Arugmentive Final
Arugmentive Final
Arugmentive Final
Ms. Barense
Composition
09 January 2023
Does social media act like a superhero, a villain, or maybe both? Social media plays a
role in our daily lives, and the impact of social media is undeniable. Many argue about the
dangers or risks, not considering the benefits social media brings to our lives. Social media is a
powerful tool that many individuals use daily. Social media is used for entertainment,
information, marketing, communication, and much more. With social media's great power comes
both positive and negative effects. For example, a small business can advertise worldwide while,
at the same time, widespread cyberbullying is enabled. Social media is beneficial to society
because it advances connectivity, supports economic growth, and positively influences mental
health.
connecting people. Pew Research Center states “A slightly different question in the 2018 survey
of emerging economies found that around two-thirds or more in each country said people were
more informed thanks to social media, the internet, and smartphones, rather than less” (Pew
Research Center). This highlights the significant contribution of these technologies in increasing
awareness across multiple countries. Seeing that a large portion of people, approximately two-
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contribute to increased awareness and knowledge. This highlights the beneficial role of social
media by being able to keep individuals informed about current events across the world. To add
on, social media also gives many people voices in competitive areas such as politics. In the same
study by Pew Research Center, they found out that “Across the 11 countries, a median of 57%
felt that social media increases people’s opportunity to have a meaningful voice in the political
process, with majorities in nine places holding this view” (Pew Research Center). These survey
results reveal that over half of the respondents believed that social media provides a meaningful
voice in the political process. By expanding political participation, social media serves as a
valuable source of connectivity. Ultimately, social media promotes diversity, helping form a
more accepting society. Again, Pew Research Center found out that “In the UK, 46% say social
media has increased Britons’ acceptance of people with diverse backgrounds, 37% say it has not
had much impact and 14% say people are less accepting due to social media” (Pew Research
Center). This indicates that social media can connect individuals from different backgrounds,
making them more accepting. This proves how social media is a positive force in promoting
connectivity and diversity. All things considered, social media significantly advances
connectivity. It increases awareness about current events, provides a meaningful voice in politics,
and promotes diversity. These studies prove how social media contributes positively to society,
Aside from connectivity, social media plays a role in the economy by positively fueling
economic growth. To start, social media improved online marketing. Zheyu Cui, Associate
Professor of Financial Engineering, states in his study that “Advertising on TikTok is more
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convenient and less costly than other traditional ones, like commercials on TVs or posters. It
a product or service on TikTok, businesses should focus more on creating and following trendy
videos on TikTok” (Cui). To summarize, advertising on TikTok is not only convenient but also
cheaper, leading to significant savings in investments which positively improve the economy.
This emphasizes the positive impact that social media have on the economy through online
marketing. Consequently, the short video market has reshaped the way users engage with
products online. In the same study by Zheyu Cui, Cui states that “Users who make videos can
earn endorsements and promotion fees for cooperative products or services by sharing short
videos” (Cui) and “TikTok is not only used for entertainment but also users can earn money from
brand promotions. It creates potential career choices for young adults and opens up a new buying
habit for consumers on social media” (Cui). Users creating short videos have the opportunity to
earn endorsements and promotion fees for featuring products or services in their content. This
offers a source of income for content creators and makes content creation a career. TikTok
provides a platform for users to earn money from brand promotions emphasizing the economic
significance of the short video market. Social media can create careers for young adults,
positively influencing economic growth. A new buying habit for consumers on social media
furthers economic activity. Finally, social media creates job opportunities. Zheyu Cui mentions
that “While TikTok supports new and old businesses to expand their market to potential buyers,
it creates new jobs that reduce the unemployment rate. Being one of the world's leading social
networking sites, TikTok needs various manpower and material resources to maintain.
Continuing to increase its number of users, it will continue to recruit talent to manage and
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maintain development in the later stage” (Cui). Social media platforms, like TikTok, positively
impact the economy by creating new job opportunities. As TikTok supports businesses in
expanding their market and reaching buyers, it generates new employment opportunities,
reducing the unemployment rate. Social media creates jobs which promotes economic
development. Social media being able to support businesses and create job opportunities proves
it can positively fuel economic growth. Social media is a tool for economic growth by
revolutionizing marketing practices, advancing the short video market, and actively creating new
jobs. This impact stresses how social media positively fuels the growth of the economy and
On the other hand, some people argue that social only does harm to people’s well-being.
Although there’s no doubt that it can negatively impact one’s well-being, may be hard to believe,
but social media shares some positive impacts on adolescents’ well-being. For example, it can
promote brain development. In a testimony, Mitch Prinstein shares his study, revealing that “…
results found that high social media users may have promoted brain development in a way that
may make adolescents more inclined to focus on social rewards (e.g., attention from peers) and
altered self-control” (Prinstein). The evidence supporting increased brain development among
high social media users challenges the commonly held concept that social media has only
negative impacts on people's well-being. Social media brings positive impacts through
engagement on social media and promotes brain development. The study states that adolescents'
engagement with social media becomes more motivated to focus on social rewards, such as
attention from peers and altered self-control. Therefore, brain development is enhanced through
social media engagement, disproving the assumption that social media only negatively impacts
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the well-being of users. Social media engagement also plays a role in releasing stress, especially
during the COVID-19 lockdown. In the same testimony, Prinstein shares that “Research also
suggests that during the COVID-19 lockdown from 2020-2021, the use of one-on-one (i.e., direct
messaging) on social media and sharing funny content reduced stress among youth” (Prinstein).
The use of one-on-one direct messaging and sharing funny content on social media reduced
stress among youth, denying that social media engagement is entirely stressful. This shows that
social media has positive impacts on human well-being. Lastly, by providing a virtual space for
individuals to engage, share, and connect, social media enhances online communication.
Prinstein concludes that “Adolescents report high levels of comfort with, and a preference for,
online communication, especially when discussing mental health” (Prinstein). Young adults’ high
levels of comfort and preference for online communication when discussing mental health
indicate that it can serve as a valuable and effective means of encouraging conversations around
mental health. Challenging the assumption that online communication is problematic, this
evidence highlights that social media engagement can also positively impact peoples' well-being.
Summing it up, social media activities can truly have positive impacts on people's well-being
such as increasing brain development, reducing stress through engagements, and the comfort and
preference for online communication. When utilized thoughtfully, social media can contribute
positively to the overall well-being of people, going against the idea that social media entirely
individuals informed about current events, giving them a meaningful voice in politics, and
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promoting the acceptance of diversity. Secondly, it positively fuels economic growth through
online marketing practices, encouraging the short video market, and creating new job
opportunities. Lastly, contrary to common assumptions, social media activities can have positive
impacts on adolescents' well-being through increased brain development, stress reduction, and
comfortable online communication. Rather than social media being universally negative, it plays
an essential role in how we connect, contribute to economic activities, and experience personal
well-being. However, it’s important to take on a reasonable interpretation when navigating the
factors of social media, acknowledging its potential for positive influences while being mindful
of potential challenges, and understanding the role social media plays in our lives, emphasizing
Work Cited
Cui, Zheyu. “Analysis of the Impact of Social Media on the Economy.” Advances in Economics,
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Pew Research Center. “How People in Advanced and Emerging Nations See Social Media’s
Impact on Democracy, Society | Pew Research Center.” Pew Research Center, 6 Dec.
2022, www.pewresearch.org/short-reads/2022/12/06/in-advanced-and-emerging-
economies-similar-views-on-how-social-media-affects-democracy-and-society.
Prinstein, Mitch. “Protecting Our Children Online.” American Psychological Association, Feb.
2023, www.apaservices.org/advocacy/news/testimony-prinstein-protecting-children-
online.pdf.