Mid Term Khalil
Mid Term Khalil
Mid Term Khalil
Significance:
billion. It is estimated that to feed this population, food production will need to expand by
120–170%, This rapid growth in population has increased food demand and urbanization and
has decreased available land resources. According to the global food security index, Pakistan
has an overall score of 49.1 and an affordability index of 47.6 and ranks 77th in the world,
with 22% of its population being undernourished. When a child dies every five seconds due to
Explanation: 3 marks
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Background:
The Thar desert region, located in northwestern India and southeastern Pakistan. However,
despite the challenging environment, there exist several possibilities for food and energy
harvesting in this region. Historically, the local communities have adapted to the harsh
methods of water harvesting and conservation. The region is also rich in solar and wind
resources, making it a potential hub for renewable energy production. In recent years, there
has been an increasing interest in utilizing these resources for sustainable food and energy
production, with various projects and initiatives being undertaken to harness their potential.
With the right investments and initiatives, the Thar desert region can become a significant
Explanation: 3 marks
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History:
The Thar region has a long history of food and energy harvesting possibilities. Historically,
the inhabitants of the region have relied on traditional farming methods, such as rainwater
harvesting, to cultivate crops like millet, wheat, and mustard. these methods were often not
enough to sustain the population. In recent years, the Thar region has seen the introduction of
new technologies, such as solar-powered irrigation systems and wind turbines, which have
opened up new possibilities for energy harvesting. These advancements have not only
improved access to electricity and water, but have also made it possible to cultivate new
crops and create more sustainable livelihoods for the people of the Thar region.
Explanation: 3 marks
Blue is showing striking sentence as it is describing long history of food and energy
Green is showing concluding remarks these technologies adoption solve water and
Question 1:
Answer 1:
Exploring Food and Energy Harvesting Possibilities in Thar areas adjacent to urban areas using
literature review.
Description:
A good title has four components.
1. Activity (red)
3. Limitation (blue)
4. Technique (orange)
Activity:
Exploring is the activity.
Study domain:
Food and energy harvesting possibilities is the study domain.
Limitation:
Thar areas adjacent to urban areas is the limitation because we are only considered in one
region for food and energy harvesting.
Technique:
Literature review is a technique which is used to exploring food and energy.
Centre of excellence in Water Resources Engineering (CEWRE)
University of Engineering and Technology (UET), Lahore
54890, Pakistan
ANALYTIC RUBRIC
Fluency Writing is smooth and easy to Writing is generally clear Writing is difficult to follow.
read. Sentences flow well and and easy to read. There Sentences are choppy or
are well-structured. The writing may be some awkward poorly structured. The writing
has a clear sense of direction phrasing or structure, lacks a clear sense of
and is easy to follow. but overall, the writing direction.
is coherent.
Connectivity Ideas are well-connected and Ideas are generally well- Ideas are disjointed and
flow logically. Transitions connected. There may poorly connected. Transitions
between ideas are smooth and be some awkward between ideas are ineffective
effective. The writing is easy to transitions or jumps, but or non-existent. The writing is
follow and understand. the overall flow is confusing and difficult to
logical. follow.
Striking Writing includes multiple Writing includes at least Writing lacks any striking
Sentence striking sentences that capture one striking sentence sentences that capture the
the reader's attention and that captures the reader's attention. Sentences
leave a lasting impact. These reader's attention. The may be dull or poorly
sentences are creative and sentence(s) may be constructed, detracting from
thought-provoking, adding to well-crafted, but not as the overall quality of the
the overall quality of the creative or impactful as writing.
writing. those in the excellent
category.
Interest of Writing is engaging and holds Writing is generally Writing is unengaging and
reader the reader's interest engaging and holds the fails to hold the reader's
throughout. Descriptions are reader's interest. interest. Descriptions are
vivid and immersive, drawing Descriptions may be less lacking in detail or poorly
the reader into the narrative. vivid or immersive, but executed, detracting from the
The writing is well-crafted and still contribute to the overall quality of the writing.
enjoyable to read. overall quality of the
writing.
Total score
Centre of excellence in Water Resources Engineering (CEWRE)
University of Engineering and Technology (UET), Lahore
54890, Pakistan
ANALYTIC RUBRIC
Fluency Writing is smooth and easy to Writing is generally clear Writing is difficult to follow.
read. Sentences flow well and and easy to read. There Sentences are choppy or
are well-structured. The writing may be some awkward poorly structured. The writing
has a clear sense of direction phrasing or structure, lacks a clear sense of
and is easy to follow. but overall, the writing direction.
is coherent.
Connectivity Ideas are well-connected and Ideas are generally well- Ideas are disjointed and
flow logically. Transitions connected. There may poorly connected. Transitions
between ideas are smooth and be some awkward between ideas are ineffective
effective. The writing is easy to transitions or jumps, but or non-existent. The writing is
follow and understand. the overall flow is confusing and difficult to
logical. follow.
Striking Writing includes multiple Writing includes at least Writing lacks any striking
Sentence striking sentences that capture one striking sentence sentences that capture the
the reader's attention and that captures the reader's attention. Sentences
leave a lasting impact. These reader's attention. The may be dull or poorly
sentences are creative and sentence(s) may be constructed, detracting from
thought-provoking, adding to well-crafted, but not as the overall quality of the
the overall quality of the creative or impactful as writing.
writing. those in the excellent
category.
Interest of Writing is engaging and holds Writing is generally Writing is unengaging and
reader the reader's interest engaging and holds the fails to hold the reader's
throughout. Descriptions are reader's interest. interest. Descriptions are
vivid and immersive, drawing Descriptions may be less lacking in detail or poorly
the reader into the narrative. vivid or immersive, but executed, detracting from the
The writing is well-crafted and still contribute to the overall quality of the writing.
enjoyable to read. overall quality of the
writing.
Total score
ANALYTIC RUBRIC
Fluency Writing is smooth and easy to Writing is generally clear Writing is difficult to follow.
read. Sentences flow well and and easy to read. There Sentences are choppy or
are well-structured. The writing may be some awkward poorly structured. The writing
has a clear sense of direction phrasing or structure, lacks a clear sense of
and is easy to follow. but overall, the writing direction.
is coherent.
Connectivity Ideas are well-connected and Ideas are generally well- Ideas are disjointed and
flow logically. Transitions connected. There may poorly connected. Transitions
between ideas are smooth and be some awkward between ideas are ineffective
effective. The writing is easy to transitions or jumps, but or non-existent. The writing is
follow and understand. the overall flow is confusing and difficult to
logical. follow.
Striking Writing includes multiple Writing includes at least Writing lacks any striking
Sentence striking sentences that capture one striking sentence sentences that capture the
the reader's attention and that captures the reader's attention. Sentences
leave a lasting impact. These reader's attention. The may be dull or poorly
sentences are creative and sentence(s) may be constructed, detracting from
thought-provoking, adding to well-crafted, but not as the overall quality of the
the overall quality of the creative or impactful as writing.
writing. those in the excellent
category.
Interest of Writing is engaging and holds Writing is generally Writing is unengaging and
reader the reader's interest engaging and holds the fails to hold the reader's
throughout. Descriptions are reader's interest. interest. Descriptions are
vivid and immersive, drawing Descriptions may be less lacking in detail or poorly
the reader into the narrative. vivid or immersive, but executed, detracting from the
The writing is well-crafted and still contribute to the overall quality of the writing.
enjoyable to read. overall quality of the
writing.
Total score
ANALYTIC RUBRIC
Fluency Writing is smooth and easy to Writing is generally clear Writing is difficult to follow.
read. Sentences flow well and and easy to read. There Sentences are choppy or
are well-structured. The writing may be some awkward poorly structured. The writing
has a clear sense of direction phrasing or structure, lacks a clear sense of
and is easy to follow. but overall, the writing direction.
is coherent.
Connectivity Ideas are well-connected and Ideas are generally well- Ideas are disjointed and
flow logically. Transitions connected. There may poorly connected. Transitions
between ideas are smooth and be some awkward between ideas are ineffective
effective. The writing is easy to transitions or jumps, but or non-existent. The writing is
follow and understand. the overall flow is confusing and difficult to
logical. follow.
Striking Writing includes multiple Writing includes at least Writing lacks any striking
Sentence striking sentences that capture one striking sentence sentences that capture the
the reader's attention and that captures the reader's attention. Sentences
leave a lasting impact. These reader's attention. The may be dull or poorly
sentences are creative and sentence(s) may be constructed, detracting from
thought-provoking, adding to well-crafted, but not as the overall quality of the
the overall quality of the creative or impactful as writing.
writing. those in the excellent
category.
Total score