Tic-tac-toe incompetent and inadequate.

You try to
A one-act play humiliate me every chance you get.
*** jenny
Characters: But you are incompetent and inadequate! And
playwright Noel Tacutin you are a screaming faggot. You cause me so
jenny, actress playing a teacher much shame and dishonor everyday. You are
stan, actor playing Jenny’s husband a great dishonor to our family name. An
miggy, actor playing Jenny’s kid brother abomination. Do you understand that? How
director Alex Millado can I be a success in this life? Every chance I
producer Ronald Tan get for a promotion is ruined because of you.
prof sarabia, consultant/test audience miggy
That’s not true. What have I to do with your
Setting: professional life?
The time is the present. The action takes place jenny
in a theater in Bacolod. You wouldn’t understand, you, son-of-a-bitch! I
*** am a teacher. I am supposed to fix everything!
Tic-tac-toe Including you! But here’s something you can
A one-act play understand: Mamang and Papang. Do you
know that our parents died because of you?
Scene One miggy
In a living room, two men are frantically making No! That’s a lie. You know the truth. They were
love on the couch. It is dark and raining killed in a car accident.
outside. A woman enters, and – finding the jenny
men – goes berserk. The two quickly Yes, there was an accident. But they died
disengage, and barely cover themselves with because of you. Because you… are… gay!
their crumpled clothes and the throw pillows. The whole family is being punished by God
because you are gay. You are a disgrace!
jenny miggy
oh, my god! What the fuck? what the fuck is No!
this? jenny
stan You are an abomination. A curse. A despicable
Jenny, it is not what you think. error in God’s creation.
jenny miggy
Tell that to Jesus, you, dirty pigs! You were (covers his ears)
both naked, intertwined with each other, Stop. Stop it! Please stop it!
sucking each other off, eating each other out,
and it is not what I think it is? I am not stupid, Lightning effects.
Stan. You were fucking my kid brother! you… stan
were… fucking… my kid brother! Jenny, stop torturing him! Please… miggy…
stan is… not… well!
Shhhh… Jenny, please calm down. I was just
trying to… miggy reaches for a gun on the floor.
jenny jenny
Shut the fuck up, you, faggot! You make me And so are you! Both of you are sick. Both of
want to puke. You are disgusting! I should you are better off dead, cocksuckers. May God
have known that you, too, love dicks. You are strike you dead!
disgusting, Stanley!
(eyeing both) A pistol shot.
You, shitty bastards! I work my ass off to Beat. Then, miggy slumps on the floor.
support both of you, and this is how you repay Roll of thunder, and more lightning effects.
me? I turn my back, and you both screw me? stan
(to miggy) (runs to miggy’s dead body)
And you, my dear little brother, how low can Migggggy!
you go? I knew you were queer since you were jenny
little. But cocksucker of cocksuckers, how (steps back away from stan & miggy)
could you do this to me? To me, who virtually What happened? Oh, my God! Oh, my God!
raised you? oh… my… god! He blew his brains out!
miggy stan
Get a grip, Ate Jenny. I am not your kid brother I tried to warn you. Your brother was not well.
anymore. I am 21! And I am tired of you lording He tried to shoot himself earlier, but I stopped
over me. You always make me feel him. He didn’t need any of your cussing and
gay-bashing tonight.
(to the dead body)
Miggy, I’m sorry. I’m so sorry. I loved you, too, playwright
and I tried to deny it, but I loved you, Miggy. What’s wrong with how it is now?
More than I loved your sister! director
jenny Nothing. It’s perfect. It’s just that some of the
(crumpling to the floor) words…
Noooooo! playwright
Which words?
Enter playwright and director. director
Well, the F-word, for example.
playwright playwright
Thank you, people. Take five. Fuck? What’s wrong with the word fuck?
actors exit. director
So what do you think? Now, now, Noel. It’s not really the nicest of
director words.
I don’t know. It’s… different. Very riveting. Very playwright
intense. The character is angry. She’s at a loss for
playwright sophisticated words.
Pretty intense, huh? That’s the very intention. director
director One can be angry without being verbally foul
There are parts of it that I really like. But some and filthy.
parts, well… you can rework them a little bit, playwright
can’t you? Sure, but it is not in her character to be quiet
playwright and nice. She’s a nag. She needs to scream
Rework? obscenities. To be vicious and noxious.
director director
Just a tiny little bit. Noel, just try it, okay? Just for me. I know what
playwright the producers want. And this play, as it is,
You want me to change it? won’t make the cut. I want your play to work. I
director want you to succeed. I think that you have a
Just a slight tweak. vision. But this is Bacolod we are talking about.
playwright People here are very conservative. Tight-ass
Tweak… what? How? Why? conservative. You have a message, and if you
director want this play to see the light of day, you just
Well, Noel… have to rework it.
playwright playwright
Don’t you like it? I mean, what don’t you like? I don’t see how changing the words will help.
What do you want changed? director
director Trust me, my friend. I’m on your side. But we
Honestly, Noel… There are just too many cuss have to take caution. It’s not the best time for
words. Too much swearing. the theater in this part of the world. The last
playwright thing we want to do is to offend, to scandalize,
Too much? and to drive the audience away.
director playwright
Yes. As your Stanley character says, “He didn’t But words are all I have. I chose those words
need any of your cussing and gay-bashing precisely for their maximum explosive powers,
tonight;” so I think, the audience doesn’t need to make the scene work. I want to help create a
to be bombarded with your cussing and gay- theatre that speaks the vocabulary we use day
bashing night after night. to day. I want to draw a new audience into the
playwright theater and show them why it is exciting. Can
He was talking about the immediate cause of a you hear me, Alex? Words are all I have!
character’s suicide! director
director Yes. You have the gift of words. Use it. Now,
I know, I understand. But just the same, listen to me. I know how important those
perhaps the coarse language can be…. labored and carefully cobbled words are for
changed? you. But to a director, and to producers, for that
playwright matter, scripts are only blueprints; they are not
Coarse language? Changed to what? cut in stone.
director playwright
You know… something less crude and rude. I’m a playwright, Alex. Every word I use is a
Something less vulgar, less obscene. You are conscious choice. Film, television, music,
the playwright, Noel. You have the gift of gab. video, and the Internet have changed the way
we think. We have no need to be told stories in You, ungrateful traitors! I work so hard to
the same constipated language our parents, or support both of you; and this is how you repay
their parents, used. We need to reinvent me? I turn my back, and you both mess up with
theater to serve our own purposes. We need to me?
do theater in a language that engages us. I use (to miggy)
words for their most explosive effect. That’s And you, my dear little brother, how low can
where my art lies, so why should I change it? you go? I knew you were… colorful since you
director were little. But fairies of fairies, how could you
Try to rewrite it a little bit, Noel. Just try! For do this to me? To me who virtually raised you?
me? Think of it as an artistic exercise. Keep miggy
the intensity of the scene, but soften the Get a grip, Ate Jenny. I am not your kid brother
language, refine it, so that the play can open anymore. I am 21! And I am tired of you
up to a larger audience. Be more people- governing me. You always make me feel
friendly. incompetent and inadequate. You try to
playwright humiliate me every chance you get.
Soften the language? People-friendly? jenny
director But you are incompetent and inadequate! And
Clean it up. Make it more… palatable. We you are a… flashing fuchsia cape-wearer! You
really don’t want to offend our audience’s cause me so much shame and dishonor
sensibilities with crass and disagreeable everyday. You are a great dishonor to our
language. I know you want to draw the younger family name. Do you understand that? How
crowd, but those other generations behind us can I be a success in this life? Every chance I
are still the bigger bulk of our audience. They get for a promotion is ruined because of you.
still control our market. You have a reputation miggy
to protect, and I have mine. We need to work That’s not true. What have I to do with your
together. professional life?
playwright jenny
I don’t know. I don’t see how changing the You wouldn’t understand. I am a teacher. I am
language will help. supposed to fix everything! Including you! But
director here’s something you can understand:
Just try! See you in a week? Mamang and Papang. Do you know that our
playwright parents died because of you?
I guess so. miggy
director No! That’s a lie. You know better. They were
Try! killed in a car accident.
jenny
Scene Two Yes, there was an accident, but they died
because you… are… gay! The whole family is
One week later. The play starts again. stan and being punished by God because you are gay.
miggy are at it, jenny enters. You are a disgrace!
jenny miggy
Oh, my God! What the fudge? what the fudge No!
is this? jenny
stan You are an abomination. A curse. A despicable
Pumpkin pie, it is not what you think. error in God’s creation.
jenny miggy
Tell that to Jesus, swine! You were both plain (covers his ears)
and exposed, pretzelized with each other, Stop. Stop it! Please stop it!
nibbling… body parts, and it is not what I think Lightning effects.
it is? I am not the village idiot, Stan. You
were… fudging my brother! you… were… stan
fudging… my kid brother! Jenny, stop tormenting him! Please… miggy…
stan is… not… well!
Shhhh… Jenny, please calm down. I was just miggy reaches for a gun on the floor
trying to… jenny
jenny And so are you! Both of you are sick. Both of
Be quiet, you, pederast! You make me want to you are better off dead. May God strike you
throw up. You are dislikeable! I should have dead!
known that you, too, love… carrot sticks! You A pistol shot.
gross me out, Stanley! Beat. Then, miggy slumps on the floor.
(eyeing both) Roll of thunder, and more lightning effects.
stan I really don’t see how it could be better. The
(runs to miggy’s dead body) play is not supposed to be swallowed so easily.
Migggggy! It is not meant to make the audience
jenny comfortable. It’s supposed to make them think.
(steps back away from stan & miggy) director
What happened? Oh, my God! Oh, my God! And it does.
Oh… my… God! He blew his brains out! playwright
stan About chocolate delights and pumpkin pies!
I tried to warn you. Your brother was not well. (sighs)
He tried to kill himself earlier, but I stopped Please, Alex, can we go back to the original
him. He didn’t need any of your cussing and now? You said this was just an artistic
bashing tonight. exercise. Well, I’ve done it, and I am not happy
(to the dead body) with the result. I want to go back to the original
Miggy, I’m sorry. I’m so sorry. I loved you, too, version.
and I tried to deny it. But I loved you, Miggy. director
More than I loved your sister! You can’t.
jenny playwright
(crumpling to the floor) Why not? This version sucks. It cannot go on
Noooooo! like this.
director
Enter playwright and director. You are right. It cannot go on like this. A few
more changes are necessary.
playwright playwright
Well? I spent the whole week on revisions, I More changes? This feels like tic-tac-toe!
integrated your suggestions, and by director
exaggerating the language, I thought you Tic-tac-toe?
would begin to see that (beat)
director Oh, you mean “Noughts and Crosses”? The
It’s perfect! pencil-and-paper game with X’s and O’s?
playwright playwright
You l-l-liked it? (nods)
director Noughts and Crosses, Tit-tat-toe, Exy-Ozys,
Very much. It sounds very refreshing… very same-difference. Two players take turns
new. marking the spaces in a 3×3 grid.
playwright director
But the whole energy of the scene has been First player to succeed in placing three
diffused. When furious Jenny screams, “What respective marks in a horizontal, vertical, or
the fudge,” I can’t help but think of a piece of diagonal row wins the game. I love that game!
chocolate. Why do you think revisions to your play feel
director like tic-tac-toe?
You think too much. Funny that you thought playwright
about chocolate fudge, because I thought Because the only winning move is not to play.
about it, too. And admittedly, it is easier to director
swallow than the F-word. The language You know that is not true, Noel. I really want to
change really makes it better. help you succeed; that’s why I’m guiding you to
playwright survive in this business. I want your play to be
You want it palatable. But pumpkin great, and to be a box office hit, too. Now, we
pie, pretzelized… and carrot sticks? Really, need financial backing to stage your play, so
Alex! I was just kidding. you want to make some people happy. I know
director you want your voice to be heard. But first, you
Serendipity! need a platform on which to stand.
playwright playwright
What? My play was great as it was.
director director
Congratulations. I think the sanitized language No question. It was perfect. It just needed
and the food allusions worked. They actually some adjustments.
make the play a lot better. playwright
playwright But why does anything need to be changed at
Better for whom? all, in the first place?
director director
My dear boy, for the audience, of course. To make the Producer happy.
playwright
playwright jenny
The Producer? Who is this goddamn Well, considering that we are workshopping the
producer? Can I have a word with him, or her? play, do you think we can ad lib some of the
lines, or at least change some of the words?
Enter producer, from the audience. playwright
(vehemently)
producer Of course not
Here I am. producer
playwright Now, now, Noel. Why not let them? As any
Who are you? self-respecting director will tell you, the script is
producer just a blueprint, it is not written in stone. Isn’t
The producer. that right, Alex?
playwright director just nods ambiguously.
You’re here? playwright
producer Alex, will you say something, please? My play
(shakes playwright’s hand) is being butchered here.
I’ve been watching. Alex invited me. Of course, director
I was curious what kind of play I would be What can I say, Noel? As a director, I’ve
funding. It’s nice to finally see you, Mr. Noel always been one for improvisations. To what
Tacutin. You are no Noel Coward, but you are feels right for actors. I look at their choices,
a brilliant dramatist. You really are. I love the supervise them, coach them, and moderate, if
play. and when necessary. I think you should let
playwright them. Who knows what these actors can bring
It was much better before. to your play.
producer producer
I love it that there are no profanities in this play. Now you see, Noel?
You are so creative with words. But there has playwright shakes his head, but relents.
to be a few more changes. (to the actors)
playwright Okay, folks. We will do improvisations. Give
More changes? the play your best shot, and don’t be so tied to
producer the original. Don’t be afraid to stray a little bit. A
Just minor changes. Listen, Noel… May I call new idea goes a long, long way. Just let the
you Noel? play lead you where it wants to take you. Start
playwright nods. when you are ready. All right… (snaps his
I know that you have a vision and a message fingers)
for the world, young man. And it is good and jenny
noble, and yada-yada-yada. But let us see if oh, my god! What the…
we can add a few more changes to improve producer
the play for bigger audiences without Stop! Stop it right there. Do we really need to
sacrificing your message. Shall we try and be sacrilegious? It’s the first line of dialogue,
workshop it? and we are already using God’s name in vain.
playwright Can we say something else
I don’t know. But since you are producing the instead? Goodness, perhaps? Yes, goodness!
play… Let’s try that. Jenny, take it from the top.
(with resignation) jenny
I guess, I should just say, “All right,” and “Go oh, my goodness! What the fudge? what the
ahead.” fudge is this?
producer producer
Actors, take your places, would you please? Wait. Try Mama mia!
actors go to their places to start the scene playwright
again. Mama mia?
(to the actors) producer
Now, actors, we are going to workshop this Mama mia instead of my goodness!
piece. Let us try and see how we can make playwright
this even better. All I want you to do is to feel Great! Now, people will think of Mama
free to follow the flow. Let the moment take you Mia spaghetti and chocolate fudge dessert
where it leads you. Learn to improvise as we while watching this play! How can people really
go along. Is that okay? enjoy the play if we have psychologically made
them hungry? Now, all they will hear is their
jenny raises her hand. stomach grumbling throughout the play.
(acknowledges jenny) director
Yes? Oh, Noel. Don’t be so hard on yourself.
producer stan
Okay, folks. Let’s try it again. Shhhh… Jenny, please talk quieter. I was just
jenny trying to…
mama mia! What the fudge? what the fudge is jenny
this? Silencio, you, pederast! You make me want to
stan puke. You are… eew… yuck… ugh! I should
Pumpkin pie, it is not what you think. have known that you, too, love… torotot. You
jenny gross me out, Stanley!
Tell that to Jesus, swine! (eyeing both)
producer You, ingrates! I work so hard to support you,
Stop! Here we go again. Really now, can we and this is how you repay me? I turn my back,
please refrain from using the Lord’s name in and you play with me?
vain? Why not try tell that to the marines. (to miggy)
playwright And you, dear little echos-echos houseboy,
Because it is a cliché? how low can you go? I knew you were a green-
producer blooded jokla since the day I hired you.
Okay, what about tell that to the mountains? But chufatid of the federacion Pride nation,
playwright how could you do this to me? To me who hired
That’s far out, but go ahead. It’s just a you? Who virtually adopted you?
workshop, right? miggy
producer Get a grip, Acheng Jenny. I am not your
Okay. Try it again. Actors, please… houseboy anymore. I resign! I am tired of you
jenny acting like a perya queen over me. You always
(enjoys her ad lib) make me feel incompetent and wiz-know-ang.
Tell that to the mountains, lechon wannabes! You try to humiliate me every chance you get.
You were both plain and exposed, Jack ‘n jenny
Jill pretzels with each other, nibbling body But you are incompetent and boobita
parts, and it is not what I think it is? I am not chaka! You are nothing but a flashing fuchsia
the village idiot, Stan. You were fudging my cape-wearing, second-hand, trying
brother! you… were… fudging… my kid hard gender-bender copycat. You cause me so
brother! much shame everyday. You are a great
producer dishonor to our… familia Zaragoza. Do you
So sorry to interrupt, but why don’t we change understand that? How can I be a success in
the brother’s character into someone more this life? Every chance I get for a promotion is
distant like a driver, or a houseboy. Yes, a ruined because of you.
houseboy! miggy
playwright (exaggeratedly)
No! It’s a lie! It’s a lie! It’s a super lie! What’s my
producer Internet connection with your professional life?
Why not? jenny
playwright Oh, you wouldn’t understand, you, Chuva-
Because that’s really retarded. That will tienes-chararat. I am a teacher. I am supposed
change the whole dynamics of the play. to fix everything! Including you! But here’s
producer something you can understand:
But it’s all for the better, eh? I mean, why your mudra and fadir. Do you know that your
should Stan be fudging his brother-in-law? parents died because of you?
playwright miggy
Because that is the crux of the play. Two weak No! That’s not true-lala. You know the truth,
men forced to live together under the wings and nothing but the truth, so help me God!
and claws of a very crazy woman, who is close They were killed in a car accident.
to their heart. jenny
producer Yes, there was an accident, but they died
Come on, Noel. Let’s just try it on for size, because you… are… shokoy! Your whole
okay? We are just workshopping your play. family was punished by…
Nothing is permanent. Besides, isn’t a (slightly confused)
houseboy just as important in the household as …by… by Mama mia?
a brother-in-law? Let’s have Miggy as their (continues as before)
houseboy, all right? Actors, begin! … because you are a shokoy with the tail in
jenny your groin. You are a… disgraciada!
I am not the village idiot, Stan. You were miggy
fudging the houseboy! you… were… fudging… No!
our houseboy!
jenny But that wasn’t the play I intended. That wasn’t
Yes! the play I wrote! What’s with Jenny dying in the
miggy end instead of Miggy? Instead of creating
No! remorse for Jenny, it just created a happy
jenny ending for Stanley and Miggy. That’s not the
Yes! intention of the play.
stan producer
Oh, please. Go ahead, and spin-a-win! But this is brilliant. You are a brilliant writer,
jenny and the actors are simply great at
(ignores stan) improvisation.
Oh, yes! You are a jinx, Miggy engot. director
(in a sing-song) It’s wonderful. I love it!
Beh! Boo! You are a loser! La-la. La. La-la. playwright
miggy Okay, now that we have workshopped my play,
(covers his ears) can we please go back to the original now?
Stop! In the name of love. Before you break my producer
heart. Stop it! Please stop it! But we are on to something brilliant here!
Lightning effects. playwright
stan (threateningly)
Jenny, stop tormenting him! Please… miggy… No! You are butchering my play. Now, listen
is… not… well! here, Mr. Producer…
miggy reaches for a gun on the floor. producer
jenny Calm down, Noel. There’s no need to be upset.
So are you! Both of you are sick. Both of you After all, we still have to preview it. Then, we
are better off dead. May Mama Mia strike you will see how the audiences react. If your artistic
dead! intuition is right, we can always put the play
A pistol shot. back to the way you want it.
Beat. Then, jenny slumps on the floor. playwright
Roll of thunder, and more lightning effects. You promise to put it back?
stan producer
(runs to embrace miggy) Of course! If the audience does not like it. But if
Migggggy! they do like it… You see, it’s a win-win
miggy situation, Noel. If the audiences like it, you’re a
What happened? Oh, Mama Mia spaghetti! brilliant writer; if they don’t like it, you’re still a
Oh, Mama Mia spaghetti sauce! oh… mama brilliant writer.
mia! I blew her gulai otak out! playwright
stan
I tried to warn her. I wanted to tell her you had producer
a gun. That you tried to tigbak-chugi yourself Now, I would like to introduce you to our test
earlier, only I stopped you. Miggy, you didn’t audience…
need any of her cussing and chuk-chak- Enter prof sarabia
takatak tonight. …Prof. Edna Sarabia.
(goes to the dying jenny) playwright
Jenny, I’m sorry. I’m so sorry. I loved you, too. Test audience? We have a test audience here?
But I loved Miggy… more. More than I loved producer
you! Of course.
jenny (introduces the others)
(dying) Noel, Alex, this is Prof. Sarabia. She’s a
Noooooo! guidance counselor at the University of Negros
producer Occidental – Recoletos.
Bravo! Bravo! prof sarabia
director (after shaking their hands)
Oh, my! I like it! It’s perfect! Is this going to take long? Because I have an
playwright appointment with my dentist in about an hour.
(pulling his hair) producer
Noooooo! How can you be so deaf and blind? No, no! Not at all. Actors, places, please. And
They’ve bastardized my play. begin…
director actors go to their places. They start the scene
But, Noel, I really like it. That was so much again.
better. Three, four, maybe ten times a lot jenny
better. What the fudge?
playwright
prof sarabia gay artists, many were not! And they did not
Wait! Are they having sex? Are those two men make love on the streets!
having sex? playwright
playwright You are impossible.
Yes. Can you please not interrupt? prof sarabia
prof sarabia You are pretentious. You call yourself a
Why not? I was invited to preview this play. playwright. I don’t think you have a play. I think
This is not good. I don’t like to see two men what you have is an occasion for gratuitous
having sex. It’s gross. sex on stage. Why do your characters need to
playwright have sex on stage?
What’s wrong with it? playwright
prof sarabia Because it is an action vital to the play! Why
What’s right about it? They’re homosexuals! are you so afraid of action in a play? You’re so
They’re sick. That’s wrong! afraid of physical action. Sexual action. Violent
playwright action. Dramatic action. Why must action and
This is a play. narrative be sacrificed for character, metaphor,
prof sarabia and debate?
It’s obscene. You don’t have to promote prof sarabia
homosexuality. What is theater, then, without great characters
playwright and issues? If I must say so, I think the theater
Hello? As if homosexuality needs promoting has gone down after Shakespeare.
from me! No, I am not promoting playwright
homosexuality. I am just artistically recreating a I’m not saying that I am not interested in
slice of reality to drive home a point. exploring multifaceted issues, or complex
prof sarabia characters in my play. On the contrary, that’s
A slice of reality? exactly what I want to do. But I want to do it
(beat) through what the characters do, not just what
Were you sexually abused as a child? they say or think.
playwright prof sarabia
What? No! I am a playwright! I don’t have to Young man, I grew up watching naturalistic
personally experience everything that I write. theater with one set and four characters, all of
As I said, I’m just capturing vignettes of real whom talk about things that happened in the
life. past until they are led to some sort of internal
prof sarabia character revelation. That was all so fine for
On the Negrense stage? Homosexuality on the me. And I didn’t turn out so bad.
Negrense stage, and you call that real life? Are playwright
you high, or something? You’re a pervert. If you were happy with those, fine! There’s still
playwright plenty of it to be found. I’m just saying the
Prof. Sarabia, I’m surprised at your world has changed. Movies, television,
homophobia and amnesia. I thought you’d be Facebook, and the Internet have changed the
smarter and more open-minded than the way people think, the way we see, the way we
average stevedore. I don’t know if you’ve absorb information. I write for my generation,
noticed but the world is changing. Bacolod has and my generation has no need to be told the
not been spared of the gay consciousness. same stories you were told. In the same rigid
prof sarabia and frigid way you were told. In the same
So you admit that your play is about gay antiseptic language you were told. As a
consciousness? playwright, I want to be a voice of my
playwright generation.
No, the play is not about homosexuality or gay prof sarabia
consciousness. It is about people who discover You want to be a voice of your generation?
special relationships under most trying Listen to your opening line, “What the fudge?”
circumstances, or against a common enemy. You try to disguise the F-word but I can see
Think of it as Filipinos coming together for a through it. This is not a play. This is
revolution against a dictatorship. unadulterated trash, pure garbage.
prof sarabia (sees the gun)
You mean, like the People Power EDSA And is that a gun on the floor? Is there going to
Revolution? be some scenes of violence in this
playwright performance? Because that is all we need in
Bingo! Your memory is coming back. these most difficult times. Lots of gratuitous
prof sarabia nudity, immoral sex, and violence on stage, in
I don’t like political plays. And besides, while the movies, in magazines, over the Internet,
most people in EDSA were homosexuals and and everywhere. These have got to stop.
playwright playwright
From which planet did you come, Prof. All right, here I am. I’ve rewritten the whole
Sarabia? play, and I’m sure you will be happy.
prof sarabia playwright gives the rewritten play to the
You can’t insult me. I’m leaving. I’d rather actors.
suffer in a dentist’s chair than watch this smut. prof sarabia
prof sarabia exits in a huff. Hopefully, this will be better than the crap you
playwright had me watch last week.
(furiously) playwright
Then, go! Because the theater does not need I know I am not the best writer in the world, but
toxins like you. You, constipated bitch! I had something to say in my play. I’m sorry if
producer my play offends you, but if that is the only way
Now, now, Noel. That wasn’t very nice. to exchange ideas, why do you fear it so
playwright much? Ideas aren’t so dangerous if you begin
Yeah. It wasn’t, huh? to understand them. I only wanted to say
(angrily) something meaningful in my original play. I
Just what is it that you want from me? composed the scene so that people will be
producer hooked as early as the first line, then just build
All we want is a hit show. I think it’s a fairly up from there. I really tried.
reasonable demand. I put out my money, you prof sarabia
deliver a hit play. Well, I think you…
playwright playwright
You don’t really care what my play means at I’ve rewritten the play bearing in mind all your
all, do you? You don’t care about my message. objections to the last version.
You don’t care about my voice. You just want (sarcastically)
something that will create a profit. I am sure you will be happy with it now.
producer playwright exits.
Hello? Isn’t that what the show business is all prof sarabia
about? You can talk theater, emancipation, He is one unhappy camper. A real sour-puss.
developmental communication, and liberation producer
for all you want, but show business is still Most young writers are. They are so full of
a business. angst. And so full of strange ideas for the
director world. Always pushing boundaries.
Noel, you must understand. If people don’t director
come to the play, we don’t make money. We I liked pushing boundaries, too.
close the theater, no more plays. You’re out of producer
job, I’m out of job. Nobody wins. But you have grown wiser in the business,
playwright Alex. You know what the audiences want, and
But what about… you understand what the producers need.
producer That’s why you are a success.
I’m sorry, Noel. But it’s just the way it is. Now, (to the actors)
make me happy. Rewrite it bearing in mind the All right, actors, as they say, “on with the
improvements we have made today. I think we show…”
have a hit play in our hands.
director nods in agreement. Scene Four
playwright
Fine. Give me a week, and I’ll show you the Lights come up again. The three actors are
new play. lined up shoulder to shoulder, standing erect
and motionless.
Scene Three jenny
Tic.
One week later. The actors, director, producer, stan
prof sarabia wait for the arrival of the Tac.
playwright. jenny
prof sarabia Tic. Tac.
Well, is he coming? Because I don’t like stan
waiting. Besides, I have an appointment with jenny
my optometrist later today. My vision has been Tic. Tac.
blurred lately. miggy-jenny
director Tac. Toe.
He said he’d be here by…
Enter playwright. jenny
Tic. Tac. Toe.

miggy
Tic. Tac. Toe.

jenny-miggy-stan
(repeating continuously as lights slowly dim)
Tic. Tac. Toe.