Argumentative Essay
Argumentative Essay
Argumentative Essay
Abstract
The essay will discuss the reason why Artificial Intelligence cannot replace all
employees. First, this will argue in terms of education, why it cannot replace the teacher. Then,
the paper will present the reason why the replacement of technology in medical is impossible.
Lastly, this essay will claim for Artificial Intelligence cannot replace workers in the company
and manufacturing. Then, this will protect the arguments in the counterclaim part. In the end, this
The world has gone through many industrial revolutions and now it is in the industrial
revolution 4.0 with great progress. Through this revolution, along with the development of
civilization, Artificial Intelligence was born and developing strongly, it can do things that people
cannot do. It is changing human life with smart technology, some people seem to feel excited
about this, however, there are also some feel apprehensive about its future effects. Artificial
Intelligence is predicted to replace some jobs in the future, can raise the unemployment rate.
Artificial Intelligence can have a bad effect on employment; however, it cannot replace all the
employees in the future, and this essay will make arguments in three aspects are education,
The phrase ‘Artificial Intelligence’ was named by computer scientist John McCarthy in
1956 and described it as ‘science and engineering of making intelligent machines, especially
technology which simulate human intelligence and apply to machines, programs to think and act
like human. When mention about AI, most people will think of robots, however, AI is not only
robots. It works based on the principle of human intelligence, mimic and solve things from
simple to complex. Frankenfield (2020) also provide two types of AI: weak and strong. Weak AI
is designed for a particular job such as games, virtual assistance like Siri, Alexa. Strong AI is a
system, it is more complex and complicated, it is designed to handle works without human
involvement.
Since it was discovered, the application of AI is very wide in every sectors and industry.
In medical, it is used to treatment and surgery, in technology it produces smart device like self-
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driving car, in games like chess, and even in the financial industry, AI also used to help the
bank's fraud department (Frankenfield,2020). It shows its remarkable progress when in 1997, a
computer from IBM defeated a professional chess player after six games, or AI can learn and
improve itself then it defeated five top players in poker game Texas Hold’em (Hellmann, 2019).
A study from Oxford University predicted that 47% of U.S. jobs could be automated away by
2025, this means 75 million of jobs will be gone (Frank, Pring & Roehrig, 2017). And recently,
AI has just replaced dozens of MSN news production workers in Microsoft (Baker, 2020). As
Although smart and no salary required, AI will never replace all human jobs with the
following reasons.
The first reason is that AI cannot do all the jobs in education. Applying technology in
spiritual sensitivity, which, in turn, has diminished the educational purpose’ (Guilherme, 2019).
Besides, the relationship between teachers and parents is very important because, through the
exchange, they can reinforce to support their child. A good relationship can help the children
express their emotions effectively and developing their health, their personalities (Guilherme,
2019). Teachers appeared to be a model especially small children to develop, they have a lot of
effects. AI can teach and give information but talking, inspire, or share experiences for students,
only teachers can do it. In addition to providing knowledge, it also requires understanding as
well as bringing teaching methods appropriate to each person. Guilherme (2019) also points out
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that whenever there is a debate, AI cannot argue and accept the criticism, cannot adapt oneself to
the circumstances, and follow a new way suggested by the students. This makes students feel
constrain and unable to grow their personality. Lastly, technology is becoming a standard for
schools and universities to measure progress and success; however, a study shows that applying
The second one is that AI cannot replace doctors. With the help of AI, nowadays
hospitals use it to diagnose some health problems like cancer. Like teaching a student mentioned
above, healing requires treatment methods that suitable for each person with different health and
atopic conditions and doctors are the only person can understand and do this. Personal privacy is
also another problem. Sometimes, we have to analyze the face to see the sign of the disease, if
the system does this is attacked by a personal data attack, lots of patients’ profile will be stolen
and can affect their daily life. Moreover, responsibility, an issue that currently cannot be
answered. If there is a misdiagnosed, who will take responsibility if doctors did not involve in
the diagnose or how can people blame if doctors take the recommendation from AI (Oakden-
Rayner, 2017). Till now, AI is supposed to be a support tool rather than a replacement. This also
agrees with many experts. Eldon Richards, technology director of Recondo Technologies said in
a journal:
‘If reviewing the ethics of a decision, or complex data or one-off decision, AI is not good at
those today. AI is very far off when it comes to those capabilities. The mundane, routine things
we do, like typing in a word processor, AI us simplifying those things for us, so now we're
shifting our focus from these simple tasks to things that require a little more training. I certainly
This idea also agreed by Mary Sun, an AI researcher at First Derm and medical student at Mount
Sinai Medical Center when she said AI is a good tool for people to receive suggestions and
double-checking (Lagasse, 2018). Moreover, caring and empathy is a very important term in the
relationship between doctors and patients, it shows their respect and sincerity, which can
motivate the patients a lot, especially those who need physical therapy, that machines cannot do.
AI is supporting a lot in the field of medical, however, its complete replacement is not possible.
The last one is that AI cannot replace all the employees in the company. It can be clearly
seen that sometimes, AI can do better and more productive than humans, especially in
calculating. Creativity is very important in working when a person is competent with their jobs,
they usually try to improve to make their work more effective and productive. While AI cannot
do this because they are just machines and do preprogrammed jobs. Besides, also like when
studying, working also demands for teamwork and debate to make the work, the product better,
which AI cannot do. Adaptability is another problem of AI, when there is a change in the work, a
good employee can adapt and acquire, while machines are preprogrammed, ‘If an industry shift
requires a quick pivot in a new direction, tech often has to be deliberately redirected (or
replaced) to keep up’, Thompson (2019) wrote in her paper. Another reason is staffs have
knowledge of business, they understand the situation while AI is ‘only as smart as the data it’s
given’ (Thompson, 2019); using their knowledge, humans can behave appropriately. Last but not
least, although smart and productive, sometimes machine still make mistakes and this need
supervisors to control this. Applying technology in manufacture and company is very good and
Besides posing a threat to human jobs, AI also supposed to be dangerous for human life.
Taulli (2019) quoted Stephen Hawking’s words, the legendary physicist, in a Web Summit
‘Unless we learn how to prepare for, and avoid, the potential risks, AI could be the worst event
in the history of our civilization. It brings dangers, like powerful autonomous weapons, or new
ways for the few to oppress the many. It could bring great disruption to our economy.’
And Taulli (2019) also found that other experts like Elon Musk, Bill Gates have the same worry
Counterclaim
On the contrary, some people still believe that AI can reduce all human occupation with
some of its benefits. In education, AI can replace teachers in teaching students by programming,
install information for them. However, teachers play a role in observing and focusing on issues
of communication, emotions, which machines cannot replace people. In medical, AI helps a lot,
especially in contagious disease cases, which can endanger for healthcare staff. Or in diagnosis,
400,000 deaths caused by over 12 million diagnostic mistakes each year, this is just the number
in the United States (Frank, Pring & Roehrig, 2017). Applying technology can help reduce this
problem. But every person has different health condition so doctors observe to decide treatment
methods, and AI cannot do this. If there is an emergency circumstance, whether AI can cope
with it or not. Lastly, in company and manufacture, automation is becoming more and more
popular. But it still needs supervisors to control the systems. Creativity is also required by a lot
of companies in recruitment, which AI does not have. The AI’s potential of replacing all people
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jobs is not possible because it still has some problems remaining and human is the only can do
However, without AI, human cannot do their job effective and such amazing like today.
People should prepare for a future of working with AI, besides developing it people also need to
control them. In order to meet the demand of using AI, education also have to offer appropriate
training programs, this means educational need to change (Hoppe, Kay & Verdejo, 2003). In
medical, the co-operate with technology also very important because it will have doctors reduce
pressure in their stressful work. Newman and Blanchard (2019) also mention that companies also
have to change, they wrote: ‘The world is changing. Business is changing. Consumer needs and
investor expectations are changing.’, this means companies also have to apply technology, this is
not optional, it is compulsory. ‘They must think of themselves as technology companies as well’
(Newman and Blanchard, 2019) wrote, this is need to meet the consumers, investors’ demand.
Besides, workers also have to improve themselves in order not to get backward in modern life
with technology is getting higher and higher (Cribb & Glover, 2018). The cooperation between
human and AI have a lot of potential, it can make the world more and more developed.
Conclusion
This essay has discussed the reason why AI cannot replace all human jobs in three fields
are education, medical, and business. Through this, people can clearly understand that AI will
not take all the jobs in the future although there are some arguments against it. Moreover, the
cooperation between AI and human is possible, with the help of AI, jobs will be easier and more
productive. However, people should control their development because it can pose some threat to
human life.
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