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* Hi [[User:Woodroar]], seconding Protonk's question. I appreciate your feedback, but you haven't presented me with any actionable changes that I can make to my draft. You referred to several BLP claims that I made, and I would love to change them, but you didn't tell me what they are. Telling me my draft is terrible without making suggestions on how to improve it isn't really helpful. [[User:Kaciemonster|Kaciemonster]] ([[User talk:Kaciemonster#top|talk]]) 16:10, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
** Actually, they didn't tell ''you'' the draft was terrible. They slagged it off on the talk page for the article, then posted this rather more polite notice here. [[User:Protonk|Protonk]] ([[User talk:Protonk|talk]]) 16:18, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
::I'm sorry, that was a combination of being short on time and hoping it would be obvious to avoid specifically restating BLP violations. I mostly take issue with quotes attributed to Quinn, an accusation that she "sabotaged" a game jam to promote herself (with no context or explanation to explain how, this could mean ''anything''), and an accusation that she was behind a DDoS—a federal crime handled by the US DOJ—all based on an interview in an unreliable source. And in the GameJournoPros section, we link to ''Breitbart'' and their selective/context-free publication of leaked emails, which is problematic for BLP and copyright reasons. The only BLP compliant statement I see from TFYC is their opinion on the Vivian James character. I do find the draft terrible for other reasons—primarily UNDUE—but drafts exist to work on things like that. (If it matters, I would similarly consider my own past drafts terrible until they meet core content policies.) But unreliably-sourced/SPS negative BLP claims shouldn't exist in a draft, even if they're going to be removed or properly sourced at a later time. I hope this helps. [[User:Woodroar|Woodroar]] ([[User talk:Woodroar|talk]]) 16:34, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
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