Email Etiquette
Email Etiquette
Email Etiquette
Importance
Represent self to
Teachers Professors Bosses Potential Employers
Maintain relationships Communicate quickly and efficiently Being a 21st century communicator
Focus Areas
Email address Subject line Salutation (introduction) Body
Tone Signature
Email Address
Use for communicating with teachers, employers, professors Contain name or initials of name Colleges will give a school address. inappropriate words ([email protected]) difficult or long symbols/words immature-sounding titles ([email protected]) personal information beyond name
Do Not Use
First Impressions
[email protected] [email protected] assignment i cant find the assignment u gave in class. can you send me a new one? thanx.
First Impressions
[email protected] [email protected] zero U gave me a zero! i reely dont think that was fare. i have worked so hard to imprve on my writing this year.
True Story
A guidance counselor s best student, the valedictorian of the senior class, was not receiving any replies from colleges to which she was applying What can we learn from this?!
Subject Line
Monday assignment
Don t use Hey! Re: I was wondering if you could give me an extension
Salutation
Often forgotten Important for setting tone Respectful Be mindful of titles and spelling names correctly! If you don t know the gender, use the first and the last name together or a title.
Salutations
[email protected] [email protected] Yesterdays meeting Dear Terry Smith,
Um
[email protected] [email protected] hey hey, I was wondering if you had a Moodle site? Thanx.
Much Better
[email protected] [email protected] teacher recommendations Ms. Winter, Good morning! I was wondering if you could let me know if the teacher recommendations are in my file. I appreciate all you are doing to help me out with my college admission! Thank you. Hershey Student
Great Example
[email protected] [email protected] Middle East lecture question Dr. Kline, I appreciated your lecture yesterday, but I was confused about one point you made about the recent history of the Mongols. Will you be in your office during the afternoon so that I could stop by? Thanks for your time. {Responsible and Mature Duke Student}
Tone
Respectful, Friendly, Approachable (FAR) AVOID UPPERCASE LETTERS AS IT FEELS TO THE READER THAT YOU ARE SHOUTING! no u didn t rite ur tchr like this. U r asking fr trubl. (Fleming) Read over once before sending.
Formality
Better to be more formal in tone and salutation than less Take cues from response Emoticons: only appropriate when initiated by the authority or other person in the professional environment Be as positive as possible to avoid a miscommunication of tone
Fonts
Easy to read
Trebuchet
Arial Black
Length
Motto: as short as possible Do not ramble! If longer than one screen length
call the person email only to suggest a meeting time/place summarize your purpose in the first lines and explain why the long email is necessary
To short
[email protected] [email protected] gone
crowley, gone tomorrow. back next week. will get missed work.
Sent from my iphone 12:00 a.m.
Too Long
[email protected] [email protected] absence from class
Mrs. Crowley, Hello! I just wanted to let you know that I might be missing class tomorrow (even though I dont want to!) because I have a problem with my ankle. It has swollen to be the size of a grapefruit and I cant get the swelling to go down with ice. The doctor has recommended a CAT scan (scary!). My mom said she had one recently and it wasnt bad, but I get scared of small spaces. I hope it goes well. Anyway, I have to miss your class tomorrow but Ill get the notes from Angie when I see her on Saturday at work. By then my ankle should be better and Ill be back in class on Monday. Thanks for taking the time to read my book! haha, sometimes I tend to ramble (as you have probably noticed in class). Anyway, see you then! Way Too Much Time and Energy on My Hands
Perfect
[email protected] [email protected] absence Mrs. Crowley, I wanted to let you know that I will be missing class tomorrow because of a doctors appointment. However, I will be back in class on Monday with my note. If I dont hear from you I will check with my classmates for the missed assignments and notes. Thanks for your time! Got it Together
Signature
Brianna Crowley Hershey High School English Dept. 1142 Be the change you wish to see in the world. ~Gandhi
contact email or phone title or position in business room number and/or building location personal tag (if professional)
Signature
Don t make it too long! Don t make it into a rsum. Don t give out too much personal information.
This is an actual example with information substituted to protect the digitally arrogant.
Peter D. Important, Ph.D. Kennedy Professor and Vice Chair of Everything Director, Division of Shipping and Handling Department of Life changing Events Director, Graduate Program in Finding the Real You Fifty States University College of Doctorates Phone: 717-123-45678 Fax: 717-987-6543 Email: [email protected]
Colbert Agrees!
McKay, Dawn Rosenberg. "Email Etiquette - Why Is It Important?." Career Planning Career Planning Guide. 11 Sep. 2009 <http://careerplanning.about.com/od/communication/a/email_etiquette.htm>. Fleming, Grace. "Email Tips for Teens." Homework Tips - Help With Homework. 11 Sep. 2009 <http://homeworktips.about.com/b/2009/07/18/email-tips-for-teens.htm>. Brizee, Allen . "Email Etiquette for Students - The OWL at Purdue." Welcome to the Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL). 11 Sep. 2009 <http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/694/01/>.
All of the previous students who made this presentation so valuable. All of the people who send me the most annoying email communication possible thank you for being the impetus for this body of work.