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Andres Rivera

Mr. Powers

English 1302

10-2-2023

Contextualizing Conflict in Academic Discourse

A current debate going on within the correctional systems of our society is whether

communities should invest more taxpayer money into our rehabilitation systems for prison and

jail inmates. Many people believe that they shouldn’t have to pay for people who committed

crimes and have to care for them with the tax money they pay. On the contrary, there is the side

of people who believe that as a society we should help inmates have programs that could help

them have a more successful post-prison life and a helpful prison or jail experience. Although

these two types of sides exist it is all in their own opinion, but there is research to help support

each side.

In a peer-reviewed research article called " Inmate’s Right to Rehabilitation during

Incarceration” showcased how re-imprisonment rates continue to rise and his research concludes

that a factor of this rising statistic is due to inmates not having sufficient rehabilitation that aids

these offenders for their release. On the other hand, an article called “Inside of a Prison: How a

Culture of Punishment Prevents Rehabilitation” explains how rehabilitation is pointless because

of the narrative of a prison system which is explained as prison being a “punishment” (140) and

prisoners always being in a place that “exacerbates fear, anger, aggression, deception, and often

proclivities for depression and suicide” (PP140). So, in other words, the authors believe that

rehabilitation in prisons is pointless due to the circumstances of the setting they are in.
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While both articles present an argument when connected they both share statistics and data that

back up their analysis. For example, " Inmate’s Right to Rehabilitation during Incarceration”

presents data that supports their argument. One example " Inmate’s Right to Rehabilitation

during Incarceration” explains is how rehabilitation in prison has been linked to ex-offenders

adopting crime-free lives after prison (PP186). The author even explains how Cognitive

Behavior therapy, which is a rehabilitation program, helps inmates learn positive behaviors and

has been successful help to inmates’ transition. So, within the article, the author creates strong

evidence that helps support his thesis.

In the article, “Inside of a Prison: How a Culture of Punishment Prevents

Rehabilitation” , the authors create their evidence based on statistics, data, and a philosophical

theory. They start off with concrete evidence that they give their audience based on the re-entry

into prison of ex-offenders. The percentages given are in the higher numbers: 68% of re-entry

within 3 years, 79% within 6 years, and 83% within 9 years (140). Their philosophical theory is

that prisoners cannot have rehabilitation in a setting where it is based on punishment. The

authors bring up interviews with inmates and show how prisoners simply do not have a

successful interaction with therapists. This article makes some great points that help create a

good ground to stand and overall, is based more on their theory.

The problem with this current debate is that so much research is yet to be done.

Researchers still cannot have a conclusive stance without more research being done. Every

situation is different which makes this topic a hard debate. But if I were to take a stance, I would

suggest that rehabilitation in prisons does help. I believe in change, and much research backs up

that there is a correlation between rehabilitation programs aiding ex-offenders and post-prison

life. However, it is still subject to different ideas due to the need for research to be done. Overall
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although, “Inside of a Prison: How a Culture of Punishment Prevents Rehabilitation” and "

Inmate’s Right to Rehabilitation during Incarceration” propose two different opinions on the

subject " Inmate’s Right to Rehabilitation during Incarceration” shows how he absolutely is pro

rehabilitation as he believes it is an inmate right while; “Inside of a Prison: How a Culture of

Punishment Prevents Rehabilitation” believe that it isn’t and can be a waste of money in most

cases.
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Works Cited

Seigafo, Sheldon. "Inmate’s Right to Rehabilitation during Incarceration: A Critical

Analysis of the United States Correctional System." International Journal of Criminal Justice

Sciences, vol. 12, no. 2, 2017, pp. 183-195.

Tina Bloom and G. A. Bradshaw. “Inside of a Prison: How a Culture of Punishment Prevents

Rehabilitation.” Peace and Conflict: Journal of Peace Psychology, Vol. 28, No. 1, 2022, PP.

140-143.

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