Borrowing Ideas
Borrowing Ideas
Borrowing Ideas
- year of publication,
HERE’S HOW:
• First of all, make sure that you understand the source passage.
STEP 4: Write the paraphrase. Use your own words and do not
omit any essential ideas.
HOW TO PARAPHRASE
AND
opened to the public in 1950, and Brazil lost the World Cup to the
the impression that the country itself had died. And people did die
cause heart attacks and the despair of the public is so great that
many beat their heads against the cement posts. Such is the
• Outline:
• Paraphrase:
In 1950, Brazil lost the World Cup in soccer to Uruguay in Rio de Janerio.
The entire country was overcome by sadness; some people even died from
soccer games. Some people have heart attacks, and others beat their
heads against cement posts. Brazilians are very emotional about soccer.
• Original:
When Maracaña soccer stadium [in Rio de Janerio, Brazil] was opened to
the public in 1950, and Brazil lost the World Cup to the Uruguayan team,
the Brazilians were so disheartened that one had the impression that the
country itself had died. And people did die of sadness. Mere threats of
defeat in a championship match can cause heart attacks and the despair
of the public is so great that many beat their heads against the cement
posts. Such is the Brazilian’s passion for soccer.
• Paraphrase:
In 1950, Brazil lost the World Cup in soccer to Uruguay in Rio de Janerio. The entire
country was overcome by sadness; some people even died from it. Brazilians react very
strongly to potential defeat in championship soccer games. Some people have heart
attacks, and others beat their heads against cement posts. Brazilians are very emotional
about soccer.
PARAPHRASING Techniques
Tactics to rewrite
something
in a different way
Paraphrasing
4. Change to Synonyms
“I am ready
for lunch.”
Change from Active Voice to Passive Voice
• Replace the original words with words that mean the same.
The wolf complained about being hungry which made the sheep extremely
anxious.
I am ready
for Lunch
Change transitions
• This information age will cause more and more people to become
concerned with the level of personal detail that can be found from
the Internet.
Variations:
nowadays.
• This information age will cause more and more people to become
- Even more people will be worried about how much of their personal
SAMPLE PARAPHRASE
Although very few people admire B. Mussolini because of what he
has done for his country, even people who despise him accept that
the country derived great benefits from the way he fought with
Mafia. It was an obsession with Mussolini, a cruel and arrogant
dictator, that Mafia was a challenge to his authority. As he was
determined to destroy any group which he could not keep under
control, Mussolini, with the help of police officials who were
themselves quite familiar with violence, was able to control the
much feared mafia, however, for a temporary period (Flemming,
1999, p.20).