Extended Essay IB Nov 2021
Extended Essay IB Nov 2021
Extended Essay IB Nov 2021
RQ: How far and to what extent does the potential of hope corrupt the
Subject: English
Category: 3
Introduction.................................................................................................................................................. 3
Conclusion.................................................................................................................................................. 15
Bibliography ............................................................................................................................................... 16
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Introduction
occasions, a distinct evolution of evil between Macbeth and his wife, Lady Macbeth. Based on a
prophecy entailing an ascension to kingship, the play follows the lives of the married couple and
their wicked exploits to bring life to their oracle. By writing a play based on tragedy, the author
helps portray to his readers how the possibility for power corrupts the hearts and minds of those
burdened by its prediction. The play Macbeth, a tragedy written by William Shakespeare, consists
of a married couple whose hearts slowly and meticulously are fed on wickedness for the possibility
The tragedy was first composed for a local theatre in the early 1600s, a time in history
comprising two eras, the Elizabethan era of Queen Elizabeth 1 and the Jacobean era of King James
1. Unlike the spectacle, Macbeth, the author's former works, conducted during the reign of Queen
Elizabeth, publicized themes of joy, love, and confidence. However, as her sovereignty came to
an end in 1603 and King James assumed the throne, Shakespeare began to compose more cynical
and dark compositions indirectly reflecting the insecurities of the current king. While being one of
the author's most diminutive tragedies, Macbeth prevails, to this day, as the best influential work
by the author.
During the Elizabethan age, the era of discovery and expansion, Shakespeare administered
plays that favored the common folk while also implementing common concerns, of its time,
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regarding kings and queens and their strife to either remain on the throne or have their seat seized
by an evil entity. The play questions the value of human ambition compared to the common good
and the wickedness of passion when infiltrated by evil. During this era, the concept of wickedness
stemmed from witches who were depicted as Satan's agents, evil existences who bring with them
menace and death. With heavy witchcraft and supernatural incidents of high interest, at the time,
Shakespeare incorporated these villainous beings into his play by portraying them as the ministers
of menace against the common good of both men and women. In the play, Macbeth mentions the
nature of witchcraft within a monologue of his, "Nature seems dead, and wicked dreams abuse.
The curtain'd sleep; witchcraft celebrates. Pale Hecate's offerings, and wither'd murder," (Macbeth
Act II Scene 1). In this monologue, the author explicitly affiliates the nature of witchcraft with
As evidently exhibited in the tragedy Macbeth, the concept of evil even to this day sits
without a pellucid definition. In the centuries past, the conception of evil was displayed as all ill
deeds ranging from natural disasters to impulsive wrongdoings. Nowadays, this term is mainly
exercised to accentuate the gravity of a crime. Nonetheless, even while narrowed in meaning to fit
a particular criterion with the centuries, a clear definitive interpretation of evil is yet to be
established. Yet, indeed, even without a definite meaning, this word proves itself to be an
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unshakable unit in our moral lexicon as explicitly exhibited by historical events and works of
impossible task, a fool's errand." (Simon Serial killers, evil, and us) Robert L. Simon describes
individuals who strive to define evil as fools in mind, for the term fluctuates with the people and
time.
An aphorism by the author himself, "Ambition is a soldier's virtue," illustrates the virtue
present with a worldly drive. However, just as virtuous ambition might appear to be, hope given
to self-indulgent endeavors can instead play out as a soldier's downfall. Rather than being wicked
itself, ambition presents an inherent drive for evil if performed under selfish means. The
blasphemy of ambition rests not on the concept itself but the desire behind its workings as well as
one's innate capability. When imposed on an individual with potential for wickedness, evil grows
alluring to the heart, and if pursued, in due course, blinds the mind of reason. Contrariwise, an
individual inclining more towards good than evil may harbor an appeal for wickedness but lacks
the heart for such deeds. In the case of Macbeth, an external force, specifically his wife, Lady
she too attains hope from her husband's gifted oracle, but, unlike her partner, she has the heart for
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such egoistic pursuits. If not for her painted heart and hand in evil, would a spectacle this woeful
The tragedy commences with the dialogue of three witches regarding their upcoming
meeting with Macbeth, "When shall we three meet again? In thunder, lightning, or in rain?" By
attributing an ideal date to such destructive conditions, the play immediately beckons an
impending sense of wickedness seen to be brewing between the three and soon-to-be Macbeth.
Alongside eerie phrases, the witches incorporate morally conflicting verses in their speech, "Fair
is foul, and foul is fair." (Witches Act 1 Scene 1) Such discourse brings readers a sense of moral
confusion by implying that nothing is what it seems. By tying the witches to such grim terms and
dispersing their tongues with contrasting verses, Shakespeare helps better paint the panorama of
evil within his tragic story while further portending a potential for such wickedness.
To thoroughly amplify tragedy and ominous evil in the play, Macbeth is doused with the
image of heroism, a warrior hero who has returned from battle victorious. Phrases such as Valour's
minion and Bellona's bridegroom further represent his recognized heroism in the kingdom. By
introducing Macbeth as a heroic figure, Shakespeare sets the ground for the downfall of a once-
great man. Hence, readers better scrutinize how a man once hero drowns at the feet of evil by the
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Throughout the entirety of the tragedy, there sits a sole moment wherein readers
witness Macbeth before having encountered the witches and their prophecy, "So foul and fair a
day I have not seen." Pertaining to the battle recently won and the soldiers lost along the way, a
sense of genuine sympathy blossoms in a soon-to-be wicked man. Momentarily, his essence is yet
As for the witches, known as the weird sisters, their rhythmic chorus, much like a spell, is
doused in dark imagery to help exhibit an infectious sense of wickedness. As Macbeth yields an
ear to these prophecies of his especially, the contagious inclination of evil makes way to his heart,
awakening what was once dormant. In better terms, readers witness, first hand, the awakening of
Macbeth by hope and the ambition of what could come to be. Once having showcased a sense of
sympathy for others, his heart is fed a contagious inhumane essence, slowly rebranding the mind
for selfish endeavors. Act one, scene three, displays the exact instant Macbeth deviates from his
By having the witches awaken ambition in Macbeth's heart, Shakespeare establishes the
dramatic premise of his play. Along with installing eerie elements from the forefront, the author
meticulously constructs the ideal habitat for peril to take root. With hope established in his heart
and mind, our initial perception of Macbeth, based on the report of his bravery and heroism in
battle, is immediately complicated by his grown fixation upon his prophecy. As foretold by the
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witches, Macbeth promptly advances in rank, "Two truths are told. As happy prologues to the
swelling act. Of th'imperial theme." (Macbeth, Act 1, Scene 3) By elevating in status, Macbeth's
faith in the prophecy solely strengthens by nature, further provoking his drive for power and the
Macbeth's reflection on such immoral schemes infers the quiet budding of wickedness
within his once unblemished heart, "Stars, hide your fires;/Let not light see my black and deep
desires./The eye wink at the hand, yet let that be/Which the eye fears, when it is done, to see." The
author enunciates Macbeth's evil thoughts through an inner monologue, portraying his fear of
having to execute such schemes. Conclusively, there persists an over-the-edge clash among the
As mentioned prior, though the ambition for evil may coexist within an individual, they
must either have a heart soft to such inclinations or an external hand to blasphemy. In Macbeth's
case, his external prod is his wife, Lady Macbeth. Once having heard of the prophecy from her
husband, Lady Macbeth doubts her husband's ability to perform the schemes necessary," You want
to be powerful, and you don't lack ambition, but you don't have the mean streak that these things
call for." As pronounced in the excerpt, Macbeth has a heart unfit for such crimes, even while
inflicted with evil by supernatural witches. For the time being, despite encountering wicked
thoughts, his core beats on the morality of his actions. Contrariwise, Lady Macbeth brings to light
her innate composition for blasphemy even without having experienced evil first hand, "Hie thee
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hither, That I may pour my spirits in thine ear And chastise with the valor of my tongue." (Lady
Macbeth Act 1 Scene 5) Lady Macbeth wishes to dismantle her husband of all apprehensions and
moral conflicts so long as he returns home the crown. By inspecting Lady Macbeth's response, one
can discern a distinct deviation of evil into two primary sects, though interconnected,
simultaneously of their own accord: One sect involuntarily introduced to wickedness while another
idolizing the concept and deliberately transitioning. While dependent solely on the individual, both
Despite her innate build for evil, Lady Macbeth views herself as too feminine for her own
good and begs to spirits so that they may relieve her of innocence, "you spirits / That tend on
mortal thoughts, unsex me here, / And fill me from the crown to the toe top-full / Of direst cruelty."
(Macbeth 1.5) Though competent of evil, Lady Macbeth opts to discard the lingering purity of her
character to enact the bloody deeds necessary to assume power. Unlike her husband, who was
involuntarily invited to evil, Lady Macbeth willingly discards her purity. By removing her baggage
of innocence, Lady Macbeth becomes one and the same with the three witches, sheer evil from
head to toe. As exhibited by the witches, Shakespeare makes adamant an eerie sense of wickedness
Throughout Act one, Macbeth suffers an ongoing fundamental quandary between the
morality of the murderous scheme and the unethical yet desirable outcome of such, "But here,
upon this bank and shoal of time, We'd jump the life to come. But in these cases/We still have
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judgment here." (Macbeth 1.7) As stated by the quote, readers are given another chance to discern
the panic, fear, and inner moral dilemma of a man hours away from murder.
Despite his fundamental dilemma, Macbeth is wed to an entity now more witch than human
that would go out and about obtaining power. With every frenzy, Lady Macbeth achieves to
convince Macbeth of immorality and corruption. Hence, his once inner moral dilemma is no more,
and a man once doubtful is now hungry for the throne. The couple executes King Duncan in the
According to a recent study conducted by Kent Kiel, author of The Psychopath Whisperer,
and Lora Cope, a neuroscientist from The University of Michigan, individuals who have
committed homicide undergo a significant reduction of grey matter within their temporal lobes.
This shrinkage, particularly apparent within male offenders, represses behavioral control and
social cognition. Regarding Macbeth specifically, Shakespeare illustrates him as a heroic soldier
from war or, in better terms, someone who has faced execution first hand and on various occasions.
His experience with death begs to question how he maintained a sense of morality within such
gruesome settings.
As per another study by the University of California at San Francisco (UCSF) researchers
at the UCSF-affiliated San Francisco Veterans Affairs Medical Center, individuals postpartum an
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affiliation with war suffer immense moral injuries. To remain moral despite the war, one can
speculate that Macbeth may have justified his killings as a necessity for the common welfare of
his kingdom and devotion to the king. Therefore, his murder of King Duncan differentiates itself
from the death inevitable in war. Macbeth kills a man for egoistic motives, which consequently
A quote by novelist Rick Yancey addresses the impact that murder has on the worth of
vitality, "The first kill would be the hardest, but the next would be easier, and the one after that
easier still, because it's true: Even the most sensitive person can get used to even the most
insensitive thing. Cruelty isn't a personality trait. Cruelty is a habit." (Rick Yancey 5th wave) With
every slaughter, the value he sets on life diminishes, causing the next strive to blasphemy that
much more effortless. As he proceeds to execute the threats surrounding him, readers witness a
gradual but evident acclimation towards wickedness. His once compassionate heart now runs on
greed for the power he possesses. His morals abandoned after the first murder are no longer. As a
result, murdering King Duncan has Macbeth ultimately annihilated the remaining virtue within
himself.
On the contrary, Lady Macbeth, who now possesses her desire, showcases a more docile
demeanor towards Macbeth and his contemporary schemes. It seems as though she has descended
from wickedness and wishes Macbeth would do the same. William demonstrates the shift of
immorality among the couple by a sole line from Macbeth to his wife, "So shall I, love,/And so, I
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pray, be you." (Macbeth 3.2) In the extract, Macbeth reassures his wife to mask her wickedness
with a warm expression before those deemed as threats. Ironically, Macbeth now questions and
consoles his wife to stand alongside him in his own wicked endeavors. By reassuring his wife to
employ a tactic, she had familiarized him with previously, readers witness the moment Macbeth
assumes independence for his evil. Readers perceive Macbeth's transition to an independent entity
as more immoral and hungrier for control than his mentor. Lady Macbeth, per se, the same entity
readers labeled as more witch than human, seems less of a threat than the man she has awakened.
As Macbeth spirals farther into crime and evil, he begins to hallucinate those he has
assassinated, which he refers to as nature's method of guilt-tripping men, "It will have blood, they
say. Blood will have blood./Stones have been known to move, and trees to speak." ( Macbeth 3.4)
One can deduce that these hallucinations result from some form of lingering guilt towards his
victims no matter how much he actively attempts to suppress them. When experiencing such
delusions, Lady Macbeth seems to be in a state of worry for her husband's wellbeing, which sits
ironically to the eye as the character first introduced to readers fixated more on the prophecy than
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Act 5: Mustard seed of Morality
Amid the final act of his tragedy, Shakespeare delves into Lady Macbeth's perspective and
mindset following King Duncan's assassination. As her husband and more, Lady Macbeth
hallucinates in her slumber and resides in a state of guilt-tripping despair, "It is an accustomed
action with her to seem thus washing her hands." (Macbeth 5.1) Lady Macbeth is seen rubbing
her hands underwater for lengthy periods in an attempt to rid herself of King Duncan's forsaken
One can deduce that her depressed disposition is not solely a result of her sins, but further,
the blasphemy she has awoken in her husband, "The thane of Fife had a wife. Where is she now?—
What, will these hands ne'er be clean?—No more o' that, my lord, no more o' that. You mar all
with this starting." (Macbeth 5.1) Lady Macbeth remorses over Macduff's death, which though she
had no role in, seems just as often or more accountable for the innocent lives taken for the sake of
power. As her husband strives to subdue the mustard seed of guilt in his heart, Lady Macbeth
appears to be drowning by her own immorality, yearning to escape herself and regretting having
Incapable of enduring her guilt any longer, Act 5, scene 3 showcases the moment Lady
Macbeth commits suicide as a definitive escape from her inner moral torment. Macbeth approaches
her death as an impending result that was bound to befall fools who submit themselves to guilt,
"Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player/That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,/And then
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is heard no more. It is a tale/Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,/Signifying nothing." (Macbeth
5.5) By eliminating all he deems as threats, readers discern how trivial the meaning of life has
become for this man. His heart no longer is a house for morals and reason and is instead drenched
in wickedness and a desire for control. His demise, beheading, begs to question how little this man
has gained in comparison to what he has lost: a chance for family, sanity, status, morality,
sympathy, and ultimately his life along with the lives of those he once loved. Macbeth has not only
assassinated those he regarded as threats but indirectly led the sole individual who still held
compassion towards such a lost man to take her life in grief. Lady Macbeth, once one with the
witches, was oblivious of the wickedness her husband repressed. While formerly representing pure
wickedness to readers, Lady Macbeth was in no comparison as corrupt as her husband. Opposites
by nature, Macbeth appears outwardly moral while suppressing his villain of a heart as Lady
Macbeth, outwardly wicked, suppresses morality and compassion. The author approaches King
Duncan's assassination as an awakening of the formerly subdued portions of the couple: the devil
disguised in a moral man and the lingering femininity of a forsaken soul. Conclusively, readers
beg the question of who the real villain was all along. Would the real villain be the man who gave
in to his desires and transitioned to the devil or the woman who had awoken such beast?
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Conclusion
many occasions, an enunciated unfolding of evil between Macbeth and his wife, Lady Macbeth.
Based on a prophecy indicating an ascent to kingship, the play pursues the lives of the married
couple and their wicked escapades to bring life to their oracle. By having his play appertain to
tragedy, the author impersonates to his readers how the chance for power gradually and
meticulously taints the hearts and minds of those burdened by its prediction. Being opposites by
nature, readers witness how both characters are personally and psychologically affected by their
dive into wickedness in conjunction with the necessary schemes they execute to remain on the
throne. Lady Macbeth, a woman who had once voluntarily surrendered herself to corruption,
drowns by her own grief while the husband to which she awoke blasphemy within transitions into
a villain. While a seemingly moral man represses the iniquity within his heart, his wife, more witch
than human, masks the lingering femininity of her soul. Ultimately, both individuals help unravel
the hidden elements of their loved one, which at long last acts to their demise. Such begs to
question of who the true villain of this tragedy truly is. Is the villain the one who terrorizes the
world or has unleashed the doer of such terror? Or are these two lives solely bound for demise by
a prophecy involuntarily unveiled to them? Are they indeed the villains of this tale or the victims
of an untimely hope?
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