Comp Book Essay
Comp Book Essay
Comp Book Essay
Adrienne Angell
Mrs. Cramer
College Composition 1
15 November 2019
Take a minute and think about the essential human characteristics that make you
successful and set you apart from others. Now think about the characteristics and skills of the
people in your community. Finally, pick one characteristic that you believe is the driving factor
in the success of humans. The reason you couldn’t pick one is because humans are complex and
diverse. This complexity and diversity are the driving factors in the success of humans.
Divergent is a novel that challenges this fact. The author, Veronica Roth, created a society
centered around five traits that the original leaders deemed as integral to the continuation of
humans. The population is split into five groups: Candor who value honesty, Erudite who value
intelligence, Abnegation who value selflessness, Amity who value peace, and Dauntless who
value bravery. Teenagers choose a faction and are forced to follow these values. Tris has a
unique characteristic. She is Divergent, which means she fits into multiple factions. Divergence
characteristics and abilities could destroy the structure in Chicago. Divergent is an extreme
reflection of society today. Veronica Roth’s Divergent challenges the reader’s beliefs about
human characteristics that are important in society and establishes that diversity among humans
strengthens society.
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Firstly, every human has specific characteristics that define their identity, so Roth wanted
to express how significant these differences are by dividing a society into certain traits. Erudite,
Dauntless, and Candor can be compared to political parties around the world. They are
opinionated and unwilling to waiver from their ideal models of society. Abnegation and Amity
are pacifistic. The members of the Divergent population are hidden, but they can be compared to
the outspoken people today who are working to create a society without ideal models. They are
the ones who can see the flaws in the system and that the factions need to work together. Tris
was hidden under the gray cloaks of Abnegation, who promoted neutralism. Tris’ elite nature
showed when she chose to become Dauntless. Due to all these factors, Tris was put in a place
where she could conform to society or be unique, but for her own well-being, she went the safe
route. Tris tried to focus on being brave during her initiation in order to show no signs of
Divergence (Roth 87). The second stage of the initiation tests fears, and Tris finished the
stimulation four times faster than the average initiate. Tris can use all five characteristics, and
more, to efficiently fight her fears (Roth 232-238). Additionally, she realizes that the simulation
is fake, and she can defeat the challenges without experiencing her fears (Roth 254-255). This
shows Divergent can alter the technology and see the flaws in the system. The unique traits that
the Divergent have are present in today’s activists for a diverse society. Roth is trying to
demonstrate that the members of society using all their abilities to accomplish tasks are more
efficient. Throughout the book, Tris attempts to express that society needs revised and the world
isn't as balanced as it was designed to be. Therefore, Roth is implying that today’s society needs
productive change in terms of holding up the oppressed, the Divergent, and teaching humans that
Additionally, the concept that diversity among humans is essential to existence is still a
heavy message to express to the majority. Roth shows the power and influence of the majority
when she illustrates the war Erudite and Dauntless are planning on Abnegation. Erudite has
access to all the technology, and Dauntless has a large trained army. Both factions knew
Divergent would plot against them and some members wouldn’t agree to fight, so they had to
design a way to control these factors and filter out Divergent. Roth illustrates the beginning of
I start to hear popping sounds. I can't look around to see where they're coming from, but
the farther I walk, the louder and sharper they get, until I recognize the man-he is a
council member. The soldier takes her gun out of her holster and, with sightless eyes,
fires a bullet into the back of the council member’s skull. (Roth 422)
Erudite designed technology that controlled the minds of non-Divergent people. The Divergent
were meant to stand out, but Tris hides and outsmarts the leaders and, eventually, stops the
simulation. Tris ends the war. She shows the capacity of one Divergent person and the extensive
abilities they have. This exert illustrates the perilousness of one characteristic, or rather one
group of people, controlling everything. Peter was one of Tris’ competitors in the initiation, and
he was willing to do anything to have control. He wanted to throw Tris into the chasm (Roth
277-281). Tris escapes, but Peter exemplifies the necessity for diversity. He was driven by
jealousy and was blinded of any other reasoning about the consequences of his actions. Tris
challenged him by having a superior mental ability. Overall, Chicago fell apart when dominated
Divergent challenges the reader’s beliefs about human characteristics that are important in
society and establishes that diversity among humans strengthens society. Fortunately, as new
generations mature, the idea of diversity spreads. Roth targeted the young adult audience in order
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to instill that message in them. We need to consider everyone, the planet, and our morals when
making any decision that determines the fate of society. Tris had help along the way from people
who thought differently than her. Roth developed a noteworthy novel with an abundance of
influential messages. Altogether, Divergent by Veronica Roth supports the message of accepting
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