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    EGP Essay Structure Exercise

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    - It is the individual's responsibility to maintain good health and well-being since they are in control of their own lives and choices every day, which has a crucial impact on their well-being. - Individuals have the power to make their own decisions about how to live their lives and control their behaviors, habits, and choices, knowing that living a healthy lifestyle has benefits for themselves and their ability to contribute to society. - Taking responsibility for one's own health and well-being by making wise choices has benefits like disease prevention, more energy, and an increased life expectancy, so individuals should acknowledge the value of prioritizing their health.

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    - It is the individual's responsibility to maintain good health and well-being since they are in control of their own lives and choices every day, which has a crucial impact on their well-being. - Individuals have the power to make their own decisions about how to live their lives and control their behaviors, habits, and choices, knowing that living a healthy lifestyle has benefits for themselves and their ability to contribute to society. - Taking responsibility for one's own health and well-being by making wise choices has benefits like disease prevention, more energy, and an increased life expectancy, so individuals should acknowledge the value of prioritizing their health.

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    - It is the individual's responsibility to maintain good health and well-being since they are in control of their own lives and choices every day, which has a crucial impact on their well-being. - Individuals have the power to make their own decisions about how to live their lives and control their behaviors, habits, and choices, knowing that living a healthy lifestyle has benefits for themselves and their ability to contribute to society. - Taking responsibility for one's own health and well-being by making wise choices has benefits like disease prevention, more energy, and an increased life expectancy, so individuals should acknowledge the value of prioritizing their health.

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    EGP Essay Structure Exercise

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    Names: Amyza, Lisa & Yani Block: 3 Date: 17/07/2019 1 of 3

    Q: To what extent is health and well being the


    responsibility of the individual?
    Implicit meaning:
    Why is looking after health and well being the responsibility of individuals?

    Explicit meaning:
    How far is health and well being the responsibility of the individual?
    Paragraph Structure Write Sentences
    Introduction Background It is the individual's responsibility to maintain good health 2 of 3
    Information since they are with it all the time and it plays a crucial part in
    their well being.

    Argument/ It is true that health and well being are the responsibility of
    Opinion every individuals.

    Main points This is because humans have the power to decide and control
    what they want, knowing the benefits of being healthy and
    their contribution to society.

    Body 1 Point Humans have power to choose and make decisions.

    Explain All individuals have the power to choose the type of life they
    want to live.
    Elaborate Making our own decisions whether it was a positive move or
    not. People also have power to control themselves.

    Example(s) For example, impact our life. Bad habits such as spending too
    much time watching television, eating too much junk food. It is
    your choice and you are the one who decide whether you want
    to create healthy habits and accept responsibility for your
    behaviour and you'll see positive changes in your life.

    Link Hence, life is full of choices and we have the power to make
    the wise decisions.

    Body 2 Point Knowing the values of taking care of the health as well as well
    being, yes it is the individual's responsibility.

    Explain Taking care of health and well being gives us many benefits
    such as prevention against diseases, reduces pain and injury,
    improves mood, boost energy and most importantly increases
    the chance of a longer life.

    Elaborate By acknowledging the values of staying healthy it creates a


    sense commitment amongst individuals and also strive them to
    live a meaningful life that is fulfilling not only for self but
    others too.
    Example(s) For example looking forward to more time with loved ones is
    reason enough to keep walking. In a case study reported by
    The American Council on Exercise showed that those who
    walked just 30 minutes each day significantly reduced their
    chances of dying prematurely, compared with those who
    exercised infrequently.
    Link Hence, this shows that health as well as well being is the
    responsibility of an individual.
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