Writing Conclusion Practice
Writing Conclusion Practice
Writing Conclusion Practice
Body 1: The rise of the automobile as a popular means of travel in developing countries
inevitably leads to worsening road conditions.
Body 2: To fully address this problem, there are two potential fixes that governments can apply.
Firstly, governments should enact higher taxes on all automobile purchases to deter buyers.
Another solution would be to invest further in public awareness campaigns of alternative modes
of travel.
In conclusion, that the biggest problems centre around traffic and governments can impose
higher taxes and support public transport to minimise the impact.
Body 1: The main reason that film purists resist the digital revolution is it brings down the
quality of films.
Body 2: Despite the admitted cons listed above, digital film has given a voice to less wealthy
filmmakers who tend to be of a different class and ethnicity.
In conclusion,. Studios should pay heed and relax their control over an ever-promising industry
Body 1: Advertisements can certainly tempt people to buy products that they might not otherwise
want.
Body 2: On the other hand, I believe that most people do not buy products because of the
advertising alone.
In conclusion, I believe that many people do not buy products because of the
advertising alone.
Write a conclusion for this essay
Exercise 4.
Intro: People seem to be either excited or worried about the future impact of artificial
intelligence. Personally, I can understand the two opposing points of view; I am both fascinated
by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive about its possible negative effects.
Body 1: On the one hand, the increasing intelligence of technology should bring some obvious
benefits.
Body 2: On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence
may harm us if we are not careful.
Exercise 5.
Intro: It is often said that modern life presents us with an overwhelming number of choices. I
completely agree with this, and I believe that the Internet and globalisation are the two
major factors involved.
Body 1: It is undeniable that the Internet has led to a dramatic expansion in the number of
choices that are available to us.
Body 2: Alongside the influence of the Internet, globalisation is making the world smaller and
compounding this problem of too much choice.
In conclusion, modern life presents us with an overwhelming number of choices
4. The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than
treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do
you agree.
Problems of health have been given increased over the world. however, regarding where government funding
should go: to the prevention of diseases, or to the treatment of such. I believe it is far more effective to invest
in prevention.
5High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons
people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but
may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves.
In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick?
Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or
experience.
It is clearly to see that a great number of employees work even if they are ill as this helps them
to accomplish vital tasks. It is however argued that the situation is vulnerable for both those who
do this and those around them, and hence they should abstain from work when they are ill. I
agree with this statement.