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4 3 2 1
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The bombardment of all these words, that ceaseless yammering which failed to make any distinction between important things and unimportant things, talk that could impress you with its intelligence and perspicacity or else half bore you to death with its utter meaninglessness.
Update 1: Inexplicably shortlisted for the Booker. I'm lost for words. If only Auster had been.....
Update 2: Awarded my worst completed book of 2017 (albeit The Nix may have been a contender had I got past page 70)
The above quote sums it up well - except for the intelligence and perspicacity part, as there was little of that on show.
There are two distinct elements to 4 3 2 1 - a (painfully) detailed account of someone growing up to be a writer; and a Sliding Doors style approach where different moments cause a life to go down different paths, set against a backdrop of a turbulent period of history (here 1960s America).
"As far as I know, no one has ever written a novel with this form,” Auster said in the Guardian. Except of course they have - and they have not only done it first, they have done it much much better.
Kate Atkinson's Life after Life / A God in Ruins and Jenny Erpenbeck's Alle Tage Abend (beautifully translated by Susan Bernofsky as The End of Days) managed the bifurcation of lives much more effectively, and gave far more insight into history that Auster's trotting out of events.
And Knausgård has written such a definitive account of a writer's life from birth onwards, that anything else becomes a lightweight imitation. If Auster's historical insights were uninspiring, I'm sure Auster does have many intelligent insights into the literature that he mentions throughout the story, but he seldom shares them with us here, often simply resorting to lists of books and authors.
To be fair (assuming Auster isn't ignorant of these works) putting the two elements together is new - but the result is a tedious 200-250 page novel largely repeated four times.
And Auster clearly sides on the nature side of the nature vs. nurture debate, as despite various traumas Ferguson emerges as the same highly unpleasant character in each life version (his creepy forward-planned relationship with Celia, the 12yo sister of a recently killed friend, a particular lowpoint), and with the same oddly narrow worldview and ambition despite all the momentous events around him.
For books as elsewhere in life, length itself isn't an issue, its girth that matters. Some of the greatest novels of the 2000s weigh in much longer than this: 2666 (1126 pp), 1q84 (992pp), Your Face Tomorrow (1287pp), My Struggle (2818pp with the 1000+ volume 6 yet to come) and of course Ferrante's magnificent Neopolitan Quartet (1700 pp), but they each have depth, unique qualities, and, crucially, reading them each was pure pleasure. [Although as an aside, many of the authors choose - for their own and the reader's sanity, or in Bolano's case to maximise sales revenue - to publish them in instalments.]
Here the length is just padding. At one point we're told:
The three students who shared the apartment with them, for example fellow students named Melanie, Fred and Stu in the first year, Alice, Alex and Fred the second year, had no role to play in the story.
which rather begs the question of why mention them.
Ferguson.4, himself an author, notes at the end 'he was turning out roughly four pages for every one he kept - if only Auster had followed Ferguson.4's approach and kept only one Ferguson the novel may not have been improved, but at least it would have been mercifully shorter. And I would certainly recommend anyone still determined to read the book to pick one life (Ferguson.1 I would suggest) and read it through, skipping the other parts: if you like it then you can read the others.
Some other favourite quotes I noted while reading which really spoke to me:
Either you give in to your despair and wait for it to pass, or you burn your scarlet notebook and forget you ever had it.
Unfortunately the library might have objected if I followed the latter course, so I had to grin and bear it.
on some days he felt the book was trying to kill him. Every sentence was a struggle.
every day in fact.
Amy let out a prolonged groan and then tore in to him for wasting his time on trivial, asinine, college-boy humour.
I know how she felt.
Update 1: Inexplicably shortlisted for the Booker. I'm lost for words. If only Auster had been.....
Update 2: Awarded my worst completed book of 2017 (albeit The Nix may have been a contender had I got past page 70)
The above quote sums it up well - except for the intelligence and perspicacity part, as there was little of that on show.
There are two distinct elements to 4 3 2 1 - a (painfully) detailed account of someone growing up to be a writer; and a Sliding Doors style approach where different moments cause a life to go down different paths, set against a backdrop of a turbulent period of history (here 1960s America).
"As far as I know, no one has ever written a novel with this form,” Auster said in the Guardian. Except of course they have - and they have not only done it first, they have done it much much better.
Kate Atkinson's Life after Life / A God in Ruins and Jenny Erpenbeck's Alle Tage Abend (beautifully translated by Susan Bernofsky as The End of Days) managed the bifurcation of lives much more effectively, and gave far more insight into history that Auster's trotting out of events.
And Knausgård has written such a definitive account of a writer's life from birth onwards, that anything else becomes a lightweight imitation. If Auster's historical insights were uninspiring, I'm sure Auster does have many intelligent insights into the literature that he mentions throughout the story, but he seldom shares them with us here, often simply resorting to lists of books and authors.
To be fair (assuming Auster isn't ignorant of these works) putting the two elements together is new - but the result is a tedious 200-250 page novel largely repeated four times.
And Auster clearly sides on the nature side of the nature vs. nurture debate, as despite various traumas Ferguson emerges as the same highly unpleasant character in each life version (his creepy forward-planned relationship with Celia, the 12yo sister of a recently killed friend, a particular lowpoint), and with the same oddly narrow worldview and ambition despite all the momentous events around him.
For books as elsewhere in life, length itself isn't an issue, its girth that matters. Some of the greatest novels of the 2000s weigh in much longer than this: 2666 (1126 pp), 1q84 (992pp), Your Face Tomorrow (1287pp), My Struggle (2818pp with the 1000+ volume 6 yet to come) and of course Ferrante's magnificent Neopolitan Quartet (1700 pp), but they each have depth, unique qualities, and, crucially, reading them each was pure pleasure. [Although as an aside, many of the authors choose - for their own and the reader's sanity, or in Bolano's case to maximise sales revenue - to publish them in instalments.]
Here the length is just padding. At one point we're told:
The three students who shared the apartment with them, for example fellow students named Melanie, Fred and Stu in the first year, Alice, Alex and Fred the second year, had no role to play in the story.
which rather begs the question of why mention them.
Ferguson.4, himself an author, notes at the end 'he was turning out roughly four pages for every one he kept - if only Auster had followed Ferguson.4's approach and kept only one Ferguson the novel may not have been improved, but at least it would have been mercifully shorter. And I would certainly recommend anyone still determined to read the book to pick one life (Ferguson.1 I would suggest) and read it through, skipping the other parts: if you like it then you can read the others.
Some other favourite quotes I noted while reading which really spoke to me:
Either you give in to your despair and wait for it to pass, or you burn your scarlet notebook and forget you ever had it.
Unfortunately the library might have objected if I followed the latter course, so I had to grin and bear it.
on some days he felt the book was trying to kill him. Every sentence was a struggle.
every day in fact.
Amy let out a prolonged groan and then tore in to him for wasting his time on trivial, asinine, college-boy humour.
I know how she felt.
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"Amy let out a prolonged groan and then tore in to him for wasting his time on trivial, asinine, college-boy humour."
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"Glass half full: only 200 pages to go
Glass half empty: about to read a 200 page novel by an author whose previous three 200 pages novels about the same characters I found tedious."
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"Either you give in to your despair and wait for it to pass, or you burn your scarlet notebook and forget you ever had it.
Suspect the library may object if I follow the latter course, so guess I need to wait 150 pages for it to pass."
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Suspect the library may object if I follow the latter course, so guess I need to wait 150 pages for it to pass."
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"on some days he felt the book was trying to kill him. Every sentence was a struggle"
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"'he was turning out roughly four pages for every one he kept'
If only Auster had followed Ferguson.4 's approach and kept one of the 4 Fergusons."
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If only Auster had followed Ferguson.4 's approach and kept one of the 4 Fergusons."
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Great review, thank you, Paul! As to the quote "The three students who shared the apartment with them, for example fellow students named Melanie, Fred and Stu in the first year, Alice, Alex and Fred the second year, had no role to play in the story.":
I think what Auster does here is symptomatic for the whole text, as he hints at people or events that might have influenced one of the Fergusons, but in the end didn't - so while I think that the purpose is to heighten the reader's awareness of life's many possibilities, both realized and not realized, this technique becomes overbearing, and the resulting distractions from the main story become more and more annoying over the course of the book. Auster does something similar when it comes to mentioning minor details, which he does excessively to point out that all the little things count…
I think what Auster does here is symptomatic for the whole text, as he hints at people or events that might have influenced one of the Fergusons, but in the end didn't - so while I think that the purpose is to heighten the reader's awareness of life's many possibilities, both realized and not realized, this technique becomes overbearing, and the resulting distractions from the main story become more and more annoying over the course of the book. Auster does something similar when it comes to mentioning minor details, which he does excessively to point out that all the little things count…
What I do get is the feeling that History of Wolves - which I am now reading - is a wonderful book. Keep having to remind myself that it isn't - it only feels great in relative terms!
Meike wrote: "Great review, thank you, Paul! As to the quote "The three students who shared the apartment with them, for example fellow students named Melanie, Fred and Stu in the first year, Alice, Alex and Fre..."
It wasn't just the characters though it was the level of unnecessary detail in every aspect of the book. Felt like he had set out to write a 800 page novel and the only way he could find to do it was first include every vaguely relevant point and second repeat it all four times.
I think to be fair to Auster, he is only doing what Knausgård does with the detail. But then Knausgård does it more explicitly - that is the point of his book - and much much better.
It wasn't just the characters though it was the level of unnecessary detail in every aspect of the book. Felt like he had set out to write a 800 page novel and the only way he could find to do it was first include every vaguely relevant point and second repeat it all four times.
I think to be fair to Auster, he is only doing what Knausgård does with the detail. But then Knausgård does it more explicitly - that is the point of his book - and much much better.
Paul, I agree that this phenomenon expands way beyond the depiction of characters, and this is sad because I think the story did have potential and text also did have its moments.
Unfortunately, I haven't read Knausgård yet, so I can't compare him to Auster. What I have read though is "History of Wolves", and believe me, it is not a wonderful book, so keep reminding yourself! :-)
Unfortunately, I haven't read Knausgård yet, so I can't compare him to Auster. What I have read though is "History of Wolves", and believe me, it is not a wonderful book, so keep reminding yourself! :-)
History of Wolves has divided opinion. But I am with Meike - it is NOT a wonderful book. But given our recent experience with Sorry To..., maybe you will love it! I didn't hate this one like you did, but I certainly don't have it down as shortlist material.
There were definitely some intriguing Eileen / Helen hints to start with, although it has faded a little as I'm halfway through.
But I think it does round out the longlist nicely in terms of being very different, an easy read and at least a book to discuss. Look at the discussions and questions on that one on the two Booker forums vs. 4 3 2 1 where one reads 800 pages and the only question at the end is 'why did I bother'.
But I think it does round out the longlist nicely in terms of being very different, an easy read and at least a book to discuss. Look at the discussions and questions on that one on the two Booker forums vs. 4 3 2 1 where one reads 800 pages and the only question at the end is 'why did I bother'.
My thoughts:
When 4321 was longlisted I think both Neil and I commented almost immediately that although we had enjoyed the book - it was not one we could recommend to others and also not one we hoped would be longlisted. I still stand by that - as I have mentioned elsewhere I read the book effectively in a single sitting on a very long plane flight and (probably helped by some champagne) found it an enjoyable way to pass the time. However its I think very telling that its the only longlisted book I had already read which I did not want to re-read. I think I would have found it a lot more frustrating if I had read it over my train commute and would have just wanted it to finish.
When 4321 was longlisted I think both Neil and I commented almost immediately that although we had enjoyed the book - it was not one we could recommend to others and also not one we hoped would be longlisted. I still stand by that - as I have mentioned elsewhere I read the book effectively in a single sitting on a very long plane flight and (probably helped by some champagne) found it an enjoyable way to pass the time. However its I think very telling that its the only longlisted book I had already read which I did not want to re-read. I think I would have found it a lot more frustrating if I had read it over my train commute and would have just wanted it to finish.
History of Wolves - not I think good enough to be longlisted: the judges seem to have longlisted it more for its sense of place, which did not really work for me (perhaps in the same way Reservoir 13 does not seem to have worked for non-UK readers).
However when I read it (just a day or so after the longlist) I said immediately it would have been a great book club choice.
The discussions subsequently on the Booker forums - which are far more detailed than I think on any other book on the longlist - have proved this I think, and I feel like I have read the book 2-3 times due to looking back over it so as to discuss/debate the relations between what can initially seem like three different storylines (the cult, the predatory teacher, the young boy).
However when I read it (just a day or so after the longlist) I said immediately it would have been a great book club choice.
The discussions subsequently on the Booker forums - which are far more detailed than I think on any other book on the longlist - have proved this I think, and I feel like I have read the book 2-3 times due to looking back over it so as to discuss/debate the relations between what can initially seem like three different storylines (the cult, the predatory teacher, the young boy).
If I found myself on a long flight with only 4 3 2 1 for company, then I am pretty confident I would spend 12 hours reading the safety card.
Meike, your comment on Pauls review makes a very astute, and I think correct observation " I think what Auster does here is symptomatic for the whole text, as he hints at people or events that might have influenced one of the Fergusons, but in the end didn't - so while I think that the purpose is to heighten the reader's awareness of life's many possibilities, both realized and not realized,
It's often said that there's a novel that could be written about each one of us, and sometimes it's the ordinary and the banal, and particularly the element of chance, of luck (Auster's theme), that intrigues.
I agree with you, Paul, that Auster is at best guilty of hyperbole, and at worst wilful arrogance, when he says nobody has previously written a novel in this form. It recalls an author recently using the (non) term 'annihilated perspective' to describe her work in an effort to generate some extra cachet, or publicity, for her work.
Just because the 'Sliding Doors' technique has been used before doesn't mean it's not a great wrap around a storyline. The authors and books you mention here are mostly excellent, but while their structure has similarities, the individual stories differ vastly.
The problem with 4321 is one of length. Reading books is a major time commitment and 880 pages is just too long. For Auster this is in part indulgence- as an established author he calls the tune to publishers and editors alike. It's also a valedictory work, as a man in his seventies he thinks it may be his last.
Paul, you refer to the greatest works of the 2000's in the context of book length. For starters to include Ferrante's Neapolitan stories in this mix is hyperbole worthy of Auster himself. More to the point is that the Neapolitan stories are four separate stories. There is no single book comparable with 4321, and the Neapolitan sequence constitute a whole life story. Auster focuses in close, minute, detail, on a limited part of the various Fergusons lifetimes. That's deliberate, and interestingly different.
It's often said that there's a novel that could be written about each one of us, and sometimes it's the ordinary and the banal, and particularly the element of chance, of luck (Auster's theme), that intrigues.
I agree with you, Paul, that Auster is at best guilty of hyperbole, and at worst wilful arrogance, when he says nobody has previously written a novel in this form. It recalls an author recently using the (non) term 'annihilated perspective' to describe her work in an effort to generate some extra cachet, or publicity, for her work.
Just because the 'Sliding Doors' technique has been used before doesn't mean it's not a great wrap around a storyline. The authors and books you mention here are mostly excellent, but while their structure has similarities, the individual stories differ vastly.
The problem with 4321 is one of length. Reading books is a major time commitment and 880 pages is just too long. For Auster this is in part indulgence- as an established author he calls the tune to publishers and editors alike. It's also a valedictory work, as a man in his seventies he thinks it may be his last.
Paul, you refer to the greatest works of the 2000's in the context of book length. For starters to include Ferrante's Neapolitan stories in this mix is hyperbole worthy of Auster himself. More to the point is that the Neapolitan stories are four separate stories. There is no single book comparable with 4321, and the Neapolitan sequence constitute a whole life story. Auster focuses in close, minute, detail, on a limited part of the various Fergusons lifetimes. That's deliberate, and interestingly different.
Yes I did sneak in Ferrante (although based on my personal view of the books she belongs there).
But the Neopolitan stories aren't four separate stories, they are one novel simply published in 4 instalments. The gap in the narrative between the end of the 1st book and the start of the 2nd is less than the gap between chapters in a conventional book - other than a quick introductory chapter, the 2nd book resumes, literally seconds later, as if it were the next sentence of the 1st.
'Auster focuses in close, minute, detail, on a limited part of the various Fergusons lifetimes. That's deliberate, and interestingly different' - except that is what Knausgard did in each book and far far better.
I also don't think length is totally the problem - I had lost interest by 100 pages - although difficult admittedly to tell how much that was due to knowing there was 700 pages more to come.
But the Neopolitan stories aren't four separate stories, they are one novel simply published in 4 instalments. The gap in the narrative between the end of the 1st book and the start of the 2nd is less than the gap between chapters in a conventional book - other than a quick introductory chapter, the 2nd book resumes, literally seconds later, as if it were the next sentence of the 1st.
'Auster focuses in close, minute, detail, on a limited part of the various Fergusons lifetimes. That's deliberate, and interestingly different' - except that is what Knausgard did in each book and far far better.
I also don't think length is totally the problem - I had lost interest by 100 pages - although difficult admittedly to tell how much that was due to knowing there was 700 pages more to come.
I do love the way that you two have managed to re ignite your Rachel cusk and Elena ferrante debates as part of a review of a Paul auster novel.
Paul, when "Go Set a Watchman" came out, several of my reading friends said I HAD to read it to understand how truly awful it was. And they were right. Is 4-3-2-1 like that, truly truly abysmally awful that I must read it?
How many days it took you to finish this up and also could you please name me 2-3 books that has chance to win Booker this year :)
About 4, but I skim read parts.
My twin read it in a day and more thoroughly albeit on a 12 hour flight.
My twin read it in a day and more thoroughly albeit on a 12 hour flight.
hahaha this review was spot on. It also brought a smile to my face. Idk why I was so stubborn and dragged myself on to finish this book.
Paul, just finished this. I read it because you gave it one star, 2 other goodreads readers I also depend on for great insight gave it 2 stars, and one reader 4 stars. Review to come. Oh how I loved it until....
I loved it anyway. And about my "until...." well, the last chapter at first felt odd, but then I thought about it and realized Auster could have done billions of things, and had to chose one, so why not that one?