Ielts Writing 2

In many states, the problems of …has become a complex issue with multifaceted causes
This essay aims to delve into the pivotal role of education in contributing to this phenomenon
Primarily, one leading factor behind the escalating wealth disparity is education inequality.
Consequently, families with limited access to quality education find themselves trapped in the
cyclical pattern of unresolved challenges. For instance, in Indonesia, the lack of financial literacy
among the economically disadvantaged often results in an inability to manage salaries wisely and
save money effectively.
Addressing education inequality is a pivotal step towards effecting positive change, particularly at the
community level.
Implementing comprehensive financial management knowledge within the school curriculum
can help bridge the gap between the rich and the poor.
In recent years, the significant advancement of technology has influenced various aspects of life.
While proponents celebrate the advantages, others highlight its drawbacks. This essay aims to
explore both perspectives, offering some reasons and examples to support each viewpoints
However, amidst the advantages, a notable drawback emerges, which is the diminishing significance
of face to face social engagement.
In recent years, the development of technology has permeated in broad aspects of life including the
way of people live, work, and interact with others. Some people observed the advantages of this
phenomenon while others have seen the drawbacks. This essay seeks to explore both opinions and
provide some reasons and examples for it.
Foremost, one of the main benefits of the advancement of technology is accessibility. As the ripple
effect of accessibility is that everyone has the same opportunity to access knowledge, occupation
and education. For example, one of the most popular cutting-edge technologies in communication
called Zoom application has been a game changer in the way people work and learn. These days, the
vast majority of people generate online meetings via Zoom, a big number of students also could
access E-learning and family gatherings also can be held through Zoom application every time
because this platform makes every online meeting easier.
Despite the benefits, a lack of face-to-face social engagement also could be one of the negative
consequences. Being provided with so many amenities with one gadget called a smartphone
impacted in particular behavior which people tend to be individualized. For instance, on a best
friend’s birthday, instead of catching up to greet and give a birthday gift in person, some people
choose to send a present through online delivery.
In conclusion, the breakthrough in technology not only brings many benefits such as accessibility in
learning , and working, but also contributes to the decrease of socialization level among people.
REVISI
In recent years, the pervasive development of technology has significantly influenced

various aspects of life, including how people live, work, and interact with one another. While
proponents celebrate the advantages of this phenomenon, others highlight its drawbacks. This
essay aims to explore both perspectives, offering reasons and examples to support each
viewpoint.
One of the paramount benefits of technological advancement is enhanced accessibility.

This ripple effect ensures equal opportunities for individuals to access knowledge,
employment, and education. For instance, the revolutionary Zoom application has
transformed the way people work, learn, and connect. With the majority of professionals
relying on online meetings and students accessing e-learning platforms, Zoom exemplifies
how technology fosters accessibility, making virtual interactions seamless and convenient.
However, amidst the advantages, a notable drawback emerges — the diminishing

significance of face-to-face social engagement. The plethora of conveniences provided by
smartphones has inadvertently led to individualization, altering traditional social behavior. A
striking example is the increasing trend of sending birthday gifts through online delivery
services rather than celebrating in person. This shift highlights a potential consequence of
technology, where interpersonal connections are sacrificed for the sake of convenience.
In conclusion, the progress in technology has undoubtedly ushered in numerous

benefits, such as heightened accessibility to learning and working. The widespread use of
platforms like Zoom exemplifies how technology has revolutionized communication and
collaboration. Nevertheless, it is imperative to recognize the potential downsides, such as
the decline in face-to-face social interactions. Striking a delicate balance between leveraging
the advantages of technology and preserving the essence of traditional human connections
remains crucial for a harmonious integration of these advancements into our lives.
PART 1
This data illustrates the areas of forested land in million of hectares across the globe (Africa, Asia,
Europe, North America, Oceania , South America) in three different years ( 1990, 2000, and 2005).
Overall, the area with largest forested land, in the three periods given is Europe and the area with
smallest one is Oceania.
In Oceania and North America, during 1990 to 2005 the trend has dropped slightly from 199 to 197
in million of hectares and from 708 to 705 respectively. However, similarly, In South America and
Africa the area has decreased significantly from 946 to 882 and from 749 to 691 respectively in
million of hectares. This amount of decreased areas in Africa in 2005 has become the most significant
drop among the others in the last 15 years.
Conversely, compared to the other parts of the world, in Asia and Europe the forested land has
expanded steadily from 576 to 584 and from 986 to 1001 in million of hectares respectively.
PART 2
The vast majority of people stated computers as the most paramount discovery in the technology
sector in the last hundred period including the areas of benefits and its influenced to all the segment
of the sociecty. This essay aims to explain that the writer agreed with the perspective due to some
notable examples and reasons.
Foremost, one of the significant benefit of computer's invention as a game changer tool is rapidly
enhanced accessibility to future amenities. The utilization of computer lead to another big
breakingthrough technologies such as internet and myriad software applications has brought so
many conveniences to socielty's life on the daily basis. For instance, computers technology on our
laptop and smartphone has been used for access internet to gain opportunities in education
platform, accessing health application, and maximizing the benefit of job seeking software.
On the other hand, computers also reformed the conventional working and learning culture to be a
more effective method. one of the striking examples is the diminishing significance paper used in the
office as the impact of a more digitalized working flow by fostering computer technology. This cutting
edge technology has been changing our way of thinking and working and played a big role not oly in
company but also at the school to access online learning which is already applied across the globe.
In conclusion, the undenied advantages of computers in terms of future accesiblity and has become
notable proof of its huge benefit and served as the most crucial invention in the last hundreed years.

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In many states, the problems of …has become a complex issue with multifaceted causes

Implementing comprehensive financial management knowledge within the school curriculum

In recent years, the pervasive development of technology has significantly influenced

One of the paramount benefits of technological advancement is enhanced accessibility.

However, amidst the advantages, a notable drawback emerges — the diminishing

In conclusion, the progress in technology has undoubtedly ushered in numerous

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