Lecture 2 - Grammar and Usage For Legal Writing
Lecture 2 - Grammar and Usage For Legal Writing
Lecture 2 - Grammar and Usage For Legal Writing
10707:
LAW STUDY SKILLS & LIBRARY
RESEARCH
( L ANGUAG E & C O M M U NI CATI O N S K I L L S C O M P ONE NT )
Hence, grammar is important for effective communication as its proper use can help us to
convey our ideas clearly, concisely, and precisely, while also enhancing our credibility and
professionalism. Therefore, it is essential to be grammatically competent, whether it is in
writing or in speech.
WHAT IS GRAMMAR?
“Grammar is to a writer what anatomy is to a sculptor, or scales to a musician. You may
loathe it, it may bore you, but nothing will replace it, and once mastered it will support you
like a rock”
~ B.J. Chute ~
Grammar influences language use at different levels. Within each level, there are certain
rules and patterns that describe how language elements can be combined and how they
relate to other elements of other levels. The chart below provides an overview of
language at the different levels.
Word
(Word classes - Parts of Speech & Meaning - Denotations and Connotations)
Phrase
(Types of phrases - Noun, Verbal, Adjective, Adverbial, Prepositional & Appositive)
Clause
(Types of Clauses - Dependent & Independent Clauses)
Sentence
(Types of Sentences, Linking Sentences, Sentence Organization & Grammatical Mood)
Discourse
(Register - Formal or Informal, Text Type & Context)
THE IMPORTANCE OF GRAMMAR
“…language is basic to almost everything we do – and the more you master it, the more
effectively you’ll think, speak, and write”
~ Bryan A. Garner ~
Grammar exists to make communication easier. It is a way to standardize how we use the
English language, which cuts down on communication errors. Hence, proper grammar is
important as it can aide effective communication in a number of ways:
Mastering grammar is fundamental for legal professionals to draft clear, precise, and
persuasive documents, ensuring effective communication and accurate interpretation of laws.
1. It ensures clarity and precision in legal documents to avoid ambiguity. For instance,
incorrect word choices can change the meaning of a sentence, potentially altering the
outcome of a case.
3. It ensures clear and correct interpretation of laws. For example, the placement of a comma,
or the use of a particular verb tense can influence how a law is understood and applied.
4. It ensures effective communication. It ensures that arguments are presented logically and
persuasively in order to be convincing.
5. It prevents misunderstandings & disputes. It can cut down on ambiguous language, which
can lead to multiple interpretations that might in turn result in costly legal battles.
THE BASIC RULES OF ENGLISH
GRAMMAR FOR LEGAL WRITING
“If you want to break the rules of grammar, first learn the rules of grammar”
~ Kurt Vonnegut ~
Having a firm grasp of legal English grammar is essential for the success of law students
and legal professionals. Here are some basic rules of English for legal writing:
1. Absolute Constructions
In legal English, absolute constructions are used to provide additional information about a
subject or a situation. They consist of a noun or pronoun followed by a participle or
participial phrase. For example;
In this example, the absolute construction is "All parties having signed the agreement." It
provides additional information about the agreement and sets the context for the main clause,
which states that the agreement is legally binding.
2. Comparisons
Incorrect: The punishment for first-degree murder is as severe or more severe than
manslaughter.
Here, the use of "as severe or more severe" creates redundancy and is grammatically
incorrect.
Correct: The punishment for first-degree murder is as severe as or more severe than
manslaughter.
In this version, the structure correctly compares the severity of the punishment for first-
degree murder and manslaughter & acknowledges the possibility that the punishment for
first-degree murder can be equal to or greater in severity than manslaughter.
3. Dangling Modifiers
Dangling modifiers occur when a modifier in a sentence does not clearly refer to the
intended subject. This can lead to confusion or unintended meanings. For example;
Incorrect: Having reviewed the case thoroughly, the court's decision was rendered.
In this example, there is a dangling modifier: "Having reviewed the case thoroughly." The
intended subject of the modifier is missing, resulting in a grammatical error. The sentence
suggests that the court's decision reviewed the case, which is illogical. The modifier should
have a subject that aligns with the main clause.
Correct: Having reviewed the case thoroughly, the judge rendered the court's
decision.
To correct the sentence and clarify the intended meaning, you need to state the subject
explicitly. In this revised sentence, it is clear that the judge reviewed the case thoroughly,
and as a result, the court's decision was rendered. The subject of the introductory phrase
("the judge") is now properly connected to the main clause, addressing the dangling modifier.
4. Sentence Fragments
Fragments are incomplete sentences that lack a subject or verb or fail to express a
complete thought. In legal writing, it is crucial to use complete sentences to ensure clarity
and precision. For example;
In this example, there is a fragment: "On the grounds of insufficient evidence and lack of
credibility." It is a prepositional phrase without a subject and verb, making it an
incomplete sentence.
Correct: The case was dismissed on the grounds of insufficient evidence and lack of
credibility.
To correct the sentence, you need to provide a subject and a verb. In this revised sentence,
the fragment is connected to the main clause, forming a complete sentence. The subject
("the case") and verb ("was dismissed") are present, allowing for a grammatically correct
sentence.
5. Inversions
Inversion involves reversing the usual word order in a sentence for emphasis or to create a
specific effect. It is commonly used in legal language for rhetorical or stylistic purposes. For
example;
Only after careful consideration of the evidence did the jury reach a verdict.
In this example, there is inversion: "Only after careful consideration of the evidence did the
jury reach a verdict." It involves reversing the typical subject-verb order in the sentence.
Inversion is commonly used in legal English for emphasis or to create a more formal or
dramatic effect. It is often employed with negative adverbs or adverbial phrases like "only,"
"never," "rarely," or "not until," as seen in this example.
Here, inversion is employed to draw attention to the adverbial phrase "only after careful
consideration of the evidence" and highlight the significance of the jury's deliberation
process before reaching a verdict.
6. Misplaced Modifiers
Incorrect: After the accident, the lawyer filed a lawsuit on behalf of the injured client
seeking compensation.
In this example, there is a misplaced modifier: "After the accident." It is intended to modify
the action of the lawyer filing a lawsuit, but it is incorrectly positioned at the beginning of
the sentence.
Correct: The lawyer filed a lawsuit on behalf of the injured client seeking compensation
after the accident.
In this revised sentence, the modifier "after the accident" is correctly placed next to the
action it modifies, which is the timing of the lawyer filing the lawsuit.
7. Mixed Conditionals
Mixed conditionals combine elements of both the present and past conditionals to express
hypothetical or contrary-to-fact situations in legal writing. For example
If the defendant had not acted negligently, the plaintiff's injuries would not be as
severe.
In this example, we have another mixed conditional sentence that combines the past unreal
condition with the present unreal result.
o The first clause, "If the defendant had not acted negligently," establishes the unreal past
condition. It presents a hypothetical situation where the defendant did act negligently.
o The second clause, "the plaintiff's injuries would not be as severe," expresses the unreal
present result. It indicates the consequence that would have occurred if the unreal past
condition were true. In this case, it suggests that the plaintiff's injuries would have been
less severe.
8. Parallelism
Incorrect: The attorney argued that the plaintiff was entitled to compensation for medical
expenses, pain and suffering, and that they should receive a fair trial.
In this example, there is a lack of parallelism in the structure of the sentence. The first two items
in the series ("compensation for medical expenses" and "pain and suffering") are presented as
noun phrases, but the third item ("that they should receive a fair trial") is presented as a full
clause. This inconsistency disrupts the parallel structure.
Correct: The attorney argued that the plaintiff was entitled to compensation for medical
expenses, pain and suffering, and a fair trial.
Here, parallelism is achieved by presenting all three items in the series using the same
grammatical structure. Each item is presented as a noun phrase ("compensation for medical
expenses," "pain and suffering," "a fair trial"). This consistent structure creates parallelism and
improves the clarity and coherence of the sentence.
9. Pronoun Antecedent Agreement
Pronoun agreement refers to using pronouns that agree in number, gender, and person with
their antecedents. For example;
In this example, there is a pronoun agreement issue. The pronoun "their" does not agree in
number with the noun it refers to, which is "attorney." "Their" is a plural pronoun, while
"attorney" is a singular noun.
To correct the pronoun agreement, you need to make the pronoun agree with its antecedent.
In this revised sentence, the pronoun "his or her" agrees in number with the singular noun
"attorney." This ensures grammatical accuracy and clarity.
10. Run-on Sentences
Run-on sentences occur when two or more independent clauses are joined without
appropriate punctuation or conjunctions. Legal writing requires clear and concise sentences
to convey information effectively. For example;
Incorrect: The defendant filed a motion to dismiss the case, the plaintiff opposed the
motion and provided additional evidence to support their claims.
In this example, there is a run-on sentence, where two independent clauses ("The defendant
filed a motion to dismiss the case" and "the plaintiff opposed the motion and provided
additional evidence to support their claims") are connected without proper punctuation or
coordination.
Correct:: The defendant filed a motion to dismiss the case, and the plaintiff opposed the
motion. The plaintiff also provided additional evidence to support their claims.
In the corrected example, the run-on sentence is corrected by separating the two
independent clauses into separate sentences. The conjunction "and" is used to connect the
actions, and appropriate punctuation is included to indicate the end of each sentence.
11. Subject-verb Agreement
Subject-verb agreement refers to matching the subject of a sentence with the appropriate
verb form in terms of number and person. In legal writing, maintaining subject-verb
agreement is crucial for clarity and grammatical accuracy. For example
In this example, there is a subject-verb agreement error. The subject "the defendant's alibi" is
singular, but the verb "were" is in the plural form. This inconsistency in number between the
subject and the verb creates a grammatical error.
To correct the sentence, you need to make the verb agree with the subject. In the corrected
example, the subject-verb agreement is corrected by using the singular form of the verb
"was" to match the singular subject "the defendant's alibi.“
12. Subjunctives
The subjunctive mood is used in legal language to express hypothetical, unreal, or contrary-
to-fact situations. It is often employed in legal provisions, contracts, and legal opinions. For
example;
Here, the subjunctive mood is used to emphasize the importance of the defendant's presence
in court. It conveys that the defendant's presence is required or strongly recommended. The
use of the subjunctive mood helps to convey the desired tone and intention in legal writing,
ensuring clear communication of obligations or recommendations.
13. Transitional Signal
Transitional words are useful in legal writing to establish logical connections between ideas,
indicate cause and effect, and provide smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs.
For example;
In this example, "Furthermore" is a transition word that connects the information presented
in the previous sentence with new information. It indicates that the information to follow is
adding on or reinforcing the point made previously.
"Furthermore," "Moreover," "In addition," and "Additionally" are commonly used in legal
writing to enhance the clarity and coherence of the text by showing the relationship
between ideas and helping readers navigate through the content.
14. Conjunctions
Conjunctions are essential in legal writing to establish logical connections between ideas,
indicate cause and effect, and provide smooth transitions between clauses. For example;
In this example, "but" is a conjunction that joins two contrasting ideas. It indicates a
contradiction or opposition between the defendant's claim of self-defense and the
prosecution's argument of premeditation.
Here, "but" is used as a coordinating conjunction to connect two contrasting statements made
by the defendant and the prosecution. It highlights the opposing viewpoints and emphasizes
the conflict between the two positions. Other commonly used conjunctions in legal English
include: “for”, "and," “nor”, "or," "yet," and "so”, which can be remembered by the acronym
FANBOYS. These conjunctions play a crucial role in structuring legal arguments, presenting
counterarguments, and demonstrating logical connections between different aspects of a case.
CONCLUSION
These language features and grammatical structures play a crucial role in conveying
legal concepts accurately and effectively within the legal profession. It is important to
make sure your writing is free from grammatical errors, uses appropriate terminology,
and effectively communicates legal concepts to your intended audience.
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