A Short Monsoon Diary: Working With Language

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UNITS 8-10

A Short Monsoon Diary


Some extracts from the diary of a nature lover who enjoys the
monsoon in the hills and observes the accompanying changes
in the world of flora and fauna.
Activities under working with language are numerous and of
different types. Spend sufficient time on each activity and
devise, wherever necessary, new but related exercises for
further practice.
The following project may be tried under writing.
Do you notice the changes that occur in nature as the
seasons change? Write five or six sentences about what
you see in nature in your part of the country during the
months of May, August and December.
Record the daily temperature for a fortnight and note down
the maximum and minimum temperatures.
Comment on the rise and fall in temperature.
Record the time of sunrise and sunset for a fortnight and
check if there is any appreciable change in the time.

On the Grasshopper and Cricket


This poem is relatively difficult. The difficulty lies in its brevity
of expression and complexity of thought.
The introductory note and activities under working with the
poem should be done elaborately adding additional
explanatory notes/tasks, wherever necessary.
Compare it with The Ant and the Cricket to bring out
differences of style and theme clearly with examples.
To concretise ‘the poetry of earth’ or ‘the sounds of nature’,
use the poem given below, which is all about animal cries.

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Ask children to rearrange the lines taking note of the words
that rhyme. The last line of each stanza begins with ‘But’.
Cows moo.
Lions roar.
But I speak.
Bears snore.
Doves coo.
Crickets creak.
Dogs growl.
Horses neigh.
But I talk.
Wolves howl.
Donkeys bray.
Parrots squawk.

The Great Stone Face – I and II


A classic piece of American fiction juxtaposing mellowness of
humanism with magnificence of art. Ernest, an unschooled
dweller of the valley, has close affinity with the ‘Stone Face’ atop
the hills beyond. Who resembles the splendid Stone Face — not
someone for all his wealth, not someone else for all his heroic
deeds, and not someone else yet again for his poetry and sublime
ideas. It is none other than Ernest who personifies a rare blend of
basic simplicity, practical wisdom and deep love for humanity.
The original story has been heavily abridged. Simplification
has been avoided in the interest of authenticity. You may like
to read the unabridged text for pleasure and edification.
Design three or four while-reading comprehension questions
for each section of the text (parts I and II)
The writing activity (Part-II : IV) is for further practice in language
analysis. Rearranging phrases to construct sentences and then
rearranging sentences to construct a paragraph will provide
many opportunities for thinking about cohesion and coherence.
Activities 1 and 2 under working with language (Part I) on
adding -ness and -ity for forming nouns and adding -ly to
adjectives for forming adverbs should be completed in three
or four sessions. One period may be devoted to each item
including resolving intermittent queries and offering
explanations and the writing work involved.
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Before you read
Do you know what a diary is? It is a record of personal
experiences written day after day over a long period
of time. You can also use a diary to note down things
you plan to do immediately or in future.
One of the most famous diaries published as a book is
The Diary of Anne Frank.
Here are a few extracts from Ruskin Bond’s diary in
which he portrays the silent miracles of nature and
life’s little joys and regrets. Read on.

I
June 24
The first day of monsoon mist. And it’s strange how all
the birds fall silent as the mist comes climbing up the melancholy:
hill. Perhaps that’s what makes the mist so melancholy; very sad (the
not only does it conceal the hills, it blankets them in mist is called
silence too. Only an hour ago the trees were ringing melancholy
because it
with birdsong. And now the forest is deathly still as makes people
though it were midnight. feel
Through the mist Bijju is calling to his sister. I can melancholy)
hear him running about on the hillside but I cannot blankets:
see him. covers

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June 25
Some genuine early-
monsoon rain, warm
and humid, and not
that cold high-altitude
stuff we’ve been having
all year. The plants
seem to know it too,
and the first cobra lily
rears its head from the
fern: ferns as I walk up to the
a flowerless bank and post office.
plant with The mist affords a
feathery green
leaves certain privacy.
A school boy asked
me to describe the hill
station and valley in
heralded: one sentence, and all I could say was: “A paradise that
announced or might have been.”
brought the
news of June 27
imprecations: The rains have heralded the arrival of some seasonal
curses visitors—a leopard, and several thousand leeches.
bloodletting: Yesterday afternoon the leopard lifted a dog from near
losing blood the servants’ quarter below the school. In the evening it
(Decades ago, attacked one of Bijju’s cows but fled at the approach of
leeches were
used to
Bijju’s mother, who came screaming imprecations.
remove blood As for the leeches, I shall soon get used to a little
from a bloodletting every day.
patient’s body) Other new arrivals are the scarlet minivets (the
scarlet females are yellow), flitting silently among the leaves
minivet: like brilliant jewels. No matter how leafy the trees, these
bright red bird
brightly coloured birds cannot conceal themselves,
like a cuckoo
although, by remaining absolutely silent, they
drongo:
a song-bird sometimes contrive to go unnoticed. Along come a pair
with a stout of drongos, unnecessarily aggressive, chasing the
bill minivets away.
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A tree creeper moves rapidly up the trunk of the
oak tree, snapping up insects all the way. Now that
the rains are here, there is no dearth of food for the
insectivorous birds.

Comprehension Check
1. Why is the author not able to see Bijju?
2. What are the two ways in which the hills appear to change
when the mist comes up?

II
August 2
All night the rain has been drumming on the drumming:
corrugated tin roof. There has been no storm, no falling noisily
thunder, just the steady swish of a tropical downpour.
It helps me to lie awake; at the same time, it doesn’t
keep me from sleeping.
It is a good sound to read by — the rain outside, the
quiet within — and, although tin roofs are given to
springing unaccountable leaks, there is a feeling of being
untouched by, and yet in touch with, the rain.
August 3
The rain stops. The clouds begin to break up, the sun
strikes the hill on my left. A woman is chopping up
sticks. I hear the tinkle of cowbells. In the oak tree, a
crow shakes the raindrops from his feathers and caws
disconsolately. Water drips from a leaking drainpipe. disconsolately:
And suddenly, clean and pure, the song of the whistling unhappily
thrush emerges like a dark sweet secret from the depths
ravine:
of the ravine. valley
August 12
Endless rain, and a permanent mist. We haven’t seen
the sun for eight or nine days. Everything damp and
soggy. Nowhere to go. Pace the room, look out of the
window at a few bobbing umbrellas. At least it isn’t cold
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rain. The hillsides are lush
as late-monsoon flowers
begin to appear — wild
balsam, dahlias, begonias
and ground orchids.
August 31
It is the last day of August,
and the lush monsoon
growth has reached its
peak. The seeds of the
cobra lily are turning red,
signifying that the rains are coming to an end.
In a few days the ferns will start turning yellow, but
right now they are still firm, green and upright. Ground
orchids, mauve lady’s slipper and the white butterfly
orchids put on a fashion display on the grassy slopes of
Landour. Wild dahlias, red, yellow and magenta, rear
crevices:
narrow their heads from the rocky crevices where they have
openings or taken hold.
cracks in rock Snakes and rodents, flooded out of their holes and
or wall burrows, take shelter in roofs, attics and godowns. A
shrew: shrew, weak of eyesight, blunders about the rooms,
(find its Hindi much to the amusement of the children.
equivalent in
the next
“Don’t kill it,” admonishes their grandmother.
sentence) “Chuchundars are lucky — they bring money!”
And sure enough, I receive a cheque in the mail. Not
a very large one, but welcome all the same.
October 3
We have gone straight from monsoon into winter rain.
Snow at higher altitudes.
After an evening hailstorm, the sky and hills are
suffused with a beautiful golden light.

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January 26
Winter Rains in the Hills
In the hushed silence of the house
when I am quite alone, and my
friend, who was here
has gone, it is very lonely, very quiet,
as I sit in a liquid silence, a silence
within,
surrounded by the rhythm of rain,
the steady drift
of water on leaves, on lemons, on roof,
drumming on drenched dahlias and
window panes,
while the mist holds the house in a
dark caress.
As I pause near a window, the rain stops.
And starts again. caress:
touching or
And the trees, no longer green but grey,
holding
menace me with their loneliness. lovingly
March 23 menace:
threaten
Late March. End of winter.
The blackest cloud I’ve ever seen squatted over
Mussoorie, and then it hailed marbles for half an hour.
Nothing like a hailstorm to clear the sky. Even as I write,
I see a rainbow forming.
RUSKIN BOND
Comprehension Check
1. When does the monsoon season begin and when does it
end? How do you prepare to face the monsoon?
2. Which hill-station does the author describe in this diary
entry?
3. For how many days does it rain without stopping? What
does the author do on these days?
4. Where do the snakes and rodents take shelter? Why?
5. What did the author receive in the mail?
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1. Look carefully at the diary entries for June 24-25, August 2 and March
23. Now write down the changes that happen as the rains progress from
June to March.
2. Why did the grandmother ask the children not to kill the Chuchundar?
3. What signs do we find in Nature which show that the monsoons are about
to end?
4. Complete the following sentences.
(i) Bijju is not seen but his voice is heard because __________________.
(ii) The writer describes the hill station and valley as __________________.
(iii) The leopard was successful in __________________ but had to flee when
______________________________________________________.
(iv) The minivets are easily noticed because __________________.
(v) It looks like a fashion display on the slopes when __________________.
(vi) During the monsoon season, snakes and rodents are found in roofs
and attics because __________________________.
5. ‘Although tin roofs are given to springing unaccountable leaks, there is a
feeling of being untouched by, and yet in touch with, the rain.’
(i) Why has the writer used the word, ‘springing’?
(ii) How is the writer untouched by the rain?
(iii) How is the writer in touch with the rain at the same time?
6. Mention a few things that can happen when there is endless rain for days
together.
7. What is the significance of cobra lily in relation to the monsoon season, its
beginning and end?

1. Here are some words that are associated with the monsoon. Add as many
words as you can to this list. Can you find words for these in your
languages?
downpour floods mist cloudy powercuts cold umbrella

2. Look at the sentences below.


(i) Bijju wandered into the garden in the evening.
(ii) The trees were ringing with birdsong.

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Notice the highlighted verbs.
The verb wandered tells us what Bijju did that evening. But the verb
was ringing tells us what was happening continually at same time in
the past (the birds were chirping in the trees).
Now look at the sentences below. They tell us about something that
happened in the past. They also tell us about other things that
happened continually, at the same time in the past.
Put the verbs in the brackets into their proper forms. The first one is done
for you.
(i) We (get out) of the school bus. The bell (ring) and everyone (rush) to
class.
We got out of the school bus. The bell was ringing and everyone was
rushing to class.
(ii) The traffic (stop). Some people (sit) on the road and they (shout)
slogans.
(iii) I (wear) my raincoat. It (rain) and people (get) wet.
(iv) She (see) a film. She (narrate) it to her friends who (listen) carefully.
(v) We (go) to the exhibition. Some people (buy) clothes while others
(play) games.
(vi) The class (is) quiet. Some children (read) books and the rest (draw).
3. Here are some words from the lesson which describe different kinds of
sounds.
drum swish tinkle caw drip

(i) Match these words with their correct meanings.


(a) to fall in small drops
(b) to make a sound by hitting a surface repeatedly
(c) to move quickly through the air, making a soft sound
(d) harsh sound made by birds
(e) ringing sound (of a bell or breaking glass, etc.)
(ii) Now fill in the blanks using the correct form of the words
given above.
(a) Ramesh ____________ on his desk in impatience.
(b) Rain water ____________ from the umbrella all over
the carpet.
(c) The pony ____________ its tail.

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(d) The _________________ of breaking glass woke me up.
(e) The ____________ of the raven disturbed the child’s sleep.
4. And sure enough, I received a cheque in the mail.
Complete each sentence below by using appropriate phrase from the ones
given below.
sure enough colourful enough serious enough
kind enough big enough fair enough
brave enough foolish enough anxious enough

(i) I saw thick black clouds in the sky. And ___________ ___________ it
soon started raining heavily.
(ii) The blue umbrella was ___________ ___________ for the brother and
sister.
(iii) The butterflies are ___________ ___________ to get noticed.
(iv) The lady was ___________ ___________ to chase the leopard.
(v) The boy was ___________ ___________ to call out to his sister.
(vi) The man was ___________ ___________ to offer help.
(vii) The victim’s injury was ___________ ___________ for him to get
admitted in hospital.
(viii) That person was ___________ ___________ to repeat the same mistake
again.
(ix) He told me he was sorry and he would compensate for the loss.
I said, ‘___________ ___________.’

1. Do you believe in superstitions? Why, or why not? Working with your


partner, write down three superstitious beliefs that you are familiar with.
2. How many different kinds of birds do you come across in the lesson? How
many varieties do you see in your neighbourhood? Are there any birds
that you used to see earlier in your neighbourhood but not now? In groups
discuss why you think this is happening.

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1. The monsoons are a time of great fun and even a few adventures: playing in
the rain and getting wet, wading through knee-deep water on your way to
school, water flooding the house or the classroom, powercuts and so on.
Write a paragraph describing an incident that occurred during the rains which
you can never forget.

or
Write a poem of your own about the season of spring when trees are
in full bloom.

ak
Oak
The O
The oak stands straight and tall,
but not in boots,
nor any shoes at all:
just in roots.
—Norma Farber

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Unlike The Ant and the Cricket (page 21), which tells a story, this
is a nature poem. In it, the grasshopper and cricket do not appear
as characters in a story. Rather, they act as symbols, each
suggesting something else. Read the poem and notice how ‘the
poetry of earth’ keeps on through summer and winter in a never-
ending song. Who sings the song?

The poetry of earth is never dead:


When all the birds are faint with the hot sun,
And hide in cooling trees, a voice will run
From hedge to hedge about the new-mown mead,
That is the grasshopper’s — he takes the lead
In summer luxury — he has never done
With his delights, for when tired out with fun
He rests at ease beneath some pleasant weed.
The poetry of earth is ceasing never:
On a lone winter evening when the frost
Has wrought a silence, from the stone there shrills
The cricket’s song, in warmth increasing ever,
And seems to one in drowsiness half lost;
The grasshopper’s among some grassy hills.
JOHN KEATS

wrought: brought about


shrills: comes through loud and clear

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1. Discuss with your partner the following definition of a poem.
A poem is made of words arranged in a beautiful order. These words,
when read aloud with feeling, have a music and meaning of their own.
2. ‘The poetry of earth’ is not made of words. What is it made of, as suggested
in the poem?
3. Find in the poem lines that match the following.
(i) The grasshopper’s happiness never comes to an end.
(ii) The cricket’s song has a warmth that never decreases.
4. Which word in stanza 2 is opposite in meaning to ‘the frost’?
5. The poetry of earth continues round the year through a cycle of two seasons.
Mention each with its representative voice.

Same is different
different
The bandage was wound around the wound.
The dump was so full that it had to refuse more refuse.
The soldier decided to desert his dessert in the desert.
When shot at, the dove dove into the bushes.
The insurance was invalid for the invalid.
They were too close to the door to close it.
There is no time like the present to present the present.

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