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    UNIVERSITI TEKNOLOGI MARA (UiTM)

    CAWANGAN KELANTAN KAMPUS MACHANG

    INTEGRATED LANGUAGE SKILLS III (ELC231)


    “Can We Make Real, Transformative Change in Education?”

    PREPARED FOR:

    ASIAH BINTI SAID

    PREPARED BY :

    NO. NAME STUDENT ID.

    1. ARDINI NAJWA BINTI RAIFEZI 2022662498

    2. NUR FATIN KHADIJAH BINTI NASRUDIN 2022297422

    CLASS : BA1113B
    Item Structure

    P1 The argumentative essay, Can We Make Real, Transformative


    Change in Education by Renee Owen, illustrates the issues
    - Title caused by a sudden transformation in the education system
    - Author due to Covid-19. The writer is optimistic and serious about how
    - Tone badly it affects the people that are related to the school
    - Stand system, and gives several reasons and a way to help for this
    stand. This critical analysis will emphasis on transformation in
    the system of education and how Transformative Educational
    Leadership (TEL) is designed to prepare leaders to effectively
    facilitate educational changed system.

    P2 First and foremost, the author has given a few arguments


    about this article. She strongly believes that the education
    - Author's main arguments system’s downfall gives a big impact to not only children’s
    - Supporting details mental health but also to people who work in the school
    - Author's purpose of system such as teachers and educators. Moreover, she states
    writing and intended that school systems are failing as they want to change to new
    audience systems but are lacking in training the leaders perfectly which
    only risks to leaders in distress. In this argument, she also
    stresses that transformative learning is not easy, terrifying and
    once it happens, there is no going back. The author elaborates
    her view by thinking leaders should be trained and how TEL
    can help them. It seems that the author is trying to convince
    leaders to get involved so that they are extremely ready for the
    changes in education and also attempt to inform readers how
    great TEL is to educators.

    P3 (analysis)- continue from P2 Next, the author has given clear evidence. She mentions that
    TEL was created to help the educators and leaders. She
    affirms that TEL offers some programmes to heal the trauma
    that they are faced with. Furthermore, she supports her
    statement as TEL recognizes that transforming educators is
    much better than educators leaning into discomfort. This
    analyzes TEL program indicates powerful results. Overall, the
    author believes TEL really helps educators by giving
    transformative learning techniques so that they can adapt to
    the changes in education system. On top of that, to turn a real
    good transformation into actions, it has to start from the inner
    self. That is why TEL does a healing and therapeutic program
    to leaders and educators.
    P4 (Your personal view) In my personal view, I do agree with the author that claims that
    TEL is a programme that does help educators to solve the
    issues of sudden change in the education system. The author
    also includes one of participants’ reviews after joining the
    programme on how TEL changed her personally and
    professionally which convinced me more. I would also add
    that, no matter how they want to change the educational
    system to a new one, it is lacking everywhere and only causes
    concern to people, it would just be a waste of time.
    Improvement will never erase inequities. In addition, I do agree
    with the author on what are the after effects to leaders as the
    new system wants strong visionary leaders.

    P5 In conclusion, the author gives good reasons for her support of


    impacts of the new educational system and her strong stand of
    Transformative Educational Leadership (TEL) as it is a
    programme that is full of learning and teaching strategies yet
    does ease the minds of leaders and educators. I share the
    same opinion as hers.However, the country should examine
    more on the issues that are raised and look further into it. I
    also believe TEL is one of the best ways to handle this issue.
    Therefore, the educational system is important for both
    children and educators.

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