Social Media Final Draft
Social Media Final Draft
Social Media Final Draft
Erin Kelly
ENGL138, Section 002
Prof. Babcock
April 15, 2018
Abstract
As mental illnesses such as anxiety, depression, and eating disorders are on the rise
within the population of young adults, it is curious that the use of social media has spiked in
popularity as well. Initially, it is arguable that the correlation between the increase in mental
illness and the increase in social media use does not grantee causation, however, after further
inspection, the two factors do appear to be dependent on one another. Social media decreases
self-esteem through physical comparisons, and low self-esteem plays a large part in depression,
anxiety, and eating disorders. In addition, social media decreases life satisfaction as people
compare accomplishments. As expected, low life satisfaction can quickly result in depression.
Finally, it is understood that social media decreases interpersonal, face to face, conversation,
leading to poor social skills and isolation (these two factors can spiral into anxiety and
depression as well). With social media playing a large part in the decrease of mental health, it is
imperative for the public to be made aware of the risk that they are subjecting themselves to.
While it is not possible to completely rid society of social media, it is important to decrease the
use of social media, especially in children before they grow into young adults. Additionally,
alternate means of socialization should further be presented; for example, activities like clubs or
sports could be joined. Furthermore, it is necessary to offer help to those who have already
succumb to the pressure of social media by providing therapy or support groups. Ultimately, this
issue needs to be addressed immediately to prevent further decline in mental health.
Introduction
Take a look around. How many people close by are completely, utterly, absorbed in the
social media on their phones right now? Chances are, this number is pretty high, for people
spend around five hours per day on their phones.i Five hours does not seem ridiculous at first;
however, when a person is only awake for around fifteen hours, the individual is spending about
one third of his or her day on his or her device. People are on their phones for various reasons,
but one of the biggest offenders is social media. Approximately 88% of all 18 to 29-year-old
Americans admit that they use some form of social media.ii These young adults spend hours,
upon hours, looking through images, posts, and videos from their collection of social media sites,
whether these include Instagram, Snapchat, Facebook, VSCO, or more.
Social media, admittedly, is fun and addicting. Everyone gets a rush from posting an
exciting picture or reading a highly entertaining post. However, what people, especially young
adults, do not realize, is that social media is not all excitement and entertainment. Social media
can lead to serious mental health issues such as depression, anxiety, and eating disorders due to a
decrease in self-esteem, life satisfaction, and face to face interactions. As these three factors are
reduced, people are at a far greater risk to develop poor mental health. While many young adults
have copious knowledge regarding the personal benefits of social media, many are much less
informed about the risks of social media. It is imperative for people, especially in the 18-29-year-
old age group (primary users) to understand that the use of social media can truly impact their
mental health in a deleterious way, leading to several complications. Furthermore, it is also
immediately necessary to provide these individuals with ways to cope with the onset of mental
illness and provide alternative ways of socialization.
Furthermore, 40% of all social media users in 2018 have expressed that it would be hard to give
up social media, which is a stark increase from the 28% who said the same thing in 2014.v When
narrowed down to the focus age group of young adults, 51% said that would have a tough time
giving up social media in 2018.vi
Why are people so obsessed with social media? Well, the answer to this question is
different for many people, but the reasons for use have been simplified down to ten motives
including: social interaction, information seeking, pass time, entertainment, relaxation,
communicatory utility, convenience utility, expression of opinion, information sharing, and
surveillance/knowledge about others.vii Many of these reasons are quite self-explanatory, and
while they vary from person to person, most are heavy influences on why people use social
media. At this point, it is easy to understand why social media is used, but not many know the
dangers behind the usage. Social media easily can lead to a decrease in self-esteem, decrease in
life satisfaction and a decrease in “real-life,” face to face interactions. As will be explained later
on, low self-esteem, life satisfaction, and face to face interactions can in turn have extremely
harmful effects on mental health, specifically leading to mental illnesses like depression, anxiety,
and eating disorders. First, it is pertinent to address how social media can decrease self-esteem,
life satisfaction, and face to face interactions.
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