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    Dr. Williams is referred a 22-year-old builder, Zach Foster, for further assessment of worsening asthma. Mr. Foster initially presented with shortness of breath, wheeze, and cough for three weeks along with gastroesophageal reflux disease symptoms. He was diagnosed with unstable asthma associated with GORD and prescribed medications, but does not take his inhaler regularly and still smokes. Due to his continued smoking and normal test results, he was advised to continue medications and pursue smoking cessation support.

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    Dr. Williams is referred a 22-year-old builder, Zach Foster, for further assessment of worsening asthma. Mr. Foster initially presented with shortness of breath, wheeze, and cough for three weeks along with gastroesophageal reflux disease symptoms. He was diagnosed with unstable asthma associated with GORD and prescribed medications, but does not take his inhaler regularly and still smokes. Due to his continued smoking and normal test results, he was advised to continue medications and pursue smoking cessation support.

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    Dr. Williams is referred a 22-year-old builder, Zach Foster, for further assessment of worsening asthma. Mr. Foster initially presented with shortness of breath, wheeze, and cough for three weeks along with gastroesophageal reflux disease symptoms. He was diagnosed with unstable asthma associated with GORD and prescribed medications, but does not take his inhaler regularly and still smokes. Due to his continued smoking and normal test results, he was advised to continue medications and pursue smoking cessation support.

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    Dr Tanya Williams
    Respiratory Specialist
    Bayview Private Hospital
    81 Canyon Road
    Bayview

    18/10/14

    Dear Dr Williams,
    Re: Mr Zach Foster, D.O.B: 25/10/91

    I am writing to refer Mr Foster, a 22-year-old builder, who has worsening asthma, for further assessment
    including lung function and management.

    Initially, Mr Foster presented with the complaints of SOB, wheeze and cough for the last 3 weeks along
    with the symptoms consistent with gastro-oesophageal reflux disease. Besides, his compliance with
    medications was poor. His physical examination was unremarkable, hence a diagnosis of unstable asthma Commented [ESL1]: ; hence,
    associated with GORD was made. Consequently, pulmicort inhaler and pantoprazole was prescribed along Commented [ESL2]: write conditions in full
    with an advice to quit smoking and a review visit was scheduled.

    On today’s visit, Mr Foster reported improvement of GORD; however he does not take pulmicort regularly Commented [ESL3]: ,
    and still smokes. His pathology results including chest x ray and FBE were normal. Therefore, he was
    advised to continue his current medications along with several measures for smoking cessation such as
    nicotine patch, information brochures and support groups.

    Kindly note that Mr Foster is a heavy smoker and is allergic to cats and pollen. In terms of his medical
    history, he had been suffering from asthma since the age of 3. His current medications include pulmicort
    and Ventolin.

    In view of the above, your further assessment and management would be highly appreciated.

    Should there be any queries, please do not hesitate to contact me.

    Yours sincerely,
    Doctor
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