Rev - 3 - Proposal Azizah
Rev - 3 - Proposal Azizah
Rev - 3 - Proposal Azizah
Siliwangi University
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SILIWANGI UNIVERSITY
TASIKMALAYA
2023
APPROVAL SHEET
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PREFACE
It is with utmost reverence and a profound sense of purpose that I undertake the
exploration of students' perceptions concerning the teacher's corrective feedback
on English writing assignments. This thesis proposal delves into the domain of
language learning and pedagogy, with a particular focus on nurturing writing
proficiency among students in a junior high school in Karawang, Indonesia.
Driven by an ardent desire to make a meaningful contribution to the field of
English education, this research endeavors to illuminate students' feedback
preferences, attitudes, and appraisals of the efficacy of corrective feedback
practices. This thesis proposal bears witness to an exhaustive review of existing
literature, drawing on insights from eminent language experts, both on the
national and international front, who have delved into the intricacies of feedback,
motivation, and writing pedagogy. The invaluable guidance of my esteemed thesis
advisor and unwavering support from my university faculty have been
instrumental throughout this research endeavor.
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ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
The Writer
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
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1. Background
While several studies have explored the role of teacher corrective feedback
on students' writing development, there is a notable research gap regarding the
specific focus on students' perceptions and attitudes towards corrective feedback.
Existing research has predominantly emphasized the types and frequency of
feedback provided by teachers, but there is limited research that delves into
students' perspectives on the usefulness and impact of corrective feedback.
Several researchers have highlighted the significance of corrective feedback in
students' writing development. For instance, a study by Rohmah and Halim (2023)
examined the use of oral corrective feedback. Their research provided insights
into how beneficial the feedback to the students’ writing improvement.
Additionally, a study by Koltovskaia (2020) explored the student engagement
with automated written corrective feedback, Grammarly, implementation in their
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writing drafts. Furthermore, a study by Li and Vuono (2019) focused the research
on the use of oral and written corrective feedback in the past 25 years in System –
a name of journal platform. However, their research did not involve students’
perceptions that it would make the main difference of this thesis. There have been
much research on the teacher’s corrective feedback during English learning
activities. However, little attention is addressed to the investigation of teacher’s
corrective feedback to students’ writing assignments, especially in an Indonesian
junior high school context. Therefore, the present study aims at researching the
students’ perceptions of corrective feedback given by the teacher to their writing
assignments.
The question of the research is, What are the students’ perceptions on the
teacher’s written corrective feedback to their English writing assignments?
3. Operational Definitions
To avoid misunderstanding the terms set out in this study, the researcher
provides two definitions related to this study as follows:
6. Literature Review
5.1[6.1] Definition of Writing and Writing Process
Writing is a complex and multifaceted communicative skill that plays a
pivotal role in human expression and knowledge dissemination. Scholars and
experts have offered various definitions of writing, each highlighting different
aspects of its nature.
In addition, Smith and Lee (2019) define writing as a social and cultural
activity. According to them, writing is not only a means of conveying
information but also a way of participating in conversations within various
communities. They highlight that different disciplines and fields have their
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The writing process refers to the series of steps and activities that
writers undertake to produce written content. It is a systematic approach that
helps writers organize their thoughts, refine their ideas, and communicate
effectively with their intended audience. Bereiter and Scardamalia (2006)
proposed the knowledge-transforming model as a process-oriented theory of
writing. According to this model, writing involves the transformation of
knowledge and the construction of new understanding through the act of
writing itself. They argue that writing is not just a means of communicating
pre-existing knowledge but rather a process that facilitates the development of
new ideas and deeper understanding.
process, and the writing strategies. According to their model, writers engage in
goal setting, planning, translating, and revising during the writing process.
In the goal setting phase, writers establish the purpose and audience of
their writing, which influences their content and organization choices. Planning
involves generating and organizing ideas, outlining the structure, and setting a
writing timeline. The translating phase focuses on transforming ideas into
written text, emphasizing sentence construction, vocabulary choice, and
paragraph development. Finally, revising entails evaluating and improving the
content, organization, and clarity of the text.
7. Research Procedures
6.1[7.1] Method of the Research
proficiency levels, genders, and writing abilities. Prior to participation, both the
school administration and the students will grant informed consent, upholding
ethical considerations and safeguarding participants' rights and confidentiality.
Through this rigorous selection process, the study aims to uphold the integrity
of the research and the ethical treatment of participants, while the school's
selection is guided by the insights from the preliminary interview, aligning the
research's objectives with the real-life educational practices.
6.4[7.4] Technique of Collecting Data
This research will employ a semi-structured interview. A semi-structured
interview is a qualitative research method that combines predetermined
questions with the flexibility to explore and probe deeper into participants'
responses (Creswell, 2019). Since its flexibility, this descriptive case study
aims to explore students' perceptions of the teacher's corrective feedback on
English writing assignments at SMP Negeri 1 Rengasdengklok, Karawang. The
semi-structured interview approach allows for a flexible yet systematic
exploration of participants' experiences, providing valuable insights into their
perspectives. The steps are as follows:
1. Participant Selection
Adhering to the principles of semi-structured interviews, a purposive
sampling technique will be employed to select a diverse group of students from
a certain class at the second-grade level. The selection is also based on the
consideration of the English subject they are taking, and the teacher’s habit in
giving corrective feedback found from the preliminary interview result. This
sampling approach ensures the inclusion of participants with varying language
proficiency levels and writing abilities, enriching the study's
comprehensiveness.
3. Pilot Testing
Prior to the main data collection, a pilot study will be conducted with a
small group of students to test the effectiveness and clarity of the interview
questions. The insights gained from the pilot study will inform necessary
refinements to enhance the interview protocol's quality.
Steps Description
Identifying the problem The research problem addressed in this
study stems from the pressing need to
understand students' perceptions of the
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3. Data collection
4. Data analysis
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5. Report
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ENCLOSURES
● Whom I should contact for any complaints about the research or the
conduct of the research
● I can request a copy of the research findings and reports
Name:
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