Lesson 3 Observation
Lesson 3 Observation
Lesson 3 Observation
School: Fort Collins High School Grade Level: 9th Content Area: English
Lesson Idea/Topic and Today, the students will be in the process of revising and editing their
Rational/Relevance: essays. Their essays will be due a week from today, so this is a really
important day for them to look over their essays and diagnose some
mistakes. I will give them a guidance on why this process of revision is
important and how to do this, but the majority of the class will be student-
guided and driven. I will hold mini seminars that will help the students with
specific areas of their writing that I have identified after reading their essays.
This workshop will be different than the ones before; it will have a “coffee
shop” theme where it will make working a little bit more fun, motivating,
and engaging. The students will have multiple opportunities to work
collaboratively with their peers and some peers that they seldom talk to.
Student Profile: These students are in a 9th grade CP (college prep) class. There are 23 total
students within this class. A majority of these students are very goal driven
and capable of higher-level work than peers their same age. Despite this,
some of them tend to have trouble paying attention or engaging properly—
sometimes their phones or fellow peers distract them from the task at hand.
These activities are designed with these students in mind to encourage their
participation and engagement. Within this class, there are 13 Gifted &
Talented students.
Content Standard(s) addressed by this lesson: (Write Content Standards directly from the standard)
3.a. Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas, concepts, and information clearly and accurately through the effective selection,
organization, and analysis of content. (CCSS: W.9-10.2)
v. Establish and maintain a formal style and objective tone while attending to the norms and conventions of the discipline in which they are writing.
(CCSS: W.9-10.2e)
vi. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the information or explanation presented (for example, articulating
implications or the significance of the topic). (CCSS: W.9- 10.2f)
Students will be able to revise and edit their own writing and their peers writing in an effort to improve their overall writing skills.
Students will be able to identify common writing mistakes, ultimately preparing them to find and fix those in their own writing.
Students will be able to work collaboratively with their peers and communicate clearly.
Students will be able to review their work and notice patterns in their writing, allowing them to more easily understand their own learning goals.
Inquiry Questions: (Essential questions relating knowledge at end of the unit of instruction, select applicable questions from standard)
How do we write an effective informative text that examines a topic fully, educates the reader, and presents information clearly and objectively?
i. Establish and maintain a formal style and objective tone through my informational writing.
ii. Provide an effective conclusion that supports and follows from the rest of the essay.
I can: write and revise an informative essay that is organized, complete, and accurately conveys information about the topic I have chosen.
This means: I will review my essay for any common writing mistakes, ensure it maintains a formal and objective tone, and notice when I may be missing
information or components that will aid my audience’s understanding on a topic.
List of Assessments: (Write the number of the learning targets associated with each assessment)
Formative assessment: Walking around and talking to each student to gauge their understanding.
Formative assessment: Real-time student feedback in a call-and-answer format throughout the mini-lesson
Summative assessment: Our summative will be due a week from today, so I will be briefly reviewing the essays before next class and leaving feedback.
Name and Purpose of Lesson Coffee Shop Workshop: this day’s purpose is to give students a clearer idea of how to review their work
and why it’s important to do so. It will also be a fun and creative toss-up on our typical workshops.
Anticipatory Set The strategy I intend to use is: independent reading + journal time
I am using this strategy here because: this gets the students in the mindset of working efficiently and it
also has a calming element to it. I believe that independent reading and journal time is not only essential
to student growth and development but also to their human growth and development.
Procedures The strategy I intend to use is: modeling; questioning strategies; whole-class practice and individual
practice
I am using this strategy here because: this will be in the format of “I do, we do, you do” where the
students will see me model something in real time; we will then work together as a class through
questioning strategies, and then they will practice it on their own.
Direct students to begin their 10 BC Students will read their book of Which students are
Reading for 10 minutes. Throughout choice silently. reading and which ones
their reading, begin filling up some of are having a more
the students hot cocoa and tea. difficult time.
with the current book that I’m Students will listen throughout
reading, remind them of the chat modeling and then engage in book
component we talked about last time. chats with their partner.
Guide them into book chats with their
partners for 2 minutes.
Mini-Lesson: Revising:
Tell students that mistakes are Students will listen throughout this Teacher will check for
necessary and essential for learning, component of the lesson. non-verbal cues of
we need them in order to see where misunderstanding.
we need to grow. List off the tips for
revision and what to look for.
Look at an example essay and model Students will open their laptops and Which students are
the editing process first. Then, have our shared doc. They will work with engaging with their
the students look at the essay with a their partner on a think-pair-share partners effectively and
partner for 1-2 minutes for a think- component where they will share which students are not
pair-share. Get real-time student with me what needs to change in this understanding how to
feedback in a call-and-answer format essay. revise.
to revise the essay in a whole-class
practice.
Direct the students to get with a Students will engage with a partner The effectiveness of
partner who you haven’t been with they seldom or never talk to in order them working with a
before and review their paper so far to get some additional feedback and new partner and their
for 10 minutes, remind them of tips perspective on their work. ability to do so.
for writer’s conferences.
Share time!
Direct the students to get into little Students will get with their group and Share time will allow me
groups of 4 and change their seats to share their work and celebrate to listen in on
circle seating; each person has 1.5 others’ work. conversations and see
minute to share their findings and how students feel about
their FAVORITE part of the piece so their essays at this point
far; teacher will use a timer to in time.
facilitate and guide this activity.
Assessment Formative assessment: Walking around and talking to each student to gauge their understanding.
Formative assessment: Real-time student feedback in a call-and-answer format throughout the
mini-lesson
Summative assessment: Our summative will be due a week from today, so I will be briefly
reviewing the essays before next class and leaving feedback.
1. To what extent were lesson objectives achieved? (Utilize assessment data to justify
your level of achievement)
2. What changes, omissions, or additions to the lesson would you make if you were to
teach again?
3. What do you envision for the next lesson? (Continued practice, reteach content, etc.)
4. If you used co-teaching, would you use the same co-teaching strategy for this lesson
if you were to teach it again? Were there additional co-teaching strategies used
during the lesson not planned for initially? Please explain.
Lesson Idea/Topic and Rational/Relevance: What are you going to teach and why is this lesson of
importance to your students? How is it relevant to students of this age and background?
Student Profile: Write a narrative about your learners. What are their special needs? Exceptionalities?
Giftedness? Alternative ways of learning? Maturity? Engagement? Motivation?
Name and Purpose of Lesson: Should be a creative title for you and the students to associate with the
activity. Think of the purpose as the mini-rationale for what you are trying to accomplish through this
lesson.
Co-Teaching: Models – One teach/One observe, One teach/One assist, Station teaching, Parallel
teaching, Alternative/Differentiated/Supplemental teaching, Team teaching.
Approx. Time and Materials: How long do you expect the activity to last and what materials will you
need?
Anticipatory Set: The “hook” to grab students’ attention. These are actions and statements by the
teacher to relate the experiences of the students to the objectives of the lesson, To put students into a
receptive frame of mind.
To focus student attention on the lesson.
To create an organizing framework for the ideas, principles, or information that is to follow
(advanced organizers)
An anticipatory set is used any time a different activity or new concept is to be introduced.
Procedures: Include a play-by-play account of what students and teacher will do from the minute they
arrive to the minute they leave your classroom. Indicate the length of each segment of the lesson. List
actual minutes.
Indicate whether each is:
teacher input
modeling
questioning strategies
guided/unguided:
o whole-class practice
o group practice
o individual practice
check for understanding
other
Closure: Those actions or statements by a teacher that are designed to bring a lesson presentation to an
appropriate conclusion. Used to help students bring things together in their own minds, to make sense
out of what has just been taught. “Any Questions? No. OK, let’s move on” is not closure. Closure is used:
To cue students to the fact that they have arrived at an important point in the lesson or the end
of a lesson.
To help organize student learning
To help form a coherent picture and to consolidate.
Differentiation: To modify: If the activity is too advanced for a child, how will you modify it so that they
can be successful? To extend: If the activity is too easy for a child, how will you extend it to develop
their emerging skills? What observational assessment data did you collect to support differentiated
instruction?
Assessment (data analysis): How will you know if students met the learning targets? Write a description
of what you were looking for in each assessment. How do you anticipate assessment data will inform
your instruction?