Eng Lang
Eng Lang
Eng Lang
LANGUAGE
DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITION
MUST BE AGE APPROPRIATE
VERY BRIEF BUILT-UP TO THE SITUATION
VIVID DESCRIPTION,
ATTENTION TO MINUTE AND SIGNIFICANT DETAIL
ARRANGEMENT OF INFORMATION
USE OF APPROPRIATE ADJECTIVES
AVOID USE OF VAGUE ADJECTIVES (E.g. the word 'good' for anything satisfying, or
'awesome')
DESCRIPTION APPEALING TO SENSE ORGANS
USE OF SIMILE, METAPHOR (not too many)
UNSEEN PASSAGE: QUESTIONS (INFERRING
AND ANALYSING OR RECALLING AND
REPLICATING?
1. Describe the pebble. Where was it stuck?
2 Why was the pebble particularly dangerous?
3. What was happening to the narrator's hands?
What do unsteady hands reveal about the narrator?
(11) "I think it's a pebble." I gasped. "Right inside his larynx. I'll have get it out."
(12) | seized a pair of scissors and clipped away the hair from the ventral surface of the larynx. I dared not use a general anesthetic, and
therefore I infiltrated the area with local before swabbing with antiseptic.
(13) "Hold his head steady," I said hoarsely, and gripped a scalpel. I cut down through skin, fascia, and the thin layers of the muscle until the
ventral surface of the larynx was revealed.
(14) And there it was. A pebble night enough-gray and glistening and tiny, but big enough to kill.
(15) I had to fish it out quickly and cleanly without pushing it into the trachea. I leaned back and rummaged in the tray until I found some
broad-bladed forceps, then I poised them over the wound. Great surgeons' hands, I felt sure, didn't shake like this.
(16) I clenched my teeth, introduced the forceps, and my hand magically steadied as I clamped them over the pebble.
(17) I didn't breathe at all as I bore the shining little object slowly and lenderly through the opening and dropped it with a gentle rat-tat or the
table.
UNSEEN PASSAGE: MEANINGS IN CONTEXT
(RECALLING OR DEDUCING?)
Given below are three words and phrases. Find the words which have a similar meaning in the passage
seced (grabbed)
2 picked up (iffed)
3. fral-weak (feeble)
That same evening, about eight o'clock, the doorbell rang. I answered it and found Roddy on the front doorstep. Behind
him, stood the ubiquitous pram. One look at the prone dog warned me that something was terribly wrong.
(7) I threw the door wide open. "Bring him in."
(8) I grabbed the animal round the middle and we lifted him onto the table. I watched in disbelief as the huge form lay
there. There was no fight for breath, he was unconscious. His pulse was rapid and feeble, yet he didn't breathe.
(9) Understanding the symptoms, I said, "Roddy, he is chokin I'm going to have a look at his throat."
(10) I pushed Jake's jaws apart, depressed his tongue with forefinger, and shone my torch into the depths. He was the of
good-natured dog who offered no resistance as I prodded around. I shall always be thankful that at that very instant the
dog coughed, opening up the cartilages of the larynx and giving me a glimpse of the cause of all the trouble. There.
beyond the drooping epiglottis, I saw for a fleeting moment a smooth round object no bigger than a pea.
QUESTION ONE
20 MARKS
[RECOMMENDED TIME - 45 MINS]
(a) The quality of the language employed, the range and appropriateness of vocabulary and sentence structure, syntax, the
correctness of grammatical constructions, punctuation and spelling.
(b) The degree to which candidates have been Successful in organising the content
Narration
Connections He slowly unfolded the paper. / The paper was slowly unfolded by
him.
Diferentiate/Distinguish Variation:
Compare/Contrast A ball of paper rolled to his feet. He picked it up. He looked around
and decided to see what it said. He studied it curiously. He slowly
• Implement unfolded the paper.
A ball of paper rolled to his feet. He picked it up, looked around and
Choice-style, expression decided to see what it said. Studying it curiously, he slowly unfolded
the paper.
ISC Paper 1-Q3 They suggested we walk through the woods.
They said.......... They said, "We should walk through the woods."
OR They said, "Let us walk through the woods." (?)
Phrasal Verbs:
• Tenses
NARRATIVE COMPOSITION
APPROPRIATE
VERY BRIEF BUILD UP TO THE SITUATION
P SEQUENCE OF EVENTS WITH SOME REFERENCE TO EVENTS HAPPENING BEFORE
LISE OF SOME DESCRIPTION OF A PLACE, PEOPLE, SURROUNDING, BEHAVIOUR)
INVOLVEMENT OF SELF
ALLOW SOME OTHER PERSON TO HAVE A SHARE OF CREDIT FOR HEROICS
APPROPRIATE SUMMING UP AND A PROPER ENDING
EXPRESSION-USE OF COMPLEX, COMPOUND SENTENCES
USE OF ADVERBS
AVOID REPETITION OF WORDS (e.g. AND, THEN)
USE LINKERS
ARGUMENTATIVE
COMPOSITION
MAY BEGIN WITH AN INCIDENT, ANECDOTE, NEWS ITEM AND OTHER
REFERENCE TO PROVE A STAND
TAKE THE STAND AT THE VERY BEGINNING-ONE DEFINITE STAND STATED
CLEARLY
ESTABLISH STAND THROUGH EXAMPLE, JUSTIFICATION, ARGUMENT (AT LEAST
BETTER NOT TO CONTRADICT OWN STAND AT ANY POINT(It may create confusion)
TOUCH OF HUMOUR PREFERABLE
TONE MUST BE ASSERTIVE BUT NOT DIDACTIC
DISCURSIVE COMPOSITION
MAY COMPLETELY/PARTIALLY AGREE/DISAGREE WITH THE VIEW GIVEN IN THE
QUESTION
USE EXAMPLES (ANECDOTES, REAL/IMAGINARY INCIDENTS, NEWS REPORTS,
PERSONAL EXPERIENCE) TO JUSTIFY STAND (AT LEAST FOUR EXAMPLES)
SHOULD NOT BE A SHORT
REFLECTIVE/ EXPOSITORY
COMPOSITION
MAY BE WRITTEN AS NARRATIVE/ DESCRIPTIVE/ DISCURSIVE COMPOSITION OR
A SHORT STORY
NOT A GENERAL DISCUSSION ON THE TOPIC LIKE TEXT-BOOK INFORMATION
SOME OF THE BEST COMPOSITIONS ARE ON THIS TOPIC SINCE THE WRITER HAS
THE FREEDOM TO EXPLORE IT IN HIS/HER OWN WAY
STORY WRITING
MAY NOT BE AGE-APPROPRIATE, CAN ASSUME TO BE ELDER/ YOUNGER/ FICTITIOUS
CHARACTER
MUST BE ORIGINAL
Understanding by Design:
Backward Design
presents a framework for curriculum development
UbD: Stages of Backward Design
Stage 1-Identify desired result
Stage 2-Determine acceptable evidence
Stage 3-Plan learning experiences and instructions
QUESTION 2(I)
THE PIECE OF DIRECTED WRITING WILL BE BASED ON THE INFORMATION AND IDEAS
PROVIDED. - 15 MARKS
THE REQUIRED LENGTH WILL BE ABOUT 300 WORDS. THE RANGE OF SUBJECTS MAY
INCLUDE:
Article writing
Report writing
Book review
film review
Review of cultural programme
Speech writing
Personal profile
Statement of Purpose.
Skills such as selecting, amplifying, describing, presenting reasoned arguments, re-arranging and re-
stating may be involved. The candidates' ability in the above skills, including format, will be taken into
account as well as their ability to handle language appropriately in the context of the given situation
IMPORTANT FOR QUESTION 2
(I)
ALL POINTS GIVEN AS GUIDELINES MUST BE INCLUDED, OTHER POINTS MAY
BE ADDED
TO BE WRITTEN IN PARAGRAPHS AND NOT TOO LONG, TO WRITE WITHIN
RECOMMENDED TIME AND GIVEN WORD LIMIT.
FORMAL LANGUAGE, NO UNNECESSARY INFORMATION
MUST HAVE KNOWLEDGE OF APPROPRIATE VOCABULARY, TECHNICAL TERMS
THAT SUIT A KIND OF WRITING
AMPLIFICATION NECESSARY
NEWS REPORT
HEADLINE
SYLINE (MAY BE IMMEDIATELY BELOW HEADLINE OR THE END OF REPORT)
TIMELINE (MUST BE REMEMBERED REPORT OF INCIDENTS COMES LATER)
ASUMMARY (GIST OF THE WHOLE INCIDENT OF THE NEWS TO BE WRITTEN AS
THE OPENING SENTENCE (WHAT WHERE, WHEN
DETAILS TO FOLLOW SUBSEQUENTLY
IMPORTANT TO HAVE COMMENTS OF PEOPLE REGARDING THE INCIDENT.
EYE-WITNESS ACCOUNT
ARTICLE
HEADLINE
BY LINE
PURPOSE OF THE ARTICLE TO BE THOUGHT OF
TARGET READER TO BE KEPT IN MIND
ACCORDINGLY LANGUAGE TO BE USED
SPEECH
GREETINGS
REFERENCE TO THE OCCASION
END WITH THANKS
PERSONAL PROFILE /STATEMENT
OF PURPOSE
TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN –
AS HEADING OF THE WRITE UP
The incomplete combination The rain delayed not only the band but
Not only did the rain delay the band, (?) also the also the priest.
priest. Not only did the rain delay the band but
Word order also the priest.
Not only the rain delayed the band but also the We shall splash in the puddles and dance
priest. in the rain.
Change of tense
We shall not only splash in the puddles but
Not only will the rain delay the band... (Given also dance in the rain.
sentence is in the Past Tense)
Not only shall we splash in the puddles
Concepts: Conjunctions, Tenses,
but also dance in the rain.
Subject -Verb (inversion)
A: The stranger had walked off, and just
A: They want popcorn and ice-cream. then my eyes fell on the wallet on the
ground.
B: Not only...
B: No sooner
Not only do they want popcorn but also ice-
cream. No sooner had the stranger walked off than
my eyes fell on the wallet on the ground.
The Perfect Continuous forms of the present, Please shut the door.
past, future cannot be transformed in this way.
You are requested to shut the door.
Leaving out the 'other': the other excludes The one in the fairy tale is one of (among) the ugliest ducklings I have seen.
comparison with the thing being compared to itself
Renu was not the cleverest girl in class.
Incorrect placement of phrase: Tiger Woods was the
most powerful golfer in the game. No other golfer Some other girls in class were cleverer than Renu.
was as powerful as Tiger Woods in the game. No Some other girls in class were as clever as Renu.
other golfer in the game was as powerful as Tiger
The brown bear is as dangerous as the black bear.
Woods.
Change of tense: transformed sentence often The black bear is not more dangerous than the brown bear.
unnecessarily is in a different tense My aunt walks as fast as my grandmother (does).
Concepts: Adjectives, Adverbs, their Degrees of
My grandmother does not walk faster than my aunt (does).
Comparison, Negative and Affirmative Sentences
Double Comparatives (more greater) and Double
superlatives (most prettiest) must be avoided.
A: The yellow flower was prettier than the A: The climbers will have scaled the peak.
buds.
B: The peak...............
B: The buds
The peak will have been scaled by the
The buds were not as pretty as the yellow climbers.
flower.
Sequence of tenses in Conditional Sentences: If In spite of the fact that she apologised, we did not
I knew her address, I would have written to her. make up. (Verb)
(would write) Notwithstanding that she apologised, we did not make
up.
If I would have known-her address, I would
have written to her. (had known) Brush your teeth in case you get cavities.
Concepts: Conditional words, Sequence of Tenses, Brush your teeth, lest you get cavities.
Dependent/Independent Clauses (for mandatory Brush your teeth, lest you should get cavities.
punctuation)
TRANSFORMATION OF SENTENCES:
OUGHT, LITTLE DID/ DOES One should steel oneself for the worst.
The poor man has no idea that his car has been stolen.
Little does the man know that his car has been stolen.
TRANSFORMATION OF SENTENCES:
RATHER, PREFER
She likes dancing more than she likes painting.
Vocabulary
Comprehension of given matter: read, infer, apply
Summarising main points of significant section of passage