8693 English Language: MARK SCHEME For The October/November 2009 Question Paper For The Guidance of Teachers

UNIVERSITY OF CAMBRIDGE INTERNATIONAL EXAMINATIONS
GCE Advanced Subsidiary Level and GCE Advanced Level

MARK SCHEME for the October/November 2009 question paper

for the guidance of teachers

8693 ENGLISH LANGUAGE
8693/21 Paper 21 (Composition), maximum raw mark 50

This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.

Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.

CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.

CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the October/November 2009 question papers for most IGCSE,
GCE Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level
syllabuses.

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GCE A/AS LEVEL October/November 2009 8693 21

UCLES 2009
Assessment Objectives

Knowledge and understanding of features of English Language.
Ability to write clearly, accurately and effectively for a particular purpose or audience.

Each composition is marked out of 25 marks, in accordance with the following general marking
criteria.

To achieve Band 5 or above work needs to address the task chosen appropriately.


UCLES 2009
Section A: Narrative/Descriptive/Imaginative Writing

Band 1 2225
Imaginative, possibly original, appropriate approach to task, engaging audience;
Tightly controlled, appropriate structure;
Language used imaginatively to create specific effects on the reader;
Fluent, mature expression, achieves complex effects, with a high level of
technical accuracy.
Band 2 1821
Imaginative approach to task, appropriate to audience and engaging interest;
Effective, appropriate structure;
Language used to create specific effects on the reader, narrative or
descriptive as appropriate;
Fluent expression achieves effects; occasional technical errors will not
impede expression.
Band 3 1417
Consistent focus on a relevant form and content, with an appropriate sense
of audience;
Clear structure that fits the task;
Some effects of language are attempted and achieved, narrative or
descriptive as appropriate;
Clear expression with some variety, a few technical inaccuracies.
Band 4 1013
Clear focus on relevant form and content, with some imaginative touches, an
appropriate sense of audience;
Structure is in place though may not be fully consistent may drift in and out
of focus at times;
Appropriate effects of language are attempted, narrative or descriptive as
appropriate;
Clear expression, a little unvaried or with a number of technical errors
(confusion of tenses, wrong subject/verb agreement, frequent spelling errors,
absent punctuation) which limit the ability to achieve effects.
Band 5 69
Relevant form and content with some sense of audience;
Structure may not be fully apparent may go on without clear narrative
control or descriptive contrast;
Some effects of language are attempted, narrative or descriptive as
appropriate;
Expression is clear but may not flow easily, with frequent technical errors
absent punctuation).
Band 6 25
Evidence of attempted focus on some appropriate ideas for content, or a
reasonable piece but not fully appropriate to the task; form may be less sure,
e.g. a wholly narrative response to a descriptive task;
Lacks structure, may be diffuse, may ramble;
Occasional effects of language are created, narrative or descriptive as
appropriate;
Expression is unclear at times; technical and structural problems (confusion
of tenses, wrong subject/verb agreement, frequent spelling errors, absent
punctuation) get in the way of the flow of the whole.
Band 7 01
Work will be inappropriate to the task, confused or incoherent, with little grasp
of suitable form or content.
Weakness of organisation and technical inaccuracy (confusion of tenses,
wrong subject/verb agreement, frequent spelling errors, absent punctuation)
will seriously impede the candidates ability to create an overall impression.


UCLES 2009
Section B: Discursive/Argumentative Writing

Band 1 2225
Interesting, lively approach to task, possibly original, in appropriate form, and
engaging audience;
Tightly controlled structure develops ideas in logical effective manner;
Wide range of language and rhetorical devices used effectively to explain,
argue or persuade;
Fluent, mature expression, capable of complex argument, with a high level of
technical accuracy.
Band 2 1821
Thoughtful approach to task, appropriate in form, and engaging interest;
Effective, appropriate structure with clear exposition of ideas/argument;
Language and rhetorical devices used effectively to explain, argue or
persuade;
Fluent expression capable of complex argument; occasional technical errors
will not impede expression.
Band 3 1417
Consistent focus on relevant content and form, with an appropriate sense of
audience;
Clear appropriate structure with some development;
Some language and rhetorical devices used to explain, argue or persuade;
Clear expression with some variety, with a few technical inaccuracies.
Band 4 1013
Clear focus on relevant form and content, with some appropriate sense of
audience;
Appropriate structure is in place though may not be fully consistent may
drift in and out of focus or digress at times;
Effects of language to explain, argue or persuade are attempted to some
purpose, not always fully achieved;
Clear expression, a little unvaried or with a number of technical errors
absent punctuation) which limit the ability to achieve effects.
Band 5 69
Relevant form and content with some sense of audience;
Structure may not be fully apparent may be lacking in development or
argument;
Some effects of language to explain, argue or persuade are created;
Expression is clear but may not flow easily, with frequent technical errors
absent punctuation).
Band 6 25
Work will attempt to be relevant, or a reasonable piece but not fully
appropriate to the task, and will show some grasp of the topic under
consideration;
Lacks structure, may leap from point to unconnected point, digress and
ramble;
Occasional effects of language to explain, argue or persuade are attempted;
Expression is unclear at times; technical and structural problems (confusion
of tenses, wrong subject/verb agreement, frequent spelling errors, absent
punctuation) get in the way of the flow of the whole.
Band 7 01
Work will be inappropriate to the task, confused or incoherent, with little grasp
of the topic chosen;
Weakness of organisation and technical inaccuracy (confusion of tenses,
wrong subject/verb agreement, frequent spelling errors, absent punctuation)
will seriously impede the candidates ability to create an overall impression.

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