Essay 2
Essay 2
Essay 2
Katie Kilpatrick
Prof. Richardson
English 1201
22 March 2019
Everyone uses social media. It’s how everyone stays connected in today’s society. Social
media can even be used for certain classes in school. It plays a big role in today’s world, but is it
always beneficial? I have been researching how social media negatively affects the adolescent
brain. I chose this topic because I am one to always be on social media. I love to see what my
friends are up to and I love being able to stay connected with people even though we may be
5000 miles away. But sometimes I catch myself on social media for way too long. It can be
distracting when I’m trying to do homework and cause me to procrastinate. I also catch myself
sometimes comparing my life to other peoples’ lives when they post something cool and I'm just
at home. There are also times where if another girl posts a picture, I find myself comparing
myself to her. I wonder why I don’t look like that and I know it hurts my self esteem. This is
wonder to myself why their parents allow them to be on social media when it can be so
dangerous. I often times relate my personal experiences with social media to what these kids are
doing. Social media can be a very dangerous place and it can ruin a young person's self esteem if
they aren’t careful. Social media can also be addicting. I find myself on it for hours at a time,
then I’ll look at the time and it’s late and I still haven’t done my homework. This is what sparked
my interest in the topic. For me, as an eighteen year old, social media affects the way my own
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brain works. So when I would see young kids on social media, I would wonder what was
happening to them- how was social media affecting the way their brain worked?
Exploring this topic was very interesting to me because social media is such a big part of
everyone’s daily life. It is used by a majority of people everyday, including adolescents. As the
interest in social media for adolescents continues to grow, their mental health declines. Social
media affects adolescents in a negative way because their mental health is declining, as well as
Being online, people have access to communication with the entire world. One can talk to
anyone online. This can become very dangerous for adolescents because the Internet may contain
predators or bullies. Cyberbullying has become more prevalent nowadays as social media usage
among adolescents increases. Cyberbullying negatively affects the adolescent brain in many
ways. A study done in the Pakistan Journal of Criminology by Sumera Batool researched the
effects of cyberbullying through social media on adolescents in Pakistan. The study asked young
kids questions about how social media affected them. The study found that cyberbullying
“affect[s] the psychology of the youth such as emotional and academic disturbance as well as
also create[s] social relationship gaps…” (Batool 134). Because adolescents are constantly on
social media, they are more subject to cyberbullying. This leads to a disturbance of emotions,
academics, and relationships. The study concluded that cyberbullying “had bad consequences on
the social relation and result[ed] in isolation of the individuals” (Batool 135). Bad social media
interactions cause adolescents to become depressed and isolate themselves from their peers. This
can negatively affect the adolescents for the rest of their lives. Cyberbullying can also be
especially dangerous because of how quickly information can be spread online. It is also harmful
because it can be anonymous. In Social Media and Adolescent Health by Maggie R Guinta, it is
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stated that “most cyberbullied recipients know the perpetrator; however, in 10% to 27% of cases,
the culprit is unknown” (Guinta 197). Guinta also states that cyberbullying often increases the
chance of depression (Guinta 197). So again, social media has given a platform to bullies to
spread rumors, insult people, and spread pictures of people all behind the mask of the internet.
The anonymity makes it easier for bullies to bully which causes harm to those who are
innocently using social media. Cyberbullying is one of the largest negative effects of social
media as it affects one in their daily life. It causes adolescents to underperform academically, it
Fig. 1. A girl is shown as upset because of social media. A finger is pointing at her as if she is
being taunted. This illustrates the cyberbullying done on social media to teens like this one (“The
Most parents are not aware of what their teenagers are doing online. Their teens may
bully other kids, or they may be doing illegal things online. This can be very dangerous as
teenagers do not understand that what they put online, stays out there forever. No one has
privacy online. In Social Media and Adolescent Health by Maggie R. Guinta, privacy on the
Internet is discussed. Guinta states that “content posted on social media – or the Internet in
general – is difficult or impossible to remove” (Guinta 197). This can be harmful to adolescents
as future employers can see anything that they have put online. If an adolescent posts about
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something illegal they have done, it can majorly affect their future. There is virtually no privacy
on the Internet. Sexting has also become a major problem among teens. When discussing sexting
amongst adolescents, Holson states “ images can be widely and quickly distributed via the
Internet or cell phones without permission” and when these pictures are spread, “victims face
embarrassment and humiliation, and suffer emotional distress. Perpetrators can face school
suspensions and legal consequences, including felony child pornography charges” (Guinta 197).
So sharing anything online can be extremely harmful for adolescents. It can cause one to end up
in jail. Since social media isn’t private, teens must be careful about what they put online or they
causing them to underperform. In the study done by Sumera Batool, she states that “the victim
[of cyberbullying] becomes mentally upset [so] their academic performance [is] affect[ed]”
(Batool 128). So when a student is being bullied online through social media, they are upset and
cannot focus on the schoolwork they are required to do. This causes their grades to suffer as
they are being constantly harassed online. It is not only cyberbullying that can affect academic
performance, though. In Social Media and Adolescent Health, Maggie Guinta states, “there is a
negative correlation between scholastic outcomes and the use of electronic media, including
social media. Multitasking by using social media sites while in class or doing schoolwork can be
detrimental to student academic performance” (Guinta 197). Students are often on their phones
while in class which is a major distraction from what they should be learning. Since students are
often more focused on what is going on on social media, they are not focused on their education
and their studies, causing their academics to suffer. Social media is a major distraction when it
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comes to school. The academic performance of adolescents will continue to suffer if their use of
Because social media is so distracting, adolescents often cannot fall asleep because of it.
This lack of sleep can lead to many mental health issues, and can also lead to the disruption of
their academic performance. Kids should be getting at least eight and a half hours of sleep per
night to maintain proper mental health and to perform at their best academically. In Social
Media’s Vampires: They Text by Night, Laura M. Holson discusses why teens stay up late on
their phones. They are distracted by social media and feel the need to talk to their friends. When
discussing why teens stay up on their phones and on social media, Holson states that “teenagers
have a desire to connect and the solitude of night allows for intimate conversation” and “they are
reacting to overbooked schedules packed with sports, music lessons and homework that give
them less free time to pursue personal interests” (Holson 1). So because these kids want to
connect with their friends outside of their busy schedules, social media gives them that outlet,
and they end up staying up later than they should be. This causes adolescents to lose sleep. When
discussing sleeping habits of teens, Holson states “more than half of 15- to 17-year-olds sleep
about seven hours a night, 90 minutes less than the minimum recommendation. With myriad
electronic ways to socialize, gossip and explore hobbies, tech-addicted teenagers are getting even
fewer hours of sleep” (Holson 1). This lack of sleep due to social media can only cause negative
effects as sleep is one of the most important things for adolescents. Getting less than the
Fig. 2. A person is chained to their computer, illustrating their addiction to social media.
This addiction often keeps adolescents up late so they get little to no sleep (“The Negative
Social media largely affects adolescent development. Social media offers a way of
communication for these adolescents. This can either help or hurt their social development. In
Lauren A. Spies Shapiro, she discusses how adolescents use social media to form social
connections. She states “adolescents in general have an easier time self-disclosing in online
versus face-to-face communication” (Shapiro 1). Adolescents often turn to social media as a way
to communicate nowadays with their friends and form new social connections. They can improve
upon their social skills by using social media. This sounds beneficial, but it can also be harmful.
Shapiro also states “spending excessive amounts of time on SNSs actually can lead to symptoms
of depression, which then increase the risk for social isolation” (Shapiro 1). The more time kids
spend on social media making these social connections and talking to their friends, the more
likely they are to become depressed, and eventually isolate themselves from these friends. These
kids end up only talking to their peers online and not in person, which is a huge part of social
development. Kids need to learn to form connections in the real world and not just on social
media because of all the negative effects that social media can have on the adolescent brain.
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Fig. 3. A couple is shown at the dinner table on their phones. They are communicating
through technology instead of personally, showing how social media has taken away their ability
or want to communicate in person (“The Negative Effects Social Media Can Have On
Relationships”).
The adolescent brain is also very impressionable. Young kids see models who don’t look
like them, but they see these models getting positive attention because of how they look, causing
these kids to be upset because they don’t look that way. This can lead to bad body image and self
esteem issues. What kids don’t know is that most of these images are photoshopped and edited,
but they still want to look this way. Having bad body image can lead to eating disorders and
depression. In Effects of Attributions and Social Media Exposure on Obesity Stigma Among
Korean Adolescents by Yujin Lim, the stigma surrounding obesity and how social media causes
this was discussed. Lim states “body image content emphasizing thinness and physical
attractiveness on social media may have strengthened the obesity stigmatization through external
attributions” (Lim 2049). Social media has affected the way adolescents think about body image
to where they now think about it in a negative way. They are used to seeing thinness so that is
what they think everyone should look like. This could affect the way adolescents see themselves.
Lim also states “thin ideal images on social media could intensify adolescents’ pressures for a
thin body image” (Lim 2052). Because adolescents are seeing so much thinness on social media,
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they want to look that way as well. This could lead to eating disorders as well as other mental
health issues because these adolescents want to achieve this desired look. Social media plays a
huge role in how people perceive themselves as Lim states that the “amount of time spent on
social media was related to the negative perception of body image and low level of weight
satisfaction” (Lim 2052). Again, the more time adolescents spend seeing these thin models and
peers, the more they think they need to look that way as well. They turn to eating disorders to
achieve the desired result quicker. Social media is very harmful in the way adolescents perceive
themselves because they end up feeling like they are overweight when all they see online is
thinness.
With bad body image also comes self esteem issues. Kids see someone online and want
to look like them, but get upset when they don’t look that way. It can negatively affect their self
esteem and lead to many mental health issues. In Self-Esteem, Daily Internet Use and Social
a study was done highlighting the effects of social media on self esteem. The study found that
“depression was directly negatively associated with self-esteem and positively with daily internet
use” (Kırcaburun 68). If these adolescents had high depression levels, it was also found that they
had low self esteem levels. This also says that if adolescents had high depression levels, they had
high levels of daily internet use. This shows that “self-esteem, daily internet use and social media
addiction are significant predictors of depression” (Kırcaburun 69). If a kid frequently uses social
media they are more likely to have low self esteem. It was stated in the study that “low self-
esteem was a significant risk factor and was leading individuals to depression” (Kırcaburun 69).
This means that the more these kids are using social media, the more likely they are to have low
self esteem. If they have low self esteem, it is more likely to lead them to depression. Being on
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social media too often has very negative outcomes. Depression negatively affects the
development of the adolescent brain. Social media is a main contributor to low self esteem and
depression.
All of these negative effects of social media that I mentioned previously can all lead to
poor mental health. Teenagers are exposed to all of these things at such a young age now and
their brains are not prepared to process it. It hurts their self esteem and leads to many mental
health problems, like depression or anxiety. Cyberbullying, poor academic performance, sleep
deprivation, lack of privacy, poor social development, poor body image, and lack of self esteem
all lead to depression. In Social Media and Adolescent Health by Maggie R. Guinta, she explains
that these things are all linked to depression and poor mental health. Guinta states “social media
usage links to depression due to concerns of its addictive use, cyberbullying, and the evocation
of jealousy” and “social media may influence psychological distress through communication
overload and reduced self-esteem” (Guinta 197). Social media is a dangerous place where its
negative effects are long lasting on adolescent mental health as described in this article. Guinta
also describes the terms “Facebook depression” and “Facebook envy.” She describes “Facebook
depression” as classic symptoms of depression following an extreme usage of social media, and
“Facebook envy” as social media users comparing themselves to others causing “damaging life
satisfaction among adolescents” (Guinta 197). These two concepts describe how adolescents feel
after using excessive amounts of social media. It affects their brains and may lead to depression.
By adolescents comparing themselves to others, it lowers their self esteem and makes them feel
like they aren't good enough, which can lead to depressive symptoms. Guinta also states
(Guinta 197). So those that experience “Facebook depression” and “Facebook envy” have those
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negative experiences that are linked with depression. For adolescents, becoming depressed can
have lifelong negative effects on their mental health. Social media plays a huge role in links to
While social media has many negative effects for adolescents, there are also benefits to
using social media, as long as it is not used excessively. Some benefits may include tolerance,
social support networks, health communication, and enhancing self esteem. Adolescents can use
social media to “learn, understand, and empathize with marginalized groups” (Guinta 198).
Young people can expand their minds and learn to communicate with many other groups of
people instead of being sheltered in their own towns, where there may only be a few groups of
people. Social media allows for this kind of communication. But with this may come hatred
towards these groups because social media does not always monitor what can be said. So
although social media allows for young people to learn from other groups of people, there is still
the chance that they will spread hatred and their own ideals without learning to tolerate others.
Adolescents can also use social media to communicate with their friends. In Benefits and Costs
of Social Media in Adolescence by Yalda T. Uhls, she states “media help them understand their
friends’ feelings and feel more connected to them. During a developmental stage when peer
support and approval is critical, social media support these needs” (Yahls 68). This
communication between friends is important as they can increase their social development. But
communication online also has the chance to lead to cyberbullying, which leads to depression.
Social media can also offer “an environment of inclusion for individuals seeking a community”
(Guinta 198). For young people apart of the LGBTQ group, they may find a sense of community
among others like them through social media. These groups can offer support that they may not
find in their hometowns. But again, there is the issue of hatred. Others may cyberbully these
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individuals trying to use social media as an escape to be themselves, ultimately leading to poor
mental health. Social media can be used by adolescents to access a multitude of information.
Young people “exhibit low healthcare utilization, social media presents an opportunity to engage
and provide tailored messaging” (Guinta 198). Adolescents can learn about many topics
pertaining to their health that they may be too afraid to ask about in person, like sexual health.
They can find all the answers they need online without having to ask a parent or go to a doctor.
The information is free and they don’t need to be afraid to ask about in over social media. But
everything one sees online, isn’t necessarily always true. The information provided to these
young kids may be false, which could, in turn, be more damaging to their health. Social media
cannot always be trusted. On social media, kids can post pictures of themselves and receive
immediate feedback. If that feedback is positive, it “can enhance self esteem and well-being”
(Guinta 198). Receiving positive feedback on a picture one posts makes that person feel good
and well liked. It makes them happy to know their friends like the picture that they posted. But if
the feedback is negative, this can drastically lower their self esteem, which in turn leads to
depression. So social media has the opportunity to raise or lower one's self esteem. So, as
mentioned, social media does have many benefits to it. But the negatives that social media has
outweighs all of the benefits. The benefits do not do as much good as the negative aspects do
bad. The negative aspects can be much more detrimental to adolescent health.
Social media is a dangerous place for adolescents. The harmful effects of being on social
media as an adolescent greatly outweigh the benefits. Being on social media so much myself, I
was not aware that social media can be so detrimental. It hugely affects the mental health of
adolescents and mental health is so valuable to adolescent development. Social media is a major
part of my daily life, just as it is with other people's lives. But after this research, I have come to
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the realization that I may need to limit my usage on social media in order to avoid these negative
effects. Social media contributes to the declining mental health of adolescents through
cyberbullies, declining academic performance, sleep deprivation, lack of privacy, poor social
development, poor body image, and lack of self esteem. The negative effects of social media are
so great and can be very detrimental. So next time you get on Instagram or Twitter or Snapchat,
think of the negative impacts these sites are having on your brain.
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