodies
found inside the home, one woman and
four men, died from gunshot wounds.
While the bodies of five women, who
were discovered in the barn, had been
mutilated.
With her free hand, she grabs a pillow and works to remove
the cover. Smearing blood everywhere.
With the pillow cover still in her mouth, she tries to wrap
her wound.
NEWSCASTER (O.S.)
Police have yet to disclose if the
owner of the property, Paul Sewell,
was among the deceased.
GENE (O.S.)
Ten percent off.
GENE
Next Wednesday, ten percent off your
entire purchase.
DANIEL
(distracted)
Yeah, okay, whatever.
GENE
Well I'll be. You're Jack Dunlap's
kid, ain't ya?
GENE (cont'd)
I knew I recognized ya. Boy do you
look just like him, same face, same
hairline. I remember you when you
were bout yay high.
(beat)
Y'all stayin' up at the cabin? Ain't
seen Jack in a minute. What's he up
to?
DANIEL
I don't know what you're talking
about.
GENE
Danny, right? Little Danny?
DANIEL
NO.
DANIEL (cont'd)
I don't know what you're going on
about. I don't know no Jack and I'm
not "little Danny". Can you finish
ringing up my fucking groceries?
DANIEL (cont'd)
(embarrassed)
Sorry.
23.
Settling down.
Daniel screams.
Swerves.
A moment of stillness.
Looking around.
MOMENTS LATER
DANIEL
Shit.
Whatever.
DANIEL
I'm back.
It's quiet.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Gemma?
No response.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Hey.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Gemma?
IN THE BEDROOM
DANIEL (cont'd)
Gemma, hey, Gemma?
DANIEL (cont'd)
Gemma, Gem, Gem...
LATER
DANIEL
You need sugar.
GEMMA
I can do it, I'm not a baby.
GEMMA (cont'd)
How'd you pay for all this?
DANIEL
Paul didn't get everything I had. We
gotta take it easy though till I can
figure some stuff out.
DANIEL (cont'd)
I said take it easy.
LATER
GEMMA
Oxycodone Hydrocholoride...Evelyn
Stowe.
A twig snaps.
He looks up.
Leaves rustle.
The lid finally pops off and blue pills burst forth like
confetti, spilling and bouncing across the floor.
Daniel rises.
A quiet moment.
Daniel waits.
Building...building...
Hurry, hurry.
She puts the bottle back where she found it - under the
alcohol wipes in the first-aid kit - and shuts the lid just
as the door opens and Daniel walks in.
GEMMA
Not much left.
Gemma relaxes.
It's just him and Gemma, who's out cold, handcuffed to the
bed once again.
29.
CUT TO:
DANIEL
(re: handcuffs)
Everyone does it, good way to get to
know each other fast.
GEMMA
Let's play a game - twenty questions.
Another way to get to know each other
fast. Always worked when I changed
schools and fosters, lot of those.
(beat)
First question: why're you here?
GEMMA (cont'd)
The quicker you answer, the more
honest you are. Pretend there's a ten
second timer.
DANIEL
Alright. My dad died - cancer. We
were estranged till he got sick. But
then it was too late.
GEMMA
You regret it, not bein' there
sooner?
DANIEL
Sometimes. But if he didn't get sick
at all, we probably would've kept on
living like the other never existed.
In the end I was there, but I wasn't,
not really, ya know? He never knew
me, and I didn't know him.
DANIEL (cont'd)
That's why I'm here. I wanna know
people and I want them to know me.
(beat)
What about you? Why're you here?
GEMMA
I got tired of feelin' like an
outsider in every room I was in.
CUT TO:
For a brief moment the attraction she once had for him
returns.
GEMMA
His smile wasn't real.
GEMMA (cont'd)
It never reached his eyes. I
should've known he weren't right.
(MORE)
31.
GEMMA (cont'd)
I lived with a couple guys like that.
Ignored the red flags every time.
Gemma meets his gaze a beat, then averts her eyes to the
window, where she notices something outside.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Where's the car?
DANIEL
It broke down.
DANIEL (cont'd)
I got a lot to do today, I'll leave
water.
GEMMA
(re: handcuffs)
How long're we gonna do this for?
DANIEL
Till I can trust you. I can't let you
hurt yourself or the baby.
A thought occurs.
She grabs the plastic cup of water and pours it down her
handcuffed wrist. Maybe she could slip it out when it's wet?
She twists and pulls. And twists and pulls. Still, no go.
Then, she eyes her thumb. If she dislocates it, maybe she
could slip her hand out...
GEMMA (V.O.)
Lord, I reach out to you for your
guidance. Please show me which way to
turn. Calm my anxious thoughts, come
speak into my mind.
GEMMA
Strengthen me as I falter and feel
weary. May I feel strength rising up
within my heart.
33.
GEMMA (cont'd)
I trust that you are with me, no
matter where I go, or what I decide
to do. You journey with me always.
The hair on the back of his neck stands straight up. Dread
creeps in. The feeling of being watched. He looks up.
FLASH TO
WOMAN
Are you one of them?
BACK TO SCENE
The sheets slip from Daniel's fingers and into the water.
Drifting away with the current.
Gemma has stopped screaming. Her lungs can't take any more.
A thought.
She reaches in her pocket and takes out FOUR BLUE PAIN
PILLS.
Her eyes harden with resolve. She knows exactly what she has
to do next.
GEMMA
I'll make dinner tonight.
DANIEL
I'm not hungry.
GEMMA
Come on. Let me do somethin' nice for
you for once. Think of it as a 'thank
you' for savin' me.
35.
DANIEL
(barking)
I said I'm not hungry.
GEMMA
I gotta pee.
The front door opens. Daniel emerges first and helps Gemma
out. She pulls away.
GEMMA
I can do it.
Gemma pees.
She stares at the outhouse floor and all the dark spots and
streaks left over the years. A Jackson Pollock of piss and
shit stains.
It's not until she looks up that she sees a PAIR OF EYES
staring at her through the wooden slats.
GEMMA (O.S.)
GO AWAY.
He turns, listens.
GEMMA
Hey, pervert, I said go away.
WOMAN'S VOICE
Gemma, listen to me. Can you hear me?
They're not who they say they are.
GEMMA
...Beth-Anne?
Gemma gets up and peers through the slats. What she sees on
the other side stuns her - it's not the cabin.
But a dark room. The same one she was in when Daniel came to
save her.
Daniel cups his hands against the glass of the living room
window, peering inside to find --
BETH-ANNE (O.S.)
I know you've seen it - the twitch,
they all got it. Like part of them's
fighting for control.
PAUL
Tell me your worst memory.
DANIEL #2
...My dad used to take me fishing at
his cabin during the summer, I hated
it there, and one day he left me
behind. I got lost in the woods, I
was only eight, and I was out there
for hours, out in the dark calling
for him.
PAUL
And he didn't come? He didn't save
you?
DANIEL #2
...He was passed out. He left so he
could go get high.
PAUL
You told the others your father died
of cancer. But he didn't, did he?
PAUL (cont'd)
And you weren't with him at the end,
were you?
PAUL (cont'd)
You say you want people to know you
but how can they if you're not
willing to show the real you. I
believe this urge to keep yourself
hidden stems from a deep seated self-
hatred and this need for control, to
have control over yourself and
others. Do you hate yourself, Daniel?
38.
PAUL (cont'd)
You don't need to anymore. You can
let it go. Let that old you go. I can
free you. Is that what you want?
PAUL (cont'd)
Open yourself up, Daniel. Listen to
me, really listen...
PAUL (cont'd)
Tell me more about the cabin.
ON THE PORCH
BETH-ANNE (O.S.)
I'm getting us outta here, I'll come
back for you.
GEMMA
Wait.
Daniel sits on the porch step, his head in his hands. Gemma
emerges from the outhouse, rattled.
With the coast clear, she takes a blue pill from her pocket.
Considers. Takes out the rest.
As she stirs --
GEMMA
I made dinner.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Hey. Hello, Daniel, you okay?
GEMMA (cont'd)
Dinner. I made some anyway. It'd be
nice if you tried it.
40.
GEMMA
Try it, it's Mexican.
DANIEL
What is that? It's...crunchy.
GEMMA
Oh, that's crackers. I didn't have
tortilla chips so I had to improvise.
It's good, right?
DANIEL
Really good. Love it.
(beat)
I'm not really hungry though.
GEMMA
I knew it, I'm horrible, I can't do
anythin' right, I'm gonna be a
terrible mother.
DANIEL
No, no, no - it's good, like, really
good and interesting.
GEMMA
You hate it.
DANIEL
Mmm-mmm, excellent. You're gonna be a
great mother. The best, I know it.
GEMMA
Really?
41.
DANIEL
Oh yeah, definitely, one hundred
percent.
GEMMA
Is there anythin' you wanna tell me?
You seem...I dunno. More nervous than
usual.
GEMMA (cont'd)
If we're gonna be a family we gotta
be honest with each other. That's
what good families are supposed to
be.
(pause)
So be honest. I been wondering
somethin'. How'd we get away?
DANIEL
...We got away, that's all that
matters.
GEMMA
But, details, I need details.
GEMMA (cont'd)
I'll tell you what I remember, and
maybe you can help me fill in the
blanks. I was really out of it,
drugged up, so it's all a little
jumbled but...
(beat)
I remember Beth-Anne comin' into my
room that night. She said we were
gonna go, she was gonna come back for
me, help me. But then.
GEMMA (cont'd)
You came back instead.
42.
DANIEL
What'd you do?
GEMMA
What'd I do?
(exploding)
What'd you do?!
Daniel flinches.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Why were you so sure Beth-Anne was
never here?
DANIEL
(struggling to stand)
I need water.
GEMMA
You wanna know what she told me?
GEMMA (cont'd)
They're not men of God.
His vision blurs. He sees the blue pill under the kitchen
island. Oh shit.
GEMMA (cont'd)
They're not even human.
MOMENTS LATER
Gemma searches his pockets for the car keys. Where the hell
are they? Not in his front pockets.
She rolls him over and finds the gun tucked in the back of
his waistband.
No keys.
DANIEL
(mumbling)
Gemma...
DANIEL (cont'd)
Gem...
DANIEL (cont'd)
Please. Gemma, let me go. You need to
let me go.
GEMMA
What are you?
DANIEL
Gemma. Listen to me. You're not
thinking straight. The trauma, the
pregnancy, it's messing with your
head --
GEMMA
WHAT ARE YOU! WHAT DID YOU DO THEM!
Daniel flinches.
Gemma places the gun on the kitchen island. Grabs the half-
empty jug of water and prays over it.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Blessed are you, Lord, all-powerful
God --
DANIEL
What're you doing?
GEMMA
-- who in Christ, the living water of
salvation, blessed and transformed
us. Grant that when we are sprinkled
with this water --
DANIEL
Stop. This is ridiculous.
GEMMA
-- or make use of it, we will be
refreshed inwardly by the power of
the Holy Spirit and continue to walk
in the new life we received at
Baptism.
DANIEL
You can't make Holy Water, you're not
a Priest --
DANIEL (cont'd)
Beth-Anne was crazy, she lost her
mind. She shot them, not me.
FLASH TO:
A moment later.
DANIEL
...Beth-Anne?
BETH-ANNE
Are you one of them?
DANIEL
What're you doing?
BETH-ANNE
I'm taking Gemma with me, we're
getting the fuck outta here. Where's
the keys?
46.
DANIEL
...keys?
BETH-ANNE
The handcuffs!
DANIEL
Where'd you get that? Where is
everyone? Where's Paul?
BETH-ANNE
He's one of them, he's one of them,
he's --
DANIEL
BETH-ANNE.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Take a deep breath. Calm down. Where
is everyone?
BETH-ANNE
Dead! They're all dead!
BETH-ANNE (cont'd)
(crying)
Their bellies, they were open...their
babies, they were...
DANIEL
Beth-Anne, listen to me. We need to
find Gemma and we need to go. Right
now.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Give me the gun.
BETH-ANNE
You're one of them! You're one of
them!
47.
He tries to wrestle the gun from her hand as she screams and
fights back - KNOCKING him in the face with the gun - he
won't let go.
Until -- BANG.
BACK TO:
DANIEL
It was an accident.
(shaken)
I went and found the key and that's
when I saw...
FLASH TO:
BACK TO:
DANIEL (O.S.)
He's still alive.
We follow behind her as she makes her way down the hallway.
She makes it to
THE BEDROOM
GENE
(re: phone)
Just there.
50.
PAUL
Thanks.
Paul moves for the phone while Gene stays by the door.
PAUL (cont'd)
My friend Danny's gone missing, found
his car broke down up a ways. Must've
walked to his dad's cabin.
Paul dials the phone, glancing at Gene. Gene takes the hint
and goes.
GENE
Any luck?
PAUL
Hey, thanks for letting me use your
phone. Sorry for barging in like
this, I'm just really worried about
my friend. He's in a bad way if you
know what I mean.
GENE
Your friend's name Daniel Dunlap by
chance?
51.
PAUL
(feigning surprise)
You know Danny?
GENE
Was just here yesterday, bad way's
right, looked pretty beat up. Told me
he wasn't him though.
PAUL
Sounds about right. Probably outta
his mind on God knows what. Which is
exactly why I need find him. He
doesn't know when to stop, too much
like his old man.
GENE
Yeh, I know Jack. Good fella, but,
yeh, I know exactly whatchu mean. Me
and him, we spent some time up at his
cabin, had some wild times back when
we both had a lot more life left in
us.
GENE (cont'd)
Some nights I can't remember, some
nights I don't want to.
PAUL
Yeh, me and Danny had plenty of
those. He always went a little harder
though, got to the point where I
couldn't keep up and didn't want to.
PAUL (cont'd)
So you know where Jack's cabin is?
GENE
Give or take. I'm sure I could find
it when the sun's up.
PAUL
Well. That changes things.
Daniel, now seated on the sofa, saws away at the tape around
his ankles, desperately trying to free himself.
He opens his eyes, baffled. What the hell was that about?
GEMMA (O.S.)
What're you doin'?
PAUL
Uptown girl, she's been living in her
uptown world...
The sky is dark and cloudy. Nothing for miles but trees and
quiet.
Gemma wraps duct tape around Daniel's ankles. More tape than
last time and much tighter.
DANIEL
Ow.
CUT TO:
He stirs and wakes, groggy and hungover from the drugs. His
entire body hurts. He rolls flat on his back.
Footsteps approach.
GEMMA
Let's play a game.
She pulls the rocking chair over so it faces him. She sits
down and now Daniel sees the knife in her hand.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Twenty questions. If you are who you
say you are then this oughta be no
problem.
DANIEL
Gemma, enough. Listen to yourself.
Beth-Anne was crazy, she --
GEMMA
Was right. I saw the twitch.
DANIEL
...twitch?
GEMMA
First question: what's your dad's
name?
DANIEL
We don't have time for this.
GEMMA
Should I cut you open and see what I
find?
DANIEL
Jack.
GEMMA
Full name.
DANIEL
Dunlap.
55.
GEMMA
Middle name?
DANIEL
...none.
GEMMA
And how'd he die? You lied to me once
only to confess the truth later. So
tell me - what's the truth?
GEMMA (cont'd)
Ten, nine, eight --
DANIEL
...drug overdose.
Correct.
GEMMA
Next question: what's your mom's
name?
GEMMA (cont'd)
Ten, nine, eight...
GEMMA (cont'd)
...seven, six, five...
GEMMA (cont'd)
...four, three, two...
GEMMA (cont'd)
...two and a half...two and three
quarters...BEEEEP!
Daniel is at a loss.
56.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Evelyn Stowe.
DANIEL
...I was gonna say that.
GEMMA
Why didn't you?
DANIEL
...I'm nervous.
GEMMA
Evelyn Stowe's a name I found on a
bottle of pills your dad most likely
stole.
(beat)
Your mom's name was Wendy. She died
when you was three.
GEMMA (cont'd)
You're him. But not really. Not
completely.
DANIEL
I'm me. I'm Daniel. I'm me. I'm --
GEMMA
HEY.
Daniel flinches.
GEMMA (cont'd)
The game's not over yet.
Gene's unfazed.
GEMMA (V.O.)
What'd Beth-Anne mean when she said
their bellies were open?
DANIEL
Gemma, untie me, you gotta let me go.
GEMMA
TELL ME.
GEMMA (cont'd)
What was she talkin' about?
GEMMA
...mutilated?
GEMMA (cont'd)
Give me the keys, tell me where the
van is.
DANIEL
It's too far, it's got flat tires.
GEMMA
I thought you said it broke down?
DANIEL
It -- that doesn't matter. You can't
make it.
GEMMA
Where're the keys?
DANIEL
The glove compartment.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Let me go. You can't make it. Not
like -- the way you are.
GEMMA (O.S.)
I'll manage. I'll find the road and
hitch a ride. Shouldn't be too hard
considerin'.
DANIEL
And if it's Paul that picks you up?
DANIEL (cont'd)
Let me go. There's a man at the
store, he knew my dad, was buddies
with him, maybe he can help.
GEMMA
Why should I trust you?
DANIEL
You have the gun. If I try anything
then shoot me.
59.
Gemma considers.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Gemma...
GEMMA
AHHHH!
DANIEL
Gemma!
Gemma falls to her knees. The gun slides across the floor.
Gene pops the trunk to Paul's car. He grabs a rag and cleans
off his dirty hands.
DANIEL
Gemma?
Daniel eyes the gun. Then Gemma. Then the gun again.
60.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Gemma?!
She moans.
Daniel is relieved.
LATER
Gemma sits on the sofa. One eye now completely red. She has
the gun again.
DANIEL (cont'd)
I don't know what's happening to me,
but whatever it is, I'm still me, I
still have control. Let me help you.
GEMMA
I knew, part of me always did, even
from the beginning, somethin' weren't
right. But I ignored it, for a while
I did, I really did, cause I wanted
to believe God really did choose me,
chose all of us.
GEMMA (cont'd)
But the sounds, those terrible
sounds...I kept hearin' them sounds.
And I realized, it's comin' from
inside me. I felt it, not the love of
God, but somethin' else, slithering
around under my skin, tryin' to take
over...
GEMMA (cont'd)
I was never tryin' to kill myself. I
was just tryin' to see. I'm still me.
I'm still human.
(grave)
And I wanna keep it that way.
61.
DANIEL
What're you doing?
She hikes up her dress and brings the knife to her belly.
DANIEL (cont'd)
NO. STOP.
Gemma pauses.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Just -- wait, please, wait. What if,
if, I'm hypnotized or something and
that's why I can't remember? He
fucked with my head, your head, all
our heads. For all we know we could
be hallucinating.
GEMMA
Four months pregnant, this is what
someone looks like? This baby ain't
normal.
DANIEL
Maybe it's all real, but what if it's
not? Let me help you. I can -- we
can -- go to a hospital, something,
anything. We can figure this out,
together.
Gemma considers.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Or we can wait for Paul.
It's Gene.
The door opens. Daniel emerges with his hands up. Gemma
follows him out, gun trained on him.
62.
DANIEL
You have one bullet left, make it
count. Lock the door and stay inside,
no matter what.
ANGLE ON: the knife and first-aid kit lying on the kitchen
island.
Meanwhile...
IN THE BEDROOM
The bell above the door rings as Daniel steps in. He looks
around, alarmed.
DANIEL
Hello?
No response.
Blood?
No sign of Paul.
64.
GEMMA
AHHHH.
Leaves rustle.
GEMMA
Who's there?!
GENE
Gemma? I'm here to help you. Daniel
sent me. I work at the store down the
road. I brought my truck, it's at the
bottom of the hill.
GEMMA
Where's Daniel?
GENE
Oh my god. We gotta get you to a
hospital.
GEMMA
Where's Daniel?!
GENE
Miss, you're bleedin'. We really
oughta get you to a doctor.
Gemma looks down. And now she sees the blood seeping through
the front of her white dress and down her legs.
She blanches.
GENE (cont'd)
Miss, you need help.
GEMMA
STOP. I'll shoot.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Stop!
GEMMA (cont'd)
STOP.
Gene stops.
Finally:
GENE
I know you don't wanna hurt that
baby, Gemma. It's what you always
wanted, isn't it? A family.
GENE (cont'd)
Let me help you and the baby.
GEMMA
You killed them. You'll do the same
to me.
GENE
I was trying to save them. Their
bodies couldn't handle it, the babies
didn't make it.
GEMMA
...and me? I'm different?
Gene smiles.
GENE
You are. You made it longer than all
the rest. You're exceptional.
GENE (cont'd)
You don't have to be alone anymore. I
can help you. Put the gun down.
DANIEL
Gemma?!
DANIEL
Gemma?!
No sign of her.
FURTHER BEHIND
GEMMA
GENE (O.S.)
(faint)
Gemma, listen to me, you need me if
you wanna survive this!
DANIEL
GENE
DANIEL
GEMMA
DANIEL
stops when he sees the blood trail branching off into two
separate directions. He looks around, bewildered.
GEMMA
Is it Gene or Daniel?
DANIEL (O.S.)
Gemma!
and
DOWN A HILL
DOWN
No sound.
BACK TO SCENE
DANIEL
(gently shakes her)
Gemma?
Gemma moans.
Daniel carries the musket off toward the bedroom but first
stops to grab something from the pantry.
ANGLE ON: the kitchen island, the knife and first-aid kit
are gone.
GEMMA
Thought it didn't work.
DANIEL
He doesn't know that.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Sugar?
DANIEL (cont'd)
I don't know how you're still
alive...all that blood. You sure
you're okay?
GEMMA
I don't fall that easy.
71.
GEMMA (cont'd)
You got a nice one, ya know, always
thought so. Your smile - it's real.
GEMMA (cont'd)
What?
He hesitates.
GEMMA (cont'd)
What.
DANIEL
I love you.
Gemma doesn't know what to say. Daniel has never said those
words before. Not to her or anyone else.
DANIEL (cont'd)
And...okay.
Daniel sits on the porch with the ax lying across his lap,
wind-up flashlight in hand. Going over what he said.
DANIEL
(sotto)
And okay? And okay.
He listens carefully.
What is that?
Gemma yawns and blinks hard, trying to fight off sleep. But
her eyelids are growing heavier with each passing second.
Swallowed up by black.
Standing frozen.
PAUL
Do you hate yourself, Daniel?
PAUL (cont'd)
You don't need to anymore. You can
let it go. Let that old you go. I can
free you. Is that what you want?
PAUL (cont'd)
Open yourself up, Daniel. Listen to
me, really listen...
A TINY RED WORM darts from Paul's mouth and into Daniel #2's
ear, disappearing into his ear canal.
No sign of Daniel.
75.
Paul and Daniel #2 have gone. It's just Daniel now, left
alone in the dark, reeling.
And not too far from there - lying in a ditch, covered with
leaves - is Paul's body.
FLASH TO
In a moonlit field, Daniel and Gemma are making love for the
first time, while a group of eleven dark figures encircle
them. Watching.
BACK TO SCENE
DANIEL
...what'd you do to me?
GENE
Lead me in the right path, O Lord, or
my enemies will conquer me. Make your
way plain for me to follow.
(beat)
You got a little piece of me, Daniel,
now it's time for the rest.
Daniel struggles but he's too weak and dazed to put up much
of a fight.
76.
DANIEL
DEMON.
GENE
No such thing as demons. Or God or
the devil, heaven or hell. Just
something humans made up. Religion's
a good diversion.
DANIEL
What do you want?!
GENE (V.O.)
To survive, like all living things,
to pass on my genes.
Meanwhile...
GENE
Your species won't last forever, look
around, you know that. It's time for
something new.
GENE (cont'd)
You didn't really believe it was
yours, did you?
DANIEL
We can raise the baby here, it's the
perfect place. When he gets old
enough I can take him fishing.
DANIEL (cont'd)
We should start thinking of names.
78.
A beat.
GEMMA
You seem...happy.
DANIEL
I am. Aren't you? It's over.
Gemma scoffs.
GEMMA
For who? I'll end up like the rest.
DANIEL
Here, you need to stay hydrated.
DANIEL (cont'd)
You won't. You're not like them.
You're exceptional.
GEMMA
I gotta pee.
DANIEL (O.S.)
You okay in there?
GEMMA
Fine.
DANIEL (O.S.)
You sure you're okay?
GEMMA
How you feel? Any different?
DANIEL (O.S.)
...I'm thinking more clear now, now
that's he's not in my head anymore. I
feel like myself again.
GEMMA
What d'ya think he was? Some kinda
demon, alien?
A long beat.
DANIEL (O.S.)
It doesn't matter. Whatever he was,
he's gone now.
GEMMA
We don't know that though. Not for
sure, sure.
DANIEL
You saw him yourself.
GEMMA
But we don't even know what he is.
What he's capable of.
DANIEL
Let's get you to bed, you need to
rest.
GEMMA
What'd you do with the ax? What if he
comes back and finds it?
DANIEL
He won't.
80.
DANIEL (cont'd)
It's okay, I'll protect you.
GEMMA
Please, can I have it? I'd feel
better if I had it.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Like a security blanket.
DANIEL
Come on.
GEMMA
Jack. Let's call the baby Jack.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Please, Daniel, the musket?
MOMENTS LATER
Gemma sits in bed with the musket, eyeing Daniel who stands
nearby with the handcuffs.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Don't you trust me? I trust you.
GEMMA (cont'd)
You wanna listen to your baby?
GEMMA (cont'd)
Can I have another glass of water?
and into
THE KITCHEN
He fills a glass.
HALLWAY
He stops.
DANIEL
Gemma...?
Silence.
He creeps closer.
Gemma swings again but Daniel blocks the musket with his
hands.
DANIEL (cont'd)
Stop, Gemma, STOP.
It's Gemma. She has no idea where she's going. But she's
going as fast as she can.
GEMMA
AHHHH.
She looks between the paths. Panicking. Which way does she
go?!
DANIEL (O.S.)
(not that far away)
Gemma?!
A thought occurs.
DANIEL
Gemma, come back, I'm not the enemy!
No sign of Gemma.
DANIEL (cont'd)
What's wrong with you? You're being
paranoid!
He continues on.
DANIEL
Gemma?!
DANIEL (cont'd)
Ahhh!
He drops the ax, gripping the sides of his head with both
hands.
84.
DANIEL (cont'd)
(through gritted
teeth)
Stop, fuck.
DANIEL (cont'd)
(strained)
Kill me! End it! Kill me!
DANIEL (cont'd)
(calmly)
Gemma, I know you're out here. Come
home.
A long silence.
GEMMA (O.S.)
Hey!
DANIEL
Gemma, stop! Please. Listen to me.
You're not thinking straight. The
trauma, the pregnancy, it's messing
with your head.
A moment later.
SMASH!
Dead.
ON THE CLIFF
GEMMA
(softly)
I'm sorry.
A second later.
GEMMA (cont'd)
No...
We catch a glimpse of --
Heavy footsteps.
86.
So close.
SMASH TO:
GEMMA
Ready or what?
Beth hurries down the steps. Gemma turns and locks the door
before following after Beth.
GEMMA (cont'd)
Hey, wait for me!
BETH
Momma!
Gemma puts her fishing pole aside and goes to help Beth.
They reel it in together.
GEMMA
Me or you?
Beth smiles and clasps her hands together, bowing her head
in prayer. As she opens her mouth to give grace --
GEMMA
Blanket or no blanket?
BETH
Momma?
GEMMA
Yes, baby?
A beat.
89.
BETH
Nevermind.
Beth shuts her eyes. Gemma turns away and looks to the
window - still nailed shut.
CUT TO:
BACK TO:
GEMMA
BETH.
GEMMA (cont'd)
(angry)
What'd I tell you about that? My
memories are mine, not yours.
BETH
Sorry, momma.
KAY
Sorry, darlin', didn't mean to spook
ya. I'm Kay.
KAY (cont'd)
Is your momma home?
KAY (cont'd)
I just -- I need your help, could
really use it.
KAY (cont'd)
Maybe you got a phone inside?
Beth is quiet.
GEMMA (O.S.)
Beth, come here.
91.
KAY
I could really use...
-- and faints.
GEMMA (O.S.)
Leave her.
GEMMA
She ain't stayin'.
GEMMA (cont'd)
We don't know her.
BETH
I do, her name's Kay.
(off Gemma's look)
She told me. Plus, I seen her before.
BETH (cont'd)
I'm not lying.
92.
GEMMA
She ain't --
BETH
Dinner's ready.
LATER
Gemma, Beth, and Kay are eating dinner together. Since there
aren't enough seats at the table, Gemma sits in the rocking
chair.
KAY
(lighthearted)
I take it you don't get many guests.
KAY (cont'd)
Thanks for helping me, sharin' this
fine meal, I'm real grateful. I
didn't catch y'all's names. I'm Kay.
BETH
My name's Beth, that's momma.
GEMMA
Anne.
(suspicious)
What're you doin' all the way out
here?
KAY
You want the short version or the
long one?
(MORE)
93.
KAY (cont'd)
(off Gemma's look)
Short one it is. I should've known
better than to take my beater on the
road. But, what can I say, I felt
this overwhelmin' urge to seize the
day, carpe diem. I'm on a trip to see
the Grand Canyon. And, as you can
see, ain't goin' so grand.
(to Beth)
You ever seen the Grand Canyon
before?
KAY (cont'd)
Well, you got plenty of time left.
Me, I don't got much life left in me
so now's --
GEMMA
Closest mechanic's fifteen miles.
Should take you 'bout five hours.
KAY
Probably longer. Got a bad knee.
Maybe I could use your phone and call
for a ride?
BETH
We don't got a phone.
KAY
I see. Y'all really off the grid. I
get it, I respect it.
KAY (cont'd)
I thank you for the hospitality.
BETH
Wait, don't go.
BETH (cont'd)
(hushed)
There's monsters out there.
KAY
Don't worry about me, darlin', I'm
tough. Those monsters oughta be the
scared ones.
BETH
Please, momma, just one night. Can
she, please, please?
GEMMA
He won't be open this late anyway.
You'll take the room and we'll sleep
out here.
KAY
I can't put you out like that.
GEMMA
You'll take the room. You'll leave
when the sun's up.
KAY
Thank you, really, thanks.
GEMMA
About last night --
BETH
I'm sorry, momma.
GEMMA
If you do it again, we'll have to
sleep in different rooms. Is that
what you want?
BETH
No, momma.
BETH (cont'd)
I just wanted to see him.
GEMMA
I know, baby.
BETH
What's the Grand Canyon?
GEMMA
Um, a bunch of pretty rocks.
BETH
You been there?
GEMMA
...no. Seen it in pictures.
BETH
Can we go?
GEMMA
...one day.
A long beat.
BETH
Momma?
GEMMA
Go to sleep, baby.
BETH
Kay's funny like daddy.
GEMMA
What d'ya mean?
96.
BETH
She makes funny faces.
Gemma opens her eyes. A hint of fear grows on her face. She
looks at her daughter.
GEMMA
Like how?
GEMMA (cont'd)
You're not in trouble. I just wanna
know. I think it's funny too.
Beth considers.
KAY
What the hell.
KAY (cont'd)
Please.
KAY (cont'd)
Please, don't, I'll go, I'll go.
into
KAY
Please, I got grandkids. Don't do
this, you don't gotta do this. What
d'ya want?
KAY (cont'd)
Money, you want money? You in trouble
with the law? Not my business. Never
saw you or your girl. I'm gone, gone.
Gemma is silent.
KAY (cont'd)
(sobbing)
Please, I wanna see my grandkids
again.
KAY (cont'd)
Please. Don't do this. Please, Gemma,
don't do this.
98.
GEMMA
I told you my name was Anne.
KAY
That's what I said. Anne.
Gemma leaves.
KAY (O.S.)
Wait, Anne, let me go! My grandkids,
please!
Gemma shuts the door and hurries down the steps. She turns
back, looking at the cabin one last time.
Kay twists and pulls at the handcuffs. No luck. Only one way
out.
KAY
AHHHH!
99.
Kay moves down the hallway just as flames and smoke engulf
the cabin.
BEDROOM
KAY (O.S.)
I didn't do anything, please! Help
me!
Gemma turns and walks away, leaving the cabin and Kay's
agonized screams behind.
Beth waits, looking out the window. She can see the
flickering glow of the fire through the trees.
BETH
Momma?
GEMMA
Let's go see the Grand Canyon.
CUT TO:
And beyond.
BLACK.