Ae 4 - Writing Continuum
Ae 4 - Writing Continuum
Ae 4 - Writing Continuum
Assessment Experience #4
CIL 621
Assessment Experience #4
Student Data
“Amber” is eight (8) years old and is in 3rd grade at Richard Bryan Elementary School.
Amber resides in her home with her five (5) year old brother, who is both mentally and
physically disabled, and her Mom and Dad. Amber is very interested in learning about the solar
system and anything pertaining to animals. Amber shared with me her love for reading books of
Protocol/Assessment
Writing Continuum Checklist (Analytic Trait) and Higher-Order Writing Continuum are
assessment tools that cover a variety of writing stages. The Writing Continuum Checklist
(Analytic Trait) can be used to identify the writing stages of students from Kindergarten through
fifth grade. The Higher-Order Writing Continuum is used to develop higher-order thinking
based upon four writing traits: Purpose, Audience, Focus, and Organization.
Results
Results of the Writing Continuum Checklist (Analytic Trait) indicated that student is in
the Expanding stage of writing. Student is still struggling with employing strategies to spell
difficult words, as well as provide an appropriate ending for the story. Audience is not generally
Audience: Stage 3 - Intended readers are too broad for the context.
Focus: Stage 3 - Writing exhibits a general focus with some connections to the purpose;
Organization: Stage 4 - Organization is structured with general coherence between major points;
Simulated Journals – Students write simulated journals by assuming the role of another
person and writing from that person’s viewpoint. They assume the role of an historical figure,
fictional character, famous person, etc., and they begin by making a timeline picking important
dates and writing entries about what happened on those particular dates. This strategy would be
in alignment with Common Core Standards: RI.3.2 - Determine the main idea of a text; recount
the key details and explain how they support the main idea (NVACS, 2019, p. 22) and W.3.3 -
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique,
The Writing Continuum Checklist (Analytic Trait), that I conducted with a sample of
student’s writing allowed me to interpret several writing traits present in said writing piece. The
strength of this type of assessment is that is can be done immediately after a writing assignment.
This assessment is not limited to ELA, and can be used cross-curriculum. If I were conducting
this assessment in my own classroom I would definitely use all available writing that I had for
each of my students so that I would be able to get a more complete picture. This type of
assessment is particularly necessary to understand both the strengths and the weaknesses of your
students.
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I like to think that with each new assessment that I give I am building up my “toolbox”. I
understand that as I progress it will get easier to identify where students are lacking and what I
can do to tweak my lessons to meet their needs. I realize that interpreting data takes time and
with practice I will improve. While conducting this assessment I again realized that I believed
this student was much further along in the writing process than she actually was. Again, it is all
about preconceived notions of students, and the ability to modify these opinions based upon
The impact of my teaching should be that it improves student writing. With all of my
lessons thus far, I felt that I have made a positive impact on the student(s). If I can find a topic
that the students are interested in then implementing a writing journal should prove to be a fun
activity. I think what I have learned is that when I show excitement for an activity, the students
mirror my attitude. Students are naturally more attentive when they are being asked to take an
active role in their learning. It is important for me to remember to constantly assess my students
and change my lessons accordingly. It is my job to reach every student and their needs utilizing
References
Cooter, R., Flynt, E., & Cooter, K. (2014) The Flynt/Cooter comprehensive reading inventory-
Nevada Department of Education. (2019). Nevada Academic Content Standards for English
Language Arts & Literacy in History/Social Studies, Science, and Technical Subjects.
Retrieved from
http://www.doe.nv.gov/uploadedFiles/nde.doe.nv.gov/content/Standards_Instructional_S
upport/Nevada_Academic_Standards/K-12_ELA_Standards_ADA_Accessible.pdf
Scott, Nagelhout, & Spies. (n.d.). Higher-order concern writing continuum. Under Review, 1
file:///C:/Users/Anja/Downloads/Sloan_Analytic%20Trait_writing_continuum_full%20%
20(1)%20(2).pdf
Tompkins, G. (2013). Literacy for the 21st century: A balanced approach. Prentice Hall.
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