Screenplay Notes
Screenplay Notes
Screenplay Notes
TrainScript
Sc # 1Day,
Black screen.
Aditya stands facing the mirror in the wash room. He is looking down.
After a moment, he looksup towards his eyes. He lacks the courage to
look at himself. He looks down.He comes out of the washroom, looks at
the conference hall. Raghav is standing at the door of theconference
hall, waiting for him. He indicates to him to hurry back, the others
are waiting. Raghav goesinside. Aditya looks at the conference hall.
Through the glass, he sees Raghav telling the others thatAditya is
coming back now. Aditya can see that the situation is waiting to
explode on him. He stands therefor a moment. Then instead of going
towards the conference hall, Aditya turns right into the staircase.
Aditya walks into the foyer. The staff and visitors jerk into
attention. Some salute, some wish,somebody runs towards the
porch.Aditya’s black BMW drives into the porch.Someone opens the car
door for Aditya. Aditya walks down the steps, does not go to the
opendoor. He walks around and takes the key from the driver and sits
in the car.{1/2 min}
The car drives into a club house and parks. Aditya gets off.
Title Sequence
The music of receding plays. Aditya turns. Titles begin. His mind is a
blank, his senses diffused.He walks out.Outside the club, Aditya walks
the lane – as though some force is taking him away. He opens hiscoat
buttons and removes the tie.Return office traffic has begun. He puts
his tie on the pavement, crosses the street.
Aditya walks across a market place.He walks on another street. He
removes his coat, places it on a railing. A beggar is looking athim.
He removes his gold cuff-links. Cuff-links fall on the pavement.He
walks across a bus-stop, pulling his sleeves. A bus stops. People file
in from around him. Heturns and looks at the bus.He is sitting in the
bus. His co-passengers keep changing.Evening. The bus comes to a final
halt outside VT station. Everyone gets off. Aditya gets out.VT railway
station. Aditya walks in.He walks through the crowd in the foyer.He is
walking on a platform. Train whistle blows, flurry at the platform.
Aditya stops. He looks atthe train. The train begins to move. Aditya
looks at the door coming towards him. It is inviting him. Hemoves up
and climbs into the door. The train takes him away.The train is
leaving the station.[The ambient sound will be almost inaudible. Only
very loud and shrill sounds – like the train whistle –will be
registered. In the last shot of the train leaving the station, the
ambient sound will come back infull]{2 mins}
The platform, seen from the train through a door, is moving faster and
faster. There are two menstanding at the door. One of them – a young
man, is hanging out and bringing in pieces of luggage fromsomeone
still on the platform. Evidently, a girl is trying to catch the
speeding train. There is a coolieinvolved, but we can only hear them
at this time.Geet (OC)Pakdaate jao, pakdaate jao… Bhaisaab ke haat
mein do.One suitcase is already in. It is put on the side by someone.
The young man gets off the train andtakes another suitcase from the
coolie and loads it.
Young Man (to Man 1)Main neeche se pass kar raha hoon.Coolie (to
Geet)Tum chahadh jaayo pehle…Geet (OC)Arey tum meri tension mat lo,
samaan andar karo jaldi… Ye lo…The suitcase is in. Man 1 passes it to
the next man who passes it to the next. A bag comes innow. Then a
plastic shopping bag comes in, stuffed with loose items. Then another
plastic bag. Then anearthen pot with a flower plant. There are a few
others who have collected in the door area in the secondclass sleeper
to see the drama. Meanwhile – Coolie (OC)Hum keh rahe the doo go
coolie ka samaan hai…Geet (OC)Bag dekho bag dekho girega…Man 1 Abhi
aur bhi samaan hai?Young Man (OC)Aane do, aane do…Geet (OC)Ye lo, ye
padko… Haan…Man 1 Bahut riks hai bahut riks hai… Samne dekhiye…Geet
(OC)Haan dekh rahi hoon, aap jaldi jaldi samaan leejiye… Now the young
man climbs back in and extends his hand. The girl is pulled up into
the runningtrain. She clambers in, stands clutching her waist, panting
and exhausted. The small gathering is lookingat her.GeetOh… Oh teri…
Oh god… Aaj to hadd hi ho gayee, line cross hi ho gayee thi aaj to…
(She looksat all the people in front. She lets out a laugh.) Pata hai
kya, aaj tak life meinek train nahin chhooti meri… Thank you Babaji,
mera record tootne se bachaliya (to Young Man) Aa gayee hoon main
andar. Ab to mera haath chhod do.(laughs) Itni bhi sundar nahin hoon
main.Young Man leaves her hand in a spark and looks embarrassed as
Geet points towards him andlaughs.{1/2 min}
Passage in the moving train. The girl is walking up holding a bag and
ticket, talking to the three people who are following her with her
luggage.GeetYou know, mujhe Non AC mein chalna better lagta hai. Magar
meri family… Kehte hain tumladki ho… jaise mujhe hi nahin pata ki main
ladki hoon. (to a passenger) Bhaisaab A2 hain na?PassengerHaan…
GeetThank you. (to her helpers) Ab AC se ladki ka kya connection hai,
ye mere palle nahin pada.
Aditya is sitting on a seat. From the distance, Geet and the other
three walk up. Geet is looking atthe seat number as she walks.GeetI
mean koi pehli baari to akele travel kar nahin rahi hoon main… More so
is train mein… Ye tosamajh lo ki mera second home hai.Geet stops,
looks at Aditya. She drops her bag, looks at her ticket, looks back at
Adityasuspiciously. She crosses to face Aditya.GeetTicket dikhaana
please.Aditya is looking down, in a trance.GeetHello… Aap se baat kar
rahi hoon. Arey? Ye meri seat hai. Twenty four. Kamaal hai? O boss…
She waves her hand in front of his face. He looks up towards her. She
thinks he is hearingimpaired. She mimes, mouthing the words
carefully.Geet (miming)Ye seat… chaubis…. Meri…Aditya looks at her,
then gets up and sits on twenty three. He looks away.(snip)Geet is
opening her jacket and hanging it in between and talking to
Aditya.GeetYe passage waali seats koi nahin lena chahta, magar main
insist karti hoon ki bhaiya passagewaali seat hi do. Reservation waale
uncle bade hairaan pareshaan ho jaate hain magarmera funda ye hai ki
raaste ke nazdeek rehne…(snip)Geet is adjusting her luggage beneath
the lower berth and up on the top berth and talking.GeetMera safar hai
na, is train ke saath khatm nahin hota. No. Aage jaana hai mujhe –
Bhatinda…Mera ghar hai vahan, family hai… Sab ki hoti hai, meri bhi
hai… Hai na?Bhatinde ki sikhni hoon main…(snip)Geet is getting
comfortable in the seat now and talking.GeetSab kehte hain Mumbai bada
crowded hai. Arey? Crowded matlab kya? Crowd hum jaise logonse hi to
banta hai? Khud bheed ka hissa hain aur takleef bhi khud hi ko hai. So
funny…Aditya is sitting on his seat, looking the other way. Geet is
another posture.Geet (OC)Main to ja rahi hoon Mumbai chhod ke –
hamesha ke liye. Aayee thi pata hai kab, jabMumbai Bombay tha. Ek naam
ke shaher mein aayi, doosre naam ke shaher se ja rahihoon… Achcha
batao mujhe ye kya logic hui ki…(snip)Aditya is getting uncomfortable
with her talking so much.Geet (OC)Hostel, hostel, hostel… St Teresa’s
boarding school hostel in Shimla, Missionary Hostelfor College girls
in Bombay Central, Government Girls Hostel on Marine Drive…
(snip)Aditya is restess.Geet (OC)Mujhe kasam hai aaj ke baad kabhi
hostel mein nahin rahoongi. Nafrat ho gayee haimujhe hostels se. I
hate hostels. I hate them.(snip)Aditya is more restless.Geet (OC)I
hope barsaat ke aane se pehle ye roads ki digging band ho jaye varna
pata hai kyahoga? Anyway mujhe to fark nahin padta kyonki main
rahoongi nahin yahan magar jo baaki janta hai yahan par…Aditya can not
take it anymore. He gets up abruptly and walks away.Geet (OC)Kya hua?
Arey…?{2 mins}
Aditya opens the door of the train and looks out. The rails are
clanging along, bushes are jumping out from the darkness, poles are
whizzing past. He shuts his eyes for a moment. He hears a siren.A
train is approaching. He looks at the train. The train charges in,
crushing the rails, shaking the gravel.Aditya clenches his fists on
the railing. There is no one near him. His face is getting hard. The
train will be there in seconds. It’s a matter of seconds. It is
coming. It is about to reach.Geet (OC)Ye kya kar rahe ho?Aditya gets a
start. He turns to look. Geet is standing there, with a towel and
soap, come to washher face. He turns to looks at her.Geet (OC)Chalti
train ka door kabhi nahin kholte. Pata hai kya ho sakta hai?He is
looking at her. The train tears past behind him. Geet speaks in
animation about a young boy who was travelling in the same train as
her and had fallen off the door once. But nothing she says can be
heard because of the loud passing of the train. Yet she speaks with
all her might.(snip)Aditya turns away to the night. He closes his eyes
and relaxes himself. She is washing her face behind him.Geet (washing
face etc) Mook ho, bol nahin sakte? Ya sharmeele type ke ho? Ya sirf
budtameez ho?Haan?Geet shakes her head. Aditya is looking into the
night as Geet speaks.
Geet (OC)Kuch to baat hai. Teen baari main pooch chuki hoon magar koi
javaab hinahin.TTE (OC)Ticket please.The TTE is standing in front of
Geet. Geet’s face is wet.Geet Berth pe hai. Aati hoon.The TTE walks up
to Aditya.TTETicket dekhaiye please. No response from Aditya. The TTE
taps Aditya. Aditya turns.TTEAur door band kar deejiye. Ticket…Geet
comes up and begins to mime to Aditya, mouthing what she wants to
express.Get (miming)Ye tumhaari ticket dekhna chahte hain… Inhien
ticket dikhao. Kahan hai? Ticket?Ticket. Tee-ket…Aditya (to TTE)Mere
paas ticket nahin hai.Geet looks at him.{2 mins}
The TTE is sitting, taking out some registers from his pouch. Aditya
is sitting in front. Geet issitting on the side.Geet(explaining to the
TTE) Actually dekhiye kya hua ki iska plan jo hai na vo aakhri moment
pe bana. Ticket banane ka time hi nahin tha. Vaise aap ko to pata hi
haiki train khaali hai. To aap ab inki ticket bana deejiye, no
problem. Haina? Bhaisaab aap convince ho gaye hain ya main aur
boloon.The TTE gives her a look, then turns to Aditya.TTEKahan ki
ticket banaoon?Aditya looks back at the TTE.TTEKahan jaana hai aapne?
AdityaYe train kahan jaati hai?TTEKya?Geet looks at Aditya, then turns
to the TTE.GeetLast stop. Dilli. Dilli ki ticket banaiye. Dekhiye,
main aapko bata hi doo ki – haadsa hua hai inkesaath. Bura waqt hai.
Tab hi ye… Dilli.(snip)The TTE leaves. Geet is looking at Aditya in
amazement. She giggles.
GeetKya boss? Chakkar kya hai? Drugs shrugs lee hai?Aditya does not
reply. She comes closer.GeetDekho aisa hai ki life mein koi problem
hai to mujhe bata sakte ho. I don’t mind. Bata do. Badesaare dost
mujhe apni problems batate hain aur main unhien solvekarti hoon, pata
hai? Us type ki hoon main – agony aunt hoti hai na,magazines mein
article aate hain? Vaisi… To batao kya baat hai.Bolo. Batao batao,
sharmao nahin. Batao kya problem hai. Bolo na.Aditya (bursts) Tum ho
meri problem. Tum… Bolti ja rahi ho, bolti ja rahi ho… Tumhien samajh
meinnahin aa raha ki main tumse baat karne mein interested nahin hoon?
Main nahin baat karna chahta tumse. Mujhe nahin janna hai ki
tumBhatinda se aayi ho ya Banaras se… ab tak hostel mein rehti thi ya
brothel mein. Mujhe maaf karo, please.He turns away. Silence. He turns
back towards her. She is looking at him.Geet (calm) Brothel vaali baat
theek nahin thi.He looks at her.AdityaI’m sorry. Really… I’m sorry.
Mera vo matlab nahin tha.Geet (back to herself)Main jaanti hoon.
Clearly dikh raha hai ki maha upset ho tum kisi baat se. Tabhi mujhpar
bhi upset ho gaye aur bakwaas karne lage. Magar it’s okay.Main bura
nahin maan rahi hoon, haan? Actually aaj kal mujhe kisi baat ka bura
nahin lagta. Pata hai kyon? Kyonki meri shaadi honewaali hai. Bahut
jaldi. Aur suno, bhaag ke shaadi kar rahi hoon. Vosikh nahin hai na,
log manenge nahin. Magar shaadi ho jaane ke baadkoi kya kar sakta hai?
Ja ke pairon pe gir jaana hai unke, maaf tokarna hi padega. Manali
mein rehta hai vo. Shaadi ke baad hum pahadon mein rahenge. Mujhe na
pahad bahut pasand hain. Really…(snip)Aditya sighs secretly as Geet
rambles on.Geet (OC)Ek to ye hill aur mountain ke beech fark kya hai
mujhe aaj tak samajh nahin aayi. Badehills mountain hote hain magar
kitne bade? Koi aisi measurement hai?(snip)Geet is talking in usual
enthusiasm.GeetBachpan se hi na mujhe shadi karne ka craze hai by god.
Aur ab to main ruk hi nain sakti. Baswait kar rahi thi ki mera college
khatam ho jaye aur uski travel agencyshuroo ho jaye.Aditya sits
helplessly.
Geet (OC)Last few years mein hi hua hai ye sab – trains time par
chalne lagi hain aur flights ke baare mein to ji jab bhi pata karo to
delayed. Kamaal hai, agar humeindelayed hi jaana hota to flight se
kyon jaate?The train is running in undulating landscape at night.{2 ½
mins}
GeetArey chhodo train ja rahi haiGeet frees herself and moves away,
squishing some more tomatoes. The train is bounding away.She screams
after the train at the top of her voice as she limps forward with all
her might.Geet(screaming) Roko… Train ko roko. Arey koi chain
kheencho. Roko train ko… Arey…The train picks up speed and goes away.
She runs to a stop at the end of the platform, looking atthe train in
despair. She turns around, panting heavily. She can’t believe this is
happening to her. Shelooks at the station. There is a signal boy, some
vendors ready to sleep under blankets near their shops –everyone
looking at her in pity. Except the woman who she had knocked down, who
is collecting hertomatoes and still abusing.Woman(distant) Arey itni
moti aurat, itna bada tokra, kisi andhe ko bhi dikh jaaye aur ye
paagal… Kya jaane kis kis kone mein ghus gaye hain tamatar. (to the
people helping her) Areysaamne se to main bhi le loongi… udhar waale
do…Geet is at a complete loss. She turns to look at the train again.
She looks at the platform again.(snip)Aditya is still sitting on the
bench, looking at her as she approaches. She charges in.GeetYou bloody
weirdo. Kis duniya mein ho tum, haan? Meri train miss kara dee hai
tumne. Merasaara samaan, sab kuch chala gaya aur main in kapdon mein,
slippers pehne, Barnagarnaam ke station ke is godforsaken platform par
khadi hoon aur (loud) ab main kyakaroongi? Haan?Aditya(equally
annoyed) Kisne kaha tha tumhein train se utarne ko? Tum apne kaam se
kaam nahinrakh sakti?Geet(loud) O… Meri ghalti hai? Besharam… Main
tumhaari help kar rahi thi. Tumhein thank you bolna chahiye. Aur tum
attitude dikha rahe ho?AditaOkay. Thank you. Thank you ki tumne meri
madad karne ki koshish ki. Theek hai? Ab mera peecha chhodogi?
GeetPeecha chhodogi? Achcha… Itna aasaan nahin hai. Tumhaari vajah se
meri train miss hui hai toab tum mujhe Bhatinda pahunchaoge, mere ghar
tak, aur mere saare saamaan ke saath?Ji haan. Main tumhein chhodne
waali nahin hoon, koi doubt mat rakhna dil mein.Sikhni hoon main
Bhatinda ki.Aditya is looking at her, figuring out the situation. Geet
is looking back at Aditya boldly. Helooks towards the exit of the
station, looks back at her. He suddenly turns and runs.Geet(screaming)
Arey… Bhaag raha hai…She runs after him. He runs up the foot-bridge
and goes towards the exit looking at the trainchugging away in the
distance. She is following him with all her might.Geet(screaming) Arey
padko… Pakdo us aadmi ko. Chor hai, chor… Bhaag raha hai chor, pakdo…A
guard steps up to Aditya as he is leaving the station gate.GuardRuk…
Geet enters the small porch of the railway station, looking for Aditya
this way and that way. Shelooks at the road in front, panting. She
sees Aditya talking to the driver of a taxi. She makes to call him,
but he calls her first.Aditya(calling) Jaldi karo.Geet rushes and sits
in the rear of the taxi, understanding Aditya’s plan to chase the
train.GeetChalo, chalo, chalo.Many photographs of deities on the
dashboard of the car. The driver folds his hands to them,then starts
the routine of touching the deity then his eyebrow then lips then
eyebrow then lips, anotherdiety then eyebrow. Geet is looking
impatiently at this.Geet Haan haan ho gaya, sun lee oopar waale ne, ab
chalo.The driver starts the car.{1/2 min}
He tries to grab the steering wheel but the Geet arrests him from the
back seat.GeetArey disturb mat karo, accident ho jayega.The driver is
stung with nervous anticipation and fear. He petitions to Aditya as
Geet speaks to pacify him.DriverMark three… mark three ambassador hai…
Ae saab… ae… Arey please…GeetShh… shh… shh.DriverPlease bol rahe hain…
Aap… Eighty… dekho, dekho… Hil rahi hai, hil rahi hai…GeetTum tension
mat lo, suno meri baat.DriverKya kar rahe ho…? Zameen bech ke gaadi
liye hain… kheti se kuch mile hai kya? Bolo?GeetYe jo saab hain na,
koi mamooli aadmi nahin hain Style dekh rahe ho inka? Bahut paise
haininke paas.DriverYe gaadi gayee to khel khatam.GeetAur kyonki hum
sab is situation mein inki vajah se hai, to kuch bhi tootega, uska
poora damageye denge. Main dilvaoongi, ghabrao mat.All this talk while
the desperate chase is on. The car speeds along. The train speeds
along.{2 ½ mins}
The car zooms into the station front. Aditya gets off and runs towards
the platform. Geet gets offand runs after him. The taxi driver gets
off.Driver(calling after) Paisa. Arey bhaag rahe hain…He runs after
them.DriverArey paisa do… Ruko…The sleepy station façade is shaken to
take notice. Aditya, then the girl rush through the jumbleof people
and things towards the platform. The screaming taxi-driver is after
them.DriverRoko unko, roko. Bhaag ke kahan jaoge? Ruko…{1/2 min}
A few men standing against the wall, looking the other way. Their look
moves, Geet enters. Theyare looking at her. She is in panic. She stops
and looks around for Aditya. She whimpers, then turnsaround.The
station masters office board is seen. She looks around once again,
then walks into the office.The men who were looking at her move up to
the door, peep inside. A few others join them. They arewhispering to
each other about her.Inside, Geet is standing in front of the table,
very worried. The men peeping inside can be seen ata distance behind
her. The station master is speaking.Master (OC)Kota hai agla station.
Main vahan ke station master ko inform kar doonga.MasterVo aapka
samaan rakh lenge.Suddenly, at the door behind her, a young man is
pushed inside by the others. He hits againstsomething and recoils.
Geet turns to look. There is suppressed laughter. The young man darts
out. Geetturns back.MasterAur to kuch nahin ho sakta
hai.Geet(mumbling) Main vahan pahunchoongi kaise?
Shit.Master(superior) Kaun bola train se utarne?She looks at
him.MasterHoshiyar rehna chahiye tha. Ab kya karogi?He plays
percussion on the table with his fingers. As though he is happy that
justice has beendone.MasterJavani ka josh. Samajhte nahin ho. Nahin.
Bilkul nahin. Dekho…He holds two of his index fingers parallel to each
other.Master(continuing) Zindagi rail ki patri hai. Ek inch ka bend
aur aage chal ke meelon ki doori. Abdekho…. Ek choti si bhool tumhaari
saari zindagi badal sakti hai.He is enjoying this, feeling good to
talk. He takes a more comfortable position and continues.MasterMeri
bhi kayee train chhooti hai. Par un dinon main mard tha… matlab ki
mard hoon main, ab bhi… par tum ladki ho. Akeli ladki khuli hui tijori
hoti hai. Tumko pata hai kya hosakta hai tumhaare saath? Pata hai?
Main baata hoon. Dekho…He makes a rectangle with his
fingers.GeetExcuse me.He looks at her.Geet(polite) Aapse poochhna tha
– aap jo ye sab bol rahe hain, iske paise charge karte hai ya ye
muftka gyaan hai?Master(puzzled) Nahin ye to muft hai…
GeetGood… Kyonki chillad nahin hai mere paas. Dekho… Buddhe… Bakwaas
band karoaur apna kaam karo. Kota ko message bhejo, baaki meri problem
hai, main samhaal loongi. Chalo phonemilao.The station master is taken
aback. He picks up the phone.(snip)The people thronging the door
withdraw and scatter. Geet comes out of the door. She looks at themen.
Then walks away.{2 ½ mins}
Geet sits on a bench. She holds her head. Someone comes and sits next
to her. She looks. It is thevendor who had sold her water.VendorAapka
paani.The vendor is wearing a lungi now. He keeps one foot on the
bench. The men hanging aroundthe door start moving up towards the
bench now. Geet notices this. She looks at the vendor.VendorBahut bura
hua.One of the men who were crowding around the door comes in from
next to the vendor. Theothers are slowly coming closer.Man(to vendor)
Ka baat hai bhai? Ka hua?VendorTrain chhoot gayee bechari ki.ManArey
arey.VendorSubah tak doosri koi train bhi nahin hai.ManDhat teri ki.
Akeli hai?VendorHaan.ManTch tch tch tch. Ab ka karegi ye?VendorVohi
to. Tum to jaante ho. Akeli ladki khuli hui tijori ke jaisi hoti
hai.Geet(aggressively) Suno tum. Natak mat karo samkje? Phuto yahan
se. Chalo.VendorArey? Hum koi bam hain jo phoot jayenge? Samajhne ki
koshish keejiye. Iske pahle ki koi apkaghalat fayda utha le, hum soche
ki hum help kar dete hain.Man(to vendor) Raat ko yahan mat rehne dena.
Thoda kasht hoga tumko magar kaheen le jao isko.VendorHaan aur koi
upay bhi nahin hai.Geet stands up and addresses them more
aggressively.GeetZyada smart banne ki koshish mat karo, samjhe? Chalo
niklo yahan se.VendorHadd ho gayee. Matlab ki sarafat ka jamaana hi
nahin raha.ManBatao…VendorHum aapko sahi jagah le ja rahe hai aur aap…
GeetShut up. Chamaat maroongi aur bakwaas kee to.Pause.Man(to vendor)
Kha le chamaat. Isi bahaane choo to legi kam se kam.There is a guffaw
in the people around. Geet looks at them. The vendor stands up.
VendorTheek hai. Aapko isi mein khushi milti hai to maariye humein.The
vendor stands in front of her in the posture to get
slapped.VendorArmaan poore kar leejiye aap. Maariye.The others are
laughing. Geet stares in anger at the vendor and the others. Then she
turns andwalks out.VendorKya hua? Kahan chaleen? Arey maariye na…
Nahin hum to aaj chamaat kha ke hi rahenge.She walks towards the exit
of the platform as they laugh and follow her loosely.{2 ½ mins}[26
mins]
Geet walks out to the foyer of the station. She turns back to look for
the urchins. She lookstowards the street. The taxi driver is there,
sitting in his taxi and committing his ritual of touching thenotes to
the feet of the deities, then his eyebrows then lips then eyebrows
then lips. She runs towards him.He sees her.GeetSuno…
The taxi driver panics on seeing her. As she comes down the stairs to
him, the car starts andflees. She looks at the car sourly.GeetShit.She
looks back towards the station. The vendor, the man and two others
come out towards thefoyer, looking for her. She notices that a few
women are standing to one side of the façade. She walkstowards them.
She stands at a distance from them, feeling safer among her own
gender, trying to conjureup some sort of a plan. The women look at
her. That’s usual. She is new to this place. A motorbike comesin, the
driver looking shamelessly at the women. He crosses Geet. Then he
stops, turns and comes back.He stops in front of her.BikerChal.Geet
looks at him.BikerKya hua? Chal.Geet looks at him in question.BikerEk
aadmi – main. Full night, jagah meri.She looks at the women who are
standing there in cheap make-up. They are prostitutes. She
turnssharply to the biker.GeetNahin. Main…BikerKya?GeetMain vo nahin
hoon.BikerKya nahin hai?GeetVohi…BikerHaan?Geet turns and walks back
towards the station.BikerArey yaar… tu bol na paisa main deta hoon.
Nakhra kyon dikha rahi hai?Geet sees the vendor and the other three
standing in the foyer, with a panwalla. The man pointsher out to the
vendor. Geet stops at the steps. She turns and walks down the steps,
the other way.Biker(calling out) O Anarkali. Sun idhar aa.Geet moves
away quickly. The bike comes after her. Geet turns to look at the
bike. She turns back. She sees something, looks in surprise. It is the
figure of a man walking away in the distance. Shemakes to call,
decides against it. The biker reaches her.BikerSun…Geet walks away
towards the man. The biker follows her on the bike.BikerKyon kasrat
kara rahi hai raat ko? Paisa bol. Jo bhi hoga main doonga. Ruk ek
minute… ruk…
Geet and Aditya are walking up a lane outside the Ratlam station. It
is quite deserted at this hour.He is looking around. She is looking
around too, and talking.GeetRatlam. (snickers) I mean… come on. Hadd
ho gayee yaar. Kya matlab hai iska, ki main Ratlamki galiyon mein
ghoom rahi hoon. Hain? Train se dekhti thi main – ye ghar ye
galiyaan.Zindagi bhi kamaal hai, hain na?AdityaBahut mazaa aa raha hai
na? Picnic par aaye hain hum log. Tumhein utha kar museum meinrakh
dena chahiye. Tumhein dekhne ke liye ticket lagni chahiye.GeetAye hai.
Kya baat hai. Aur tumhein kahan rakhna chahiye? Train mein ho magar
pata nahintrain kahan jaati hai. Anjaan kisi station mein utar jaate
ho, phir pagalon ki tarah gaadi
chala kar – almost meri jaan le kar yahan pahunchte ho, aur yahan kya
– andhere raaste par akele chale ja rahe ho – Ratlam ki galiyon mein.
Yaar tumhaari problem hai kyaaakhir, bata hi do ab.He looks
away.GeetSorry sorry, bhool gayee thi. Tum apne problems kisi se share
nahin karte. Right, right.Bachchan ke fan ho kya? Angry young man. Aaj
khush to bahut hoge tum. Hain?Agneepath, agneepath… Batao na. Achcha
favourite hero kaun hai tumhara bolo…Arey ye to batao, ye to koi
secret nahin hai…Aditya shakes his head.Aditya(muttering) Kya kar raha
hoon main? Kahan aa gaya hoon? Kyon?He is walking down.{1 min}
Sleazy room. Geet is sitting against the wall. She looks at Aditya as
he enters from the door. Thesmile is still playing on his face. His
body language is happier now. He shuts the door and moves.GeetKya
khusar-phusar kar rahe the uske saath?AdityaTum bahut badi cartoon ho.
Pata hai tumhein?GeetHo sakta hai. Magar mujhe karate aata
hai.AdityaTo?GeetBus, bata rahi hoon. Brown belt hoon main.AdityaOh,
tumhein karate aata hai, matlab agar main tumhein rape karne ki
koshish karoon to tummujhe karate kar dogi.GeetHo sakta hai. I mean
yes. Bilkul. Dekhne mein aisi lagti hoon magar bade saare logon ko
maargiraya hai maine.Aditya(sighs, shakes his head) Don’t worry. Main
tumhein rape nahin karne waala hoon.GeetTum kar hi nahin sakte ho.
AdityaMain karna chahta hi nahin hoon.GeetChaho bhi to nahin kar
sakte.AdityaTum kya mujhe chaabi laga rahi ho? Ki main rape attempt
karoon?GeetNahin main bus clear kar rahi hoon. Tumhein koi wrong
signal na mile. Station ke baahar mainetumhein hug kiya aur kaha kisi
hotel mein chalte hain. Pata nahin tum kya soch rahehoge… Vo bhi
tumhaare jaisa aadmi.AdityaMere jaisa aadmi matlab?GeetBombay mein
ghoomti hongi tumhaare aas paas – us type ki girls. Magar main bata
doon kimain bilkul vaisi nahin hoon. Sochna bhi mat. Old fashioned
hoon main – one manwoman. Aur ye dekho (takes out photo from pocket)
Anshuman – one and only,hamesha ke liye.AdityaTumhein sun ke khushi
hogi ki main bhi one woman man hoon. Okay? Aur ye (takes out wallet)ye
dekho.He shows the picture in his wallet, then shuts it.GeetShow show
show.She comes up, take his wallet and looks at the picture. It is a
picture of the girl whose weddingreception Aditya had gone to.GeetWow.
Mast hai yaar. Bade lucky ho…Aditya takes the wallet back, takes the
photo out.AdityaNahin… Lucky nahin hoon.GeetHmm…?He looks at the
photograph then flings it to the table.Geet(understands) Oh… Ye
problem hai. Is ladki ne tumhein dump kiya hai.Aditya(to himself)
Zindagi ne hi mujhe dump kar diya.GeetMatlab?Aditya turns away.GeetO
god. The famous silence and all. Itna bada kya secret hai tumhaara?
Maine to sab kuch batadiya tumhein. Tum kyon nahin bol sakte?He is
still silent.GeetAnyway. (gets the photograph to him) Dekho. Dekho
isko. (he looks) Is ladki ne tumhein ditchkiya hai na? Pakdo ek
minute.She goes and gets a match-box from the table.
The back door opens in a dirty lane and the receptionist herds
everyone out. Aditya and Geet alsoget out from there.GeetChakkar kya
hai? Hum smugglers ki acting kyon kar rahe hain?ReceptionistAgli baar
kuch suitcase type laana saath mein – thoda samaan, police ko dikhaane
keliye, ki haan bhai gentry hai.GeetTch, mera saara samaan train mein
jo chhoot gaya.Receptionist(awe) Train waali pehli baar dekhi hai.
(wondering) Train mein hi coupe kyon nahin book kar lete? Hota hai na
jismein only do log sote hain?AdityaAgli baar bataoonga.He takes Geet
and they follow the others who are stealing into the darkness.GeetBol
kya raha hai ye?AdityaShh…{1/2 min}
Sc # 23Night, Int / ExteriorsRatlam Bus Stand
In corner of the bus stand, near the busses, Geet is sitting and
praying to waheguru.Geet(praying, muttering) Please babaji, ab to hadd
paar ho chuki hai. Ab is raat mein aur koiexcitement mat dena. Boring
bana do ji ab is raat ko please.Aditya approaches her, checking the
few notes in his wallet, sits against a pillar.AdityaBus chhhe baje
chalegi. Neend aa rahi hai?GeetNahin. Tumhein?AdityaTum kyon pooch
rahi thi? Ki main tumhein like karta hoon ya nahin?Geet(remembers)
Arey haan, batao. Main kaisi lagti hoon.AdityaMagar kyon?GeetOh ho.
Kyon ka koi javaab nahin hota, tum bus batao. Achchi lagti hoon?
Phataak? Mast? Jaldi bolo… Jaldi, jaldi.Aditya(casually)
Haan.Geet(reconfirm) Haan?AdityaHaan.Geet(excited) Great. Tum mujhe
like karte ho to meri sister ko bhi like karoge. Roop, meri
cousin.Bilkul mere jaisi hai. (conspiring) Baat suno – main bahut
jaldi bhaagne waali hoonAnshuman ke saath. Tum aur Roop bhi saath mein
bhaag lo. Tumhaari bhi problemsame hai, dadaji maanenge nahin. Aur
uske baad chaaron ikatthe rahenge pahadonmein bada mazaa aayega, what
do you say?Aditya is looking at her quizzically. He does not know if
she is serious or playing the fool. Bynow he actually does not care
either.AdityaHum aisa kyon na karein, ki tum aur main bhaag jaate
hain. Shaadi karte hain, aur rehte hain pahaadon par. Convenient
option hai, dekho. Agar hum abhi Bhatinda nahin jaayen, to bhaag hi
gaye na hum?Geet is shaking her head.
GeetDekho. Agar tum Roop se shaadi karte ho, to main tumhaari saali
banti hoon – aadhi gharwaali.AdityaAadhi ka kya karoonga? Mujhe poori
chahiye.GeetMil rahi hai na Roop poori ki poori. Aur oopar se main
aadhi. AdityaBargain offer hai?GeetEk ke saath aadhi muft, muft, muft…
AdityaTumse shaadi karta hoon tab bhi to offer valid hai.GeetMain
tumse apni behen ke rishte ki baat kar rahi hoon, tum mujhe line maar
rahe ho?AdityaMain tumhein like karta hoon to us se shaadi kyon
karoon?GeetBata to rahi hoon vo bilkul mere jaisi hai.AdityaTum
hamesha aise bakwaas karti ho ya aaj koi special occasion
hai.GeetNahin main to hamesha bakwaas karti hoon. Tum?AdityaMeri first
time hai. (stretches out on the ground) Aaj tak tere jaisi mili nahin
na koi.Geet(reclines on the pillar) Bhatinda chal, milvaati hoon.He
smiles. He looks behind himself, sees the world he has reached. The
smile remains on hisface.{2 mins}[38 ½ mins]
Song # 1
Aditya begins to hum something. Geet and he are sprawled out in the
bus stand in Ratlam. Geetlooks at him. He looks at her, begins to sing
the line. There is thin music accompaniment. He gets up tosit and
sings.Music thickens with the the sun rising in Ratlam. The bus is
travelling on the state highway andAditya is singing the song.The song
is about travel. Aditya is going with the flow. He does not know where
he will end up but he wants to keep going.This is the song of a man
coming out from the shackles of his life and moving into freedom.
Geetis the catalyst for this change.In the song, Aditya is getting
infected by her bright spirit. He is even copying her
subconsciously.His body language changes in the song.After the bus,
Aditya is singing as he walks down a street in Kota with Geet.In the
music interlude, we see that Aditya withdraws cash from an ATM. Then
they take Geet’sluggage from the station and keep it in the cab he has
hired. Aditya is wearing new clothes.The car is on the highway now.
Aditya and Geet are sleeping in the back seat.Geet is seen drawing
water from a hand-pump on the way. Both splash water on themselves.The
car drives through a procession of camels.Somewhere on the road, the
car’s tyre is punctured, the driver is repairing it. Aditya and Geet
aresitting on a milestone.Then Aditya is driving, Geet is sitting next
to him and the driver is sleeping in the back seat.At the end of the
song, the car is standing at a dhaba somewhere in Punjab. Aditya and
Geet areclimbing a guava tree that is slanted on a water stream on the
side of the dhaba.[4 mins]
Aditya and Geet are sitting on a branch of the tree, eating guavas.
Water is flowing beneaththem.GeetTum to kamaal ho yaar. Maine apni
life mein kisi ko itna achcha gaate huye nahin suna.Tumhien to singer
hona chahiye.AdityaSab kuch jo insaan chahta hai, vo milta kahan hai
yaar?GeetKyon? Mujhe to lagta hai ki insaan jo kuch bhi real mein
chahta hai na, actual mein, usko lifemein vohi milta hai.AdityaEk time
tha jab main real mein chahta tha, actual mein. Music se bada passion
nahin tha merilife mein.GeetLife khatam ho chuki hai tumhari? Baat
aise kar rahe ho jaise mar chuke ho.Aditya(smiles) Mara to nahin hoon.
Magar ab music – vusic nahin ho sakta meri life mein.GeetKyon? Kyon
nahin ho sakta? Aisi kya majboori hai, batao mujhe.He looks down,
looks away.GeetO god. Okay yaar, okay. Mat batao. Magar phir se angry
young man mat ban jao, okay?Aditya(suddenly bright)
Okay.Pause.GeetMain hi baat shuroo karti hoon.AdityaOf course.GeetHmm…
(looks down at the stream) Pani achcha hai na.AdityaHaan.Geet(idea)
Kabhi kisi ped se neher mein jump lagayee hai tumne?Aditya turns
sharply to her, tries to read her.Aditya(insecure) Geet, chalo ab
neeche utarte hain. Come on.GeetTry karna chahiye. Bahut mazaa aayega.
Chalo.Aditya(serious) Geet, Geet. Main tumse poochna chahta tha. Kabhi
psychiatrist ko consult kiya haitumne?GeetOh shut up.
Wet shirts are dumped close to the fire. This is the kitchen area of
the dhaba which is the make-shift changing room for Aditya and Geet.
There is a loose partition and Geet is changing, drying on theother
side. Aditya comes on the front side, looking away.AdityaIdhar dekhna
mat.GeetHa ha ha.He wears another shirt, begins to dry
himself.AdityaDharamraj Kashyap ka naam suna hai?GeetThe
industrialist? Of course. Jo mar gaya last year. Kyon?AdityaMain unka
beta hoon.Silence. Then Geet appears in front, in shock.Geet(stunned)
Tum Aditya… Kashyap ho?AdityaNow you know me.GeetYou are the Kashyap?
Vo tumhaari ma thi jo kisi ke saath bhaag gayee thi?He
flinches.GeetShit. I’m sorry.AdityaHaan, meri maa thi. Jo bhaag gayee
thi kisi ke saath.GeetVo yaar, news-views mein isi tarah ki language
mein suna tha na. Vaise hi nikal gaya. I’m reallysorry yaar.
Really.AdityaNo Geet. Mujhe sunna padega. Tum kyon sorry bol rahi ho?
Kisi ki ma agar itni cheap hai, itnigiri hui harkat kar sakti hai to…
GeetMr Kashyap, aapko unke baare mein itni budtameezi se baat nahin
karni chahiye.Aditya(sudden anger) Kyon nahin karni chahiye, haan? Us
aurat ne hamaari family ko destroy kar diya,zindagi bhar ke liye mujhe
saari duniya ke aage sharminda kar diya, main kyon nahin budtameezi se
baat karoon?GeetKyonki vo… pyaar mein thi yaar.Aditya(disbelief,
bitter smile) Pyaar? Are you serious?
A very old Sikh man is sitting on a chair. There are various portraits
hanging on the wall behindhim. Geet comes up to him. Aditya is brought
into the room by Daljit Singh, Geet’s chacha. Her fatherKulmeet Singh
enters too. It is a strict atmosphere.Geet(nervous) Paeri-paena
dadaji.Old Sikh is looking at Aditya.DadajiMunda kaun hai?GeetJi mera
friend hai dadaji.DadajiKis tarah ka friend hai?GeetDadaji, vaisi koi
baat nahin hai.Dadaji(scolding) Kaisi baat nahin hai?GeetMatlab… bus
friend hai.DadajiTo ghar kyon le aayi hai?GeetVo to aisa hai dadaji ki
main ise ghar nahin layee hoon. Ghar ye laaya hai mujhe. Meri na
trainchhoot gayee thi ek station par, raat ko. Agar ye nahin hota na…
Aap to jaante ho, akeliladki khuli hui tijori hoti hai. Main ise
jaanti bhi nahin thi, train mein hi mile the humlog, phir bhi ye mere
saath hazaar kilometre tak aaya hai Bhatinda – mujhe safely ghar
pahunchaane ko.Geet’s father and uncle and other middle-aged Sikhs
crowd around Aditya, pat his back. OldSikhlooks at Aditya, back at
Geet.DadajiAur to koi dosti nahin hai? Kyonki meri umar mein ek jhalak
mein dikh jaata hai ki ladke-ladkike beech kya chal raha
hai.GeetDadaji please. Aap mujhe sharminda kar rahe
ho.DadajiSharminda? Agar sharam hoti tere andar to tu is tarah ke
kapde pehenti? Ye kapde pehen karghar aayi hai to Bambai mein to nangi
phirti hogi.Geet is terribly embarrassed. Old Sikh looks at
Aditya.DadajiNaam kya hai?AdityaJi Aditya.Kulmeet Singh prompts Aditya
to go forward to dadaji. Aditya comes closer.DadajiAditya kya?
AdityaAditya Kumar.Aditya bends to touch his feet.
AmrikKya nonsense hai. Kabhi suna hai kisi ka pet phata ho?
VikramInfinite elastic ke hote hain pet.Geet comes from inside with
her father and sees this. Aditya looks at Geet.Aditya(to Geet)
BachaoGeetArey, lassi nahin pilayee? Kamaal hai.Aditya points a finger
at Geet.KulmeetHaan, ye baat to sahi hai. Koi Punjab aaya hai aur
lassi nahin mili.Young GirlMain laati hoon.Young girl flies off.
Aditya gives tough looks to Geet. Geet giggles. Her mother has come up
toher and she takes her away. Satpal puts more food on the
plate.AdityaArey kya…? Kya kar rahe ho bhai?SatpalAapne hamaari behen
ko bachaya hai. Hum itna nahin kar sakte aapke liye?AdityaYaar ghalati
ho gayee maine teri behen ko bachaya, maaf kar de, aage se kisi ki
behen ke saathaisa nahin karoonga.Everyone laughs.{1/2 min}
The sun rises in Punjab. The house is still asleep. Geet comes out of
the backdoor, makes her waytowards the tree, reaches it, waits for
Aditya, looks around. She sees that Aditya is coming from the
otherside, from the sugarcane plantations. He is shearing and chewing
cane and wearing a Punjabi shalwaarwith mojri and a kurta. Geet
smiles, calls out to him.GeetVaari javaan Soniyon. Ajj tvaada rang-
tang kinna kmaal da hai. AdityaHune tu vekhyai nai ae kuch. Agge agge
tu dekh mere rang.GeetHain. Ae te kmaal hai. Tu ta vadi changi
punjaabi bolda ae.AdityaAe vi mera ik rang aae.GeetTu kithhe sikkhi
inni vadiya Punjabi bolni?
The Khoslas are here. Another pack of turbaned men and long-haired
women – of all ages. Theyare being welcomed by the Dhillons. Manjeet
Singh Khosla is there too – young, handsome, a touch shy.He touches
Dadaji’s feet, then of Geet’s father and Chacha. Everyone hugs
everyone. Blessings are given,foreheads are kissed.Aditya is standing
across the courtyard, looking at all this. There is a narrow table
there onwhich snacks are being laid out. Geet is helping in that. She
comes close to Aditya, putting the glasses inorder. The entire
gathering is seen in the background.Geet(low) Ulloo, sab ke sab. Dekho
kitna khush ho rahe hain. (crossing him) Inhein kya pata ki mainto
bhaagne waali hoon bahut tez.Aditya(low) Sun, zyaada sat mat mujhse.
Ye log ghalat samjhenge.Geet suddenly clutches his kurta to arrest
him.GeetTo? Mujhe kaun si yahan shaadi karni hai?He is unclasping her
fingers from his kurta.AdityaAur ye saare pehelwaan jo mujhe patak ke
maarenge?GeetThoda bardaasht kar lena mere liye Jaaneman.
The tussle of the fingers and kurta carries on. They are trying to
keep their faces straight, butcracks of giggles or smles can be
seen.AdityaKurta… kurta chhod, kya kar rahi hai?GeetYe idea achcha ho
sakta hai is shaadi ko rokne ke liye. This is the right
option.AdityaTu mujhse door reh, samjhi?Aditya removes her hand from
himself and moves off a bit. In so doing, he sees Roop. She has been
watching all this with a puzzled look. Aditya turns and moves away.
(snip)Geet and Manjeet meet.GeetHello.ManjeetHow are you ji?GeetFine.
Long time.ManjeetThree years almost.GeetHaan, Jaspreet ki shaadi ke
baad.ManjeetHaanji. Aur Bombay ke kya haal-chaal?There is silence
except the voices of Manjeet and Geet. Geet looks around. Everyone
else islooking at them.GeetAap sab bhi baat kar sakte ho ji. Koi
punishment nahin hai.There is a guffaw and things ease out.
(snip)Aditya is standing on the side.Daljit(OC) Aditya.AdityaJi.He
moves out. He comes to the gathering.DaljeetBauji bula rahe
hain.Aditya looks at Old Sikh. Old Sikh is sitting next to Manjeet and
Geet now.DadajiHaan bhai, suno. Inse mila doon. Ye Aditya hai.
Sangeetkar hai. (to Aditya) Sab ke naam to yaadnahin rahenge, ye
Manjeet hai.Aditya meets Manjeet.AdityaHi Manjeet.Manjeet(stands)
Hello. Aaiye baithiye.
AdityaNahin, tum baitho yaar.Geet (to Manjeet) Ye bahut hi achche
singer hain.ManjeetAchcha ji.Geet(to Manjeet) Is happy occasion mein
inhein gaana nahin gaana chahiye?Aditya looks sharply at Geet. Geet
looks at him with a grin on her face.ManjeetHaanji zaroor,
bilkul.AdityaNahin, ye mazaak kar rahi hai.GeetNahin nahin, serious
hoon main. Hans rahi hoon kya, dekho…Daljit Singh comes along to the
center.DaljitLadies and gentlemen. Bambai se aaya mera dost, Aditya,
ek Geet pesh karne waale hai.AdityaArey chachaji please…DaljitTo
please zara shaanti, silence…AdityaArey dekhiye…Aditya looks around,
trapped. Old Sikh speaks to him.DaljitEveryone settle down
ji.DadajiPuttar, ab to tu gaa hi de. Hum bhi dekhen Bambai waalon mein
kitna dum hai. saktehain.Aditya(smiles) Ji…Aditya looks down,
prepares. Then looks up.DaljitOkay, silence.Silence happens.Daljit(to
Aditya) Baith jao ji, baith jao. Aaraam se.AdityaHaanji.Aditya sits.
He clears his throat, looks up at the gathering. They are all staring
at him.AdityaAap log aise kyon dekh rahe ho, main nervous ho
jaoonga.DaljitHaan bhai, sab idhar udhar dekho, idhar udhar.Aditya
clears his throat again.
AdityaMain shuroo karta hoon, he says. Aap log bhi join karna.KhoslaO
koi nahin, join karenge… hum to Punjabi hain… humein to mauka chahiye…
DaljitHaanji, chalo, start.Aditya looks at Geet. She is looking at him
with a smile.{3 mins}[57 ½ mins]
Song # 2
Aditya looks down and begins to snap his fingers in rhythm. The beat
picks up. He starts singinga Punjabi, bhangra style song. Everyone is
greatly excited about him singing in Punjabi. They join in. Thesong
builds up with nagadawallas coming in. Dancing begins. Everyone dances
with everyone – includingGeet and Manjeet. In all this, there is a cat
and mouse happening between Geet and Aditya. She is tryingto reach
him, he is trying to get away from her. As a way out, Aditya comes to
Roop and sticks to herright through. The song becomes an uproar.[4
mins]
Geet and Manjeet are walking in the orchard in the backyard. Manjeet
is talking, Geet is lookingaround for something.Manjeet Apna main kaam
to spare parts ka hai, magar abhi tayaji ko tender mila hai. To hum
log eknayee foundry daal rahe hain, metal strip ki.GeetAchcha…
Hmm.Geet sees Aditya at a distance with Amrik, shooting stones with a
catapult.Geet(to Manjeet) Ek minute, haan?She skips towards Aditya. He
looks at her.Geet(to Amrik) Tu yahan hai? Papa bula rahe hain.AmrikOh
ho…Amrik runs away. Geet turns towards Aditya. He is looking at her
with a smile.AdityaAb kya karne waali hai?Geet does not smile. She
comes close to Aditya, looking tense.GeetVo aa raha hai?AdityaKaun?
GeetManjeetAditya looks. He sees Manjeet walking towards
them.AdityaHaan.GeetIdhar dekh raha hai?
The view of the house from the courtyard late at night.Somebody enters
the guest room from the window.The figure creeps up to Aditya, who is
sleeping on the bed. The person touches him. Adityarouses, looks. It
is Geet in the darkness.GeetShh… Chillana mat.Aditya lifts himself to
sit. Geet comes close. There is enough light to see each other here.
Theytalk in low ones and whispers.GeetShh…AdityaYahan kya kar rahi ho?
GeetCongratulations. Tumne saara kaam kharaab kar diya. Maine itna
achcha scene set kiya. Manjeetab tak vapas Patiala pahunch gaya hota.
Magar kehta hai mujhse baat karega. Akelemein. Tumne zaroor kuch kaha
hoga. To main to ja rahi hoon.AdityaKahan ja rahi ho?GeetKahan matlab?
Main bhaag rahi hoon.AdityaGeet kabhi aisa mat karna.GeetMain aisa kar
rahi hoon. Saara kuch planned hai. Tumhein bye bolne aayi
hoon.Aditya(sits up more) Tum abhi bhaag rahi ho? As in abhi abhi?
GeetHaan. Tum yahan rehna kuch din, araam se, phir vaapas Bombay
jaana, okay?AdityaEk minute ek minute. Tum bhaag jaogi, aur main yahan
rahoonga?GeetTo?AdityaTo kal Manjeet apna munh khol dega, aur ye log –
jinko pehle se hi shak hai ki tera-mera scenechal raha hai – ye apni
bhaison ke saath baandh denge mujhe.GeetGreat. To tum bhi chalo mere
saath.AdityaSaath gaye to inka shak yakeen mein badal jayega, sochenge
tum aur main bhaag gaye hain.GeetSo big deal. Taenu ki fark paendae?
AdityaCorrect. Maenu ki fark paendae.GeetChalo
{1 min}
The courtyard again. The staircase is seen. Aditya and Geet are
sneaking down the staircase.They have a bag each in their hands.
(snip)They are stealing across the courtyard. Aditya looks up to the
other corridor on the first floor. Hesees Roop standing there, looking
at them.Aditya(whisper) Roop ko bata diya hai kya?Geet(panic) Kyon?
Geet follows Aditya’s look and sees Roop. Roop is straining to see
what the hell is happening inthe darkness below.GeetO teri bhaag.Geet
rushes out. Aditya rushes out after her. Roop runs towards them. She
comes to the stairs.Roop(calling) Geet…{1/2 min}
The house stands at night. It is seen from outside the gate. Roop runs
up to the gate, shocked and panting. She looks outside. Aditya and
Geet are seen running away on the outside lane that goes to themain
road.Roop(calling out) Geet, kya kar rahi hai?Geet turns,
stops.Geet(calling out) Main do din mein vaapas aa jaoongi Roop. Main
tujhe kal phone karoongi. Aurtujhe meri kasam, kisi se kuch kehna
mat.That makes Roop realize that she should tell everyone. She
immediately turns back to the houseand runs.Roop(screaming) Papa,
chachaji, Geet bhaag rahi hai. Utho sab log. Vikram, Satpal…Aditya and
Geet are on the road.GeetShit.AdityaChalo, jaldi karo.They turn and
run.AdityaPlan kya hai?GeetKayee options hain.Aditya(surprised)
Options?GeetYa to hum railway station ja sakte hain, ya bus
stand.Aditya(intrigued) Aur vahan pahunchenge kaise?GeetLet us see.
Main road se autorickshaw mil sakta hai.Aditya(exasperated)
Unbelievable.He stops running.GeetArey chalo…Aditya(scolding) Ye
tumhara plan hai? Shayad main road se rickshaw milega? Tumhein zara
bhi akalhai ki nahin?Geet(responding aggressively) Mujhe maloom tha
kya ki Roop humein dekh legi? Ab ruke kyon hain,chalo…AdityaRuko.
Old Sikh enters the chaos in the front yard. Daljeet Singh is pacing
back towards the porch.DaljeetVikram jeep nikaal. (to servant) Garage
khol garage.The gardener is running towards the main road. Kulmeet
crosses him.KulmeetDikhe kya?DaljeetJayenge kahan?Kulmeet rushes to
Roop.KulmeetKahan dekha tha toone?Geet’s mother Jasbeer and two aunts
come out. They are looking at everyone faces. Old Sikh isstanding in
the center.Jasbeer(to everyone) Kya hua? Haan? Kya hua?Dadaji(to
everyone) Mujhe maloom tha. Kameene ko pehchaan liya tha maine.Daljeet
comes up, crossing in the other direction.Daljeet(to sexy) Mera wallet
laana.Dadaji(continuing) Ek jhalak mein pata chal gaya tha ki dono ke
beech kya chal raha hai. Par tum logmeri baat kahan sunte ho?
Aditya is looking down from the terrace to the frontyard. Geet creeps
up to him.
Roop is coming back from the gate. The boys are running around.
Chaos.Sexy(giving wallet) Har baat bata deti thi ye baat kyon chipaya…
Daljeet(getting into jeep) Ye sab us kameene ka kaam hai – Aditya –
saala makkar. Usi ne Geet kadimagh ganda kiya hai.Sexy(intermittently)
Ae ji… Zara samhaal kar… Zyada ghussa mat karo… Ji
dekhoDaljeet(continuing) Hamaare saath aa ke raha, saath roti khayee…
uski to main… Vo mil jay ek baar,zinda nahin chhodna hai use…
SatpalHaan, maar daalenge.
A motorcycle and the jeep leave at great speed towards the road.
Aditya, peeping down, shakeshis head. He turns to Geet,
sits.AdityaKahan mil raha hai vo – tumhara boyfriend?GeetManali mein.
Young Amrik runs in towards the gate. A maid is rushing after him,
calling out to him.Maid(calling out) Amrik… Main papa ko bol doongi.
Kal school hai na, chalo sone.SatpalTheek hai tayaji. Main bus stand
ja kar check karta hoon.KulmeetYe mera mobile le ja.
GeetTum to life mein bahut serious the Aditya. Kya fayda hua? Bahut
bade problem to tum bhi pahnsgaye na?Aditya is stunned. He stares at
her.GeetAage kya hone waala hai, uspar kisi ka control to hai nahin.
To aise mein main vohi karti hoon jo mera dil kehta hai. Kal ko main
kisi aur ko blame nahin karna chahti ki ji tumhaarivajah se meri life
kharaab ho gayee. Meri life jo bhi hogi, mujhe pata hoga ki meri
vajahse aisi hai. To I’ll be happy.Aditya is staring at her.
Unexpectedly, she is making all the sense to him. She smiles,
clutcheshis shoulder.GeetFunda zyada ho gaya?Aditya smiles, shakes his
head. She looks at him.GeetYe jo waqt hai na jo hum abhi kaat rahe
hain, yahan? Ye bahut achcha time hai. Dekhna, aagechal kar hum is
waqt ko yaad karenge, aur hansenge.Aditya is looking at Geet, smile on
face, internally mesmerized by her.{3 ½ mins}
Dark crops at night. Aditya leads Geet out of them. They come to the
road. They move in thedirection of the taxi stand. Geet stops. She
looks back at the house she is leaving. Aditya notices, comes back to
her.Geet(looking at the house) Main bahut jaldi vaapas aa jaoongi.
Shaadi ka sign karte hi mainAnshuman ke saath yahan aakar inke pairon
pe gir jaoongi. Daantenge, taane maarenge… phir maan jayenge.Aditya
can see the taxis in the stand down the road.AdityaChalo…She looks at
Aditya.GeetSach batao. Kya main theek kar rahi hoon?
Day. The road climbs up and snow peaked mountains come into view. We
are in the Himalayas.And Geet is on top of the world. Her dream is
coming true. She is going home to Anshuman. She wants tosmell all the
flowers and soak in the clouds. She wants to dance in the hill market-
place, she wants to hugeverybody on the street. Aditya is looking at
her go beserk. He is looking at her with the feeling that hewill not
be looking at her for long. He is missing her already. Geet sings the
song. Geet does the dance.Geet changes clothes and shows the options
to Aditya. Aditya watches.{3 ½ mins}
As the music of the song trails away, Geet is standing at the mall,
looking at an open cafeteriadown below. Aditya is standing behind,
looking at her. She sights Anshuman.GeetVo dekho, Anshuman… (calling)
Anshuman… Udhar dekh raha hai. Chalo…She turns to Aditya in full glee.
He is looking straight at her.AdityaBye.Geet pauses.GeetKya?
AdityaHamesha aisi rehna.GeetArey us se mil to lo.Aditya comes
forward, holds her hand. He looks at her to print her in his mind. She
looks at him.AdityaGeet.He smiles. He leaves her hand and withdraws,
looking at her. He waves to her. She hasunderstood that it is best for
him to leave now.
In the last Manali Montage shot, one which looks at the mall area,
Aditya walks up to the frontand stands. He feels the mountain breeze
on his face. He turns and looks back. Background music begins.This
will always be a part of his memory – these lanes, these forests and
mountains, these clouds, thisfragrance. He turns back, puts his bag on
his shoulder and walks away.{1/2 min}
Sc # 41Day, InteriorsCorporate Office – Banquet Hall
Around fifty of the top officials of the company are sitting at desks
for the General Body Meeting.They are looking towards the front.Aditya
walks up towards them. He is wearing semi-formal clothes. He is
looking at them.They are all looking disgruntled, especially the
senior ones sitting in front. Aditya reaches thegroup. He looks at
them. Raghav is standing on his side.AdityaHi.Group (OC)(without
enthusiasm) Good morning, hello, etc.Aditya looks at the group. There
is tension in the hall. He looks at Raghav, looks back at
thegroup.AdityaAap log mil kar mujhe peetne waale ho kya?Raghav and a
few others are shocked. One or two people suddenly laugh in the
audience. Theaudience is now looking at him in amazement.AdityaKyonki
kaam maine pitne waala hi kiya hai. (getting serious) Main jaanta hoon
ki aapmein se har aadmi mujhse ghussa hai. Aap soch rahe hain ki main
achanak kahan chalagaya tha. Aapko javaab dene ke liye Raghav aur
maine ek bahut achchi kahaani banayihai, absolutely convincing, magar
aap logon ko dekh kar mujhe lagta hai – ki main sachhi bol doon.Raghav
is looking at Aditya in suspense.
AdityaMain bhaag gaya tha… Bina plan kiye main is office se, is sheher
se chala gaya. Us waqt mujheye nahin pata tha ki kahan ja raha hoon,
sirf ye maloom tha ki kya peeche chhod rahahoon – dad ki death ke baad
company ke problems, meri mother ki legal notices, loans,girta hua
stock… mere kuch personal issues… Mere dimagh ne kaam karna band
kardiya aur bina soche, bina kisi ko bole, main yahan se nikal gaya,
chalta raha aur… inshort, main bhaag gaya.Raghav is looking at the
group. They are looking at Aditya – intrigued and in full
attention.AdityaAur ye kuch din jo main baahar raha hoon – is duniya
se door, anjaan logon mein – ismienmaine seekh liya ki zindagi utni hi
mushkil hoti hai jitni aap usey banaate ho. To mainvaapas aa gaya
hoon, zindagi ko aasaan banaane – apne liye, aur aapke liye. Mujhe ab
bhi nahin pata hai ki main kaun se methods use karoonga, magar ye pata
hai ki ekmaheene ke andar is company ki saari problems ko attack kar
ke khatam kar doongachahe mujhe kisi bhi extent tak jaana pade. Is
waqt mujhe aap ka saath chahiye, aurmera vaada hai, ki jab tak main
zinda hoon main aapke saath hoon. Aap mein se har ekke saathkhada
hoon. Aap sab mere dad ko pyaar karte the. Vo hain kaheen par, dekh
rahe hainhumein. Unko dikha dete hain ki hum unki company ko vahan le
jayenge jahan vo khud bhi soch nahin sakte the.Clapping resounds.
Aditya looks at the gathering. The gathering stands and claps
fervently.(snip)Raghav follows Aditya out of the door, looking at him
in surprise. Aditya turns to Raghav.AdityaAb main unse milne ko
taiyyar hoon.Raghav understands. Nods.{2 mins}
Jaya Khanna. She is sitting at the conference table, looking the other
way. The setting is identicalto Sc # 1. Only that Aditya is looking at
his mother and she is looking the other way. Lawyers, Raghavand the
others are placed as they were in the first scene. Jaya’s lawyer is
talking.Lawyer 1(OC)Mrs Khanna does not want to entertain any
settlement at this stage. She is here only tohonour the request for
this meeting. Unka khayal hai ki Mr Aditya Kashyap ne bahut hi
inappropriate tareeke se behave kiya hai. Humne faisla kar liya hai
kiis company par Mrs Khanna ke claims ka faisla ab court mein hi
hoga.Meanwhile, Aditya had lifted the paper in front, glanced through
it. Presently, he looks at thelawyer.AdityaAre you sure?LawyerJi?
AdityaYe hai claim, right? Aapki client ne mere father ke saath apni
saari zindagi is company ko banaane mein laga dee. Dono ne saath mein
naukri chhodi, saath mein ekkamre ka office liya tha, aur saath kaam
kar ke itna bada empire banaya. Iskeharjaane mein (showing paper) kya
ye paanch item ka claim kaafi hai?Mrs Khanna is been looking at him in
intrigue. Everyone is surprised.AdityaKyonki ko main ise sign karne ko
taiyyar hoon.Raghav is looking at Aditya in anticipation. Aditya keeps
the paper down and turns to hismother.AdityaMrs Khanna.They are
looking at each other.
AdityaAapne, apni personal life mein, jo bhi kiya – apni family mein,
apne ghar mein – uska iscompany se koi lena-dena nahin hai. Uski vajah
se main aapki zindagi bhar ki mehnataapse nahin cheenoonga. Ye company
jitni meri hai, utni hi aapki hai. Ismein aapkivohi jagah hogi – vohi
power aur responsibility hogi – jo paanch saal pehli thi.She is
looking at him.AdityaIs that okay?Tears come to her eyes. Aditya
stands up.AdityaRaghav, paperwork taiyyar kar do. I want to sign in
one hour.She stands, looking at him. He turns to her.AdityaWelcome
back.She makes to move towards him. He turns and walks away. She looks
at him go, tears flowingfrom her eyes.{1 ½ mins}
Aditya walks out of the conference hall door. His secretary – Meher –
is waiting for him. Shewalks down the corridor with him. He is
thinking about the meeting with his mother.MeherSir maine unko brief
kar diya hai. They are asking for a week. They are in
yourchamber.Aditya walks into his chamber with Meher. Two recruitment
consultants in formal suits stand upon seeing him.AdityaHi. Teen
achche log chahiye mujhe apni personal team ke liye – three tigers –
and we will takeon the world. Get me the best, I will give them the
best. No one week. Two days. Bye.Raghav has entered. The consultants
say their goodbyes and are leaving as Aditya turns
toRaghav.AdityaRaghav, ye letter saare board members ko bhej do.
Monday ko Board Meeting call kar raha hoon.Mujhe unki shaklein dekhni
hai jab unhein pata chalega ki mummy company meinvaapas aa gayee hai.
The stage is set. We will crack them.Aditya is signing the letters as
Raghav walks up, looking at him suspiciously. There is fire
inAditya.RaghavAddyAditya(turning in force) Hmm?Raghav withdraws,
pretends to be hit with the energy. Aditya smiles, continues to
sign.AdityaKya hua?RaghavYou tell me kya hua. Manali gaye the, right?
Jai baba bholenath kiya tha vahan?AdityaCorrect. Yehi baat
hai.RaghavKuch to baat hai. Aur baat serious hai. Mujhe dar hai ki jis
tarah se tum ja rahe ho, tum actuallysaari problems khatam kar doge
yaar. I mean aaj kal ek din mein itna kaam kar rahe ho
jitna chhe maheene mein nahin kiya karte the. What’s wrong with you?
Tumhien apnireputation ka khayaal hai ki nahin? Kya, ho kya gaya hai
tumhein? Haan?Aditya smiles, still working. Musical beats of Song # 4
have begun.{1 mins}[5 ½ mins]
Song # 4
Aditya walks down the office cubicles. Executives wish him.He walks
into a room in his house, takes down a guitar case from a cupboard,
opens the case,strums, starts playing a tune with the beats. He goes
into a reverie.A cottage in the mountains – picturesque, serene.Aditya
sings in his room, thinking about the mountains.Geet comes out of the
cottage.Aditya is singing in his room.Geet walks down the path from
the cottage. She crosses Aditya, who is in her path in the
hills,wearing his executive clothes and looking at her. Geet is buying
vegetables at a market, drying clothes ona line, doing the traditional
hill life chores wearing hill clothes. Aditya is following her in the
hills,singing.Aditya walks towards a conference hall for an important
meeting. He makes to push the dooropen, then turns to see something.
Geet is standing there in her traditional hill clothes, smiling at
him.Aditya pauses, looks at her with a smile.Aditya is in the
important meeting, talking to the people across the table, Geet passes
from behind those people, looking at him and singing. Aditya does not
look at her but a smiles comes to hisface.So Aditya carries on with
his life in the city and Geet follows him and Geet carries on her life
inthe hills and Aditya follows her.Aditya’s team is taking a lassi
break as they are working late hours for the launch of a new product.
Aditya is sitting on a table top and singing the song to his
colleagues who are sitting at cubiclesand chairs and table-tops and
looking at him. The song ends.{4 ½ mins}
The product launch at the banquet hall. Aditya comes to the podium.
Mrs Khanna is standing behind, clapping. Aditya looks at his mother,
she wishes him luck from the distance.AdityaFollowing up on the
commitment to bring telecommunications closer to the people,
KashyapIndustries presents its latest product – the country’s first
long distance calling card -Geet. Hum mien se un logon ke liye jinko
zyada baat karne ki zaroorat hoti hai.Aditya raises the paper pack,
press starts clicking pictures.
The corporate office in Bombay from across the busy street. Inside,
Aditya climbs steps from the porch and enters the foyer with Raghav,
followed by his secretary Meher and two other men in suits.RaghavMain
unki call ka wait kar raha hoon.AdityaHum call kar dete hain unhein,
doesn’t matter. What matters is that our terms are met. Meher,call
Vikram Singhania, ask for a meeting tomorrow any time in the second
half.Meher takes her phone out to call.Aditya(to Raghav) Merger
zaroori hai, market pehle se bahut divided hai. Aur unki expertise hai
is fieldmein. Bus contract aise banana hai ki…There are a few Sikhs
sitting in the lobby. Aditya had glanced at them as he makes to cross.
Theystand up. One of them charges towards him and presently holds his
collar.DaljeetKameene. Toone socha tha bach jayega.Meher, who was
talking to the Sighania’s office screams. Raghav
intervenes.Raghav(calling) GuardsAditya sees that this is Geet’s angry
chacha, Daljeet Singh. That is her father, Kulmeet Singhand that is
her sister Roop. He looks back at Daljeet.DaljeetHum kabhi dhoondh
nahin paayenge tujhe? Haan?The uncle’s hands are deftly taken away
from Aditya’s collar by security guards. He is spunaround and a baton
is placed on his neck. All this before Aditya asks them to
stop.Aditya(to guards) Ruko, ruko…He goes to lift Daljeet.Aditya(to
guards) Chhodo. (to Daljeet) Very sorry chachaji. Please…He tries to
lift Daljeet. Raghav is looking at the scene in intrigue. Roop and
Geet’s father haverushed to the uncle. Aditya looks towards
them.AdityaSat Sri Akaal ji. (to Roop) Hi.Daljeet(pulling his hand
away) Kahan hai vo? Geet kahan hai?
Sc # 48Day, Interiors
Manali Montage 2
AnshumanKyonki uska dimagh kharaab hai. Aap usey jaante hain to ye bhi
jaante honge ki bachpana kitna bhara hua hai uske andar. Sapnon ki
duniya mein rehti hai. Samajhti haihamesha vaisa hi hoga jaisa vo
chahti hai.AdityaTo tumne ye saabit kar diya ki actually ye uske
sapnon ki duniya nahin hai, kyonki is mein tum jaise log rehte
hain.Anshuman looks sharply at Aditya. Then – AnshumanDekhiye,
dialogue maarna asaan hai. Meri situation kya hai, vo main jaanta
hoon. Mainrehta hoon yahan. Mere ghar waale hain, society hai, kaam-
dhandha hai aur hazaartereh ki tension hai. Ek din, achanak, vo yahan
land hoti hai aur kehti hai ki chalo humabhi shaadi kar lete hain.
Abhi, isi waqt. To aapke hisaab se mujhe kya karna chahiyetha?
AdityaDepend karte hai ki tum us se pyaar karte ho na
nahin.Anshuman(smirks) Ye to height hai. Dekhiye, aap bahut bade aadmi
hain, magar main aapkesaamne apne pyaar ka imtihan dene waala nahin
hoon, samjhe na?AdityaZaroorat bhi nahin hai. Agar tumne uski zindagi
barbaad kar dee hai to ye to clear hai ki tumuske baare mein kya feel
karte ho.AnshumanMagar ye clear nahin hai ki aap uske baare mein kya
feel karte hain? Geet ne to kabhikaha nahin ki aapko jaanti hai. Phir
bhi aap uske peeche itni door chale aaye. (smirks)Scene kya hai boss?
Haan?AdityaGeet aur mera scene main tumhein zaroor batata Anshuman,
magar tumhaare jaisa cheap aadmiye baat samajh nahin
payega.AnshumanKya? Kya kaha?AdityaCheap, ghatiya, gira hua.Aditya
stands to leave.AnshumanDekho, limit mein raho, samjhe na? Kya gira
hua hoon main? Maine us sey shaadi kavaada kiya tha kya? Shaadi ka
naam bhi nahin liya tha maine. Bhoot us par savaar tha –shaadi ke baad
ye karenge, vo karenge – aisa ghar, vaisi balcony, aise parde.
Bewakoof.Maine bola usey – chali ja vaapas Bhatinda. Shimla se phone
karti thi to bhi main yehikehta tha. Magar baat to sunni nahin hai. To
jhelo phir. Mujhe kya fark padta hai?AdityaGeet nau maheene se ghar
nahin aayee hai. Nau maheene se. Akeli hai kaheen par. Pata nahinkya
kya beeta hai uspar… kaise kaise din dekhe hain usne, kis situation
mein hai.Tumhaari vajah se.Anshuman is silent.AdityaTumhein fark nahin
padta hai tab to theek hua Geet ke saath. Usko saza milni chahiye ki
usnetumhaare jaise aadmi ko itna zyaada pyaar kiya.
Aditya walks across the spot where he had dropped Geet. Two of his men
are walking at adistance from him. Aditya reaches the spot where he
had turned and looked at her when she was runningtowards Anshuman.
Aditya turns and looks again.
Flashback. Geet running away towards the open cafeteria as Aditya had
seen that day.
Song # 5
Geet waves from a distance and runs down into the open cafeteria.
Anshuman stands and walksup, decided to turn her away. Geet reaches
him, bustling with excitement. We are seeing her as he beginsto talk
and scold her. Her happiness begins to fade away. The lyrics of the
song begin. She stares atAnshuman as her face changes to disbelief.
She is stunned for a while, then she speaks. She is cut short.Tears
come to her eyes. She begins to plead. She is asked to go away. She
pleads some more. Anshumanwalks away. She stands there for a while,
tears flowing down her cheek. Then she slowly turns and walks back the
way she had come. She climbs up the steps.She is sitting on a bench at
the place where Aditya had dropped her.Evening time, she is seen
walking up towards a hotel.The next day, she is walking up a lane in
Manali. She sees Anshuman walking up in herdirection. Her heart begins
to beat aloud. She walks towards him. Anshuman is talking to another
man.He sees her as she comes close, then he just looks away and
crosses her, walks away. Geet is hurt tonumbness. She stands there for
a long time, cheek burning in shame. Then she walks back.
Geet walks out of the hotel with her bag, numb. She walks into a bus
stand. She gets on a bus.The bus is going to Shimla. She sits silently
in the bus.Shimla bus stand. She is sitting on the platform, her mind
blank. A nun comes to her, havingrecognized her. She used to teach the
Geet at Jesus and Mary convent in Shimla. She talks to Geet, askswhat
the problem is.The nun walks Geet into a YWCA hostel.Geet is moving
into a room in the hostel.The nun takes Geet to the Jesus and Mary
convent. Geet enters the principal’s room. Mothersuperior takes Geet
to the school library where she begins work as the librarian.She calls
Anshuman a few times. He cuts her off. And her life goes on in a
lonely and miserablemanner. She is struggling to keep her hope alive.
Hostel, school, some lonely corners of the city.And one day, as she is
walking up to school, we see that Aditya walks up in the distance,
lookingat her. He has found her. But he does not go up to her
immediately. He trails her at a distance for the day.She looks like
the ghost of the girl Aditya knew. He is so sensitive to her right now
that if she stumbles a bit while walking, he tends to leap out and
hold her. But he does not do that. Finally, she walks uptowards her
hostel. She sees Aditya sitting there.{4 mins}
Geet is surprised to see Aditya. He looks at her. The song stops. She
walks up to him, he stands.GeetHi. What a surprise. Yahan kaise?
AdityaAise hi. Pata chala tum yahan ho to… So? How are you?
GeetGood.AdityaYeah?She nods with a smile.AdityaGreat. Aur baaki sab…
GeetSab theek hai.She is smiling at him. He is looking at her. They
are silent for a while.AdityaTumne mujhe bahut hurt kiya hai Geet.
Geet’s face changes.AdityaTum mujhse keh nahin sakti thi? Ek phone
nahin kar sakti thi?He looks at her for a while as she looks down in
discomfort.AdityaApna sab samaan lo, aur chalo. Come.She does not
move. He looks at her.GeetAditya. Tum chale jao.AdityaDekho. Main is
waqt bahut ghusse mein hoon. Mujhe aur ghussa mat dilao.
Chalo.GeetNahin Aditya. Maine apne liye yehi zindagi banayee hai. Isi
mein rahoongi main.AdityaYou know Geet. Tum apni ye Manohar kahaaniyan
waali philosophy apne paas rakho. Tum abhimere saath aa rahi
ho.Geet(sourly) Tum mujhe force nahin kar sakte ho AdityaAdityaOf
course kar sakta hoon.She looks at him. Then turns to walk into the
hostel. He holds her.AdityaGeet. Chalo mere saath.Geet(struggles)
Dammit Aditya. Chhhodo. Kya kar rahe ho tum? Main keh rahee hoon,
chhodomujhe.AdityaGeet, listen to me.GeetTum samajhte kya ho apne aap
ko? (She jerks herself free) Mere saath ye sab ho gaya to ye matsochna
ki ab tumhaara chance hai, samjhe?He is looking at her
calmly.AdityaOkay. Dhyaan mein rakhoonga. Ab chalo.He holds her arm to
take her away.Geet(pleading) Tum kyon kar rahe ho ye sab? Haan?
AdityaTumko vajah batana zaroori nahin hai. Apna samaan le kar aayo
tum.GeetNahin Aditya. Main tumse aur ehsaan nahin le sakti. Tumne
pehle hi bahut kuch kiya hua mereliye aur…AdityaMaine bahut kuch kiya
hai tumhaare liye? Maine bahut kuch kiya hai?He pauses, looking at
her.AdityaMain aaj zinda tumhaari vajah se hoon, you fool. Ye jo aaj
main tumhaare saamne khada hoon,ye meri doosri zindagi hai, jo tumne
mujhe dee hai. Tumko pata hai ki aaj main bahut
successful hoon? Aaj company ki vo value hai jo Dad ke waqt bhi nahin
thi. Teen nayeeindustries shuroo kee hai maine, kayee brands launch
kiye hain, sab kamaal ka businesskar rahe hain aur jo kuch bhi main
hoon vo sirf tumhaari vajah se hoon. Har situationmein sochta hoon ki
Geet hoti to kya karti aur vohi karta hoon. Aur tum…He stops himself.
Pause.AdityaAb chalogi? Ya aur drama karna hai – chale jao, meri
zindagi hai, kya samajhte ho apne aapko…He looks at her. Her eyes
begin to get moist. She looks down.GeetAati hoon.She walks into the
hostel. Aditya looks at her go. He waits outside.{3 mins}
The driver of Aditya’s luxury car and his bodyguard get off and rush
forwards. Aditya is bringingGeet and her luggage down to the car. The
driver comes to them and takes the luggage.
Sc # 57Day, ExteriorsShimla – Streets
The façade of the luxury hotel where Aditya is staying. The car drives
in. The body guard gets offand opens the door for Geet. Aditya comes
to her to usher her in. She gets off, feeling small. Aditya leadsher
in. A bell boy comes up for the luggage.{1/2 min}[27 ½ mins]
Aditya’s hotel suite from outside.Aditya opens the door of the inner
room and looks at Geet. She is sitting on the corner of the
bed,wrapped in a shawl, silently eating soup from the trolley. He has
recovered her. The feeling he has for heris difficult for him to
contain. He speaks after a while.AdityaSo… tum yahan reh jao, main
doosra room le raha hoon.GeetKya zaroorat hai? Itni badi jagah
hai.AdityaHmm. Theek hai. Vaise bhi mujhe karate aata hai, to koi
problem nahin hai.She looks at him, a faint glimmer of mischief in her
eyes.GeetGhabrao mat, main tumhaara rape nahin karoongi.AdityaTum kar
hi nahin sakti.GeetMujhe karna hi nahin hai rape.AdityaKarna ho bhi to
nahin kar saktiGeetBy god… Kya raat guzri thi. Vo hotel yaad hai?
AdityaHotel Decent.Geet(giggles) Decent… Haan.AdityaBy the way, main
aapko bata doon ki us raat Hotel Decent mein sab log aapko call girl
samajhrahe the.Geet(shock) Kya? Call girl?AdityaMain us se kharaab
word use karne waala tha.
Geet Kya bakwaas kar rahe ho. Really?AdityaYaad hai main keh raha tha
mujhe baat karne do? Magar tum to tum ho…GeetOh teri ki… Oh god… Kitni
gaddhi thi main. Kitni badi bewakoof thi. Tab hi to ye sab ho rahahai
mere saath. Tab hi to is haalat mein hoon.He looks at her. The smiles
disappears from his face. She shakes her head as her face begins
tocontort with the weeping that is coming.Geet(weeping) Ye to hona hi
tha mere saath. Bahut achcha hua, yehi deserve karti hoon main…
Dinraat sochti rehti hoon par kuch samajh nahin aata, ki kya karoon,
kya karoon main, usse kya kahoon ki vo maan jaaye. Ghar bhi nahin ja
sakti. Pata nahin kya soch rahi thimain… Kya…Aditya has stood up by
now, feeling very agitated to see her weep. He turns to her at this
pointand says with force.AdityaMain bataata hoon. Main batata hoon
tumko kya karna hai.He lowers to his haunches.AdityaAnshuman ko apne
dimagh se nikaal dena hai. Samjhi?Geet looks away, not wanting to
listen to these hard words.AdityaTum jitna bhi ro lo, tadap lo, vo
vaapas nahin aayega Geet. Usko aana hota to bahut pehle aa jaata. Vo
soch bhi nahin raha hai tumhaare baare mein. Vo apni zindagi mein
khushhai.Geet looks at him.GeetTum us se mile the?AdityaHaan.GeetKya
keh raha tha?Aditya looks at her. There is a glimmer of hope in
her.AdityaGeet, Anshuman waala chapter khatam ho chuka hai. Yehi sach
hai, aur jitni jaldi tum iskomaan logi, utna achcha hai. Usko apne
dimagh se nikaal do, isi waqt. Jaise usney tumkoapni zindagi se nikal
diya tum bhi usko nikal phenko (idea) Photograph. Uski photograph.
Uski photo jalao aur apni zindagi se usey flush kar do. Photo
nikalo.GeetUski photo nahin hai.AdityaShit. (another idea) Okay. Hum
usko phone karenge (takes out cell) Aur tum usko gaaliyaandogi. Better
hai. Jitni gaaliyaan jaanti ho, suna do saale ko.GeetAditya, please.
Sc # 59 [C]
Sc # 60 [C]
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Sc # 59 [E]
The sun rises in shimla. The city is waking up.Aditya’s car drives up
to a spot and stops. Aditya is looking out at something, geeting
chargedup. Geet follows his look. They look at each other in
excitement. Aditya turns away, quickly switches thecar off, opens his
seat-belt in a hurry. Geet smiles, follows suit. She gets out of the
car.Aditya is running ahead, locks his car with the remote.They run,
down a passage, through a footbridge, come to a railway station and
run after the toytrain that is leaving the platform. Aditya runs and
gets on the train. Geet runs and runs and this time shecatches the
train.She is laughing.GeetPata hai? Mujhe darawne sapne aate hain,
kayee maheenon se, ki main na train ke peeche bhaagrahi hoon, aur
train chhoot gayee.AdityaAaj pakad liya na?Geet(happily) Haan.They
have sat down by now. She is looking at him. Both are out of
breath.GeetMain tujhein bahut achchi lagti hoon na?Aditya(point blank)
Bahut. Bahut zyada achchi lagti hai. Magar vo mera maamla hai. Mujhe
apnifeelings par poora haq hai. Hai ki nahin?She nods.AdityaAur
tension mat le. Tujhpar koi pressure nahin hai, theek hai? Theek hai?
She nods. He mock punches her face tenderly. She does the same. Then
he does a karate action.She laughs, does a karate action too.The train
runs through the mountains.{2 mins}
The train is leaving the station. Aditya and Geet have gotten off, are
walking out of the station.AdityaSun, kuch der mein hum niklenge yahan
se. Bhatinda ke liye.She looks at him, tense. Stops walking.GeetNahin
Aditya. (imagining) Nahin nahin. O god, bilkul nahin.She looks at him.
He nods.GeetMain apni shakal kaise dikhaoongi unko?AdityaKuch nahin
hoga yaar. Don’t worry.She looks at him.GeetTum vahan rahoge na mere
saath?AdityaRahoonga na.GeetTab theek hai.AdityaGreat. Main unko keh
deta hoon.He dials the number, walking out. She holds his arm in
nervousness. They walk out.{1 min}
The lobby of Aditya’s hotel. Aditya and Geet enter the lobby. I feel
so hungry in the hills, he issaying. You want to grab a quick bite?
Are you mad, she says. I can hardly breathe. Stop thinking about it,he
says. I’m not thinking, she says. You have to think. I’ll just close
my eyes and follow you. We see thatAnshuman is sitting in the lobby,
waiting for them. He turns and sees them. He gets up and movestowards
Geet. Aditya, telling Geet that they should leave in a couple of
hours, sees Anshuman. He stops.Anshuman walks up. Geet looks at him.
Anshuman walks up, straight to Geet. Geet is stunned.Anshuman is now
standing in front of her. Geet, Anshuman begins. I messed up. I really
messed up.When you spoke to me last night… when you used all those
words… it just opened my eyes… What was Idoing? I was trying to forget
about you, but it wasn’t possible. Anshuman looks at Aditya. It was
toosudden for me, Anshuman continues. She just landed up in Manali
that day and I could not handle it…Anshuman looks at Geet now. I did
not have the courage to take you to my house. But today I care a
damnfor the world. I have come to take you back and I promise I will
never… never hurt you again. I am sorryGeet. Geet stares at him. I am
sorry Geet, Anshuman is saying. I’m sorry.{1 ½ mins}
Song # 6
Aditya turns and takes Geet out of the room, holding her hand. He
crosses the hall and walks intothe terrace. Anshuman turns and looks
at them, gets up. Aditya brings Geet to him. Anshuman is lookingat
her. Geet is looking down. She looks at Aditya. Aditya smiles,
withdraws. He goes out of the terrace, back into the room. He stands
against the wall.
Early morning in the mountains. Two cars are driving down. Aditya is
driving the one in front.Anshuman is sitting next to him. Geet is in
the rear seat. She is looking at Aditya. Aditya notices her. Hesmiles
at her in the rear view mirror. The journey continues. The car
approaches the house at Bhatinda,stops at the gate. The song stops.{1
½ mins}
Old sikh. Sitting on his easy chair. Geet and Aditya are made to stand
in front of him. Anshumanis brought to stand at a distance. Geet bows
and wishes him. Aditya is prompted to touch his feet. Hecomes forward.
One minute, says old sikh. Aditya stops. Old sikh looks at Geet and
Aditya. He lookscarefully. The very first time I saw him, I had
understood, he says to Geet. At my age one glance tells youwhat is
happening between a girl and a boy. Aditya looks at Anshuman. Anshuman
is trying to followwhat old sikh is saying. Old sikh continues to Geet
– I asked you. But you lied to me. And it must have been your idea to
run away, wasn’t it? Wasn’t it? Geet nods. See, he tells the others. I
knew it… She is the
naughty one between the two. Anyway, I have heard that the world has
moved ahead and times have become very modern. Everyone wants to
accept both of you and I will agree with them. But remember –you have
made your mistake and got your pardon. Now no more surprises and no
more shocks. Okay..?Angry chacha indicates Aditya to touch old sikh’s
feet. Aditya touches his feet. Old sikh catches Aditya’sshoulder.
Aditya is caught in mid position. Handle her with care, old sikh says.
Aditya nods. She is thenaughtiest one in the family. She has troubled
us a lot. She will not spare you too. If she does some hanky- panky,
you tell me. I am a man from the old world. I will give her one whack
on her backside and she will be back on track. You tell me, okay? God
bless you.{2 mins}
Sc # 68Day, ExteriorsBhatinda House – Inner Courtyard
Kids run in as Geet and Aditya come to the inner courtyard. Roop,
aunts and many others comein with the couple. Anshuman shuffles in
too. Photo, photo, the kids are saying. Didi… Jijaji… Amriktake our
photo. The others move out. All the kids cramp in around Geet and
Aditya. Anshuman is there isin the snap too. They are posed for the
photo. Listen… hello, Anshuman is saying to Geet and Aditya witha
shrug. Aditya whispers to Geet – Should I tell your father? He
indicates to Anshuman to wait. Hilo mat,hilo mat, Amrik is shouting.
He takes the snap. No, Geet says then. I will tell my mom. She is
coming.One minute, one minute, Amrik says as he rushes in. He wants to
be in the snap too. There are so many people here, Geet is saying,
nervous. Amrik has come to Anshuman in the mean time. You take the
photona, Amrik says. He gives the camera to Anshuman. Anshuman looks
at the camera as if it is a dead frog.Open the lens, Amrik says
quickly, then press the flash on and click… simple. Come… He
takesAnshuman to the spot to click, then rushes back into the snap,
next to Aditya. Ready… The group is posed. Come on click, Amrik says.
Anshuman raises the camera with reluctant hands, tries to click.
Againtries to click. It is not clicking, he complains. Show, Amrik
runs to him. He takes the camera. Arey, hesays hitting his palm on his
forehead. You have not switched on the flash na… Now click. Ready.
Anshuman clicks. Geet’s mother and father come in. Achcha all this
later, mother announces busily. Thekids run away, snatching the camera
from Anshuman. Father takes Aditya’s hand. Come beta… I wantyou to
meet everyone. Aditya looks at Geet. Geet nods slightly as Aditya goes
away. She turns to hermother. Let’s go inside ma, Geet tells her, I
have to… Mother is looking at Anshuman. He is coming ineveryone’s way.
Ma listen, Geet says. Beta, mother says to Anshuman, why don’t you go
and freshen up,she tells him. No, I am fresh, Anshuman says. Arey you
have had such a long journey, mother says.Samar, take him to the room…
give him towel and soap… Go beta… Anshuman is making slight protests
but the two brothers catch him and rush him down the corridor… Aao ji,
aao ji… He is turning back tolook at Geet, but soon he is gone.All the
relatives are in the courtyard. Geet’s father is introducing Aditya to
each one of them.Aur ye Arjan Singhji hain, her father is telling
Aditya. Patiale mein rehte hain. Mujhse ek saal chhotehain par hote
chacha hain… Aditya wishes him. To ye kya bolega mujhe, dadaji,
Arjansingh asks in jest.Aditya laughs, looks towards Geet. Geet is
broght to sit on the diwn by the other women. Geet looks athim. Aditya
raises his eyebrows to her. She turns to her mother. Ma, she says. Yes
beta, ma says. We haveto talk. There is so much to talk about. Nine
months. But tell me – you are fine na? Yes ma, Geet says. Iam
absolutely fine. Aditya treats you well, ma asks. Geet looks at her
mother. What, mother asks inconcern. He treats me well, Geet says
plainly. Is there something wrong, mother asks, her concerngrowing. He
behaves badly with you? Ma, Geet says. He treats me like even you have
never treated me.Mother hugs Geet in relief and happiness. He really
loves you na beta, ma asks. Yes ma, Geet says. That’snot the thing.
Mother is looking at Geet. Let’s go inside, Geet says. Yeah come,
mother says. But in themean time, Roop and the other girls come to
Aditya and grab him. Meet us also jijaji, Roop says, pullinghim to
where Geet and the other women are. Roop continues – and tell me why
you betrayed me. Sheseats Aditya next to Geet. Mother looks at all
this with a smile. You had to run away with me, Roopcontinues, and you
ran away with my sister instead? How could you do this to me? Tell me.
All the girlsare giggling. I could not make out in the dark, Aditya
says. I thought it was you… but in the morning Idiscovered that it was
Geet. All the girls titter. Such bad luck, Roop says. And who is the
sample you have brought along? Who, Aditya asks. Your friend, Roop
says. He is my compensation package or what…?Aditya can not help but
laugh. He looks at Geet. He shakes his head. Geet takes her mom’s hand
andmakes to get up. Geet’s father comes up. Move, let me also sit, he
says. He sits next to Aditya. Beta, headdresses Aditya. We want to
have a small marriage ceremony at the Gurudwara, with our customs.
Seeyour marriage has happened, but this is just for our satisfaction…
and to properly introduce you to ourcommunity. Aditya looks at Geet.
Geet looks at him. Don’t look at her, father says. Tell me honestly.
Wewon’t do it if you have a problem. Geet turns and walks away,
surrounded by many aunts and cousins. Ihave no problem, Aditya says.
Very good, mother says, turns and goes after Geet. We will have
theceremony as soon as possible, father says. Please call your people
also, chacha says. Yes, father says, theymust come. Yes, Aditya says.
Very good, father says and gets up. Aditya looks down.{3 mins}
Geet sitting on her mother’s bed, tense. Mother enters and sits. Yes,
she says, relaxing. Talk.Geet looks at her mother. Mother looks so
happy. Mother lifts eyebrows to ask what the matter was. Ma,Geet says.
The way you people are thinking, it’s not like that. Like what, mother
asks. See, Geet says. I brought Aditya here nine months back… and
then, that night, I went away with him… So you think thathe is the one
who made me run away… so that he and I could get married… No, mother
cuts her. Wethink nothing of that sort. Geet is surprised. We used to,
mother says. We were all very hurt, very angrywith him… and also with
you… But no longer… Believe me… the affection that you see for him is
notfalse… All of us love him. In fact, all the complaints that we had
with you are cancelled because of the boy you chose. Truly, he is a
gem. Mother is looking at Geet. Geet is getting confused. Kya baat
hai,mother asks. Itni tension mein kyon hai? Ma, I will just lie down
for some time, Geet says. Yes do that,ma says. You must be tired. Geet
lies down, more tense than ever. Because talks will never end,
mothercontinues. You have to tell me about his house, who all stay
there, his family. Everything. Geet closes hereyes.{1 ½ mins}
The boys bring in the nagadawallas into the courtyard and start
dancing. The date for thewedding is decided, angry chacha is
announcing. It is the seventeenth. After two days. The gurudwara has
been notified.The boys dance with gusto. They pull everyone
in.Aditya’s door is flung open and two boys rush to him. Aditya does
not understand. The boys pullhim out without saying anything. They
rush him down to the courtyard.The beat builds up, Aditya dances.
Angry chacha is pulled in. He dances with Aditya. All themen are
dancing. Geet comes out with Roop and others to the corridor on top.
She looks down. Adityalooks at Geet. Roop whistles at the dance. Geet
and the girls walk into another room. The beat builds up.There is much
fervour. Anshuman comes in with some boys. He and the boys are holding
sugarcanesticks, back from the trip to sugarcane plantation. Those
boys throw their sticks and start dancing themoment they come in. They
throw the sticks from Anshuman’s hands and pull him to the centre.
Adityalooks at him. Anshuman is looking at Aditya in question. The
boys raise Anshuman’s hands and forcehim to dance. Anshuman has a
bewildered look on his face. He dances.{1mins}
Geet tiptoes up the corridor. It is late. The serial lights are seen
in the terrace. The lights in somerooms are on and voices of laughter
are intermittently heard. Geet reaches the guest room and
knockslightly at the door. The door is open. She steps in. Aditya is
walking towards the door. Geet comes insideand shuts the door. Told
them, Aditya asks. Geet looks at him. No, Geet says, tense. Why Geet,
Adityaasks. What’s the problem? I don’t know, Geet says. I don’t know.
Maybe just too many things havehappened in the last twenty-four hours.
My mind is all jammed. Anyway, good you came, Aditya says.Anshuman is
desperate to meet you… Geet sees that Anshuman is sleeping on the bed.
Aditya moves towake him up. I could have told ma, or papa, she says.
Aditya stops. I got the chances, she continues, but Ifelt this fear.
As though I am losing something. You think they will be upset if you
told them, Aditya asks.I am not thinking of them at all, Geet says. I
am thinking about myself. I don’t know what I really want.She looks at
Aditya. I have put you in a mess, haven’t I, she asks. Don’t play the
nice, sensitive girl onme, he says. Be the brat that you are – that’s
suits you better. Geet smiles. Any case, he continues, I haveto leave
in the morning. Geet’s face changes. You are going, she asks.
Suddenly, there is loud knockingon the door. Geet, Roop’s voice is
heard along with the titter of other girls. Anshuman wakes with a
start.I am coming in, Roop is saying. What’s happening, Anshuman asks.
Roop has entered with two othergirls. What is happening here, Roop
demands with mock athourity. Roop one minute, Geet says. Let ustalk.
Roop comes and holds Geet to take her away. Mother said no, she is
saying to Aditya, no together atnights before Anand karaj? Someone has
kept the right name for your types, Aditya says. You deserve to be
called saali. You have ditched me jijaji, Roop says. I will torment
you all your life now. Come Geet.Roop looks at Anshuman. He gets up
from the bed, looking at them in confusion. Oh, Roop says. He ishere
too? Geet… in front of him? Shut up, says Geet. She looks at Aditya.
Tomorrow morning outside,like last time, Aditya says quickly. Roop
raises objection, takes Geet away. Bye, jijaji, Roop says as shecloses
the door. Have a good night with your friend. They giggle away. What’s
happening, Anshumanasks. Geet had come to meet you, Aditya says. You
can meet her early morning. Aditya goes to thewindow. He sees Geet
going into her room. He stands there, looking at her room. She appears
at herwindow and looks at him. He smiles. She smiles. They stand for a
second. He indicates to her that sheshould go to sleep. She indicates
to him that he should go to sleep. He nods. Waves to her. She waves
back. He moves from the window. He takes support of the wall and
stands. For a while. Then he switchesthe light off.{3 mins}
The sun rises in Punjab. The house is still asleep. Geet comes out of
the back door, makes herway to the tree where she had met Aditya nine
months back. Aditya and Anshuman are sitting there.Aditya gets up on
seeing Geet and walks towards the house. Hi, he says as he crosses
her. When are youleaving, she asks. Soon, he says. They will not let
you go, she says. This time I won’t stop, he says. Hesmiles, walks
away. She looks at him go for a moment. Anshuman comes to her. Geet,
he says. This iscompletely absurd yaar… Why don’t you tell them, what
is the matter with you? She looks at him. It’s notat all complicated
Geet, he says. All you have to do, he explains systematically, is to
tell your mother, oranyone… that yes you are in love, and you will get
married… only not with Aditya, but with Anshuman.Whatever the plan is
can go on without a hitch, everyone can remain as happy as they are,
only Adityahas to be replaced by Anshuman. Simple. She looks at him.
Once you tell them this, they will ask athousand questions – arey,
howcome, this that… And you tell them the answers – How you met me…How
you were at the hostel in Bombay and how I used to come with my friend
to meet his girlfriend…Remember that evening… you were coming down the
steps when you met me for the first time… Tellthem how we started
going out without our friends… alone… How we used to sit on Marine
Drive forhours… Tell them about that evening, on the way back from
Elephanta… How we had stood on the
Song # 7
And in the present time in Bhatinda, the nagada plays and the hands
clap and voices sing and therituals take place and the sweets are
eaten and the gifts pile up. Cars come in from Bombay with Raghavand
Aditya’s mother. Aditya walks up, rushes and hugs his mother. His
mother holds him dearly, crying.Geet’s mother comes and hugs her.
Aditya’s mother sees Geet. She gives her necklace, her ear-rings
andall her gold bangles to her, crying. Then she starts dancing with
Geet’s mother, in the Punjabi style that iscommon to both. And how
they dance. And father dances and the uncle dances and the aunty
dances and he saali dances and kids dance and the elders dance. End
titles begin on the celebration as things gocompletely improvised.Geet
and Aditya are dancing in high-speed, looking at each other in the
crowd. Fade-out.
{4 mins}*********
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