Research Position Draft 1
Research Position Draft 1
Research Position Draft 1
Tryana Cervantes
ENGL 1302-231
1 April 2024
Music has been a valuable companion for humanity, because through it, each individual
can be reflected. Many scholars like Liebowitz, Beck, Govindan, Lu and Petrini, have conducted
a multitude of research regarding the significant impact music has for treating health issues.
Consequently, music therapy should become a common method for treating mental health,
Mental Health
modulate emotions, reduce stress responses, and enhance overall well-being. Scholar Liebowitz,
et al. references Gardstrom’s research, which details that “there has been a long documentation
of the benefits of music on promoting health and overall physical, mental and emotional well-
being, as well as increasingly demonstrating the benefits of active music making for individuals
with psychiatric disabilities” (137). On the other hand, scholar Beck, et al. has a similar
statement as author Liebowitz, et al. as both of them stated music as a beneficial treatment for
patients with mental disabilities (2). However, although both scholars reach the same conclusion,
their methods, main focus, and collection of information from other scholars is different. With
Liebowitz, et al. the focus has been for over decades, as US troops have been stationed in Iraq,
Afghanistan, and Pakistan as part of the War on Terror (139). Injuries, both physical and
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psychological, sustained by service members result in adversity for their mental health,
Meanwhile, with author Beck, et al. the main focus are traumatized refugees, mostly of them
suffering from depression, anxiety, and trauma symptoms (2). Fortunately, as author Liebowitz,
et al. references Gardstrom’s research, there has been a long documentation of the benefits of
music on promoting health and overall physical, mental and emotional well-being, as well as
increasingly demonstrating the benefits of active music making for individuals with psychiatric
disabilities (137). This implies that music therapy provides patients with treatment without the
use of medication, something different from the usual therapy. However, the results of music
therapy end up being much more beneficial, because as Liebowitz, et al. now references Grocke,
it is stated “group music making activities provide joy, improve quality of life and address issues
such as coping, anger, and low self-esteem” (137). At the same time, author Beck, et al. states
from the World Federation of Music Therapy ‘the professional use of music and its elements as
families, or communities who seek to optimize their quality of life and improve their physical,
social, communicative, emotional, intellectual, and spiritual health and wellbeing” (3). The
program studied during the investigation of author Liebowitz, et al. is part of a project that
provides career training and opportunities for music students and alumni at a large urban
university in the Southwestern USA. Many genres are offered and performed at the highest level
for populations that have limited access to the arts. The program model includes acomprehensive
program of concerns and participatory classes. Music students as instructional leaders for
veterans in a choir proportionate to veterans a way to express their perceptions in their own
words. At the same time interviewers with choir participants were conducted at the study site at
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times that did not conflict with the therapeutic activities offered at the facility. In conclusion,
choir activities provide veterans opportunities to engage with other community members, the
same a sense of belonging helped them to work with others, and of course the enjoyment that
they felt, changed their circumstances (146).Meanwhile, the treatment of author Beck, et al.
included a phase-oriented trauma therapy course of 16 weekly one-hour sessions (5). As was
described, despite both scholars' similar conclusion, their methods were completely different,
author Beck, et al. treatment was carried out by three experienced government-authorized
clinical psychologists and one newly trained psychologist, all with university training. The music
was used for 5-20 minutes, and patients were seated or reclined while psychologists listened to
their patient’s traumas (5). As a result, author Beck, et al. states by Carr “music therapy to
Anxiety
emotions, reduce stress responses. The following studies conducted detail the effectiveness of
intervention for reducing anxiety symptoms among specific populations. Scholars Liu and
Genqiang stated music therapy interventions were examined for college students with excessive
anxiety, while scholars Silvia and author Kwok study focused on a protocol integrating positive
psychology and music therapy for adolescents with anxiety symptoms (1). Additionally, both
studies utilized a randomized controlled trial design to evaluate the intervention. They recruited
participants from specific demographic groups (college students in Central China and Grade 8 to
Grade 9 students in secondary schools in Hong Kong) and randomly assigned them to
intervention and control groups. Both studies found significant improvements in various outcome
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measures related to mental health and well-being. The first study reported reductions in anxiety
scores among college students receiving music therapy intervention, while the second study
observed increases in hope, emotional competence, and subjective happiness, along with
Furthermore, both studies highlighted the importance of specific factors in influencing the
effectiveness of the interventions. The first study identified factors such as gender, major, and
therapy type, while the second study emphasized the mediating role of hope in the relationship
between the intervention and changes in anxiety symptoms and subjective happiness. Overall,
both studies contribute to the understanding of how music therapy, along with other
Children
with social skills disorder and behavioral problems reveals promising outcomes in enhancing
social interaction, emotional regulation, and overall behavior. At this time, music therapy among
children with behavioral and deficiency in social skills has been observed to be effective. Scholar
Govindan, et al. describes a study focused on evaluating the effectiveness of a music add-on
therapy for managing behavioral problems in children aged 6 to 12 years. The researchers
control groups (1). Throughout the study, both groups received treatment as usual, while the
experimental group additionally received music add-on intervention with eight Hindustani (a
group of mutually intelligible languages and dialects spoken in northwestern in India) ragas over
a period of three weeks. To assess the outcomes of the intervention, the researchers employed
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several clinical outcome measures. These included the Children’s Global Assessment Scale
(CGAS), the Nisonger Child Behaviour Rating Form typical IQ version, and a visual analogue
scale (VAS) completed by parents to monitor behavioral improvement (274). The quantitative
compared to the control group. By the way, author Blanky-Voronov and Gilboa analyzes a study
focusing on the “Ensemble” treatment, which is aimed to increase the efficiency of social skills
in children with deficiencies. The treatment involved 24 children spreaded out into four groups
during the one year that lasted the treatment (1). The researchers conducted both quantitative and
qualitative analyses to evaluate the effectiveness of the intervention. The quantitative analysis
was watching different sessions and counting when one of the twelve typical oriented behaviors
throughout all of the four “Ensemble” groups (6). Qualitative interviewers were conducted by
mothers, teachers, and people in charge of the kids before and after the treatment of the children.
These more personal interviewers showed the improvements shown during the different sessions
were evident at a home and scholar environment as well. Overall, both of these studies have
proven that music therapy has a high potential with interventions when they address behavioral
problems and deficiencies with social skills; additionally, they remark the importance of using a
such interventions.
Surgical Patients
Last, but not least, utlizing musical treatment as an adjunct therapy for patints undergoing
surgical procedures shows potential in mitigating preoperative anxiety, promoting relaxation, and
improving postoperative recovery outcomes music therapy among thoracic and general surgery
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has proven to be effective in relieving the stress and pain provided by operations. In addition,
scholar Liang, et al. states surgery anxiety is frequently observed in patients, especially in those
receiving non general anesthesia, as various stimuli during the surgery can be perceptible (2).
Fortunately, as scholar Liang, et al. stated by Fu, they concluded that music can abate the
(3). On the other hand, as scholars Liu and Petrini stated “anxiety is a psychological disorder that
can cause many adverse effects'' (714). Scholars Liu and Petrini, also describe the consequences
of anxiety during a surgical treatment such as: elevated heart rate, fatigue, loss appetite and
weight, difficulty to sleep, etc. Therefore, the statements previously presented by scholar Liang,
et al. and author Liu and Petrini give readers insight into the disadvantages that anxiety brings to
the patient when undergoing surgery. Not to mention that no matter what area of surgery a
patient may be in (thoracic, nasal, intestinal, etc.) stress can impact a patient's life and the
doctor’s process at the surgery. During the analysis by Liang, et al., the methods implemented in
the patients were verified from two aspects: the first subjective feelings of patients and subjective
observation by medical staff (2). Then, Lu and Petrini was transferred to the MP3 player before
the intervention, with earphones connected, and volume was co-researcher prepare to the patient
and environment (for evitate disturbance everyone turned off cell phones, as also noises from the
door), and tried patients to keep their breathing smooth, relaxed, and focused on music (716).
Both schoalrs try to be aware of the patients’ feelings, so that the musical treatments procedure
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