Classical Outline
Classical Outline
Classical Outline
Topic: Should Jamaican Creole be afforded the official language status of the country?
Hook/ Attention Grabber: A quotation from the Honourable Louise Bennett - Coverley and
Connecting sentence: Despite the negative stigma that is attached to Jamaican Creole, the
government have to understand that this is as a result of English being the official language of
the country.
Thesis statement: Government should afford Jamaican Creole the official language status of
Jamaica because this would break the stigma that only persons of lower socioeconomic
background speak Creole, break the barrier of communication between the public officers
and civilians and as a result of Creole being the official language students will perform better
in schools.
1. Claim 1: Affording Jamaican Creole the official language status will break the stigma
a. When made official it gives the language validation and it shows that the
dominant group respects the language as Miss Louise Bennett would’ve wanted.
promoting the use of the language, this leads to the breaking of the stigma.
2. Claim 2: with Jamaican Creole being the official language of the country this will break
b. Dr. Celia Blake founded that while many Jamaicans speak English not many of
them understand it and this has been an issue in the courts. Reference to article
3. Claim 3: Making Jamaican Creole an official language would improve the performance
of students in schools.
a. Children perform extremely better in school if they are thought in the native
2. Paragraph of Refutation
a. Counterargument 1: Arguably, some persons are of the belief that Jamaican creole is
not a language.
because it doesn’t have a grammatical system and persons are unable to express
b. Refutation/ Rebuttal:
ii. Reference to an article by Paul (2016) regarding the linguistics identity crisis.
c. Counterargument 2: Some people may argue that there is too much dialects therefore
are affiliated with the language. One of these include the dialect variation.
break the stigma attach lower socioeconomic people that they are the only speakers of the
language, it will break the barrier of communication between public officers and civilians and
lastly allow our students to perform better in school. Once the dominant group makes the
language official this shows validation to the language as such all classes would respect the
language.
Recommendation: Government should afford Jamaican creole the official language status of
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