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Teacher Assessments this

week (19.3.23) - areas of


focus
Reading
- Simile, hyperbole, oxymoron, personification
- Sibilance, alliteration, assonance, onomatopoeia
- Effects of techniques
- character/writer feelings
- Effect on the reader
- Inference
- Building up emotions
- Linking paragraphs and transitions
- Dashes
- Dramatic effect
Alliteration Assonance Dash
The repetition of the same The repetition of vowel Used to separate a
letter or sound at the sounds in several words sentence where there is an
beginning of words next to next to or close to each interruption that disrupts
or close to each other. other. the flow.

Onomatopoeia Oxymoron Hyperbole


the formation of a word A two word phrase using Exaggeration for effect.
from a sound associated two opposite words next to
with what is named. each other.

Personification Simile
Giving human qualities to A comparison of one thing
animals, objects or ideas. with another using ‘like’ or
‘as’; used to highlight a
Sibilance particular quality.
Repetition of the soft s/z
sound.
It’s all about the writer…and the effects!

entices compares ponders focuses exposes echoes

depicts accentuates undermines recounts symbolises


alternates
represents
reveals asks foreshadows reminisces
asserts
begins
amplifies glorifies strengthens
challenges
argues scrutinises reflects
attacks contrasts questions
connects justifies provokes
praises
celebrates heightens laments
relates mourns
paints
heralds
alludes implies
criticises manipulates
juxtaposes
glamorizes
insinuates embodies illuminates illustrates links
… and the effect on the reader.
Creates an
atmosphere of Makes the reader Reveals a new
… reassess who has facet of …
their sympathy …
Causes us to
Reminds the
question the
Instead of: reader of …
motives of …
“makes the reader want to
read on”
Creates a motif Develops the
try using:
of … idea that …
Reinforces the Illustrates the
reader’s suspicion character’s feelings
that … towards …
Allows the reader
Intensifies the a greater
sense of … understanding
Emphasises the of ...
idea that …
Analysing structure
Why do we change
Use of paragraphs paragraph?

Remember TiPToP
– Ti – Time. When there is a change
in time, start a new paragraph.
– P – Place. When there is a change
in place, start a new paragraph
– To – Topic. When there is a change
in topic/idea, start a new
paragraph
– P – Person. When there is a
change in person (applies to
dialogue as well), start a new
paragraph
Writing - Reviews!
Include a range of
Success Criteria:
persuasive
★ Title and subtitles devices
★ Introduction
Adapt your
★ Overview of the plot/activity (thing you are language
reviewing) - information
★ Describing the different elements of what you are Use complex
reviewing (advising if the reader needs to do sentences
anything)
★ Personal opinion - best and worst bits Use ambitious
★ Conclusion - recommendations and who it should adjectives to
be aimed at show your
★ Star Rating (out of five) personal opinion
Rhetorical
Power of three Opinions
questions

Emotive
language Alliteration
Review techniques

Statistics
First person

Puns
Anecdotes
Your
task:-

An exhibition, in the most general


sense, is an organized
presentation and display of a
selection of items. In practice,
exhibitions usually occur within a
cultural or educational setting such
as a museum, art gallery, park,
library, exhibition hall, or World's
fairs.
Writing your review

Science exhibition examples:- Famous Science museums:-

★ AI ★ Hong Kong
★ Planets/stars/the solar ★ London
system/the galaxy ★ Boston
★ The human body ★ NEMO, Amsterdam
★ Animals ★ Valencia
★ Earth’s natural history ★ MET, New York
★ Dinosaurs
Museum virtual tours - watch
these and make notes

Washington D.C. - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fdcEKPS6tOQ

London - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8_NeV2uCB7U

NEMO, Amsterdam - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zalYEU0K0YQ

Valencia - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNI55IkRews

Singapore - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b7TAXcmnORU

Hong Kong - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iYjA_YvU3HU


Example Reviews
RIP OFF ALERT !!!!! This museum was awesome, they had different parts of
I have been quite a few times in my life to the science museum and this time will be the
last. science divided and a lot of things to look at and
We arrived outside expecting to walk in .. instead you had to use your phone for a QR information to read. The space part is a little bit dark and
code then buy tickets which were free anyway.. all this outside in the cold.
the medicine and human body exhibit can have some
What a load of utter nonsense ...
We both found the atmosphere dark and grim and uninspiring to say the least.. exhibits things you'd rather not look at, but overall it was
were hard to see and read.. wonderful.
We looked and were disgusted by the latest exhibits descriptions on Covid 19 vaccines ..
where it is now generally known there is no science on this subject and the experiment is
I recommend taking a map and looking at the different
still ongoing .,. this contradicts the exhibit on how drugs are developed .. my partner is a
Pharmacist she pointed this out exhibits, because this way I could skip the interactive bits
Now comes the BIG RIP OFF focused for kids, partly because it was paid and partly
We arrived at the shake place on the top floor my partner fancied an overpriced coffee
and used one of the boards to pay at ... put the details in and the board said the order
because when I was there (Friday morning) a lot of
had timed out .. so she entered all her details again and it paid primary schools had an excursion there too, so a lot of
Luckily she was awake enough to check her account there and then kids were there at the interactive things.
sure enough it had take in out TWICE .not amused she informed the staff at the counter
and demanded a refund .. and got it in cash
How many people on that day especially tourists had been ripped off in this way ????
I really loved all the information and things I learned.
The museum must know its goes on as it would show up in the accounts .. Restaurant and shop were really great and the staff was
So if you have been recently nice.
CHECK YOUR BANK STATEMENT ASAP

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