Editing Exercises
Editing Exercises
Editing Exercises
Exercise 1:
Answers:
a) dramatist- dramatists
b) who - whom
c) the - an
d) whom – who
e) for – of
f) had - has
g) Englishman – Englishmen
h) for - of
Exercise 2:
g)……………
were music hall performers but
h)………………
he has been born into the life of
the theatre. .
Answers:
a) a year- the year
b) name – named
c) entrance – entrances
d) looks – looked
e) was – were
f) or – and
g) but – and
h) has - had
Exercise 3:
b)……………
become the first man ever to venture
in space. He did not know for certain c)………………
d)………………
beforehand that he is to be chosen.
The Russian had three possible candidates e)……………
ready but although Gagarin was first f)………………
g)……………
in the list, the choice was not definitely
made until an early morning of April 12. h)………………
Answers:
a) in – on
b) become – became
c) in – into
d) is – was
e) Russian – Russians
f) But – and
g) In – on
h) an – the
Exercise 4:
f)……………
The CBSE expresses this concern of
reviewing the syllabus for time to time. The g)………………
idea is to build a complete personality of an individual h)……………
Answers:
a) educationist – educationists
b) concern – concerned
c) doesn’t – don’t
d) blames – blame
e) are – is
f) of – by
g) for – from
h) a – the
Exercise 5(CBSE paper):
Answers:
a) of - with
b) happier - happy
c) around - in
d) feels - feel
e) the - a
f) laugh - laughing
g) forgot - forget
h) these - their
c)………………
but time once lost was lost forever.
Time and tide waits for no one. A d)………………
Lost opportunities may spoil one’s life. e)
Those who doesn’t act in time f)………………
has to repent afterwards. An intelligent g).........
student prepares his lessons on advance. h)…………
Hence proper using of time is essential in life. i)……………
Answers:
a) Very – more
b) Lose-lost
c) Was-is
d) Waits-wait
e) Opportunities-opportunity
f) Doesn’t-don’t
g) Has-have
h) On-in
i) Using-use
Q1(SQP 2011): The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Write
the incorrect word and the correction. Remember to underline the word you have supplied.
Often these days we hear and speak of the conquered (a) _____ ______
in nature, ‘the taming of a river’, ‘the war against insects’ (b) _____ ______
and so on. Often these phrases being used without consciously (c) _____ ______
attaching any value to them, but those have an (d) _____ ______
underlying attitude of hostile towards Nature and Nature’s (e) _____ ______
creatures, a viewpoint which seeming to assume (f) _____ ______
Nature as an enemy that needs to being vanquished. (g) _____ ______
Alternatively, Nature is seen merely as the ‘resource’ to be
(h) _____ ______
‘exploited’
Q2(SQP 2011): The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Write
the incorrect word and the correction in your answer sheet against the correct blank number.
Remember to underline the word you have supplied.
(a) _return_
When I return home from school, I found that
_returned_
my mother were in kitchen and my younger (b) _____ ______
sister is playing with her friends in the verandah. (c) _____ ______
In my room, all the books was lying scattered (d) _____ ______
on the floor. I am definitely very annoyed. (e) _____ ______
I asked my sister, “Ritu, did you entered this room in my absence?” (f) _____ ______
“I was looking for some colourful pictures for my scrap file. I
(g) _____ ______
search
through your books and they fall down one (h) _____ ______
by one”, she answered sheepishly.
Q3: The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Underline each
error and write your correction in the space provided. The first one has been done for you as
an example.
Answer 1:
(a) conquered – conquest (b) in - of (c) being - are (d) those - they
(e) hostile - hostility (f) seeming - seems (g) being - be (h) the -a
Answer 2:
(a) return - returned (b) were - was (c) is - was (d) was - were
(e) am - was (f) entered - enter (g) search - searched (h) fall - fell
Answer 3:
(a) for - in (b) peoples – people (c) this - these (d) is - are
(e) do - doing (f) fortunately – unfortunately (g) for - to (h) They - Their
(i) Beside - Besides
Following sentences are incorrect. Identify the errors and write the correct sentences
1. Mohan is the tallest of all the other boys.
2. This pen is superior than that.
3. He was sent with a verbal message to the head master.
4. He does not know to behave in the society.
5. He has a strong headache.
6. The train has arrived immediately.
7. She copied the draft word by word.
8. It is long since I have seen him.
9. The God is everywhere.
10. It was a long paper.
11. I feel some better.
12. Yesterday a pick-pocket cut my pocket.
13. Mrs Patil is our English Professor.
14. I dare not to do it.
15. Both men have not come.
Answers:
1. Mohan is taller than any other boy.
2. This pen is superior to that.
3. He was sent with an oral message to the head master.
4. He does not know how to behave in the society.
5. He has a severe headache.
6. The train has arrived just now.
7. She copied the draft word for word.
8. It is long since I saw him.
9. God is everywhere.
10. It was a lengthy paper.
11. I feel somewhat better.
12. Yesterday a pick-pocket picked my pocket.
13. Mrs Patil is our professor of English.
14. I dare not do it.
15. Both the men have not come.
The following sentences have not been edited. There is one error in each line. Write the incorrect
word and correction. Remember to underline the word you have supplied.
_______
8. I saw a bad dream last night. _______
11. My inquiry for his health was never answered. _______ _______
12. Unless you speak the truth, I shall not pardon you. _______ _______
13. Every chair and every table in the room were in order. _______ _______
Answers:
1. in – on 2. cutting - cracking
3. on – with 4. needs - need
5. in – of 6. cost - price
7. Verbal – Oral 8. saw - had
9. in – into 10. for - of
11. for – about 12. shall - will
13. were – was 14. wrote - write
15. from – of
Q1. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in
each line. Underline each error and write your correction in the space
provided. The first correction has been done as an example. (4 marks)
The Davis Cup is an beautiful silver punch ____a____
by the well known American tennis player, D.F. Davis on 1990. _________
Q2. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Underline
each error and write your correction in the space provided. The first correction has been
done as an example. (4 marks)
3. The following paragraph has not been edited. There is one error in
each line. Underline each error and write your correction in the space
provided. The first correction has been done as an example. (4 marks)
The Band-Aid was invent in New Jersey. _invented_
4. The following paragraph has not been edited. There is one error in
each line. Underline each error and write your correction in the space
provided. The first correction has been done as an example. (4 marks)
Lila's favourite subject in school was maths. She enjoy _enjoyed_
done in class. But a lot many of her friends found Maths _________
Then Lila decided to help three of her friend. She was _________
Answers
Answer 1.
a) of → with b) in → to c) on → in d) who → which e) go → goes
f) nation → nations g) among → against h) is → are
Answer 2.
a) was → is b) of → by c) in → of d) on → by e) to → To f) are → is
g) consider → considered h) Is → Are
Answer 3.
a) as → because b) on → while c) his → here d) on → with e) by → with
f) the → a g) Billion → Billions h) it's → its
Answer 4.
a) for → of b) a lot → Φ c) until → as d) to work → working e) very → Φ
f) friend → friends g) in → at h) is → was
(Questions 1 to 8) Read the following passage carefully and select the most suitable option
from each list according to the corresponding number in the passage.
For Ananya, Mathematics was extremely(1) hard to understand. In order to keep her results high
enough to succeed and to satisfy her parents, Ananya attempted a number of strategies(2).
The answer(3) though(4) was simple. She had to work constantly and dilajentley(6) at applying the
different formulas to a range of contexts. Often she was envious of(7) her peers to whom
comprehension came easily. However, at the end of the year, it seemed her relentless work
was rewarded(8) when her results put her amongst the leading scholars of her class.
Q 1. Which of these would be the best word to use to replace the word ‘extremely’ as it is used
in the passage above?
1) vastly 2) mostly 3) especially 4) massively
Q.2 Which of these is closest in meaning to ‘strategies’ as used in the passage above?
Q 3. Which of the following could replace ‘answer’ as used in the passage above?
Q 4. Which of the following could replace ‘though’ as used in the passage above?
Q 7. Which of the following is closest in meaning to ‘was envious of’ as used in the passage
above?
1) was jealous of 2) was resentful of 3) was bitter towards 4) was hostile towards
Q 8. Which of the following is the opposite in meaning to ‘rewarded’ as used in the passage
above?
1) forfeited 2) punished 3) penalised 4) disadvantaged
Answers:
1: 4) massively 2: 3) approaches 3: 3) solution
4: 3) however 5: 2) diligently 6: 4) situations
7: 2) was resentful of 8: 2) punished
The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each of the lines. The incorrect line
has been underlined. Replace the underlined word choosing the most appropriate option from those
given below.
Exercise:
Gandhiji was a prolific writer who (a) spend several hours (b) in day writing. He
(c) writes for the journals, he edited. He wrote letters, speeches (d) with reports. He
used the print medium (e) for spread his message. His personal (f) letter were even
more powerful. He used (g) a powerful medium to reinforce his views (h) for life.
(a) (i) spending (ii) spent (iii) has spent (iv) will spent
(b) (i) an (ii) the (iii) a (iv) one
(c) (i) wrote (ii) write (iii) written (iv) had written
(d) (i) or (ii) along (iii) and (iv) many
(e) (i) of (ii) on (iii) in (iv) to
(f) (i) lettered (ii) letters (iii) will letter (iv) have letters
(g) (i) that (ii) these (iii) this (iv) those
(h) (i) on (ii) about (iii) in (iv) over
Answers:
(a) (ii) Spent (b) (iii) a (c) (i) wrote (d) (iii) and (e) (iv) to
(f) (ii) letters (g) (iii) this (h) (i) on
1. Q1(SQP 2011): The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each
line. Write the incorrect word and the correction. Remember to underline the word
you have supplied.
Often these days we hear and speak of the conquered (a) _____ ______
in nature, ‘the taming of a river’, ‘the war against insects’ (b) _____ ______
and so on. Often these phrases being used without consciously (c) _____ ______
attaching any value to them, but those have an (d) _____ ______
underlying attitude of hostile towards Nature and Nature’s (e) _____ ______
creatures, a viewpoint which seeming to assume (f) _____ ______
Nature as an enemy that needs to being vanquished. (g) _____ ______
Alternatively, Nature is seen merely as the ‘resource’ to be ‘exploited’
2. Q2(SQP 2011): The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each
line. Write the incorrect word and the correction in your answer sheet against the
correct blank number. Remember to underline the word you have supplied.
(a) _return_
When I return home from school, I found that
_returned_
my mother were in kitchen and my younger (b) _____ ______
sister is playing with her friends in the verandah. (c) _____ ______
In my room, all the books was lying scattered (d) _____ ______
on the floor. I am definitely very annoyed. (e) _____ ______
I asked my sister, “Ritu, did you entered this room in my absence?” (f) _____ ______
“I was looking for some colourful pictures for my scrap file. I
(g) _____ ______
search
through your books and they fall down one (h) _____ ______
by one”, she answered sheepishly.
Q3: The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line.
Underline each error and write your correction in the space provided. The first one has
been done for you as an example.
Answer 1:
(a) conquered – conquest (b) in - of
(c) being - are (d) those - they
(e) hostile - hostility (f) seeming - seems
(g) being - be (h) the -a
Answer 2:
(a) return - returned (b) were - was
(c) is - was (d) was - were
(e) am - was (f) entered - enter
(g) search - searched (h) fall - fell
Answer 3:
(a) for - in (b) peoples - people
(c) this - these (d) is - are
(e) do - doing (f) fortunately - unfortunately
(g) for - to (h) They - Their
(i) Beside - Besides
Exercise 1:
Answers:
Exercise 2:
Answers:
Exercise 3:
Answers:
a) in – on b) become – became
c) in – into d) is – was
e) Russian – Russians f) But – and
g) In – on h) an – the
Exercise 4:
3. Answers:
a) educationist – educationists b) concern – concerned
c) doesn’t – don’t d) blames – blame
e) are – is f) of – by
g) for – from h) a – the
5. Answers:
a) of – with b) happier - happy
c) around – in d) feels - feel
e) the – a f) laugh - laughing
g) forgot – forget h) these - their
Answers:
a) Very – more b) Lose-lost
c) Was-is d) Waits-wait
e) Opportunities-opportunity f) Doesn’t-don’t
g) Has-have h) On-in i) Using-use
Q1(SQP 2011): The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each
line. Write the incorrect word and the correction. Remember to underline the word you
have supplied.
(a) _____
Often these days we hear and speak of the conquered
______
(b) _____
in nature, ‘the taming of a river’, ‘the war against insects’
______
(c) _____
and so on. Often these phrases being used without consciously
______
(d) _____
attaching any value to them, but those have an
______
(e) _____
underlying attitude of hostile towards Nature and Nature’s
______
creatures, a viewpoint which seeming to assume (f) _____ ______
(g) _____
Nature as an enemy that needs to being vanquished.
______
Alternatively, Nature is seen merely as the ‘resource’ to be (h) _____
‘exploited’ ______
Q2(SQP 2011): The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each
line. Write the incorrect word and the correction in your answer sheet against the
correct blank number. Remember to underline the word you have supplied.
(a) _return_
When I return home from school, I found that
_returned_
my mother were in kitchen and my younger (b) _____ ______
sister is playing with her friends in the verandah. (c) _____ ______
In my room, all the books was lying scattered (d) _____ ______
on the floor. I am definitely very annoyed. (e) _____ ______
I asked my sister, “Ritu, did you entered this room in my absence?” (f) _____ ______
“I was looking for some colourful pictures for my scrap file. I
(g) _____ ______
search
through your books and they fall down one (h) _____ ______
by one”, she answered sheepishly.
Q3: The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line.
Underline each error and write your correction in the space provided. The first one has
been done for you as an example.
Answer 1:
(a) conquered – conquest (b) in - of
(c) being - are (d) those - they
(e) hostile - hostility (f) seeming - seems
(g) being - be (h) the -a
Answer 2:
(a) return - returned (b) were - was
(c) is - was (d) was - were
(e) am - was (f) entered - enter
(g) search - searched (h) fall - fell
Answer 3:
(a) for - in (b) peoples - people
(c) this - these (d) is - are
(e) do - doing (f) fortunately - unfortunately
(g) for - to (h) They - Their
(i) Beside - Besides
Following sentences are incorrect. Identify the errors and write the correct sentences
Answers:
1. Mohan is taller than any other boy.
2. This pen is superior to that.
3. He was sent with an oral message to the head master.
4. He does not know how to behave in the society.
5. He has a severe headache.
6. The train has arrived just now.
7. She copied the draft word for word.
8. It is long since I saw him.
9. God is everywhere.
10. It was a lengthy paper.
11. I feel somewhat better.
12. Yesterday a pick-pocket picked my pocket.
13. Mrs Patil is our professor of English.
14. I dare not do it.
15. Both the men have not come.
Q1. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line.
Underline each error and write your correction in the space provided. The
first correction has been done as an example. (4 marks)
by the well known American tennis player, D.F. Davis on 1990. _________
Q2. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line.
Underline each error and write your correction in the space provided. The
first correction has been done as an example. (4 marks)
4. The following paragraph has not been edited. There is one error in each
line. Underline each error and write your correction in the space provided.
The first correction has been done as an example. (4 marks)
done in class. But a lot many of her friends found Maths _________
Then Lila decided to help three of her friend. She was _________
Answers
Answer 1.
a) of → with b) in → to
c) on → in d) who → which
e) go → goes f) nation → nations
g) among → against h) is → are
Answer 2.
a) was → is b) of → by
c) in → of d) on → by
e) to → To f) are → is
g) consider → considered h) Is → Are
Answer 3.
a) as → because b) on → while
c) his → here d) on → with
e) by → with f) the → a
g) Billion → Billions h) it's → its
Answer 4.
a) for → of b) a lot → Φ
c) until → as d) to work → working
e) very → Φ f) friend → friends
g) in → at h) is → was
B. The following passage needs to be edited. There in one error in each line against
which you find a blank. Write the incorrect word and the correction against the correct
blank number.
Curves may have made a comeback worldwide, and it’s cocaine chic (a) ……………..
That’s yet got girls addicted in India. Young people like to go (b) ……………..
Out also they want to eat what their peers are eating at the (c) .........................
Junk food joints. Thus to compensate for the pizza and coke (d) ……………….
at dinner, they starve themselves thought the day. They know that
Healthy eating is the way to lose weight because staying fit, (h)………………..
C. The following paragraph has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Write
the incorrect word and the correction against the correct blank number.
Was a difficult subject as they as they saw no point in working at it... (d) ……………….
Did not like it. Then Anamilka decided to help three of her friends (f)…………………
One by one to them but they all thanked her for her assistance. (h)………………..
D. In the following passage, one word has been omitted in each line. Write the missing
with the missing word along with the word that comes before and the word that comes
after it against the correct blank number.
Car tyres act as cushions for the wheels give the car (a) ……………..
Are applied. A smooth tyres grips the road better even (d) ……………….
ANSWERS
A. 1. As 2. either-nor 3. Thought – yet 4. But 5. even then 6.but 7. so 8. when 9. else 10.
whereas
B. (a)and but (b)yet still (c)also and (d)Thus so (e) while but (f) or and (g)which but
(h)because while
C. (a) but and (b) And But (c) until as (d)as so (e) and so (f) Then But (g)so As (h) but and
D. (a) wheels and give (b) road so that (c) skidding while turning (d)better so then (e)tyres.
But non-racing (f) tyres as the (g)which but (h) but and
F. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Write the
incorrect word and the correction against the correct blank number.
The basis for borrowing or lending money is absolute honesty. (a) ……………..
Some people do not repay merely so they forget that they owe (b) ……………..
Money to others. We can’t refuse to help them however they are (c) .........................
Our friends. Since Punit comes to me very often he does not bring (d) ……………….
The book I have lent him. I suspect that neither he has forgotten (e)………………..
All about it and else he has given it to some friends of his (f)…………………
have not reminded him so far if I need the book badly (g)……………….
G. In the following passage, one word has been omitted in each line. Write the missing
word along the word that comes before and the word that comes after it against the
correct blank number.
I went to the counter asked the salesman to show me one (b) ……………..
Good piece. The shop had plain glasses not magnifying (c) .........................
Any one. He felt irritated that he asked one of his assistants (g)……………….
ANSWERS
F. (a) or and (b) so because (c)however as (d)Since Although (e) neither either (f) and or (g)
but and (h) if but
G. (a) glass as I (b) counter and asked (c) glasses but not (d)glasses. So I (e)himself although
he (f) another but I (g)felt so irrited (h) one or not
(D) The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each of the lines. Write
the incorrect word and the correction against the correct blank number. Remember to
underline the word that you have sullied.
(E) in the passage given below. One word has been omitted in each line. Write the missing
word along with the word that comes before and the word that comes after it in your answer
sheet against the correct blank number. Ensure that the word that from your answer is
underlined.
3. Spiders are found India. They are often shy and most are short-sighted. They are quick get
away when we come too close. Often they don’t
4. A large number spiders inhabit our Environment the females only two kinds
5. Are know be dangerous. Many of the deadly looking spiders do not harm us.
D. Nasir Ahmad Soomro is the tallest man on the (a) on in World. He is at Taiwan to spend
four months living in the (b) at in Guiness World Record Museum. He is the first record
holder Employed as a crowd puller of he museum which has a number (c) of for From life-
size models of Guiness book (d) from of Personalities. 29 years old Soomro is of to become
(e) of out Quite literally a museum exhibit and a sporting ambassador trying to Promote
exercise in school children. (f) in among
E. Spiders are the most fascinating / nature’s (a) fascinating of Smaller creatures. Several
hundred species/ (b) species of Spiders Spiders are found/ India. They are often sky (c) found
in India And most are short-sighted. They are quick/ get (d) quick to get Away when we
come too close. Often they don’t Sting. A large number/ spiders inhabit our (e) number of
Spiders Environment. /the females only two kinds (f) environment. Among the Are known /
be dangerous. Many of (g) know to be The deadly looking spiders do not harm us. So there is
no justification at all the (h) all for the Superstitious beliefs regarding the spiders.
B. There is an error in each of the lines of the passage given below. Write the incorrect
word and the corrections against the correct blank number. Remember to underline the
word that you have supplied.
The sage of the educational institutions are turning bitter. (a)___________________ IITians
has reacted with shock after the union HRD minister (b)__________________ have raised
questions about the quality of the IITs comparing the (c) ___________________ II Ts to the
University of Roorkee were like comparing.1000c.c (d) ___________________ bikes to 100
c.c bikes “says students of I.I.T. Kanpur .”No other (e) ________________ institution can
drem of doing what IITs has done,” claims (f)__________ a senior professor. Other faculty
members point out the ( g)_____________ contribution of the institutes to the country’s
defence and space programmes in the end it boil down to a question of quality versus
quantity. (h)________
B. (a) are is (b). has have (c) have has (d) were was (e) says say (f) has have (g) points point
(h) boil boils
D. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each of the lines. Write
the incorrect word and the correction against the correct blank number. Remember to
underline the word that you have supplied’.
B. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Write the
incorrect word and the correction against the correct blank number. Underline the
word that you have supplied.
We are in very serious times, because they are free. In (a) The old days ours task was only to
fight, to wrest freedom (b) Enthuse each other and carry on the freedom struggle, (c) Those
was easy, as we know but now that we have freedom (d) The entire burden of the future
structure of my country is (e) On our own shoulders. You must be as true in our conduct (f)
B. a. they we b. ours our c. each other one another d. those that e. my our f. you we
C. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Write the
incorrect word and the correction against the correct blank number. Underline the
word that you have supplied.
Incorrect Correction
Jack and Michael were fast friends. They loved one another. (a) Every tried to make the
greatest sacrifice for (b) The other . Their parents were equally friendly. (c) But what knows
the quirks or fate? It was just a (d) Trifle that led to a misunderstanding between their. (e)
The two boys himself remained friendly as ever (f) They tried there best to persuade their
fathers. (g) An ingenuous trick exposed the man which had created the (h) Bad blood. Jack’s
father was the one to greet his friend. (i) The fore stood together and embraced each other . (j)
ANSWERS
C. a. one another each other b. Every each c. Others other d. what who e. their them f. himself
themselves g. there their h. which who i. one first j. each other one another
B. There is an error in each of the lines of the passage given below. Write the incorrect
word and the corrections against the correct blank number. Remember to underline the
word that you have supplied.
The sage of the educational institutions are turning bitter. (a)___________________ IITians
has reacted with shock after the union HRD minister (b)__________________ have raised
questions about the quality of the IITs comparing the (c) ___________________ II Ts to the
University of Roorkee were like comparing.1000c.c (d) ___________________ bikes to 100
c.c bikes “says students of I.I.T. Kanpur .”No other (e) ________________ institution can
drem of doing what IITs has done,” claims (f)__________ a senior professor. Other faculty
members point out the ( g)_____________ contribution of the institutes to the country’s
defence and space programmes in the end it boil down to a question of quality versus
quantity. (h)________
B. (a) are is (b). has have (c) have has (d) were was (e) says say (f) has have (g) points point
(h) boil boils
D. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each of the lines. Write
the incorrect word and the correction against the correct blank number. Remember to
underline the word that you have supplied’.
D. The following passage has not been edited. There is one error in each of the lines.
Write the incorrect word and the correction against the correct blank number.