Writing An Argument Summary - Rhetorical Précis
Writing An Argument Summary - Rhetorical Précis
Writing An Argument Summary - Rhetorical Précis
In the essay “The Space-Taker Effect,” Jenny While, a senior at El Cajon Valley High
School, argues that students who are unmotivated and misbehave take away from the
learning environment and cause teachers to slow down and lower expectations.
According to While, these “space-takers take away valuable instructional time,” leaving
little for those who want to learn.
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In the article “On the Horizon: The Legacy of O’Henry”, Steven Marcus,
(type of text) (title of text) (author’s first and last name) a man in 1954, (information
about the author) (verb, e.g., claims, argues, asserts, etc.) that argues (Paraphrase
or quote the central claim and include other essential sub-claims.) that O’Henry is in fact
a hack, and has never received serious literary criticism despite his popularity.
Part 2: Explain how the author develops or advances the argument. When
completing this section of the précis, consider how the author has developed or
supported his or her central claim. What does the writer or speaker do in each
paragraph and in each section? For instance, authors will illustrate an idea, describe an
event, share an anecdote, draw a comparison, or do some other work. The explanation
for this section typically follows the sequence of ideas in the text. Sample
She supports this claim by first describing the types of students who “take up space” in
her school. Then, she makes a connection between her school’s poor performance on
state and local exams and the “space-takers” who have done very little to prepare
themselves for these high-stakes tests. Toward the end of the essay, While challenges
the effectiveness of No Child Left Behind (NCLB) and outlines its limitations.
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He develops this claim by first providing examples of O’Henry’s repetition in his writing.
(He/She) (supports/develops) (Explain what the author is
doing: verb.) Then, he carefully analyzes the speech patterns and rhythms.
(Explain what the author does next.) (Use a prepositional phrase like “Toward the end of
the text,” “In the section,” or some other phrase in order to add variety to your writing.)
Towards the end of the text, Marcus depicts how O’Henry’s characters’ boring lives are
reinforced by his lack of education.
She establishes a formal tone for educators, politicians, and concerned parents who
have children in high school. Although she is writing to an adult audience, her message
extends to her peers—high school students.
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He establishes a critical tone for his audience (He/She) (Describe the tone of the
author.) He means to reach O’Henry’s readers and critically analyze his work. (What is
the relationship between the author and his/her audience?)
Sample
Template:
This work is significant because it challenges the writing of O’Henry in all manner of
ways, such as his speech rhythm and repetitions, and provides evidence for his
reasoning by showing how O’Henry was not a fully educated man.
In the article “On the Horizon: The Legacy of O’Henry”, Steven Marcus, a man
in 1954, argues ( that O’Henry is in fact a hack, and has never received serious literary
criticism despite his popularity. He develops this claim by first providing examples of
O’Henry’s repetition in his writing. Then, he carefully analyzes the speech patterns and
rhythms. Towards the end of the text, Marcus depicts how O’Henry’s characters’ boring
lives are reinforced by his lack of education. He establishes a critical tone for his
audience. He means to reach O’Henry’s readers and critically analyze his work. This
work is significant because it challenges the writing of O’Henry in all manner of ways,
such as his speech rhythm and repetitions, and provides evidence for his reasoning by
showing how O’Henry was not a fully educated man.