OET Ultimate Writing Guide
OET Ultimate Writing Guide
OET Ultimate Writing Guide
Guide to OET
Writing
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CONTENTS
02
INTRODUCTION TO
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02. CHOOSING THE
THE ULTIMATE GUIDE RIGHT CONTENT
TO THE OET WRITING
SUB-TEST
04
01. WRITING
WITH PURPOSE
14
03. WRITING WITH
CONCISENESS
AND CLARITY
17
04. USING THE
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RIGHT GENRE
23
AND STYLE FOR 05. ORGANISING
YOUR LETTER AND LAYING OUT
YOUR LETTER
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INTRODUCTION TO
THE ULTIMATE GUIDE
TO THE OET WRITING
SUB-TEST
Each of the above is assigned a score from 0 to 7, except for Purpose, which
is given a score of 0 to 3. If you are looking to get a score of 350 (grade B)
in Writing, you need to get a high score across all sections.
This resource includes six chapters on the OET Writing sub-test covering
each of the criterion, what writing skills you will need and how to improve
them.
WRITING WITH
PURPOSE
Purpose is the first of six What are the two parts Purpose?
assessment criteria that The first part of Purpose is making the reason for the
OET Assessors use to score letter “immediately apparent”. In other words, making
it clear why you are writing the letter and why the reader
your Writing sub-test should read it.
performance. Understanding By starting your letter with a clear explanation
what we mean by purpose of its purpose, the reader does not have to spend
time searching for what is important. This is important
and what is expected of you for healthcare professionals who often are time poor.
can go a long way to helping The second part of Purpose is “sufficiently expanding”
you get the score you want. the reason for your letter. What we mean by this is that
the letter should build on what is initially outlined
as the reason for writing by adding relevant details.
IMMEDIATELY SUFFICIENTLY
In Chapter One, APPARENT EXPANDING
we will explain:
Why are you Will the reader
The two parts of Purpose
writing the letter? understand the situation?
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Part One, continued
Using the information in the case notes, write a letter Using the information given in the case notes,
of referral to Dr Smith, an endocrinologist at City write a letter to the Occupational Therapist at
Hospital, for further management of Mrs Sharma’s the Oldmeadows Extended Care Centre, 13 River
sugar levels. Address the letter to Dr Lisa Smith, Street, Oldmeadows, where Mr Spencer is to be
Endocrinologist, City Hospital, Newtown. discharged, detailing his treatment to date and
other information the therapist may need. Date
your letter 10 February 2019.
In the above example, you can see this is a referral letter
about further management of Mrs Sharma’s sugar levels.
In this example, the Writing task tells you that this
is a discharge letter about Mr Spencer’s recent
treatment history.
CASE NOTES
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Part Two: Expanding on your purpose
with the right details
The second part of Purpose is to sufficiently expand the reason for writing
at the end of the letter and with more details.
When explaining the reason for writing the letter, it is normal to do this
at a high level. For example:
• Further management of her blood sugar levels, ongoing support
and treatment, regular monitoring of his diabetes.
The reader is clear about the situation from this high–level explanation
but they will need more detail to continue caring for the patient adequately.
This detail should be covered in the last paragraph.
Expanding the purpose includes providing details such as how often
the reader should interact with the patient, what specific activities they
should support the patient with etc.
Her non-fasting blood sugars are Prior to this injury, he received He was diagnosed with
7–8mmol/L, but her fasting blood home help for all house cleaning atrial fibrillation on the same
sugar levels are usually in the 16+ tasks and was independent in all admission and was subsequently
range, which is high. Therefore, personal care and community tasks. prescribed warfarin and sotalol.
I am referring her to you for your He is keen to return home where His hypertension is controlled
specialist advice. he lives alone and maintain his by Ramipril. As with his
independence. other medication, Mr Dunbar
is intermittent in his compliance.
Again, the important point to notice is that all three examples are
personalised to the situation and use language appropriate to describe it.
Achieving full marks in Purpose is based on whether you are prepared
to be flexible in the test and not rely on pre-learned phrases and sentences.
Using the case notes to help you to write something personalised
and meaningful to the reader will help you achieve full marks for Purpose.
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02.
CHOOSING THE
RIGHT CONTENT
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Let us look at some Example two
REBECCA’S TIP
If you can answer yes to all these, you’re well on your way to scoring high on Content.
WRITING WITH
CONCISENESS
AND CLARITY
Conciseness and Clarity
is the third criterion used
to score your letter.
Leaving out
irrelevant 1. 2. 3.
information Including information Providing too Not grouping
the reader already much background similar information
When it comes to deciding what knows or is outside or historical detail to together.
is and what is not relevant, test- the scope of the the current situation.
takers tend to make three mistakes: patient’s care.
INFORMATION NOT
NEEDED FOR CARE
Mrs Sharma’s case notes cover 6 visits to her GP over a two-month period.
The first visit mentions this detail:
29/12/18
Discussion: Concerned that her glucose levels are not well enough
controlled – checks levels often (worried?) Attends health centre –
feels not taking her concerns seriously
EXAMPLE TWO
TOO MUCH
HISTORICAL DETAIL
Avoiding unnecessary or repeated information is also an important part
of this criterion. In many sets of case notes, multiple visits to or by the patient
will be reported.
Some of the information in the earlier visits will have been superseded
by how the patient’s condition progressed. Summarising the information
to only include the details which remain relevant is therefore important.
Mr Spencer’s case notes cover his medical presentation:
Case Note
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EXAMPLE THREE
March 2018
October 2018
The task is to transfer the patient into the care of the Community Nurse
in the area where he will be moving to. The Community Nurse is requested
to provide ongoing monitoring.
• Relevant: Mr Dunbar’s medication and diet compliance need monitoring
• Not relevant: The frequency or specific dates when the patient has
been recorded as non-compliant.
REBECCA’S TIP
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Using facts and not making Starting and ending your letter
judgements How you start and end the letter is important to getting
When you present patient information, one way the formal tone right from the start and to leave the right
to be respectful and non-judgemental is to use facts: impression at the end. It is also common to end with
a closing sentence that offers the reader the opportunity
• He writes with his left hand and drove a manual to contact you or to show appreciation for their
car before the fall. involvement.
• She works on her computer every day and carries For example:
a heavy laptop home.
• If you require further information, please do not
When describing a patient’s lifestyle choices, use facts hesitate to contact me.
instead of words which sound judgemental:
• Thank you for your continued management
Judgement: Fact-based: of this patient.
• Mr X is a heavy smoker • Mr X smokes 30 • This handy tip guides you to the correct starting
cigarettes a day and ending language for your letter.
• Mrs Y is a binge
drinker OR Mrs Y is an • Mrs Y avoids drinking
alcoholic in the week but drinks
15 units of alcohol on
• Ms Z does not exercise
an average weekend
enough
• Ms Z admits she is only
physically active once
every three-months.
As you are writing to an endocrinologist, this There is more than one abbreviation used globally for
abbreviation would be very familiar and the condition Atrial Fibrillation: AF or AFib. As a result, it is best to use
is central to the patient’s reason for seeing them, the full form of this condition rather than abbreviating it.
so it is appropriate to abbreviate. For an orthopaedic
If you think your reader might not know what the
surgeon perhaps, the abbreviation is less appropriate.
abbreviation is, it is best to not abbreviate, otherwise,
Any mention of the condition, because it may have some
it will interrupt their reading.
impact on the treatment the patient receives, should
therefore be in full form.
REBECCA’S TIP
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05.
ORGANISING
AND LAYING OUT
YOUR LETTER
CHRONOLOGICALLY THEMATICALLY
In some situations, the clearest way to organise Another way to organise a letter is by putting the most
the letter is around time. You start at the beginning important information first. You would organise the
and continue up to the present day, for example: letter this way if there are several different aspects
to the patient’s current situation. For example, the
Reader: Endocrinologist
patient’s living and family situation, co-morbidities etc.
In these situations, presenting the information
Paragraph one: Mrs Sharma initially presented thematically will be most appropriate to the reader.
on 29/12/18… Let us look at an example:
Reader: Doctor
Paragraph two: A pathology report received
on 05/01/2019…
Paragraph One: Since October 2018, Mr Dunbar has
shown signs of diabetic neuropathy… and has not been
Paragraph three: On 12/01/19… compliant with his medication regimen…
Mrs Sharma’s situation is quite routine to the reader. Paragraph Two: In June 2018, he had a myocardial
The writer uses dates at the start of each paragraph infarction…His hypertension is controlled by Ramipril.
to separate the details of her visits. By doing this, the
information is formed into a timeline that is clear to the
In this letter, there is a timeline of the patient’s history
reader and easy to follow.
like the last example because it remains important for
the reader to understand what happened and when.
However, the information is laid out thematically rather
than chronologically.
If the case notes are describing an The first paragraph covers the patient’s diabetes
emergency, what happened six months and non-compliance with both his medication and
ago becomes much less important to diet, as per the purpose of the letter (write a letter
the reader. Instead, they are interested outlining the patient’s history and requesting ongoing
in what has just happened, what treatment monitoring). The second paragraph focuses on related
has been provided and details of the medical events and co-morbidities which are relevant
patient’s current situation. background detail for the reader but of less importance.
Once they have this in mind, they can then In other letters, thematic paragraphs could focus on the
scan through the rest of the letter to see patient’s social history, previous advice, and education
if the history presents any additional insight. they have received, relevant family history and the
impact this has on how the patient feels about their
condition etc.
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Review your paragraphs… …and the order of your sentences
There is no limit to the paragraphs you include. It’s not just about structuring the paragraphs in the
Use as many as are necessary to clearly communicate clearest order for the reader. You also want to make sure
the information to the reader. Some situations may need that the important details don’t get hidden within the
less, and some may need more. paragraph. Apply the same approach to the order of your
sentences. The sentence containing the most important
If you find you have a very long paragraph in your letter,
information for that paragraph comes first, the next most
use the few minutes at the end to:
important sentence comes in second and so on.
• make sure it is only covering one time period
Choosing how to order your information is what is being
or one theme
assessed in this criterion. Even if you have included all
• decide if you should break the paragraph into two. the information the reader needs, but not in the order
they need, then you will not have demonstrated this
criterion correctly.
Grammar Punctuation
Grammar structures the English language and Punctuation adds clarity to your writing. It can help
is an important element to get to know. While a lot you better communicate your message to your reader.
of native speakers never formally study grammar, Read through these top-read articles below.
it can help you learn English more quickly.
Use semicolons to write clear lists
Take a look at our three top read articles below:
Are you worried about using your punctuation?
How to use connectors and improve your clarity
in writing
Spelling
Do you know how to correctly write passive forms?
Spelling is important in Writing, and some misspelled
Do you know how to use a relative clause?
words will stand out more than others. However, you
won’t need to be perfect to achieve a B.
Vocabulary
Vocabulary is an important part of OET because
it shapes how to communicate with the audience
of your Writing and Speaking sub-test.
Take a look at this example:
Can you get these medication names correct?
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Additional tips
Assessment
Writing is assessed against specific criteria. These are
available for you to read and it is important that you
do. The descriptors available tell you what it is the
assessor is looking for and how to demonstrate this
in your responses. To get the grade you want, you must
score highly across ALL the criteria so make sure you
do not just focus on the obvious ones like Language.
Accurate grammar is important but not more important
than any of the other criteria.
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