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In the modern world, with the rapid development of Internet, some


people consider that while internet brings for us lots of benefits and
advantages, it is also due to many problems to Human. Internet helps
people grasp the information they need and broaden their mind.
Beside, internet makes people get closer when they can keep in touch
with friends or relatives from a distance. On the other hand internet is
the dangerous place where the criminals can be hiding.
Internet helps us grasp the information and broaden our mind by its
wealth of Knowledge. In the past, when we have to find information
about something, we would look for it from newspaper or radio. But
now, with the internet - the modern technology, we can search for it
quickly just for a few minutes and then, there will be many research
and statistics you may need. You don't have to worry about how to
find specific information and how long it would take.
Additionally, it's been convenient when we can contact with friends
and family from a long distance by the internet. There are a huge
number of social media and websites provided by the internet where
you can communicate with people without charge. It's free. We are
able to call chat or do a video call to your companions and Families
even though both of us are in the different countries.
However, because we can join the internet without confirming
personal information, we can make sure the friend we make on the
internet can be trusted or not. Maybe the person we are talking to is a
fraudster or a kidnapper and want to bluff you. The main reason of
these situations is the incognito mode of Internet. It's dangerous for us
to using the internet, where the criminals is hiding everywhere with
the incognito mode.
In conclusion, internet make our lives be much more convenient by
providing us numerous information rapidly and helping us keep in
touch with your dear people. Otherwise, it also brings for us the
danger one of the most significant problem is the risk of crime on the
internet. We have to be more careful in using internet to prevent the
disadvantages and utilize the internet to improve our lives.
Cô sửa:
 In today's society, the internet has rapidly become an indispensable
part of our lives, bringing with it numerous benefits and advantages.
However, some argue that along with these benefits come many
problems for humanity. One of the most prominent advantages of the
internet is its ability to provide us with a wealth of information and
broaden our knowledge. In the past, people had to rely on newspapers
or the radio to access information, which was time-consuming and
often limited in scope. But with the internet, we can easily search for
the information we need in just a few minutes, and access a vast range
of research and statistics at our fingertips.
Another significant advantage of the internet is its ability to bring
people closer together, regardless of the distance between them.
Through social media and various websites, people can communicate
with friends and family members without charge, using various
modes such as calls, chats, or video calls. This has made it easier to
maintain relationships, even when people are in different countries.
However, one of the major problems associated with the internet is
the risk of criminals hiding behind the anonymity it provides. When
we join the internet, we are not required to confirm personal
information, which means that we cannot be sure if the friends we
make online are trustworthy. Fraudsters or kidnappers could be hiding
behind seemingly innocent profiles, posing a serious risk to our
safety. This is particularly concerning due to the incognito mode of
the internet, which makes it easier for criminals to hide their
identities.
In conclusion, while the internet has undoubtedly made our lives more
convenient by providing us with a wealth of information and allowing
us to keep in touch with loved ones, it is important to acknowledge
the potential dangers associated with its use. The risk of criminal
activity on the internet is one of the most significant problems we
face, and we must take steps to protect ourselves by being more
cautious in our interactions online. By doing so, we can continue to
enjoy the benefits of the internet while minimizing its potential
negative impact on our lives.

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