Essay 3 Draft 2
Essay 3 Draft 2
Essay 3 Draft 2
Engl 1301
6 April 2022
Ocean life is a beautiful and wonderous part of our world; filled with all kinds of life
from microorganisms to aquatic mammals, and even to the largest of creatures such as the blue
whale, and yet while the oceans and the life in them are truly a remarkable sight with all things
wonderful there always comes something to cause it harm. This is the case for sea lions who are
aquatic mammals and are creatures that bring joy and entertainment to many people who enjoy
marine watching. However, due to man-produced debris that spills into the oceans creatures such
as these are in danger of becoming entangled with all sorts of waste that can cause them harm.
This was made aware by Elizabeth Marina Allyn and Jonathan Joseph Scordino two experts in
how humanity impacts marine life and authors of an article regarding sea lions and the rate of
them becoming entangled in the state of Washington. Their interest began with the population of
“the northern fur seal (Callorhinus ursinus) and the endangered Hawaiian monk seal (Monachus
schauinslandi)” believing that entanglement is the cause of their endangered status. Now, this
article serves to better understand the relationship between entanglement rates and the haul-out
abundance trends of the state of Washington and the Steller and California sea lion population.
While the author’s work is highly credible with multiple grants and approved research methods,
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even backed by numbers and percentages, their focus on credibility and the context of how likely
the entanglement rate is, they lack a sense of feeling which hurts their article.
To show the author’s understanding of the issues that the journal covers they first met
with the National Marine Fisheries Services to review and approve their research and
methodologies to gain access to the “Marine Mammal Protection Act research permits numbered
14326, 13430, and 19430” as well as obtaining the “Special Use Permits that come from the
United States Fish and Wildlife Service” so that they can have access and permission to all land-
based surveys and haul out activities that they conducted within the Flattery Rocks National
Wildlife Refuge. As such with these grants and permits in hand, began their observations which
spanned from the years 2012-to 2018 occurred their primary focus was on the major haul-out
points of the Tatoosh Island, the Bodelteh Islands, Sea Lion Rock, and Carroll Island areas as
these are the most likely areas to provide the best data available. The surveys they conducted
year-round, however for the late spring and even early fall were given extra effort as the
availability of survey days was shortened due to weather conditions and favorable seas. It was
through these surveys that allowed them to not only gather haul-out data but also actively
interacted and counted the individuals that became entangled or showed signs of the previous
entanglement and tallied the total abundance of the sea lions that were encountered. To better
assess these sea lions and the damages caused by the entangled materials, a digital SLR camera
In addition, the article mentions that after calculating an average rate of entanglement for
the California and Steller sea lions of the northern Washington coast after using the counts of
entangled individuals and the haul-out counts. Their survey proved to be the best during the
times of summer and early fall as these were the times that provided the best entanglement rates
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and aligned for the most favorable weather and sea conditions, and to pair up the use of
entanglement rates came with the use of photo analyses to better assess if “ the entanglement was
active or inactive, identify the entangling material, and record the age and sex of the entangled
individual.” And it was from these that the authors then organized them into separate
demographics ranging from the age of the individuals into adults, pup, juvenile, and unspecific,
the sex of the adults as well as other physical characteristics such as size, shape, and whisker
length as this would help in understanding what material was entangled around them. Now after
identifying the materials that entangled the California and Stella sea lions were then categorized
into nine categories those being packing bands, rubber bands, and microfilaments to name a few
to better interpret the damages these waste materials have caused these creatures the article
portrays the various scaring these materials have done to these poor loveable sea mammals.
As revealed by the article itself the materials that entangle the Steller and California sea
lions are as varied as are the mechanisms of how they become entangled. From the excess
terrestrial and marine pollution to old, derelict, and even active fishing gear as these materials are
known to loop around the neck of the creature as well as sharpened edges that can embed
themselves into the sea lion’s skin pose a high risk of being tools of entanglement. However, the
most common and likely device that is the cause of entanglement as stated in the article “Packing
bands and rubber bands are likely encountered passively as debris” as well as possible derelict or
active fishing gear encounters with monofilament line, net fragments, and even rope. The study
objective suggests is that a better way to characterize the various rates and causes of sea lion
entanglement within the northern state of Washington as well as evaluate the exact occurrence of
these local entanglements and the haul-out abundance trend. First, the study used previous study
methods stating that packing bands and netting would be the most prevalent ways for sea lions to
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become entangled. This data was gathered through an annual occurrence of packing bands
entanglement and compared to local surveys from beachside debris that were first conducted by
the Olympic Coast National Marine Sanctuary or the OCNMS to try and discern any kind of
patterns in the material availability. This general analysis was conducted through the years 2012-
2017 which was a total of 1,548 beach debris surveys that spanned the Olympic Coast and
covered seventeen beaches and the results from these surveys were that the correlation between
the proportion of packing bands entanglements matched the beach debris found by the OCNMS
organisms, to mammals who thrive in the ocean blue to finally breathtaking gigantic behemoths,
however, while many enjoy the sights of these amazing creatures, always comes a threat to ruin
that which we hold dear. With litter, plastics, microfilaments, all man-made debris that has
leaked out into their beautiful blue undersea world, and the perceived lucky ones such as the sea
lions are not safe even on land. As due to the amount of old derelict litter can cause the bundles
of entertainment to become entangled with scars going throughout their bodies, and while this
issue was brought under closer observation by the work of Elizabeth Marina Allyn and Jonathan
Joseph Scordino their primary focus was to determine through their research, data, and
photographs if there was a correlation between sea lions and the entanglement rate of them. It
held a high stance with the amount of work to prove the extremely high rate, but their lack of
character in response to the damages that the local sea lions receive takes away from their
overarching goal.