It's a new year, and I'm trying to do writer's workshop in my class. This week is the first week I'm taking journals home and reading what the kids have written. Tonight I read the first 6, and I must say that I'm impressed with the creativity so far. Here are some of my favorite quotes:
"We call it my mom's room because my dad snores really loud and sleeps with Maggie the tiny pup and Coco the lovebug dog in the guestroom."
"If we didn't have love their would only be hate and that's horible. So the world has love and hate not just one." (Note: this is pre-editing stage)
"People had told me that Mrs. Dalton is a very very nice teacher. At first I did not belive them at first. But now I know that she is the nicest teacher of 3rd grade and 4th grade." Aww, I'm blushing!
I also have a story about a green, egg-like rock that a rock collector discovers. One day it cracked, and a blaze of fire came from it. Out of the flame came a baby dragon. This story is not complete yet, but it's interesting. It even has ghosts that the dragon and boy fight while they ride!
My last story is called Penguin Wars. I need to check this, but the kid has to have parents in the military. The penguins are fighting "terrist seals" that invaded Iraq and Afganastan. He uses actual ranks (Private Flipper, Tank Sgt. Beak, etc) and actual weapons. He did ask me if a nuclear weapon would be appropriate, and we decided to play it safe and change it to a water bomb. This is a chapter book.
We'll see what tomorrow's journals bring!