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Dear Akshay,
1) Contextual competence: contextual understanding is

good as per the observation made in most of the answers
but in some answers like answer number 3, 12 & 18 you
are not able to address all the parts of the question.
Please read the question multiple times to bring clarity.
2) Content competence: your content is good in many

answers. However in some of the answers for Eg answer
no 14, 15 & 16 need to add examples, current context, key
words, specific points etc. to improve content .
3) Presentation: Presentation is satisfactory. You can use

flow charts, schematics, maps according to the demand
of the question to improve presentation. Ex there was a
scope for maps in answer number 10 & 20.
4) Introduction: Introduction is good in most of the

answers. Good job.
5) conclusion: Conclusion is apt for most of the

questions. Well done.
6) Language & legibility: You have good grammatical

competence as sentence formation is good. Keep it up.
Keep reading, keep writing.. All the best..

Apt
introduction
Important
points
Decent
points. Can
add 1)
Against
cooperative
federalism 2)
violates
Supreme
Court
judgement
etc.
Fair
conclusion
4
Apt
introduction
Can add 1)
Article 19 also
gives
conditional
rights 2)
examples
where sec
124A has
helped us-
maoists,
secessionist
etc.
Good
coverage
Apt
4 conclusion
Well
introduced
Good points.
Can add 1)
infrequent
consultation
2) use of
ordinance
etc.
Fair
points
Not relevant
point because
parliamentary
committees
work
throughout the
year .
Can also add
1) mandatory
discussions
2) periodic
Points not
review etc.
relevant
here.
3.5
Decent
introduction
Apt points.
Can add-
crisis
management.
Decent points. Can
add- violates the
neutrality of civil
servants.
4.5
Apt
introduction
Fair points.
Can add-
citizens
empowerment
, efficient
administration
etc.
Good
points
Fairly covered.
Can add 1) data
management 2)
issues of
funding &
innovations
etc.
Aptly
covered
Decent
conclusion
4.5
Fair
introduction
Decent coverage.
Can add 1) PILs
& legislation’s
like RTI 2) 74th
Constitutional
Amendment Act,
1992 stressed on
decentralisation
and participatory
governance
Decent points
but use of
specific
examples will
make your
answer more
objective. Ex
work of CSO
like MKSS let
to RTI & that
by SPARC led
to slum
dwellers
mobilisation
etc.
Apt
conclusion.
4
Good
introduction
Satisfactory
coverage
Can use
precise
words
like-
cutting
logistics
cost etc.
Please avoid
repetition.
Relevant
points
Apt
conclusion
4.5
Apt
introduction
Fair coverage.
Can include 1)
susceptibility
to economic
shocks 2)
poverty &
indebtedness
etc.
Fair points.
Can also add
1) beneficial to
inter state
immigrants 2)
integration of
all welfare
schemes etc.
Good
conclusion
4
Good
strategy
to
introduce
with a
fact
Relevant
schematic
Can add 1)
boost revenue
of developing
countries 2)
uniformity in
global taxation
etc.
Decent points.
Can add 1)
concerns of
fiscal
autonomy 2)
negative
impact on
incoming FDI
into India etc.
Apt
conclusion
4
Relevant
introduction
Fair points.
Can add 1)
concerns
about
nuclearisati
on of
Australia 2)
concerns of
small
countries
like
Malaysia
and
Indonesia
of arms
race.
Good
points.
Can also
include 1)
India’s
need for a
peaceful
region 2)
India’s
aspiration
to become
the net
security
provider in
the region
etc.
There is a scope
of a map here.
Apt
conclusion
4
Valid
introduction
Relevant
points
Fair addressed.
Can include 1)
recommendations
of SFCs not
accepted wholly.
Relevant
point.
Decent
conclusion
.
6
Fair
introduction.
Try to keep it
short.
Not
relevant
here.
The demand of
the question is
to discuss
Can add- 1) pros & cons of
Negligence of judicial
the activism in
challenges context of
faced by separation of
Legislature power. Not
and separation of
Executive 2) power as
lack of such.
accountability
of judiciary
etc.
Can include
specific
examples like
role of
judiciary in
striking down
section 377 of
IPC, custodial
death,
encounter
killings etc.
Fair
conclusion
4.5
Good
introduction
]
Apt
points.
Can add
1) reduce
cash
hoarding
2) money
trail due
to KYC
complianc
e bank
accounts
etc.
Decent
points
covered
.
Apt
coverage
of the
issue.
Can add-
outside
the
purview
of
income
tax act.
Fairly well
conclusion
.
6.5
Valid
introduction
Should include
specific
examples like
district-level
interventions
in Agra (Uttar
Pradesh),
Bhilwara
(Rajasthan),
and
Pathanamthitta
(Kerala)
Specific
examples
can be
added like
the Odisha
government
delegated
the
Sarpanch
with the
powers of a
Magistrate to
control the
movement of
migrants.
Can add specific

points like 1)
limited say of
states add local
authority when
Disaster
Management act
has been
promulgated 2)
unilateral national
lockdown
announced by the
centre etc.
Relevant
points.
Fair
conclusion
.
5.5
Decent
introduction
Can add points

like 1) increased
public
participation 2)
communications
during crisis etc.
Apt points.
Can add 1) no
way of
constitutional
checks and
balances on
social media 2)
accountability of
independent
bodies like CBI,
CVC etc can
only be
institutional etc.
Good
schematic
.
Decent
conclusion
.
5.5
Satisfactory
introduction.
Decent
coverage
Can also add
1)
complicated
processes 2)
Challenges in
administration
of
technological
solutions
Good points
Relevant
point.
The issue
of “right
intentions”
not
addressed.
Apt
conclusion
but try to
keep it
short.
5
Apt
introduction.
Please try to
keep it short.
Fair points
Good
information. Can
add-
multidimensional
hunger;
susceptibility to
economic
shocks etc.
Relevant
points
Please bring
clarity about what
is meant by
artificial scarcity
Decent
strategy for
writing
conclusion.
6
Good
introduction.
First we need to
discuss the
meaning of
“decentralisation
of primary
healthcare”
Can write-
democratisat
ion means 1)
Proximity of
the
healthcare
centre to
community
2)
Participation
of citizens
Can discuss 1)
right to health 2)
fiscal
decentralisation
etc.
Apt use
of
example.
Fair
conclusion
.
4
Good
strategy
to start
with a
map.
Decent
efforts. Can
mention
important
Sea Line of
Communicat
ion (SLOC)
Good
points.
Can also
include 1)
India’s
need for
peaceful
region 2)
India’s
aspiration
to become
the net
security
provider
in the
region etc.
Good
points
.
Apt points.
Can add 1)
Limited naval
capacity and
lack of
military base
2) low trade
due to Tariff
and non-tariff
measures
etc.
Fair
conclusion
6
Relevant
introduction
There is
a scope
for a
map in
this
question
.
Good
points
Decent
coverage of
the issue. Can
add-
continuing
humanitarian
aid to
Afghanistan.
Apt
conclusion.

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1) Contextual competence: contextual understanding is

2) Content competence: your content is good in many

3) Presentation: Presentation is satisfactory. You can use

4) Introduction: Introduction is good in most of the

5) conclusion: Conclusion is apt for most of the

6) Language & legibility: You have good grammatical

Keep reading, keep writing.. All the best..

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