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The Blind World

By
Kumar Gautam

FADE IN:
EXT.AL HAJIS CAFE AND BAKERY-NIGHT
A black car, parked in front of cafes entrance-gate.
INT.BLACK CAR-CONTINUING
A BEARDED-MAN is in the driving seat. On his lap, a
TIME-BOMB in half-open suitcase.
On the car-dashboard, lie a .45 COLT PISTOL and a greeting
card.
His hand proceeds towards pistol, pauses, and then lifts
greeting card. Opens it.
On the card its written:
Happy Marriage Anniversary to Dearest Mom and Dad.
Reading this, he is nearly in tears.
He finds P.T.O written at the bottom of the card. About to
turn over the page of the card.
Suddenly, alarm clock BEEPS. His wrist watch: 7 P.M.
Leaves card on the car-dashboard, without turning page.
Quickly, keeps pistol. Puts on a cap, wears a reading
glass. Finally, looks himself, into rear-view mirror.
INT.AL HAJIS CAFE HOUSE AND BAKERY-CONTINUING
Dim lit. Mostly (6 or 7) Muslim customers. Sipping coffee
or tea. Soft Arabic music fills the whole cafe.
At the counter. RUBAB (mid 30s), a fat waitress.
RUBAB
Ye...ye kya ho raha hai. Ghar ja
kar padhai karo.
Usman (10), washing cups and saucers.
USMAN
Ammi woh U.S ja rahi hai...ab
kabhi-kabhi hi ayegi.
Rubab smiles.
Bearded-man with suitcase, enters cafe. Looks at the big
notice board kept beside counter.

2.

Written on the notice board: All India Muslim Youth Meet


For Peace; First Floor; 7 P.M to 8 P.M.
He proceeds to a table. Sits on SOFA-CHAIR. Keeps keys on
the table and lifts menu card. Slowly, lowers suitcase.
Keeps it, on the floor.
Stealthily, he inspects whole cafe. By his foot, tries to
push suitcase under the sofa-chair.
Suddenly, Rubab comes to his table.
RUBAB
Salaam Walekum!
Suitcase is just half-inside. Surprised, he looks over to
Rubab.
BEARDED-MAN
Walekum a salaam!
RUBAB
Kya lange aap?
BEARDED-MAN
Black coffee.
By his index finger, he gestures to the roof above his
head.
BEARDED-MAN (CONTD.)
Is meeting mei... kitne log aye
honge?
Rubab looking at the roof answers
RUBAB
Kariban...200 se 250 toh zaroor
honge.
Bearded-man smiles and Rubab smiles back. Confused, she
leaves for bringing black coffee.
Then, a POLICE-OFFICER with sniffer dog, enters cafe.
Bearded-man notices officer. Scared, he lowers his right
arm. Puts his hand inside inner pocket,holds pistol.
Slowly, he pushes rest of the suitcase. Hidden now.
The officer walks to the counter. Rubab, now at the
counter. Getting black coffee from the coffee
machine.Officer tells something to the Rubab.
Frightened, bearded-man looks at Rubab and officer.
Their conversation, inaudible to him.

3.
Suddenly a coin drops from the counter-table. Rolls on the
floor. The dog looks at rolling coin and goes after it.
Coin gets inside bearded-mans sofa-chair. Sound of coins
collision to suitcase.
The dog pauses at the bearded-mans table ,starts
sniffing. Goes around the bearded-mans table. The dog
stops at the sofa-chair. Sniffs faster now.
Usman puts black coffee on bearded-mans table.
USMAN
Ammi jaan, doggy... uncle ko tung
kar raha hai. Use coin
chahiye...coin.
The dog growls.
Amazed, customers look at the dog and bearded-man.
Officer rushes and grabs the dog-collar.
Slowly, bearded-man brings pistol under the table, HIDDEN.
Points it at the police officer.
While pulling the dog, officer looks at the sofa-chair
with a suspicion.
Index finger of bearded-man on the trigger.
Police officer smiles at bearded-man, unaware of hidden
pistol. Bearded-man manages a nervous smile too.
Finally, officer exits cafe with dog.
EXT.AL HAJIS CAFE AND BAKERY-CONTINUING
POLICE-OFFICER
(to the dog)
Sikkey-wikkey ke peeche kub se
jane laga? Drrrug... bumm ke
peeche ja bete.
The dog stares at the parked black car of bearded-man.
INT.AL HAJIS CAFE HOUSE AND BAKERY-CONTINUING
Bearded-man comes to the counter leaving suitcase beneath
chair. Pays bill.
He is about to leave the cafe, at the door
RUBAB
Zanaab!
Surprised, bearded-man turns around to face Rubab.

4.
RUBAB
Kuch bhool rahe hai, aap?
No answer. Tensed look on his face.
Usman jingles his keys.
Relieved, takes keys from Usman and leaves cafe.
EXT.AL HAJIS CAFE AND BAKERY-CONTINUING
Bearded-man takes out a remote from his pocket. But it
slips and falls on the ground. A slight crack develops on
it and battery comes out of it.
Quickly, he collects remote. Puts back battery into it.
Presses a red button on it.
Looking back at the cafe, he rushes to his car.
INT.AL HAJIS CAFE HOUSE AND BAKERY-CONTINUING
Usman is cleaning just vacated table by bearded-man. He
senses someone behind him. Turns around.
Its RIYA (10),chewing a bubble-gum.
RIYA
Oye! school kyun nahi aa raha
aaj-kal?
Depressed, looking down, he answers.
USMAN
School fees... abbu ke dawaiyan
kharidne mei chale gaye...mai
next month se...
RIYA
Yaar!... tere Abbu thik ho
jayenge. Cheer up!
She sits on the sofa-chair. Suitcase with bomb, beneath
this chair.
INT.BEARDED MANS BLACK CAR-CONTINUING
Bearded-man still pressing the red button on the remote.
Frustated, he presses red button with force.
A LED display screen-"00:60" after a second "00:59" then
"00:58".
He turns the keys to start the car. Engine coughs and
dies. Tries again. Coughs and dies again.

5.

Panics and looks at the remote. LED display


screen-"00:48".
Horrified, tries again to start car. It starts.
INT.AL HAJIS CAFE HOUSE AND BAKERY-CONTINUING
Riya gives him chocolates and bubble gum.
RIYA
Mai ek week ke baad U.S ja rahi
hoon. Ab wahi nana-nani ke saath
rahoonge...
Usman takes out a tabeez from his pocket.
USMAN
Its from ...Ajmer sherif.
He helps her wear it.
A 70-year-old man looks at them and smile in awe.
Then, Usman notices coin on the floor. Bends down to take
it. He SEES SUITCASE beneath sofa-chair.
EXT.AL HAJIS CAFE HOUSE AND BAKERY-CONTINUING
Bearded-mans car, now parked 300 m away from the cafe.
Surrounding areas of the car, dark and deserted.
INT.BEARDED MANS BLACK CAR-CONTINUING
Bearded-man is in the driving seat again. He is looking at
the reflection of the cafe in the rear-view mirror.
Tension grows on his face.
LED display screen "00:11" then changes to "00:10".
INT.AL HAJIS CAFE HOUSE AND BAKERY-CONTINUING
Usman keeps suitcase on the table and starts playing tabla
on it.
RIYA
Whose suitcase is that?
He keeps it over his head. Frees it from his hand. Blows
out bubble-gum from his mouth. Size of bubble increasing.
About to burst.

6.

INT.BEARDED MANS BLACK CAR-CONTINUING


Bearded-man is motionless now.
His eyes fixed on Remotes screen.
The LED display screen- 00:03 after a second 00:02,
then to 00:01, finally 00:00.
But, no explosion.
Confused, he looks at the reflection of caf in the
rear-view mirror.
Frustrated,he looks at the remote and shakes it. Goes mad.
Starts pressing red button on the remote again and again.
INT. AL HAJIS CAFE AND BAKERY- CONTINUING
Riya snatches suitcase from Usman. Keeps it over her head.
Balances it. She starts walking.
RIYA
Mai toh ise rakh kar chal bhi
sakti hoon. Can you? Can you?
Suddenly, she misbalances and suitcase falls.
USMAN
Oohh..
While falling gets an edge of the table and lands on the
sofa.
INT. BEARDED MANS CAR - CONTINUING
Bearded-man, with screw-driver opens remote. Tightens few
screws in its circuit board. Finally, assembles it back.
Presses red-button on the remote. The LED display screen
on the remote starts flashing number again.
The LED display screen-00:60.
BEARDED-MAN
(mimics Rubabs voice)
Kariban ...200 se 250 toh zaroor
honge.
Looks at the reflection of caf in the rear-view mirror.

7.
INT. AL HAJIS CAFE AND BAKERY- CONTINUING
Riya keeps suitcase back on the table.
RIYA
Hai kya Isme?
She takes out bobby pin from her hair. Puts it in the
keyhole of the suitcase.
Puts her ear to the suitcase. Turns the hairpin. A click
sound.
USMAN
Khul gaya?
RIYA
Just wait.
Curious, Usman also brings his ear close to the suitcase
and listens carefully.
INT.BEARDED MANS BLACK CAR-CONTINUING
Remotes LED display screen- 00:30
Smoke all around in the car.
Half lit cigarette in bearded-mans hand.
INT.AL HAJIS CAFE AND BAKERY- CONTINUING
Riya turns the bobby pin once more. Click sound. Turns
once more. Click sound. Suitcase opens.
USMAN
Genius!
Excited, he gives a high-five to her.
Riya is about to lift the upper case of suitcase.
RUBAB (O.S)
Doosro kee chije nahi chutey,
bete.
USMAN
Ammi jaan, Hum log toh bus...
RIYA
She is right. We should not open
it.
USMAN
Will just open and ...then close
it.

8.

RIYA
Nope!
She gives suitcase to Usman.
RIYA
Yaaar! Counter pe rakh de. Jinke
hai, wo wapis aaenge lene.
Usman keeps suitcase over his head. Frees it from his
hand. Suitcase, slightly open. He walks to the counter,
balancing it.
Customers look at him. To cheer him up, some of them
starts clapping. He is about to reach counter. His mother
waiting for him.
Rubab smiles at Usman, and Usman smiles back.
INT.BEARDED MANS BLACK CAR-CONTINUING
Remotes Screen Two- 00:03 then to 00:02 then 00:01,
finally screen shows-"00:00".
A deafening sound of BOMB EXPLOSION. Rear-view mirror
shows the image of entire Caf-building in fire. Sound of
chaos, Fire fighting and ambulance sound is heard.
He takes out a photograph from his wallet. A picture of
lady (mid 30s) in it.
He removes cap and reading glass. With pain, looks at the
photograph.
BEARDED-MAN
Happy marriage anniversary!... I
miss you.
He cries.
BEARDED-MAN
(weeping)
Unohne humey mara hai... hum uneh
marenge. Wo blast karenge, hum
bhi blast karenge.
He yells in anger and pain.
BEARDED-MAN
AN EYE FOR AN EYE.
Removes mustache, then beard. Throws the stick-on mustache
and beard at the back-seat of the car.On the backseat,
four more similar suitcases are present.

9.

He looks at the greeting card on the dashboard. Sees


P.T.O. written at the bottom of the card. He turns over
the page. Freezes on reading it.
SHOCKED. Card falls from his hand.
On the turned page of greeting card its writtenDear Dad,
I will bring your favorite cake, from AL HAJIS CAF AND
BAKERY. Love you.
Yours RIYA.
BLACK SCREEN:
SUPER: AN EYE FOR AN EYE MAKES WHOLE WORLD BLIND.
(Mahatma Gandhi)
FADE OUT.

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